26: Rung Twelve – Her
Chapter 26 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
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Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
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26: Rung Twelve Her
September 30th, 7:35 pm
Pulling back from the kiss, he murmurs, "Contraception?"
"I took a dose of Strigo Conceptus Potion an hour ago. It should be effective for an entire month."
He smirks. "And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening's outcome?"
That hopeful.
But I practice a smirk of my own and reply, "Yes."
Voice low and rough, he says, "Then I suppose we should endeavor to get your money's worth."
His mouth is hot on mine as we move towards the bedroom. When my back hits the doorframe, we pivot around that point instead of losing momentum so that he becomes the one backing towards the bed.
By the time his legs hit its edge, I've pulled my mouth from his, and I'm about to growl at the prolonged effort of unbuttoning his frock coat.
Why didn't I research a charm to do this?
He laughs, a dark shiver down my spine, and presses my fingers away to run his through the buttons quickly. How deliciously dexterous! Tossing the coat onto a chair, he turns his attention to his shirt.
Once it similarly hangs open, I reach to push it from his body, trailing my hands across his skin. This much, I long to do. I lean in to place a kiss on his chest, breathing in the scent of skin unmasked by the vetiver that clings to his clothes, nuzzling the hair dusted across his pectorals.
Then his hands strip me seemingly effortlessly of my robes, sliding down my back and cupping my arse. When we come together this time, there is the sensation of skin on skin and warmth radiates through me from everywhere we touch, and my heart, already quickened, speeds yet another bit. Wetness tickles across my labia.
Hunger underlies the play of tongues, the glide of lips, and the nip I make before pulling back to stretch awkwardly for my bra clasp.
Shite! Why didn't I wear a front-closing one? I want more skin now!
Then, those capable fingers glide up my back and dispose of the problem readily, continuing forward to palm my breasts as the cups drape loose. I shiver. He squeezes, nipples clasped between thumbs and index fingers, and a flurry of electrical impulses race along nerves from pebbled flesh to pulsing clit.
I shrug the bra off, pushing forward, and his hands drop to my hips so that I can drag my breasts back and forth across his chest, reveling in the feel of hair and skin and him.
He gives a low moan and his fingers tighten on my hips.
Yet the scratch of wool against my lower abdomen becomes an irritant, and I push back to remove the offending garment, tugging on his waistband. There are only five of these buttons, and I actually linger a bit longer than necessary undoing them, allowing the backs of my fingers to tease his cock through his pants, enjoying his indrawn breaths and the hunger in his eyes when I take a quick glance at his face.
One small shove, and the trousers pool around his ankles, leaving only tented black boxers and damp red knickers separating us. I step back. Our last bits of cloth slide off quickly, removed by our own hand.
I'd probably be more self-conscious if it weren't for the intensity of his expression concerns over breast and buttock size melt under its heat.
And then there's the fact that I'm fairly distracted by seeing him naked for the first time.
Thin yet toned all muscles standing out in relief, starkly defined. There isn't an ounce of spare flesh to be found.
Perhaps because it's all in his cock?
Said organ is a good seven inches in length and of a nice thickness. It's also already so erect that the foreskin has almost completely pulled back from the tip, exposing the darker, more sensitive flesh.
Stepping forward, I lick my palm and run its flat wetness over the head, smiling to hear him hiss as his hips buck slightly. My clit pulses in response. After a few such swipes, I raise my hand to rewet it, tasting him for the first time salt with a tinge of bitter.
Yet as I move to touch him again, he stops me. Looking up from his cock, I see his face wears the carefully neutral look I've come to associate with him hiding something. "Hermione." It comes out a bit strangled, and he clears his throat. "Hermione, I am afraid that I will not be able to withstand a great deal of preliminary stimulation this evening."
Oh.
Oh.
I smile and mount the bed, turning to beckon him.
Lying side by side, we kiss in a swirl of tongues while touching freely. I wrap one hand around his cock, enjoying the feel of the slide of skin over hard core. His hips jerk, and suddenly fingers that had been on my nipples magically reappear to stroke my labia, circling teasingly around clitoris without providing satisfaction. My hand tightens on him, and I whimper into his mouth, sparking an answering groan.
His mouth traces a burning path down my throat to my left breast. As his tongue flicks across my nipple, I emit a little grunt and arch at the sensation, causing his fingers to brush across my clit. An electric arc leaps between the two points.
Circe!
My fingers tighten on him, causing his cock to twitch and his breath to catch.
Switching between running his tongue over one breast and then the other, he sets his fingers to teasing my entrance, and when I wiggle to hint that I want penetration, he chuckles and lifts his head to rumble, "Not tonight, my dear. Tonight nothing shall be inside of you until my cock has had the privilege."
Shite! Could he be any sexier?
My gasp of excitement causes him to smirk smugly before lowering his head to tongue my right nipple once more.
"Severus."
Goddess, could I sound more breathless?
Another pass of tongue and twirl of finger, and I arch off the bed again. "Severus."
He stops and raises his head to look at me.
"Don't hold me to this in the future, but you're not the only one who doesn't need a lot of foreplay tonight." I stretch my other hand down to cup his bollocks and roll them slightly.
Groaning, his eyes shut briefly, and when he opens them again, he smirks with amusement, his voice emerging a smoky rumble. "I do hope this does not indicate that I will have to provide another eighteen months worth of such in order to be inside of you again."
"Circe, no!"
"Good." The smirk fades, leaving behind hunger as his voice drops to a low rumble. "Because I do not think myself capable of such forbearance a second time."
