Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
About chivalric
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Oh, you're way safe! My scene was different only in that he had to heal her, but the method used, the mood, the end results, etc. were very different. Bloody brilliant, my dear. Brilliant.I can't wait for more!
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
I forgot to say-- in the last chapter I suspected and in this one I truly suspect--he must be seeping that potion out of his pores. She's just as effected by it as he is, which seems like a "contact high" from touching him. (I could be wrong, of course!)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I'm very sorry, but you will have to continue reading to find out *ggg*And now I'm off to finally read your story!Thanks for letting me know, and thanks a lot for reviewing.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
As if I could stop reading your story. :rolls eyes:I'm hooked!
The first part was similar, but not exactly like Mia's scene. And the rest of it was quite hot.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Great chapter, I see Severus is feeling a little better, well enough to think of ways to get the boys back.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
They are in trouble bubble!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Oh, yes, in big trubble. But not until chapter 6 *g*
I am glad that Hermione found some way to help Severus without harming herself even more. Hopefully the potion will wear off soon, so that they both can heal completely. I can only imagine how much pain Severus must be in, since everything he touches, except for Hermione, hurts his skin.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
And it gets worse. He's already very tired, very exhausted, and sunrise is a couple of hours away. Comforting him won't get easier for Hermione.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
I've been checking for this story every day, basically, and it was sure worth the wait!! You have an amazing ability to write delicious lemons (*fans self and goes off to find hubby*) but also convey their growing emotional attachment. I can't wait for more!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*grins widely* Hope hubby was pleased to see you!Thanks for the compliments. More is written, but still in the hands of my tremendous betas. I'll try to update at the weekend, but I can't promise. Definitely next week, though.
I've been looking forward to reading this chapter all day! Thank you--it delivers marvelously. Incredibly hot and very tender all at once.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*can't wipe the smile off her face* Thank you SO MUCH!
Naughty! Lovely! More?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
More naughtyness (if that's a word...) is coming soon, hopefully this week, but lately next. Depends on my betas *g*
*runs off to jump boyfriend*(Boyfriend)*THANK YOU!!* ...................................omg this story just gets better and better! gods i love you. lol my boyfriend thinks i am crazy but he never complains.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Now that had me giggle all day and half the evening. Could see you chasing poor boyfriend, dragging him to bed LOL!Both of you - you HAVE to let me know what you think of the next chapter, as it is Snape who is in focus of Hermione's attention *smirk*
Response from hogwartsgirl007 (Reviewer)
lol dont worry hun we are waiting for the next chapter...
Hot stuff, keep it coming!Livvy
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
I think the best punishment for Harry and Ron would be the complete unadulterated truth... in detail LOL!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
OOOOOOhhhhh. I still think that by the time this night is over Harry and Ron will be safe from death. Punishment may be coming, but what better punishment could Severus and Hermione devise than to thank them for being the ones to bring them together. Well done. Irish
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Safe from death, but not safe from punishment. And did I say anything about letting them stay together??? Somewhere, anywhere?*smirk*Just four more chapters ans you'll know :-)AND thanks+hugs for reviewing!
Whew... steamy! You've done a wonderful job here!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Honestly, this is the stuff that SS/HG dreams are made of. And you write it so intensely that I can most definitely put myself in Hermione's shoes. Wonderfully done!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks - I wasn't entirely sure about this chapter. Especially the end. I'm not sure about the next one either, as it will be Snape who's in the focus, so to speak. I hope you'll let me know - I love your reviews!And your help, of course. Hugs from Germany to you!
I absolutelly love this. Eagerly waiting for more! 
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Another powerful chapter. I'm glad he gave Hermione the chance to tell him what was going on with her. I could easily see him driving her out if he thought he had irreparably hurt her.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Severus never seems to be able to understand that Hermione wants to be there with him and to help him. If he could just stop feeling guilty, he would realise how much she cares for him and wants him!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Guess you are the best-hated teacher in the school and suddenly have to depend on a student you always and only snapped at. Wouldn't you feel guilty? And besides - he is not used to be wanted *g* Hope you will like where I take this story, and thanks a lot for reviewing.
Interesting chapter - I do not think Severus realized that she was a virgin yet even though she said that it hurt. I wonder where you will take them this night and will they be more in the end?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
You are far to perceptive for being allowed to read this story *ggg*No, he didn't realise it. Yet.Thanks for reviewing!
I suspect when all this is over, Harry and Ron will have some trouble heading their way. I wonder who will get them first Severus or Hermione?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
This is deliciously smutty! I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
;-)Thank you!
Le sigh.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
hot chapter, you did good
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
What a lovely story.Just read it for the second time and it certainly was not the last time.Thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
It is so wonderful to get reviews for a story I began posting about a year ago - so I thank you for reading and re-reading and reviewing!
So happy they both got their HEA :) And LOL to Harry & Ron -_-
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Yep, HEA it is. Until Journey's End...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Yep, HEA it is. Until Journey's End...Thanks for reading and reviewing!