New Chapter for Unkissed
Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Fantastic ending! Especially young Sam's ruminations at the end. How did that relationship start, indeed. This is a perfect conclusion, even if you never write another word of their story. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Sorry, but I will. Don't know when, as I am currently drowning in RL and work, but definitely soon. Before the winter, anyway ;-)
Response from hobgoblinn (Reviewer)
I'm not at all sorry you'll be writing more here; I just mean that as it stands, this is a wonderfully written and shaped ending. I'll look forward to more whenever. Thanks again.
Who would be mad and stupid enough to dose Snape with a potion? Who indeed?? Lovely ending to your story. I can just imagine a Neville-like student being intimidated into baby sitting for Snape!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
He's stuck with this job for the next years :-)Thanks for reviewing!
Squeeeeeee!!!!!!!
Now that is an absolutely perfect, perfect, perfect ending!
Well done, my dear! I love this fic beyond reason, and you've just sealed it with a kiss!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
And your review just made me grin and shiver and grin again *ggg*Thanks so much! And hey - I have a thing for kisses ;-)
Absolutely brilliant, his reputation is in tatters... or not, if Sam wants to keep the job!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Unlike others, Sam is not stupid enough to mess with Snape ;-) He'll keep the job, he'll babysit for the next few years and maybe, one evening, he'll follow Snape and Hermione on a night out...
What a great story. I've just read it in one go. I loved the raw emotions displayed by both of them, juxtaposed with the humour of Remus and Albus in the kitchen, and the idea of Harry and Ron meeting up for an afternoon of fun and frolics!Looking forward to the epilogue.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much! I am very fond of the story and hope I didn't mess it up with the epilogue... It should be online in a few hours.
I want them married with children, but I'll take em this way too.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
An Epilogue is in queue. Let me know what you think!
Hermione to the rescue! I was surprised that Dumbledore let her use his Floo after his moment of understanding, but she is an adult, after all.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
And he is smart ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Poor Severus! At least Hermione has the integrity to check up on him - I'm assuming that's where she is headed. I wonder if he recognized his own potion?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Whoa! that was hot and amazing! more more more more please. and harry and ron? HAHAHAHAHA absolutely brilliant. i hope it doesn't take our favorite pair too long to realize what they're feeling. really brilliant writing, story, smut. just fabulous.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hmmm... depends on what you consider as "too long." Would three years be about right?Thanks for the review!
and you did it agian another wonderful chapter but i still cant wait to see how they get even
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I finally managed to update today... Hope you will like it.
Im lovin this story and cant wait for more! It has made me hotter than any erotic novel I have ever read!! Cant wait for the next chapters!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Glad you liked it, though you might have to wait for another few days for an update. My betas are very busy crosschecking the next chapters.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
I can't wait for the next chapter!thay keep getting better.I hope thay can still look at each other when the potion wears off.I think Hermione will have an easer time than Severus will.He'll fell like he took advantage of her even though we all know not even wild gnomes could get her out of the room.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Poor Severus!Harry and Ron should have to be locked in a room with horny trools.Good for Hermione though,wish I was her.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Good chapter. I think the first scene is similar to Care of Magical Creatures simply because you both came up with the same sort of answer to the same problem, (picking the cherry too roughly) but I did love Sev's ingenious method of applying the salve! ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks! Truly, I have to read mia's fic now, I'm most curious :-)
Wow, a chapter that leaves me almost breathless! Great work, thank you and please update again soon!gab
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you! And I will try my best to update soon, but the next chapter is still in the caring hands of my betas...
Ahem, WOW! Where has this story been all of my life? Amazing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hehehe, it has been hiding in my head. Then I stumbled over the archive and began writing. Glad you like it :-)
Wow... what a sensual and delightful chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Thank you so much for the update! I really like this story, and I think you have a brilliant grasp on your plot. I am not sure what I enjoyed most, their tenderness and consideration for eachother in a very "forced" situation or their plans on revenge on Ron and Harry. While I think that there would be to much paperwork involved if the two idiots are served to the spiders in the Dark Fores or as a lunch to a hungry dragon, I sure hope you will have Hermione and Severus enforce some kind of painful revenge on them. It is about time the mentioned idiots starts to grow up!
And please, make Hermione and Severus talk with each other and still be close in the morning?
Update again soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hi,
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
,thanks for your constant cheerleading - I love your reviews! To find out what sort of revenge will hit the boys, you will have to wait for chapter 6. And yes, there will be some talking soon as well...
Another excellent chapter! Can't wait to find out how hard "the boys" are going to get their asses kicked! I'm looking forward to reading more. I love Laurie King's books as well.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
:-) You'll have to wait for chapter 6 to find out...
She certainly seems to be dealing well with it. Hee! Even if by the sounds of it she'll need a lot of healing afterwards. (A good thing there is a Potions Master at hand, I suppose. I rather doubt she'd want to trouble Madam Pomfrey with this.)If sunrise is what will end the torture, it's a pity it couldn't happen closer to the summer... then again, it could have been even worse.I do hope that once the potion has worn off, he'll realise it just sped things along - and that this (in smaller quantities at least!), quite possibly, would have happened eventually anyway. And that it's not just pity and a desire to help that is keeping her there!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
A certain Potions master will be not able to move his limbs anymore when the sun is up *g* And no, Hermione won't bother Mme Pomfrey either. She will go to the library instead. Where else?Thanks so much fro reviewing!
Great chapter - my I hope they do not faint from all the activities - LOL. I think the little kiss on the back meant that Severus is finally getting it that she wants him and him alone.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Let's say Severus Snape is the most stupid person when it comes to love. He always manages to mess things up tremendously....Thanks for reviewing. Let me know if you like where I take this story eventually!
So beautiful, so very, very beautiful. I've read plenty of PWP fanfics (and enjoyed them tremendously, lol), but this is the first I've read that made me want to weep ... and not for joy, either. The way you've written Severus's torment and Hermione's yearning to help is truly moving. I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for your lovely review. I always try to add some emotions to the sex; it seems it has worked here. Please let me know if you are satisfied with where I take this story!
Absolutley great erotic reading.It was indeed fun to hear them think of ways to punish the boys.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
this story is almost too hot to handle. (almost!) add to that the emotional content and it's absolutely mesmerizing. the scene where she left the bed and he was so desperate for her presence was very moving. and his attempts to control himself out of concern for her are also very touching.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I always try to add some emotions to my stories, and I must admit that I couldn't help myself to make Snape exceptionally vulnerable. He'll be back to his usual self in the morning, though :-)And I hope you continue reading despite the "too hot to handle" remark...
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
almost is the key word. i could not possibly not continue with this story - it's absolutely compelling.