Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
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chivalric
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Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
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Reviews for Unkissed
More, please! *wipes sweaty palms on pyjama* That was REALLY hot & sweet (he kept the rose!!!)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Of course he kept the rose!Thanks for reviewing. Thanks for sweating *g*
Um, whoh. Do I take it that that wasn't all for an entire vial? ::sigh:: You wrote his reaction well, by the way. Entrancingly so. Thank you, and I look forward to more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you! The next chapter will go to the queue soon.
Poor Severus. I'm glad Hermione stayed to help, but I believe she is in for more than she bargained for.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I started this chapter on my lunch, but ran out of time and had to finish it now. I'm glad I did, because that was some nice action at the end there! All round good chapter. I can't wait to see Sev's reaction when he comes back down off his cum-high!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Eeek. Poor Severus!I did like how hesitant Hermione was - it came off as far more realistic than if she had just undressed him and jumped him, or something like that!I do hope Severus isn't going to be too angry with her once he's back to his senses. After all, the other alternative for an, um, helping hand would probably have been Dumbledore.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*shudder* Now that is one scenario I will NEVER write about, Snape and Dumbledore!And no, she won't jump him in the next chapter either *g* After all, she's quite young and very innocent, despite the crush she might have on her teacher. Thanks for taking the time to review this chapter, and thanks for considering it a realistic description
Thank you so much for the update, I was really happy to see it:-)) I hope, even though they are Hermiones friends, that Harry and Ron will have to pay some consequence for their "prank"? They are supposed to be grown up by now, and they could quite easily have destroyed Severus. They would probably not care, empty headed as they are, but they should be punished!!! I also hope that Severus won't feel anger and recentment towards Hermione for being the one to help him and to have seen him in this situation. He should know that of all people to know and to try and help him, she was the very best! Update again soon, I look forward to read more!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Promise, I will update before the weekend. Unfortunately, I tend to do last minute changes, but the chapter is ready and beta'ed and I truly hope you will like it. As for Snape's reaction... well, you'll see *g*
i don't know how i missed the first chapter of this, because i loved the valentine's day story, which i just reread before i read this. wow, what a great start! you really described the effects and his agony very well, as well as hermione's hesitation and uncertainty even in the midst of her need to help him. i'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter - once severus comes to his senses enough to realize what has happened.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
He won't like it, I can assure you *g*Thanks for reviewing. And please let me know if you like the next chapter(s)...
Wow. This is very intense. I am looking forward to more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Nevera dull moment with Ron and Harry around, is there? Hermione should get them muzzles and leads (and not the kinky kind either)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
but is that going to be enough ???
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
There are no words - she is so screwed! Pun intended. And Harry and Ron, well they'd best start packing to go into hiding! This is gonna be good!Livvy
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
They are just too daft and to boyish to even realise that something's wron. But don't worry - Hermione will find a way to pay them back.
I wonder how many times Severus needs to have release. Having taken a whole phial, his reaction was severe. But will it make the affects last longer as well? Will Hermione be forced to give him another hand job, or will she decide to do something else to rectify his problem. Hopefully he's not too upset when he finds out what he and Hermione did.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
The night has just started, and she is trapped in his rooms... Thanks for reviewing!
Wow, but I guess he's not finished? Well, I'm looking forward to the update.Great work!gab
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
The little know-it-all to the rescue! Hermione once said Harry had a thing for "saving people", but I think Hermione is a victim of the same curse. Must be a Gryffindor thing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
CF, I really didn't look at it from this angle yet! But then, she likes him. You really believe she would have done the same for... Hmmmm... Hagrid?
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
Ewww... or maybe Firenze? XD*thinks back to that topic on Potter_Place and cringes*
Oh now that is definately HOT. I cannot imagine what Snape's reaction will be once he recovers, but I have a feeling given the amount of potion he ingested it is going to take more than a hand job to relieve the affeccts of the potion. Very Well Done
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks - and you are right. The night has just begun *g*
Poor Snape. But ... good for us. The whole interaction was steamy hot. The way you wrote this, I could feel the intensity of his need. Now, I'm looking forward to the aftermath, her reaction and his reaction after all this.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I fear you or one of your colleagues will have to look over the next chapter before the weekend *g*Hugs for you, and many thanks for reviewing!
A suspiciously-acting Harry and Ron? Yup, definitely going to be some trouble ahead. ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Well, I know that ashwinder eggs are found in love potions. However, would Severus create a love potion in sixth year for a distraction? I wonder exactly what happened to Severus. Perhaps he recognizes the potion from when he created it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I might give an explanation to that question - why he made the potion - in the next chapter :-)))Thanks for taking the time to review.
Biting my nails here!!! Can´t wait for the next chapter!!! You are simply amazing!!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*blushes* Hope you will find the following chapters... satisfying!
'very dangerous and complex reactions?' This doesn't sound all too well. I hope to find out more soon. Great story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Uh oh! I suspect the potion did something more than just... distract. A very intriguing start.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Anonymous
Oh dear, what have these awful brats done this time? They didn't seem to have learned antything about life in general by the war, did they?
Great start for a story that's going to be really interesting. I'm already looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: They are boys, and they hate Snape. I promise, this time they won't get out of it that easily.
Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: That's really good to know! ;o)
Um, lust potion? That would definitely distract someone in a teaching position.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Oh dear. Just what have they done now? Cant wait for the next chapter!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Yay! The sequel! I've been watching for this.
Hermione showed admirable self-restraint. In her place, I would have slapped each of those boys even before I'd heard the whole story.
Great start!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
She'll do something better than slapping them :-)Thanks for reviewing. The sequel sat on my chest for weeks, and with the tremendous help of my betas I finally managed to finish it. Hope you will like where I will take Snape and Hermione...