Message Received
Chapter 20 of 26
sweetflagSome messages are less hazardous than others.
ReviewedAuthor's Notes: The challenge has now ended, and I am continuing this as a regular story. I hope that you enjoy.
Hardwicke worried him. Granted, the wizard had only seemed to want to extend a helping hand, but Draco couldn't fathom why. The motives behind the generosity perplexed him, and he wondered if it was some cruel joke. Pondering his lot, he walked along the corridor towards his room. In the distance, he could hear the dull roar of the Quidditch match, and he quashed the rising envy. So much had been so important to him, and it was now laughable, but it had represented a normal life, and he ached for that. Shrugging his shoulders, he smiled wryly. Maybe Hardwicke was right; maybe it was just a question of having better directions.
Lost in thought, he couldn't react to the pale hand darting from the shadows to latch onto his arm. Gasping and trying to pull away, Draco tried to prise the tight fingers from his bicep, but the grip was excessively determined. Struggling, the hand tightened, and its partner emerged to grab his collar. He caught someone's groan over the rush of blood in his ears, and then, he was hauled into the gloom. His face smacked into the wall, and he felt his front teeth grind against the cool stone.
"Oh, I'm so sorry."
A girl! his mind supplied quickly, part of it fluttering with excitement...when was the last time he'd been dragged into a secluded alcove by a girl?...but another part, the greater part, recognised the voice and trembled. Granger!
But she had apologised.
The hands let go, and he turned slowly to his possible aggressor. Her wand flared to illuminate the small space, and he saw her pale and tired face. What on earth did she want?
"Granger," he said sanguinely, as if they were colleagues merely meeting up in the local.
"Dra... Malfoy," she replied unsteadily.
"Did you want to have a word with me about something?" he asked softly while feeling the edge of his tooth for damage.
Her sheepish grin was quite cute, and Draco felt the world tilt slightly more towards insanity. Could things become any more surreal?
"In a way," she said carefully.
He was intrigued by her apparent wariness; her eyes kept darting towards the empty corridor.
"I need to give you something," she finally confessed; her voice was breathy and fast.
"Oh," he replied with a smile which exploded into a grin at her shocked gasp.
"Nothing like that," she retorted indignantly.
"I didn't think so, but you're worth a try."
Teasing Granger was fun! It rekindled something deep inside: mischief, humour, life! At each comment, her blush intensified, and he revelled in the way she didn't know whether to smile or sneer. But he wasn't a fool, so he knew that Granger was after something noble or righteous; the Gryffindors just couldn't help themselves. But something that required him? Interesting!
"I have something from your father."
The smile evaporated from his face, and he leant closer to her. Something from his father? The image of an owl on a sill sprang to mind, and he recalled the letter declaring that his father had found someone to help him. But Granger?
"What is it?"
Her hand slipped into the deep pocket of her school robe, and he tensed, but she only pulled out a harmless, cream envelope.
"A letter," she said simply.
Plucking it from her fingers, Draco fought the urge to rip it open and tear out its innards.
"How did you get it?"
"I'd rather not say," Hermione said sharply. "The letter should explain everything."
He grabbed her arm as she tried to slip past him into the corridor. "What do you mean by 'everything'?" he demanded almost desperately. "You've seen him?"
"Read the letter, Draco," she suggested firmly while tugging her arm free. "Lucius said that you'd understand."
'Lucius' had been wrong. Even after reading the letter for the third time, he was as puzzled as ever. His father wanted him to work with Granger on some project? Was he delusional? The witch had been partly responsible for putting him in Azkaban, and his father wanted him to help her? An inspiration struck him, and he lifted the letter up to the light, looking for the hidden message that just had to be there! Nothing! His father must be losing the plot in that hovel.
However, his father had seemed sure that the letter would be understood, so maybe there was something in the text itself, some secret message hidden in plain sight.
Dear Draco,
Please accept my apologies for not contacting you sooner, but this had to be handled delicately.
Do you remember what I said to you as we were manhandled out of the court? I told you that there was a way out and that we would be free to live again. You must think that that was a pie-crust promise from a desperate man, but I was sincere. We do have the means to escape what our life has become. I cannot tell you the details, just as I cannot tell your mother, and just as she accepts my word, I ask you to do the same.
The key to our escape is Severus. Again, the reasons are beyond my ability to explain at this moment in time, but I can tell you that his future and ours are linked. You cannot imagine my frustration at being forced to keep things from you, Draco. Accept that it cannot be avoided.
