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Ladder
ubiquirk912 Reviews | 7.45/10 (912 Ratings, 0 Likes, 311 Favorites )
Victory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit. Multiple award winner.
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ubiquirk
Member Since 2006 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 212 | 89 Reviews Written | 1,629 Review Responses
I am a longtime fanfic fanatic, having entered the realm via Buffydom. One day I read a Willow/Severus crossover and I was hooked – on Snape that is! He's been in every HP story I've done so far.
I write in multiple fandoms on LJ, esp. BtVS and Firefly. If you're interested in reading my fic for other/crossover fandoms, it can be found at:
http://community.livejournal.com/ubific/
Reviews for Ladder
Glad I hit the random story button.
Excellent piece of reading. Waiting for more.
Poor Hermione having to say yes with a room full of people. I have a feeling that Ron knew she would say no if it was just them. Or maybe not...
Waiting waiting
Is the next chapter ready yet.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! (laughs) Any way you get here (that's the first time I've heard of the random button, though)!
Glad you're enjoying the story, even with the proposal scene.
Next chapter in queue!
Omg, I don't know what to say. This story is very cutting edge, exciting and passionate.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I think you had a lot to say! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story and finding it "very cutting edge, exciting and passionate"!
If you don't mind me asking, what strikes you as cutting edge? I'm fascinated and don't want to misinterpret.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
This story was disscussed on the Witt message board. I was already reading it at the time though. The style is a difficult one, almost a he said - she said. What is so cutting edge is you are actually carrying it off very, very well. Also, you are using a ladder as a literary visual describing the building or a relationship. This is unique as well. These are just a couple of things that jumped out at me as the story progresses I'm sure I will find other points and I'll tell you too! lol I can't help it I'm a loud mouthed Italian.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks for the clarification. I can't for the life of me find that thread at WIKTT, but it's good to know! I love hearing from you - don't apologize!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
If I remember right, it was one of those daily emails I get.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
I haven't been getting the daily e-mails, so that explains it. Thanks!
It looks as if it weren't any longer just about the sex for him. I now wonder how the story ends. Probably not as I had originally imagined. :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Good - I'm really glad to hear that some changes in Severus are coming through for you. I hope you enjoyed it!
Good grief, I had to read it twice because of all of the "big" words, lol. Good chapter as always, but I think I am ready for her to dump Ron and get down to business with Snape.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Hope the big words didn't spoil it for you! I'm really glad you liked the chapter, nonetheless! More soon.
Urg! You're just stringing us along! (sorry)
This is a fabulous story, btw. I love the way you've shown Severus slowly going from just empty lust to something deeper. Hermione's journey is a bit more frustrating, but. well, that's the point, isn't it?
Next chapter, please!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! It's really good to hear that Severus's changes are coming through for you! Yep - HG still has to do some changing, too. Sorry if it takes a while (but not too sorry)! (grins)
Okay, if reviews are chocolate, what kind do you prefer? lol. Anyway, please write more because new chapters are like Godiva dark chocolate truffles to me
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter!
I love dark chocolate - 70% cocoa and up!
After all, it is only recently that I have been able to admit to myself that I would, in fact, bind myself to her in more than a merely sexual way.
And so the predator becomes the prey ... kind of. There's still the minor problem of her engagement of course, so it will be interesting to see her next step.
And what else would you be but a Ravenclaw?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Yep - he may have been caught in his own trap. (snicker)
Erm, Slytherins are sexy! But you're right - I'm Ravenclaw through and through.
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Erm, Slytherins are sexy!
You won't get any argument from me on that! But they don't have that market completely cornered, do they?
But you're right - I'm Ravenclaw through and through.
The Sorting Hat didn't even have to think about it, did it?
I am sorry that I have not reviewed before now, but I want you know know how much I love this story! I look forward to each and every update! Well done.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Welcome!!! I didn't know you were reading, but it's great to know. I'm really glad you like my story!
Love it!
Sometimes POV shifts can be distracting, but your story lives from those shifts and uses them to build up the tension. And have I mentioned that I really like "your" Snape? I think he's quite IC for a "Snape-in-love". You don't think I could borrow him sometime... *g* I'm eagerly awaiting the next chap, especially with that evil little cliffie you wrote there...
Greetz,
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
(Should there be any embarassing mistakes ,grammatical or otherwise, included in this little statement. Pleas ignore them or inform me about them. I'm not a native speaker/writer, but am always eager to improve...)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that the alternating POVs are working for you - it was an experiment I really wanted to try.
It's also good to know that you like this characterization of Severus!