His cock twitches again, and as if it flipped a switch, suddenly he's moving. I roll onto my back, and he props up my hips and slides a pillow under my arse, raising me so that my legs splay open, fully exposed. Kneeling, he uses his right hand to run the head of his erection up and down me, coating it in wetness before teasing my swollen nub.
"Severus." I reach out to him through the haze of tingling pleasure, running my hands across his chest, rubbing against his nipples.
Smirking faintly, he places himself at my entrance and pauses. Once our eyes meet, he gives the slightest push of his hips, and the head slides into me. He holds himself rigid for a few moments mouth open, eyes drifting shut.
It feels wonderful, the stretch, but it's not nearly enough. I wiggle again and squeeze my muscles around him, making his eyes fly open, dark and intent.
Still holding his cock in place, he leans forward, placing his hands on the bed on either side of my shoulders and lowering himself for a kiss. His weight a wonderful pressure on my breasts.
As our lips meet, he slides into me ever so slowly for only a short distance. Then back out with equal deliberation, setting a torturous pace. Each thrust places him a little deeper, his cock stretching my entrance, the ridge of his head scrapping against my flesh with every withdrawal.
Tilting my hips even more, I wrap my legs around him, locking ankles at his lower back while my hands clutch the upper.
"Hermione." My name a groan.
I feel I'll go mad at the slowly building warmth, so perfect because it makes me long for more, more, more while I also never want it to end.
Until he reaches the point where he begins to stroke my G-spot.
Goddess!
My muscles clamp in response as the pleasant sensation of being filled is overwhelmed by a more intense tingling. Every slow withdrawal amps the sensation higher. Each pause he makes before entering again maddening. The return slide so deliciously slow that every nerve ending hums with a sensation that only builds as he touches the sensitive bundle of nerves, sliding over it again and again.
He's panting into my neck and across my ear as he places wet kisses every few strokes. The sound of his arousal is heady, and I turn my head, nuzzling sweat-scented skin, to capture his lips again, licking at them with fervency.
I begin to pulse my muscles rhythmically opening for penetration, tightening for withdrawal, making him hiss an indrawn breath as I do. Always increasing my own pleasure as well.
He raises up to a kneel, and my legs unwrap to spread back instead, changing the angle once more. I can also look down to watch his cock as it slides in and out of me, my labia pulling after it as if reluctant for it to go, a visual expression of my body's hunger for him. The sight amps the tingling warmth centered in my clitoris.
Then he grasps my right hand in his left and brings it to his lips. Sucking on my fingers, he laves them with his tongue, coating them with wetness. Once finished with this assault, he whispers, "Touch yourself."
Thumb pulling back the hood, I run a saliva-slicked middle finger across my clit.
Ah, Circe!
A flash of fire from the swollen bundle of nerves and a spasm runs through my center, making my muscles clench, forcing his head even more firmly against my G-spot.
Our moans are simultaneous, even if his is lower of pitch.
Placing his hands on the underside of my knees, he pushes my thighs back even farther, stretching tight the skin of my groin, opening my labia more fully. It concentrates the sensation of his cock inside of me, and I groan in appreciation, finger moving more rapidly across clitoris. I'm panting now, breathing more and more shallowly.
I look up to see him also watching where our bodies are joined, the open-mouthed look on his face one of pleasure and fascinated concentration.
As each stroke takes him deeper, he begins edging towards full penetration, and a third feeling adds to the tingling already emanating from my clit and G-spot.
Then the three places begin to merge into one overwhelming sensation. My legs begin to shake. He pulls almost all the way out, the delicious withdrawal amazingly intense, and I feel the first pre-spasm of orgasm.
He must have felt it as well, for he meets my eyes as he slowly slides into me this time until I feel his head bump against my cervix. A flash of pleasure shoots through me and my muscles clench around him as tightly as possible, unwilling to let go. Watching me, he pulls back only a bit and then moves forward again. Pulse. I stop breathing. Another short withdrawal, and this time he pushes against my cervix and remains pressed firmly against it as my finger blurs on my clit.
Oh, oh, oh, shite ... Severus!
An exploding vibration spirals outwards from my core a wash of energy that tingles out to fingers and curling toes; my cunt spasms frantically as my entire center burns in blazing sensation; my mouth gapes open, and my upper body arches, yet I struggle to maintain eye contact with him even as darkness fills the edges of my vision; and my throat emits a high keen while a rushing hum fills my ears.
Aftershocks work through me as he moves again, speeding his rhythm until his hips jerk, burying his cock as his entire body tenses forward; mouth open, expression one of shock, he groans loudly. Yet his eyes remain with mine.
He is beautiful in that unguarded moment when he comes.
~~~
I'm walking a corridor of Hogwarts, looking for something important, through I'm not sure what it is; abruptly I'm standing on a stage, Severus beside me. Most of the audience is a blur, but I recognize one small gathering in front Ginny, Tonks, and Minerva, all smiling and waving. Then a rather important-looking wizard is handing me a large trophy that strangely looks like the one given at Hogwarts for the House Cup. But I know it isn't it's a Potions award of some sort. As I try to read the inscription, however, my hair falls across my face as it often does, and I frown, unable to move arms weighted by the prize.
Then warm fingers are on my cheek, pushing the tickling mass away, and I know they belong to Severus.
And I know that the award was both dream and waking reality.
Opening my eyes, I see Severus lying in my bed, watching me with a face once more carefully neutral.
He's still beside me.
I reach out to touch him, smiling with joy at finding him here, and his façade cracks, a softening around the eyes just before his lips twitch upwards.
I already treasure his rare smiles.
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912 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!