Your godfather has been languishing in St Mungo's for almost a year now; the Healers have made no progress to heal him, but we can. Or more accurately, Hermione can with our assistance. You are the only person within Hogwarts whom I can trust... trust completely. I am imploring you to work with Hermione as she works to cure your godfather. It will be a difficult task, one that requires absolute secrecy, but I have faith in you.
I give you the option to assist us. I know that over the years, you have been ordered and expected to do your duty, and I will no longer follow the old ways. No longer will you be without choice. If you decide to help, then deliver a message to me through Hermione: she knows where to find me. If not, you shall always be my son and be loved.
Father
The cheap paper trembled in his fingers as his eyes devoured the lines once more. Even after the fourth time, his heart stuttered at his father's written desire to give him something so valuable as a choice...he'd never realised how precious it was. Aside from the word usage suggesting that his father was under some obligation to remain silent, it was fairly straightforward...help Hermione.
Sighing, he fell back onto the duvet. He knew that he would help Hermione. The thought of his godfather lying in that hospital had not really affected at first...he had had his own problems to contemplate...but as time had passed, he had grown to see it has the ultimate sign of dispassion towards the man. Snape had given his existence to keeping them safe, and in return, they were leaving him to rot. Something stirred. Something that he hadn't felt since Voldemort had made his mother drink that disgusting potion...oh yes; he knew about that!
He had come across his mother weeping in the summer house, clutching at her belly, her face red and swollen. Words had tumbled from her lips, and he had gathered them up, piecing the fractured woes together until he had formed the framework for her grief. A blade through his chest couldn't have hurt more... It had hurt almost as much as Potter's sectumsempra had when the brat had found him crying over the murder of his sister.
Draco felt anger. Not the petty kind that flares after a frustration, but the steady and long-lived anger that will warm the belly for years. Oddly, with that emotion that usually so readily snatches sense, his mind cleared, and he lifted the letter once more.
Pie-crust promise...
Sitting up and frowning, he looked at the words; his father had said something about pie-crust promises when they had been frog-marched to their cells. What was it now?
The Ministry make pie-crust promises... just like the Order!
oooXooo
Hermione gently brushed her fingers over her forearm. Draco's grip had been painful, but despite the warm throb, she felt good about completing the task for Lucius. Her lips twitched; it hadn't felt that bad to have been complimented by Draco either. Hysterical laughter bullied her, and she let a few giggles escape. Giggles! How childish she scolded, but she didn't really care. Why shouldn't she be young and foolish for a few moments in the privacy of her own room? For seven years she'd been the mother and the balance. For seven years she'd been mature and strong...why should she have to carry that mantle now? The war was over, and granted, many people had perished, but she had survived, so why shouldn't she live?
With that thought, she realised that she was lonely. Ron had slipped from her life like fog under the sun, and Harry cast her pained glances during the few lessons they shared. When had they parted? Her sudden gaiety ebbed away, and she felt terribly empty. Even the thought of curing Snape failed to warm her.
Standing by her desk, her gaze drifted over to the small book that she had borrowed from the library: Visions in another mind. The book had changed her life. It had somehow...incredulously...brought her closer to a man that she should despise, and through that strange union, she had found an outlet for her distress. It also represented the hardest thing that she'd ever done, and it was made harder for the fact that for the first time in quite some time, it was something that she had to do for herself.
Lucius had been quite reticent on divulging the content of the letter to her, and she had not read it, despite the urge fluttering in her belly, but she had faith that the wizard would not conspire against her or those who were dear to her. It was odd, but she firmly believed his declaration that he had stopped following Voldemort years before Harry had fulfilled his destiny. This faith extended towards him helping Snape. What would happen afterwards was out of her hands, but she knew without doubt that Lucius would give his all to help her. Goosebumps teased her skin. The smallest flicker of despair made her wince...the thought of losing Lucius stung.
Focusing on the task, she sat at her desk and pulled out some parchment from the top drawer. After seven years, she had never quite mastered the quill, and so, she slid out a Biro from her breast pocket. Reading the method, Hermione planned out the brewing process, her mood lifting with every step.
The ingredients were still with Lucius, and they'd probably stay with him for another few days at least; she needed to find a better place than the girls' toilet to work. The house-elves being on high alert increased the difficulty, and she doubted that she could work anywhere within the school, but where could she brew? The Room of Requirement had sprung to mind, but she had been unsure about the potion's stability in an environment prone to change; also, she would need access to the potion at regular intervals, so being denied access for any reason was not an option. Nibbling her lower lip, she tapped the Biro against the desk and pondered. Where and when could she brew the damned thing?
oooXooo
"Where shall I hide you?"
