6: Rung Three - Him
Chapter 6 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
6: Rung Three – Him
June 30th, 8:05 pm
I continue to scan the crowd, zeroing in on any flash of red, but all of them fail to be her.
Just as the tenseness of my shoulders relaxes, an exuberant Tonks whirls out of Shacklebolt’s arms and into mine. I channel the momentum into a circular swirl: the skirt of her red and purple striped dress flares outwards with the movement before subsiding to rest against her legs as she comes to rest against my chest.
She laughs, her eyes shining with mischief. It is undoubtedly the most emotion she has ever displayed in my presence. The party must be going well.
Tonight’s body is tall and exceedingly thin; the cheekbones are prominent, the eyes almond shaped. Her hair matches her dress, as do her eyebrows and, I have little doubt, her pubic pelt.
How very … garish.
“There you are. I was beginning to miss my favorite snake.”
I smirk. “If that is all you miss of me, then I am sure I can Transfigure an exact replica of that portion of my anatomy. I could even charm it to mimic my typical movements.”
She laughs again. “Oh, Sev, you tease. You know it’s absolutely hours until I can get you alone. I am hosting this party, as you could have remembered this afternoon.”
Sev? She knows I detest such monikers.
How to explain this afternoon ....
My prevarication is forestalled by a vaguely familiar voice shouting my name. I turn to find Ronald Weasley advancing upon me while dragging Ms. Granger rather unceremoniously.
With her hair in a sophisticated up-do and Tonks’s revealing red Muggle dress on, she is more attractive than I remember her being.
Or is it what is under the dress that is now so attractive? Speaking of which, I wonder if she conjured new undergarments.
I fight to settle the burgeoning of my cock.
Or is she waiting for Weasley to run his hand up her thigh and –
My face twists into a sneer I fight to quell. “Mr. Weasley, to what do I owe the pleasure?”
My eyes escape my control, and I am drawn to look at her. She blushes almost brightly enough to match her gown, and I find myself amused.
Her poor choice of paramour continues. “See, it’s like this: Hermione has a headache, and it’s not only the Victory Celebration tonight, it’s also our anniversary. So help a bloke out, will you, and give us a spot of headache potion.”
A headache. My amusement increases, but I successfully school my features into what I hope is neutrality – all the better to deliver the blow. “Ah, a headache – we all know how infamous those can be.”
Her blush now matches the coloration of her gown, but the young pup latched onto her side remains oblivious to my meaning.
“I will see what I have,” I conclude and step away from Tonks to retrieve the shrunken potion vials I keep in my frock coat.
As I move down the hallway, the sound from the next room should be deafening, but my years as a spy do have their benefits. I can faintly hear two sets of footsteps following me – one a bit heavy and eager, the other lighter and hesitant. The coat racks shuffle nervously, spelled to bring to the front whomever’s garment is needed most, and appear unsure as to which of us that is.
This is perfect – I can talk to her. Alone.
I turn to address the ginger-haired menace. “Mr. Weasley, undoubtedly, you have a plethora of family members to attend to. If you would leave Ms. Granger in my hands, I promise I will strive to return her to you shortly pain free.”
He smiles, lifts his arm in what he assumes will be a comradely gesture of masculine slapping, and belatedly halts this impulse. “Thanks, Snape. Now that the war’s over, you’re an alright sort of bloke.”
“Why, Mr. Weasley, such high praise from you wipes the slate clean of the condemnations of my life.”
I am more successful in refraining from laughing than Granger, but then I have had more practice.
The arm lifted towards me descends upon her back as he attempts to ameliorate her artificial cough. Calming, he kisses her and whispers an endearment before turning away.
How sweet.
My upper lip curls in disgust.
Her sigh matches the wistful look I briefly glimpse when she again faces me. Then she sees my sneer and her features harden.
We spend an interminable amount of time glowering at each other.
Look at the flush of her cheeks, the snap of her eyes – a worthy opponent.
My patience wears. “Let us discontinue this farce. Unless, that is, Weasley’s inane Quidditch babble has truly given you a headache.”
“You leave Ron out of this. He’s a good man and doesn’t deserve such derision.”
“A good man, you say?” I step closer, and a waft of her skin’s scent passes my nose. It is subtle and natural – uniquely her – and branded upon my olfactory senses. My cock twitches to life, and suddenly I lose any noble intentions I may have had for this conversation. “Just how good is he?”
“He’s kind. He’s caring. He’s loyal. He’s –”
She is either naive or purposefully misconstruing my meaning, and I grow even more impatient. “You mistake the connotation of my words, Ms. Granger. The, shall we say, double entendre as it were.”
Emboldened by her silence, I move nearer. Her eyes are especially beautiful at this close range. “I must admit I am curious. During our little bout of mistaken identity this afternoon, you reacted like a woman in dire need of my attentions. If Weasley were as good –”
Her hand rises in a flash, and I am hard pressed to determine which impression reaches my senses more quickly: the sound of the report or the sharp sting of my cheek.
A worthy opponent indeed.
“Touché, Ms. Granger.” Nodding slightly to signal her win, I move past her to enter the toilet, which is miraculously available.
In the mirror, my eyes offer no answers.
All I see is her imprint upon my skin.
AN: Thus ends the first act (okay, it’s not a play, but the story’s structure is influenced by them). If you're curious, I'm going to begin blogging about writing 'Ladder' on my lj. Next up – an interlude chapter, then on to the second act.
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912 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
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Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
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Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
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Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
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Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
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Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
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Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
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Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!