New Chapter for For Him
For Him
sweetflag267 Reviews | 267 Ratings, 0 Likes, 92 Favorites )
When Hermione discovers that an incurable Snape has been left to waste in a secret hospital ward, she sets out to do what so many have failed to do before and cure him.
This is my response to the Dictionary Drabble Challenge. The chapters have to be less than one thousand words and contain the listed words.
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Meadowes! Well, lets hope this plan will work.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.I'm sure that Meadowes would be positively thrilled to see Hermione :D
It sounds like a wonderful plan, except for visiting Meadowes. Yikes!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Hmm... shame about visiting Meadowes.Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
That's a pair to be reckoned with, but I hope Hermione takes someone with her when she goes to see Meadowes.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for the review :)Maybe she will and maybe she won't :)Thanks for reading :)
Oh I like this very much! It's lovely to see Lucius and Narcissa as a loving couple for a change.Glad to see that you're updating.Have a nice weekend!/M
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Hello :)I've been so busy recently. I haven't been able to do much, and that includes reading. I'm thrilled that you're still with this story.I had an okay weekend, thanks :)I hope yours was a good one too.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I'll be sticking to this story until the bitter end.Yes, that's a threat, heheWeekend was fine. Got tons of writing done. I so need a life!
I'm glad to see Hardwicke! He seems to have some sympathy for Draco. Now I am all caught up with this wonderful story and will be eagerly awaiting more! I want to know what these people are up to!Thanks for this interesting and original tale!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
More is on the way. The challenge has ended as it stands, so I will be carrying it on as a regular story--it'll be a relief to do a decent length chapter.I should be posting the next chapter pretty soon.Thank you so much for keeping with the story, and I am so thrilled that you like it.x
alfresco sanctum is a perfectly delightful combination! This chapter is a welcome break from Bellatrix! Even I am pitying the Malfoys a little bit.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
lol.... thanks. I have a quirky sense of humour, and it seeps through from time to time. I needed a break from writing about Bella--I have to sleep! lolThe Malfoys have evolved as the word lists have come out... I had no real clear plan for them. I do now... :D
Bellatrix really takes the cake! she is so evil and utterly scarey. I THINK you are planning a happy ending, but I could see her setting herself up as a new Dark Lady, ruling through terror. Poor Severus, he is miserable enough without Bellatrix tormenting him. I hope she will not go back and torture him again. But I know she will.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
And wouldn't she be glorious as the new Dark Lord! :DYep... Severus is suffering a bit.
good chapter! I am glad Hermione was not able to use the unforgivables! Good use of the words. good depiction of Hermione's misery.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for the review. I doubt that she ever will be able to cast those curses.
Oh, still horrible! I admire your imaginative story and clever use of the required words.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Awww thanks! Some of the words were real stinkers, but great fun to use.
oh my gosh! how horrible! (I mean that in a complimentary way)
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you! This sets up the next sequence of chapters. I'm glad that you're liking this... really makes me feel all authory.
you leave us at a cliffy, but i get to hurry on to the next chapter. boy! chthonic! what a toughy! I had never heard of that one!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Quite a few of the words are toughies. I agonised over so many of them!
i was glad he didn't murder the birds, but it is sad that he is eating them. Still, they are dead and his erstwhile companions might be gladened that their deaths gave him life---except, of course, that it is all in his head. there are no ravens to cheer him and help him. Thanks for the update, even though this is such a creepy tale! Bella's nuts, by the way.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
She is a wee bit unhinged. Thanks for reviewing. The ravens give him what he needs, and you're right about them.
wise words from the professor! and more backstory! Thanks for this chapter!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
I have no idea where Hardwicke sprang from; the word list just conjured him up. He's an interesting character, and I plan to use him mercilessly.
Golly ! Bella is creepy as all-get-out! but the Malfoys are showing a human side I am happy to see.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Yep... creepy. I feel that the Malfoys need some humanising, and I have a plan for them... *evil laugh*
poor Severus! I am glad they are trying to help him. I am very impressed with your portrayal of Draco. very masterfully done!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
The ravens are his friends in this place. I'm enjoying writing about Draco. I can imagine him flapping loose before he gets a new life for himself.
wow! this is so cool! It is creepy and mysterious and wonderful all at the same time. You really rock!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you again, Pookah, I'm so glad that you're enjoying this.
great chapter! I am going to catch up on this tale, (once again.) I really think you did a splendid job working the words in! I like your ideas and the mysteries we haven't figured out yet. Excellent!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for the review, Pookah. :DI hope that the mysteries entertain.