The elderly voice wavered as the words tumbled past dry and cracked lips.
"Somewhere safe, but somewhere close," whispered the voice almost lovingly. "I can't risk losing you or being too far from you, my sweets."
Arthritic and wrinkled hands lined up ten short and brittle stumps on a cotton pillow case. Hunched over the table, Bella used Meadowes' wand to cut the cloth into strips which she used to carefully wrap up the fingers. Something niggled at the back of her mind, and she grinned.
"I can feel you squirming, Meadowes," she trilled. "It won't do you any good, you know. I have no intention of leaving just yet." Humming a senseless tune, she bound the last finger and sat back. "All done," she said with a satisfied smile. Laughing, she picked up a thumb and forefinger and sang, "Two little fingers met in a lane; thumb bowed to finger and bowed once again." She laughed again. "It's strange to think that these shrivelled things were once mine. They're certainly better than these ugly things that you have, Meadowes. How did you cope with them?"
Something nagged at her mind, and she paused to study the gnarled and liver-spotted hands. "The blood?" she queried. "Oh, yes. You weren't in your right mind at the time, were you?" she asked snidely. "In case you've quite forgotten, you went berserk and gutted a Healer." The irritating niggle on the edge of her awareness intensified. "I assure you," she affirmed sulkily, "that in your sudden delirium you killed a Healer! It was quite gruesome. The others never knew that you had it in you."
It was quite pleasing to have him writhing and ranting as she enveloped him. It was like watching a spider struggle to climb out of a bath. And just as that spider would eventually either curl up and die or slip down the drain, she knew that staying in Meadowes' mind would cause it to wither or slip away. That couldn't be allowed to happen at the moment; she needed what was trapped in his skull. She needed to know who his accomplices were and what they were up to. It was no longer a matter of her survival, but it involved Snape, and she saw him as a personal demon to slay. Until he was dead and gone, she would never be able to wear her crown comfortably.
Placing the thumb and forefinger on the table, she folded her arms across her chest and peered out the window. Almost at the same time that her eyes latched onto something interesting, she felt that part of Meadowes that still fought turn to ice. It seemed that they shared some level of consciousness, and as an idea bloomed in her mind, so it slithered into his.
It was almost possible to hear his repeated mental cries as her eyes followed the young woman pegging out washing.
"What else could you do that they thought was beyond you, Meadowes?" she hissed out menacingly. "What would be worse for you than breaking your silence?" she added, making it impossible for him to miss the underlying message.
The fraction of mind shuddered at the horrors that she was conjuring for it to witness: terrible images of what would be committed if it remained reluctant to answer her questions. Deep inside, Meadowes screamed and wept.
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Latest 25 Reviews for For Him
267 Reviews | 5.69/10 Average
Gosh... Can't you authors make things less complicated and angsty for once? ;))
Magnificent first chapter! Why isn't this fanfic completed yet?
This is very nice. (At least the last part, not Bella, of course.) Hermione's conflicts are very clear and believable, and I love the way you've shown young Sev. I'm a bit worried about older Severus--I'd like to see him a bit stronger, since it looks as if Bella will find him soon. But I wonder where Lucius has got to, now? Sorry to hear about your hands--that can be really painful. Have you tried a dictation program? They're amazing, once you learn them and get them used to your voice.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you again. It's reassuring for me that the characters and their interactions are believable. I've never really considered the dictation program--partly because I had no idea that such a thing existed, and partly because I find it very difficult to talk when I'm writing. That probably makes no sense, but everything seems to go straight from brain to fingers. Thank you... I'm hoping the fingers will start to behave soon, as most of my hobbies and work involves them. On the other hand, I do have a good excuse now as to why my granny squares look like some temporal distortion as seen on Star Trek.
You write so much better when you aren't trying to fit it around the vocabulary words! You clearly have a wonderful, convoluted plot in mind (assuming that all the threads eventually come together), and yet I have frequently been tempted to abandon your story, reading it through, because of the awkwardness of the language. It's never wise to try to use arcane words based only on their definitions, since the words you were given all have hooks and connotations and if you aren't fully familiar with the universe of the words you use, you can make errors that are really jarring--especially in writing that is otherwise smooth and competent. . I'm so glad the challenge is over, and I look forward to the rest of the story. (Except Bella, who is simply disgusting--those fingers!)
