8: Rung Four - Her
Chapter 8 of 27
ubiquirkVictory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Not mine. No money. Special thanks go to JKR for sanctioning HP fanfic.
Gobs of thanks go to my beta Southern Witch 69 and to my Brit-picker the amazing Saracen77.
8: Rung Four – Her
August 30th, 7:05 pm
I affix the final poster with a sticking charm; it and its brethren of famous Arithmantic predictions adorn the walls, their final lines of solution shimmering with magic. I’ve tried to include both positive examples, such as Sillinger’s work foreseeing the end of Grindelwald, and negative, such as Crestlebaum’s warning of the rise of Grindelwald. The fight against Voldemort proved we shouldn’t coddle children.
Brushing hair off of my face, I stretch my back and look around my redesigned classroom with pride.
It had been a bit plain, but that’s to be expected. Once life had returned to quasi-normal after the Final Battle, and Hogwarts had reopened, Bill had taken over the Arithmancy position. He’d decided to remain in England to be near his family in their time of grief, and Minerva had been more than happy to have him. But teaching was never his passion, and Gringotts wants him back badly enough to give him a London posting.
Now the room is arranged into four-desk stations for group work, although with built-in charms that will allow me to separate them easily for testing purposes. I also installed a magical projector so that I can prepare my lecture notes ahead of time – it’s faster than magicked chalk and will allow me to move around the classroom instead of barricading myself behind a podium.
I walk towards my desk to gather any paperwork I may want to look at later tonight. I’ve already prepared my lesson plans for the entire school year for each level – it was both grueling and exhilarating. It’s a good thing I kept all of my notes from Professor Vector’s classes and that I taught first and second years at Beauxbatons.
With everything finally ready, I can’t regret arriving at Hogwarts two weeks early to prepare, even if it meant cutting short summer hols with Ron.
Very conveniently cut short the time with Ron, that is.
I sigh – I’m meeting him for dinner at the Three Broomsticks in an hour.
The walk to my rooms in Gryffindor Tower is a blur. The familiar items of my life offer little comfort as I move through the sitting room to the bathroom. Standing under the hot beat of the shower, I’m overwhelmed with the thoughts I’ve been avoiding.
The awkwardness of Cornwall followed us home. It had been a year since Ron and I had spent that much time together, and that had been during the infatuation stage of the relationship.
We have nothing in common – admit it.
The water pounds on my skull as I stand transfixed.
And stop dawdling about already. Unless being late is the goal.
I turn off the water, perform a quick Drying charm, and enter the bedroom. Digging through my wardrobe, I discard two possibilities – both too smart for a night down the pub – and choose a simple chocolate-brown dress with cap sleeves and a full, knee-length skirt with robes to match. I keep my makeup light and my hair down.
Another distracted walk has me emerging from the castle’s entrance. The lake and grounds are beautiful in the extended evening of late summer, but prove too familiar to be diverting.
The sex felt awkward as well, but this was probably due to the fact that B&Bs don’t give you the anonymity necessary for good sex. You know you’ll be seeing the owner and the other guests in the morning over kippers and porridge.
Sure – that’s all that was wrong with the sex. How does that explain what’s been off since we got back?
I sigh – it’s not that the sex is bad. It’s that Ron only likes to move quickly, and sometimes I want something slower, something different.
Well, there’s one man you know of who’s willing to practice patience in bed.
I really don’t want to think about Snape.
What if he likes it slow and teasing? What if he draws it out over and over again until I think I’ll go insane if I don’t come? What if –
Shut it! Besides, sex does not a relationship make.
But it doesn’t hurt.
“Humph.”
And you’ll see him tomorrow.
With the gates in sight, I speed up, hoping to Disapparate away from my traitorous thoughts.
Ron’s waiting for me when I pop into existence outside of the Three Broomsticks. “Mione,” he engulfs me in a hug, “you look smashing.”
“Thanks, Ron. You do, too.” He’s wearing his nicest Weasley jumper with a pair of smart trousers all topped by a humongous grin.
He’s up to something.
“I’ve got a surprise, so close your eyes and I’ll Side-Along you.” His left arm wraps tighter around me, and I’m glad for it when I stagger a bit upon reaching our destination. I always find Side-Along a bit disorienting.
He continues, “Now, just stand right there for a minute and no peeking.”
“Ron –”
“Shhh, Mione. Trust me.”
I can hear faint noises around me, but they’re overrun by the sound of rustling cloth directly in front of me.
What is going on?
“Alright, Mione.”
It’s Ron in front of me.
“You can open your eyes now.”
And there he is – on bended knee, holding a ruby-set gold ring up to me.
Oh, shite.
I am gobsmacked – utterly gobsmacked.
He’s Apparated us right into the middle of the Burrow’s sitting room. The furniture’s all pushed back, and people line the walls. Straight on are my parents and the core of the Weasley clan: Mum and Dad look pleased and a little overwhelmed, Molly beams at me through a curtain of tears, Arthur looks truly happy for the first time in ages. As I turn my head to the right, I can see Percy, George and Parvati, Bill and Fleur – all smiling and watching. To the left are Colin, Susan, Ernie, Dean, Lavender, Cho, and Lee – Ginny smiles and gives me a little wave while Lavender makes a show of crying beautifully into a lace-edged kerchief. The lads shift uncomfortably but maintain their smiles.
