Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
About chivalric
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Wonderful story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Wonderful story! Intense at the end, and such a cute epilogue. Loved it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading and reviewing and liking the story, of course. In case you are interested - I have an original story out, the prologue is posted here at TPP. Free copy available. Just saying ;-)
The epologue is a work of art. Very entertaining.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Wow! Thank you so much for your review, dear!
What a wonderful story and bed companion tonight. Gads its nearly 3 am. I very much enjoy this and the prequle. I will have to look at more of your work. Excellent!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing and for being willing to try other stories. Beware, some of them are slash, though ;-)
i love babies! and your depiction of them! :) any more stories about the next generation?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I wrote most of these stories when my son was little. I guess that's why in many stories I have babies or small children. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Was reading on my Kindle and trying to leave a review there is rather a pain so....here I am at the end. And what a fabulous story. <sighs with contentment>I did go on to read part 3 thinking, it can't be as heart-wrenchingly epic as one I had read quite long ago--only to realize it was the same one (and I had reviewed it back then). Somehow I had read part three not realizing there were parts 1 & 2. Well, now I have come full circle and read them all. Thank you for a wonderfully emotional ride.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading all three stories! And many, many thanks for leaving such a lovely review. They still mean so much to me, although I do not write fanfic anymore and come here only once in a while just to check ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
I am sorry for your fans that you no longer write fanfic as your work is wonderful. I hope it means that you are hard at work on your original pieces.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I am currently trying to finish the third part of my Tainted series, and hope to get a grip on the end by June at the latest. Hopefully, I will be able to submit a novel and a few short stories to my publisher. Thanks for the encouragement!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading all three stories! And many, many thanks for leaving such a lovely review. They still mean so much to me, although I do not write fanfic anymore and come here only once in a while just to check ;-)
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
I am sorry for your fans that you no longer write fanfic as your work is wonderful. I hope it means that you are hard at work on your original pieces.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I am currently trying to finish the third part of my Tainted series, and hope to get a grip on the end by June at the latest. Hopefully, I will be able to submit a novel and a few short stories to my publisher. Thanks for the encouragement!
::sigh:: So glad they made up. :) Snape's big grin made me smile; so happy he's happy! 
Their talk of food made me hungry. 
I would've felt so awkward if I were Hermione and ran into Remus and Dumbledore in the kitchen; and they were waiting in the kitchen while HGSS were getting it on upstairs! 
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking the story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking the story!
How adorable! I'm so glad you wrote this epilogue. Hilarious tongue-in-cheek ending!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Didn't have a choice ;-) Glad you liked it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Didn't have a choice ;-) Glad you liked it!
I'm glad you had them come together 'innocently', in the sense that Snape is delirious and unaware of what's going on, and Hermione, likewise, is just trying help. The compulsory situation makes it easier to accept their interaction; too many stories have them suddenly jumping on each other, making it difficult to read. Good job!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
"Innocent" is not really the word that would have come to my mind, but I get what you mean. I usually try to create a more or less beliveable setting for those two; thanks for letting me know it worked!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
"Innocent" is not really the word that would have come to my mind, but I get what you mean. I usually try to create a more or less beliveable setting for those two; thanks for letting me know it worked!
I can't believe it's taken me so long read this! The premise (the potion), his reaction the day after, and three years after are fabulously in character, and this is scorchin'! Whoah! Great story!(sadly I'm one of those 'omg I have to keep reading it's so good!' reviewers... forgive me?)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
You reviewed, and you recc'ed me - what more can I ask! Thanks for not forgetting you want to read the story at all, and thanks for your review. *hugs you*
A wonderful story!! I really enjoyed it. I'd like to especially thank for the epilogue. I love epilogues and this was adorable! Congratulations =]
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading it, and especially for liking the epilogue. It came as an afterthought - glad it fits the story.
I really loved reading this story.It's very sweet. congrats:)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much!
One of my favourite stories! I like this Snape. Thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
This is my second time to read this story, and it didn't lose anything the second time around. Well done.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*hugs you*Thanks not only for reading it a second time, but for reviewing a second time, too!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*hugs you*Thanks not only for reading it a second time, but for reviewing a second time, too!
Very well written story...clearly, a lot of hard work was put into it. A joy to read -- and personally, I love Snape-going-all-melty-over-his-child endings. They make me grin like an idiot 
Keep writing!-Bella
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
The hardest part was chapter one, because there, the POV hopped around too often. Thanks to my lovely beta Dreamy_Dragon, I managed to sort that problem out. Mostly.I love a mellow Snape, too, which is the reason why I wrote the epilogue. In case you want some tears on top of it, read the sequel ;-) And - many thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
The hardest part was chapter one, because there, the POV hopped around too often. Thanks to my lovely beta Dreamy_Dragon, I managed to sort that problem out. Mostly.I love a mellow Snape, too, which is the reason why I wrote the epilogue. In case you want some tears on top of it, read the sequel ;-) And - many thanks for reviewing!
I just read the story all the way through in one go, and I think it was absolutly brilliant! thank you ss
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
My pleasure - I'm glad you liked it so far. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
My pleasure - I'm glad you liked it so far. Thanks for reviewing!
Thank you for an absolutley lovely story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
My pleasure, dear. Thanks a lot for reviewing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
My pleasure, dear. Thanks a lot for reviewing.
Thank you for an absolutley lovely story. I really loved the ending.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I only wrote the epilogue because I got nagged by my reviewers. Thank you so much for liking and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I only wrote the epilogue because I got nagged by my reviewers. Thank you so much for liking and reviewing!
Thanks for all of your hard work - I so very much enjoy it and your take on the HG/SS potential!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I do thank you for reading all the way through it and for reviewing, as well! So far, that is my longest story, and I am glad you liked it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I do thank you for reading all the way through it and for reviewing, as well! So far, that is my longest story, and I am glad you liked it.
Aww, this was a charming little story! And now I am going to read the sequel just as soon as I click 'submit review'. :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
As you have found out by now, the sequel is not charming at all - but thanks for reading and reviewing both stories anyway!
Wow and WOW, That was wonderful. When are you starting the sequel, you must let me know. You are a very talented writer. And agian WOW.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
The sequel is called "Journey's End" and is posted here at the Poetess. But be warned - it's sad!Glad you liked this story. And thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
The sequel is called "Journey's End" and is posted here at the Poetess. But be warned - it's sad!Glad you liked this story. And thanks a lot for reviewing!
Oh such abuse and so much hurt.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I don't even like rear entry and this was hot. gads. You do realize that men gt sore nad chaffe too, right?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*g*I do. But this is magic. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*g*I do. But this is magic. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!