Don't worry - I don't grammar cop reviews! (laughs) I get enough of that in the day job, and I'm happy to hear from you!
You are killing me with the length of these chapters! GOD!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! There's a reason for them, and it's not to be evil, really! I's posted on my lj under memories, if you're curious.
Awww, we won't hold your being a Ravenclaw against you...
So, if he's thinking binding cords rather than bound to the bedposts, why doesn't one of them simply ask the other one out. I know, that isn't the Slytherin way, but I'm giving HG the opportunity to step up and do the Gryff thing. Come on now, an entire year of 'cat n mouse' is 11.5 months too long! A girl might get tired of playing.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Hmmm, I'm not sure he's fully worked out all of the ramifications of what the rope means, but I will say that he seems to not care for BDSM because of his Death Eater days.
But HG is still engaged - do you think it's in character for her to be easy?
I'm glad you liked it (and my swottiness)!
Response from Darque Hart (Reviewer)
Oops I forgot that Hermione was engaged! No, no, HG is not easy! Stupid maybe, for saying yes to Ron when she wasn't sure, but not easy.
I think she wants to do what is expected of her, that 'fitting in' thing. She wants to please those she holds in high regard. But, the Ron thing ... I just can't see it.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
No problem - it's not as if she's been thinking of Ron these last few chapters since I've had her interacting with Severus! As for your other issue - keep reading! (grins)
*melts* whew... that was a fun little ride... I'm not liking the breaks though...lol!I like that you are a Ravenclaw... it helps you to bring out the inner Ravens in Severus and Hermione... I've always felt that was part of their common ground.Thanks for writing!~*~SeleneAngel~*~
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and find it melty!
Thanks for liking my swottiness - you're right - I think that's why I relate to both SS and HG.
aughhhhh, the tension is killing me!!! love it!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the story and the UST!
Severus is well and truly under Hermiones spell! I'm not sure she even knows how much she affects him.
As always it's another great chapter with interesting interaction between our two favourite people.
Well done again,
Mandy.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Yes, he does seem to be caught himself. I'm glad you liked it.
As ever, I enjoy the quality you write into Snape's voice, scholarly and sensual. Amazing how the man can multitask.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter and that you like this characterization of Severus. He's the chatacter that really speaks to me directly.
I was wonderring if he would notice her red dress, the colour of their anniversary. Like he wouldn't! I'm most eager to read more. And more, and more...
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Of course he was going to notice - she was in denial! (laughs)
I'm really glad you liked it! Next chapter soon.
Normally I try to leave insightful, flattering reviews, but my brain isn't working right now. Since my brain isn't working I'll just leave you with: wondeful, delightful, sexy.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I love hearing from you no matter what! No pressure to be insightful, though I enjoy it when you are.
I'm very glad you liked the chapter and found it sexy!
Very intense chap. I thought the rope more of an erotic symbol on her rung. On reading this one it kinda sounds like the intent he has means a more permanent relationship feeling toward her. Looking forward to the next chap.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I think you're right - the rope can work symbolically on many levels - both sexual and relationship!
I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter - more soon!
He's seen her epiphany then. I eagerly wait for the next chapter.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! He saw something - but it's up to you as to whether he interpreted it completely correctly (though I apologize that that may mean taking another look at 15).
I'm very glad you liked it! More soon!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. More soon!
I am melting yet again.
Wow.
He pursued her ostensibly for her mind because he wanted her in his bed. Now he's impressed by her mind and shows evidence of more than just desire. Genuine affection, perhaps?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I like your interpretation - it tells me that some of the changes in SS that I'd tried to build into chapter 14 are starting to play out here.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it melting!
Response from Keladry Lupin (Reviewer)
Chapter 14 is where I started considering the possibility that everything I was worried about wasn't going to happen. This chapter has me almost convinced.
I love it when that happens!
Funny...Hermione's the one holding the line, but I don't think she's realized fully yet that the hook is on her end -- and she's just taken the bait!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! Yep, the rope is symbolic! I'm so glad you liked the chapter.
Nope, you've got it in 15, it's just this one:P
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks again! (laughs) Funny that I caught it in one place and thought "I need to fix that in 16" and didn't!
Still loving this very much. You've got signifier twice in the beginning of the sentence explaining the signified and signifier, which had me confused until it continued the explaination. Wastn't alert enough to see if that was also the case in your last chapter, even though I did just reread it for fun. Look forward to your next!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! And thanks for pointing out the typo - sorry for the confusion! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! More soon.
I wish I could just binge on this, chapter after chapter. The UST is making me crazed. Ah, well, I'll wait if I must.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much! I hope that's a good crazed. (grins) More soon!