New Chapter for Unkissed
Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Love it! Just desserts for Harry and Ron. :) I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Very nice job!! And the surprise twist about virgin blood at the end well done!! I thought about all types of ways that Snape may have reacted the morning after but you topped everything that had danced through my mind!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Tell me tell me tell me! What danced through your mind - because, it took me a while to figure out how he should react, and I truly would know what else might have been possible!
Response from ofelia (Reviewer)
he woke couldn't move but threw her out with his voice...wouldn't speak or look at her - my worst fear, He woke up first and spelled her out of his rooms and took her memory...only to have little parts of it start returning or for him to no longer be able to keep his hands off hermade her swear not to tell any one-- oath? only to have the oath backfire on him somehowBUT I LOVED your version the best with her taking the shower and then finding the spell making the sandwitches!!! Little things that mean she cares!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Huh, I wished I had known your ideas - would have given me something to toy with... But thanks so much for liking my way of putting things. I basically did it my way because I wanted them to talk to each other, and that wouldn't have been possible if he had a chance to hex her :-)Obliviate her... Hmmm, I have a story where Snape gets obliviated (called "Obliviate", how very boring *g*) and I will post it after Unkissed is complete. It's a dark and bitter fic, but I think it explains why I am really not a fan of that specific spell!
Response from ofelia (Reviewer)
I think the way you wrote it was perfect! It couldn't have been better anyother way! Looking forward to your next chap! Thanks so much!
Very nice job!! And the surprise twist about virgin blood at the end well done!! I thought about all types of ways that Snape may have reacted the morning after but you topped everything that had danced through my mind!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*beams* Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Augh! Poor Severus and Hermione! This IS a problem. Now, how's it going to be solved? *waits (im)patiently for next chapter*
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Next chapter will go into queue on Friday, promise.
What better revenge on the boys than giving them a dose of their own medicine. I can only hope Severus will snap out of his guilt and realise how much she cares for him.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, poor Hermione. She won't understand, and he's not going to explain. I can only hope this works out. By the way, that was the best revenge I have ever read. That would make an excellent side story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Arght! *puts her fingers in her ears and squeezes her eyes shut* I have not read that! No sequel (well, maybe). But certainly no Ron/Harry slash side story. Please, don't make me do it!*grins*Thanks for reviewing!
Terrific - original and powerful.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
ERRRR!! Cliffhanger! What a wonderful twist on the story--the being bound part! So excited for more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, love!
Wow, this was such a great chapter, so bittersweet and tender and wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon!gab
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*beams*Will update on Friday. And thanks for your lovely words!
My what a cliffhanger....really enjoying this story....update soon, please.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
On Friday, promise.
That was a twist I wasn't expecting! Wonderful.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
So happy to see you have updated.Love the revenge Hermione got on the boys.Would like to be a fly on the wall in the Room of Requirementwhen they realize what is happening to them and why they need the spellkindly provided by Hermione - how thoughtful of her - hahaFeel sorry for both Hermione and Severus - can'twait to see what comes next!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Wasn't sure about the revenge ;-) Thanks for liking it.Fly on the wall - now that might trigger a plot bunny! Although my poor beta starts retching when she has to read anything that involves Ron having sex *smirk*Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, I've been waiting for an update of this fic! I love it. I cannot wait to see what happens. And as for revenge on the boys..."not usually." Wow. Really. More? Soon? Please?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
More. Soon. Friday. Promise.*grins*
This has been an outstanding read thus far and now you have me in tears. I have faith that you will resolve things in Hermione's favor eventually. I mean, you just had Severus forbid her to address him by his title, so now she can only address him by his given name.I love the punishment she devised for the boys - I think they got off lightly, but the punishement was absolutely just.Looking forward to the next update and wishing you happy writing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hehehe - how I like to make my readers cry...No, honestly, I feel honoured that I sometimes manage to touch a heart here and there, and I will try to end that story appropriately.But she will insist in calling him Professor, and he will not like it at all. Update on Friday - so happy reading next week!
I don't care how many issues Severus have with his ego, or how noble he feels him self to be at the moment, I want to pour the whole bottle of the potion down his throat and throw him into the Room of Requirement to spend "quality" time with Harry and Ron. That should leave the three of them scarred for life and be a suitable revenge for him hurting Hermione like this. I expected him to hurt her, he always does, but this was overly cruel even for him. I am going to look around for all rotten tomatoes I can find and throw them at him every minute of the day until he has made up for his actions, which will be a cold day in a very hot place, urgh I am so mad at him:-)) I have decided that I will absolutely NOT see this from his point of view, he is wrong and I don't care if he thinks he has good reason for being so. The revenge Hermioen issued on Harry and Ron was beond brilliant, I don't think I have ever read a better one:-)))Update again soon, I migth be mad at Severus, but I not only wants to know what happens next, I desperatly need to know :-))
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
, dear,what shall I say - I'm so sorry that I distressed you? Weeelll, that happens if you threaten me with rotten tomatoes *smirk*BTW, you are the only one who really thinks he's overly cruel (at least the only one who expressed it so clearly.)What other option did he have, given his character? Student-teacher-relationships are a BIG no for anyone with morals, and although I won't call him noble (not at all) he's not a bastard either. In his opinion, he has raped an innocent virgin, and he realised he liked her, so naturally, he has to get her out of his reach. For his sake and her own good. Being nice to her and embrace her would have been OOC, I think.And I think I have said too much already *g* I will update on Friday, and let me tell you as a last little bit of information that he won't apologise. But she will. Hehehe. Now deal with that!P.S. "Quality time with Ron and Harry" - laughed tears about that, you might have triggered a plot bunny there! Can't even imagine their faces if Snape strolled in sort of... excited.
Oh dear. I know his intentions are good and all, but... argh. Poor Hermione.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, I hope to see Hermione fight such a stupid attitude!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Believe me, she's quite pissed off. Really, really pissed off. Bad enough to do some... interesting things to him.Update on Friday. And thanks for reviewing!
::gasp:: Oh, the angst, the angst, the angst! It's absolutely beautiful, and heartbreaking all at once. Gah!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*grins widely* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, noes! I'm sure she is not going to be too happy about Beauxbatons when she finds out!But she will appreciate the fact that he is bound to only her later, I'm sure. I know I would!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Tsk tsk, how come you think he won't brew a potion to break the bond? *smirks*And yes, she will hate Beauxbattons. Which proves that she will go to Beauxbattons...
Hmmm I hope Harry and Ron aren't virgins. I think Hermione has problems with Severus on the way.Great chapter, I loved the aftermath and Hermione standing up to Albus to protect everyone and I loved the revenge Hermione gave the boys.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I can's say if they have slept with a girl, but they certainly have never slept with a boy before. So you could call them virgins, in this light. But as they physically aren't able to shed virginal blood they won't be bound to each other.Hope you like the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
LOL the perfect revenge! Pity he had to be all noble and self sacrificing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
She will get back to him for that. Badly *g*
Oh my, how tragic! Hermione is indeed wicked and the boys do, indeed, deserve it
But I do hope the headmaster is wiser than Severus in this instance!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Wise is, by now, not an attribute I would stick to Dumbledore ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
oh my goodness. i dearly hope there might be a sequel to this story. oh please, please, please...
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*g* Not a sequel, at least not yet. But the next chapter should get online today. Thanks for liking and reviewing!