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you so much for your review and kind words. The drabble challenge was thrilling and... challenging. Trying to get it all done in less than 1,000 words was also very trying. I'm so glad that you managed to get past the vocabulary. My ignorance must have shone through quite a lot in the chapters, but I did enjoy the challenge of learning new words and trying to do them justice; I think it helped me quite a lot. It was great fun. Thank you again for the review.
"Armed with his wit—a wit that had kept him dancing just one step ahead of death for decades—and a fierce determination to discover if he could finally call himself free, Snape rode his anger like a devil and stepped into the storm."That? Is one of the most glorious sentences I've read in a long time. It made me *shiver* with pleasure and anticipation.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you so much for the review, and I'm sorry for the delay in response. I'm so thrilled that the line was a good one. Thank you for reading.
VERY INTERESTING READING. WHAT SUSPENSE! I FOUND THIS STORY AGAIN, I READ IT LAST YEAR AND ITS STILL WHERE IT WAS, I HOPE YOU ARE WORKING ON AN UPDATE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO EVERYONE. YOU HAVE ME HOOKED! ;D
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Hello. It's lovely to read your review. I am working, very slowly; I have had to put writing on hold for quite a while now. I hope to get back to everything 'fanfiction' in the next few weeks.
wow...just wow. this is so well written and interestingly plotted. thanks so much
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Hello again :) Thanks for reading!Thank you for those kind words. Hope you enjoy the rest of this tale.
This reality is terrifying. Will Snape be able to hold on to his sanity? Who is this voice he hears?
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Hello :) It's lovely to see you again.Thank you for the review and the stars.I know this is mean, but you'll find out :D
OK, I got lost on this chapter. I'm going to re-read it tomorrow. So far the story is pretty good though.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you so much for that :) I hope that the next chapters make more sense.
I think Hermione should let someone else know what is going on. She is taking risks that don't need to be taken.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
True, but don't you find that logical people tend to be the last to see the logic of a situation, especially when it's personal.Thanks for the review and the stars :)
It's getting interesting. Poor Ron feels threatened by Hermione's distance I think.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you :)Ron always strikes me as being rather insecure; JKR makes him work hard for eveything.
Not bad, I'm wondering why Lucius isn't the ring leader.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Does he feel that he could be?Thanks again :)
The old man in this chapter, is he the same old man from the hospital?
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Yes, he is. :)Thanks for the stars :)
Well, there is certainly some hidden agenda here.Not bad, although I'd like more description of thoughts, feelings etc. However, that may have been planned for this chapter.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for the review. This was in response to a Dictionary Drabble challenge, and as result, quite a few of the chapters are constrained by length and specific words to use. I didn't delve as much as I would have liked. Hopefully, the chapters will become more satisfying as they go on.I will say that I have changed the rating, as the story does darken in places; this may not yet be apparent, so I thought I'd warn you about the rating change--just in case it's now not quite your cup of tea. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Good start, I liked how you had Hermione as compassionate 'healing the soul, instead of the body'.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for the review :)
I as a little confused about Bella's plan as well, but then I read your reply to ClayPotter and and went all "ah!".The parts about Snape are about the best I have read in a long time! Wow! As for “I’m not crabby; I’m complicated.” I am so going to print that on a t-shirt!/M
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for the review :) Some aspects of this were written so long ago, that I think some pieces aren't connecting as well as they should. I will fix that!I really enjoyed going back to Snape--the poor dear has been neglected.Shucks! I should have thought of the t-shirt thing first! I will--promise!--get to your wonderful story as soon as some annoying other stuff has disappeared :)
I hate to admit this but, I am totally confused now. I can only assume that Bella put a finger inside each of Hermione and Draco, then wiped their memories clean of the horrible incident. So now she can take over either one of them at any moment as she wishes? But since she can only inhabit one person at a time, she is still inside Meadows during the house hunting incident?Please help me understand what is going on. That previous chapter was so horrifying, and this one makes no mention of their torture, or how they got out of it, or anything.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Yes, she has put a finger inside them and wiped their memories. Bella is still in Meadowes. I will do another chapter with her as the main character; she can have a chat with Meadowes about what she's planning. That should clarify things. Her idea to use Hermione and Draco was very spur of the moment, but she needed somewhere safe to keep those fingers. The fingers are her anchor points, if you like. She can site one and travel to and from it at will, or use it to fall back on if one is destroyed. Think of inns dotted along long roads: resting places for travellers heading towards their destination. She has yet to place all of them--eight remaining. She herself cannot move more than a set distance from her current anchor, so she needs the anchor to be carried--Draco and Hermione have the anchors with them at all times and carry them around--Bella doesn't have to possess either of them, but she can use them as a base to possess someone else. Bella knows that Hermione wants to help Snape and that she has access to all those who worked against Voldemort (the Order members, including Harry); all those who Bella wishes to take vengeance upon. It makes no mention, because no one knows--there are hints ... Hermione rubbing her belly, thinking that she ate something funny, but nothing else, because if they knew, they'd remove what they were carrying. Bella didn't want to torture them as such; granted, she enjoyed doing it (she IS a nutcase, remember :D), but she didn't want to create any lasting problems. I hope that clarified something... anything....
