well, this is a very compelling read. even though part of it was hard to read - i'm sure you can imagine which part - i do think you wrote it very well in terms of what they were feeling and how they handled everything. clearly there is a long night ahead, but hopefully it won't all be as awkward and uncomfortable as this scene was for them!

ooohhhh, I am so hooked on this story!

LOL How to kill the mood! Salve for bruises!

I love her quip when she wonders who exactly got the lust potion... great line!

Thank you so much for the update. It migth sound odd, but I liked this chapter. I found Hermiones reactions in her/their dire situation very realistic, and I loved how you had both of them aknowlegded that lines that shuldn't be, had been crossed and that the first time had been forced upon the both of them. To Severus because of the potion and on Hermione because she decided to stay, not knowing the full consequence of that desission. I think both you as the author, and they as the characters, handled this very well. Update again soon!

Hmm. On the one hand, this was very much dubious consent at best... on the other hand, when she made up her mind to stay, after having been warned off, it did indicate her willingness to - well, do whatever it took to help. What a complicated situation though! Even if he manages to take more care the next time(s) to provide her pleasure, too, I can only guess it's going to be very difficult for him to deal with what has happened.I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Seems like we have a long night ahead of us...Great chapter. Next??gab

Oh my, oh my, poor, poor Severus! First Aid can be SO satisfying, can't it? *g*

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

you are not allowed to leave the computer again until you update. as requested by me and everyone else that are unable to look away from the screen. do i even have to tell you that you are totally made of win? and that this story is.... like a form of God? probably not.

I am glad that Severus feels guilty about taking Hermione against her will. I know that the potion caused unbearable sensations, but having sex with Hermione before asking is still wrong. At least Hermione has forgiven him and is still willing to help him with his problem. I wonder what classes will be like the next day (or is it Friday?). I'm sure they will both be exhausted and unable to function. Their relationship will definitely have changed over the course of the night. Hopefully nobody, except for Dumbledore, realises that Hermione spent the night in Professor Snape's quarters.

Ahhh release or the beginning of...I am sure that this a night that neither of them will forget.  I have a feeling that Ron and Harry will not be punished too severly simply out of gratitude.  Well done! Irish

Wow! This story is fantastic... I can't wait to read more! MORE, PLS!

Those horrid boys!  I do hope you cook up revenge.  Poor Snape, after all he's been through.

SHit!  You cant leave it like that!!I so love this Snape in need....XD

SHit!  You cant leave it like that!!I so love this Snape in need....XD

...um ...i need a shower.now. *runs away forgetting to comment about how much she wants an update and more sexy smut.*

What a place to end the chapter!  Will Severus kill the boys I wonder?  I'd be tempted to if I were in his shoes.

If I remember corectly, that particular ingrediant is used in love potions.  I do believe the boys are in trouble.

I love how you portray Hermione so innocently, that she was afraid she would hurt him.And he kept the rose!

Incredibly well written, you manage to show both their vulnerability and their strenght while keeping it steamy hot.

       EXCELLENT!!!!!!

Wow, that was amazingly hot, even though I ached for poor Severus.  Harry and Ron need to be punished for this little escapade.  Especially if Severus had been left alone, that he may have become insane as a result.

Oh wow - a lust potion and she is going to help him - if that is the case then the little relief she gave him at the end of the chapter will not suffice - I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Interesting first chapter - I love the way you had Hermione stand up and corner the boys over what they had done - I cannot wait to see the next chapter to see what she does.

This is only the beginning.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Whoa.