Goddess – he’s invited everyone!
“Hermione.”
I turn back to Ron.
“I love you. Will you marry me?”
A quick glance confirms the expectancy on all of those smiling faces. And then there’s Ron looking up at me as if I embody all of his hope, his happiness.
There’s really only one answer I feel I can give.
“Yes, Ron. I’ll marry you.”
AN: “Ha, ha, ha. Mine is an evil laugh!” – Wash from Firefly
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912 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
I love FireFly!!! and this story
I really liked this story. I usually don't like having to read multiple perspectives of the same event, but I really liked it in this story and there wasn't a lot of repetitive dialogue to shift through.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the fic, even with it's repeating perspectives!
You are a very well-read author.I think endeavoring outside of fan-fiction would be greatly beneficial for you. As far as most readers only wanting one person's POV, I think the chapter's (In between rungs # and #) were the most interesting, as it culminated with a sense of togetherness. It was a little off-putting at times to re-live the same scene twice when it could have been accomplished by putting both characters perspectives in the same scene, but you're the author- and a good one at that. I am glad this story ranks in the tens, it deserves it and otherwise I may not have found it. Might I suggest an addendum or epilogue?/ While the low-level angst was not of the adolscent variety it would be wonderful to have just a little more completion with their relationship and finding the eventual outcome of the Wolfsbane project. I also appreciated Severus not being labeled a 'disgusting pariah-git' that no one would respect or want. I think it was wonderful that people for the most part accepted him and that he had an intimate physical relationship with Tonks- showing he was not at all repulsive. I enjoyed the Relaxed Severus. :-D You may have him back now, I've showered him and wiped him clean. *smirks* Kudos on an excellent story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you enjoyed the story! Since the form was experimental, I don't plan on writing another story like this with repeating scenes. I'm sorry to say that I don't beleive in epilogues or having things tied up too neatly. This way, readers get to do some of the work, imagining what they think follows from here. I'm so glad you liked this SS noetheless!
Good. He's good and he knows it, BUT he's not taking everything for granted.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story and the way SS is pulling out his Slytherin cunning!
Oh I do like Snape's new wicked, wicked ways. Such a man one can certainly learn to love. Delicious! ^_^Weasley who?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it the chapter and SS's wicked ways!
I found this story a couple days ago on OWL.tauri. Supposedly complete, but really only a few chapters. I'm so glad I tried googling it, and so found its complete version. Excellent. I hope you're still reading reviews. I see you wrote this over a year ago. I'll be sure to read your other creations. Thankyou.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I just saw your review there, so I'm glad you're no longer frustrated with not finding the end of it. I'm very glad you enjoyed!
I loved your story....so very hot, passionate and tender at the same time!You are a gifted writer!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's been so wonderful to read your reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it hot, passionate and tender!
So very poignant!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you found this chapter moving!
I like the characterization of Snape very much! Well done!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy that you like this characterization of him!
This chapter was so touching. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I found this story well after it was finished because I really don't think I'd be able to wait for chapter updates!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you said that, because I did write it with about 2 chapters coming out a week, so I don't know what it's like to read it all at once!
So well written and so witty!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's great to hear that you like the writing and the humor!
Just stumbled upon this juicy story this afternoon! I laughed so hard...Can't write much more as Chapter 2 is calling me!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
A very hot and delicious story. I enjoyed it immensely. :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story and found it hot!
I want more science !!! But otherwise great...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! (And you're the only person who's said that about the science - thanks!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Now THAT was worth waiting all those rungs for!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it worth the wait!
Oh my! I really want to be her. Lucky girl. Lovely story well done. Hugs
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
I gave your story a five, I loved the way you gave her point of view and his from the same scene. This was a really hot story from the first moment on the ladder to when they finally consumated their burgeoning relationship. Can't wait to see how this progresses and hope to read your next chapter soon.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you''re enjoying the story and the use of the alternating POVs! The next chapter soon!
AHHH. Ahem.
That was amazing. Well worth the wait :)
I love this line: He smirks. “And priced accordingly. You were so convinced of this evening’s outcome?” That hopeful.
Mmm, I must admit, the smut is not at all disappointing. In fact, the very opposite :) Very sensual and well written.
So, well done! I await the next chapter! :) Severus' POV, hmm.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and that line! It's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait and well written!
Wow, just wow...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I loved it!! That was the perfect scene after all the build-up. I can't wait for Severus' view.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you lliked the it! SS up next!
So good!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you lliked the it!
Well, if that wasn't the perfect climax of the story. Beautifully done. It's so much more satisfying (bad word choice, I know) when the tension slowly rises and finally explodes.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! And you're right - the story does follow the pattern of foreplay followed by orgasm-inducing sex hopefully!
Well worth the 25 chapters of foreplay. I don't even smoke, but I need a cigarette. That was intense, passionate, and extremely intimate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and though it ample pay off for all the foreplay!
Gods, is it hot in here or what *fans self*....(I've got to stop reading this stuff at work)! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot! (yeah - smut at work induces squirming)
Love it! Love it! Love it!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!