Response from ClayPotter (Reviewer)
Yes, I understand now. Thanks so much for the clarification.
Sorry. Can't read any more. Your rating is too low. The gratuitous violence of Wrapping Gifts bumps it into MA, and I'm not interested in Bella enough to continue reading this.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Fair enough. Thanks for reading thus far. I will, of course, ask one of the admins to seek their opinion on the rating and change it accordingly, and I will use their advice to rate future chapters.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for pointing out the inappropriate rating. I have upped it to M(R)--for mature teens.
ooooooo!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Given the stars, I'm edging my bets that that was a good 'ooooooo!' :DGlad you're liking it!Thank you.
Response from keske (Reviewer)
yeah! a very good OOOOOO!
So, how are they going to get out of that?!
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
It's a bit tricky, isnt it? :DThanks for staying with this story and for reviewing :)
wow! i'm speachless! thanks so much
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Glad you liked it :)Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Hanibal Lector meets The Exorcist. I'm impressed!And as horrible Bella is, I must tell you how much I love the way you depict Lucius and Narcissa. Truly lovely./M
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for the review :)They just want their happy-ever-after. Thanks for reading... makes me all giddy with happiness :)
So far our heroes are always being out flanked by Bella. Are they ever going to win and cure Severus?
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thank you for the review :)In truth, they're not actually fighting against Bella--they have no idea that Bella is even up and around and a problem. What is happening here is taking place over a few days. I guess that posting at rather irregular intervals may be seemingly stretching this out--sorry :(The ingredients arrived on Friday, they saw 'Meadowes' on Saturday and by Wednesday, the Malfoys will be... possiby... your neighbours :DBella is following her own little agenda, and Hermione and Draco are now a huge part of that... whether they want to be or not.I can sense your possible frustration, so I'll try and get some very long chapters done to help speed this along. Many thanks for reading this story and taking the time to review :)
That was dark. How is this going to work out?
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for the review.This is the darkest chapter in this story. I won't be delving into such shadows again. Err... are you asking if this is going to have a 'happy-ending'? Or are you just querying if the story will descend into a pure horror tale?
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
It was more of a general whine on my part. I like to guess where I think a story is headed-- in this case I'm drawing a blank, at least for anything that will bode well for Hermione. So I'll just have to wait. As for the question, I don't really expect to get an answer (although one would be nice), I stick those in a lot of my reviews. It means I like a story enough to do the equivalent of thinking outloud. But, as a general rule, do you do horror stories?
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
So... you like the story *grins* but feel that it could do with some more clues.... okay. I've just responded to another email about doing some longer chapters to help speed things up... I'll see if I can also make them more satisfying for you.Regarding horror, I do enjoy reading horrror and some of my stories do incorporate the genre. Maybe I will write one dedicated to it s some point.Thank you for reviewing and reading the story :)
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
Crap, now I feel awkward. I didn't do a very good job of answering your question. I started to say that I was usually pretty good at figuring out plot line, but that your story was keeping me guessing. Then I decided that sounded too arrogant on my part... You don't need to drop more clues. Your story is great just the way you've written it. I meant that as a complement, but I didn't say it very well. MA
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
I didn't mean to make you feel awkward--sorry.My concern was that I was being far too vague and not providing enough information, resulting in a confusing and inaccesible plot. I can breathe easy now... you're enjoying the story.Thank you for the lovely compliment :)
Oh, okay, Poor Severus hope from a patch of blue sky, and then lost it. Meadows - he's so trapped. I hope Hermione sees rigth through him.
Response from sweetflag (Author of For Him)
Thanks for the review :)I'm sure that he'll have his patch of blue again.Next chapter is in the queue... and well... er... :D