Damn, we have to wait.  Hope not for to long.  Lucifer Manly...bwahahahahahaha

Hahaha... I love the thought of Lucius picking glass out of his hair, and having strands come out with it.

Lucifer Manly? Oh that's hilarious. Helluva start for a future son-in-law.

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant:-)) Severus and Lucius still have all their body parts after being introduced as the Grangers future sons in law, they should be happy:-)) I just love the building relationship between Hermione and Severus, very well written and in a perfect tempo!I hope you will let small hints of who the others will marry too, not that it is all that important, I am must curious:-))Write fast and update again soon!

Glad to read your author's note at the bottom! Whew! You better write some more! I won't hold you to doing it quickly, but I will say that I absolutely cannot wait. Oh, and "Lucifer Manly"? HA! That was great. I might call him that from now on. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will write more. Chapter 6 is in progress, although writing an essay at the same time makes that slow progress.

Glad you liked Lucius's new name!

welll glass flying at malfoy isnt so bad and hermione finding serveus isnt that amazing she is a talented witch after allim sorry to hera it will be a wait untill th enext chapter is posted tho i hope you do keep up with the storymany thanks

I just love this story!  The balance between Snape and Malfoy is played out perfectly.  I can't wait to see Hermione go into intellectual control mode once she gets her bearings.  How will Snape and Malfoy each handle that when emotional control is within their grasp?  Or is it?  When Malfoy starts showing a little depth, how will Snape react?  Or Hermione for that matter?  So many opportunities you've presented.

Lucifer Manly with shards of glass in his hair! *roaring with laughter*

Being a part of Severus and Lucius’ post dinner party discussion was loads of fun, having Lucius startle into battle mode over a phone ringing, that is priceless.

I gather the glass went flying when the topic of marriage was opened? Oh my.

I hope the muse cooperates with the up coming chapters.

Lucifer Manly--I love it!  I'm enjoying your Lucius enormously.  Very funny chapter.

Mr Malfoy meets the Muggles....sounds like a bad sitcom!

Ahh what a perfectly twisted chapter.  Just what is Draco upto?  Will he perhaps share a wife with Harry.  Well done Irish

A good chapter as usual... the 'Meet the Parents' should be interesting! :-p

I was so pleased to see another chapter!  Well done and an interesting twist.  It's looking like the happy trio won't be living in Malfoy Manor. eh?  Personally, I think I'd ask for an unbreakable vow, and then sit down with paper and pen and figure out what best to demand. :-)

Interesting chapter - what is it with Malfoy's house - besides the dark magic that has been cast - how can she feel it and why did she feel pain while holding Malfoy's hand and not Severus - I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Funny, Hermione agreed to the marriages, but she is ruling the roost!

Excellent way to take command of the situation, Hermione.

Another excellent chapter.  And Hermione is BACK! (if slightly weakened)  Seems like Lucius is going to have to do a serious exorcism on his house if, by chance, they're all going to live there (and a major redecoration on at least one of the rooms).  Looking forward to more...  I really like your take on Severus in this one.

Good to see that Hermione is keeping the upper hand so far, not intimidated, arranging things on her terms only. Will she and Snape be teaming up against Lucius? I hope you're planning a soft spot in Lucius, too, like growing a bit fonder of her than he had expected. Original take on the MLC, really like it.

There are just so many things that make me happy in this chapter. 1. Draco standing up to his Daddy. 2. Draco respecting Hermione. 3. New creative reason for hand holding. 4. No immediate attraction to LMOkay I'll stop with the itemization. You just keep on writing my one earring wonder.

I was most intrigued by Draco this chapter (while also wondering if Lucius intends to so easily give in to Hermione's demands and not demand much in return beyond the consummation). Draco's reaction had me thinking different things about him, for example: Two husband PLUS a boy toy lover? HAHAHA! Ok, I like my smut. But seriously, how will he act when she's really his step-mother?Will he marry Ginny? How will that go? And a bunch of other things. I don't usually care for Draco, but I'm interested in him too.

Oh, and nice way to build the tension between Sev and Hermione. Not really kissing, etc. Just the hand-holding.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear it. I don't much care for Draco either, but this one hopefully seems decent.

Heh! This is Lucius. He's bound to have something up his sleeve.

Hee! This fic will eventually end up with a threesome, but not a foursome. Draco will have to form his own threesome, and not with Hermione or her spouses. Maybe Ginny, I still haven't decided yet.


I hoped that would be the case, and that I can keep that tension there.

Hehehe... reading about Lucius meeting the Muggle parents is going to be good. I really enjoyed your idea on the physical expression of dark magic inside Malfoy Manor. I particularly liked that Severus was the only one who could help her. I look forward to finding out your reasonings behind that.

HEEHEE-- oh evil cliffie!  Meeting the parents indeed.  Wouldn't it have been more fun to get Draco into the mix or is that for Ginny and Harry heehee, what fun. . .  update soon!

lol meet the parents that is goodwell it looks like hermione will benifit srom this little arrangement good for her

I can't wait to read about the diner party when Hermione will introduce her two fiancés to her parents. I'm also very intrigued by the fact that she needs Severus' touch. Will it be permanent or just inside of the Manor?