Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Anonymous
A very beautiful chapter! So nice, how both react afterwards, and thew way things develop then... great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Wow! When will the sun go down again??? Chapter 6?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*grins widely all over her face*Thanks for THAT review - I notice you didn't mention any buckets :-)Chapter 6 will go to the queue today, should be up soon.Middle of week hugs,chivalric
Terrific story, and a sort of double cliffie - what was he going to say before he fell asleep? Will he reject her in the morning for the usual reasons - injured pride at the fore I daresay - ?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
What shall I say - you will have to wait another couple of days. I tend to annoy my betas with last minute changes, but I'll try to update this week.And thanks for reviewing!
Great premise and well written, but I usually prefer a little bit less 'lemon' in my fiction. Although that is a personal preference and nothing to do with your abilities - and you did put the proper wards up.For my two knuts worth -I am very much with redheaddoxy - you wouldn't want him to relapse!
Also what will Dumbledore have to say?I say give Harry and Ron a taste of their 'own medicine' (Insert evil laugh). Cheers
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
This is the first really 'lemony' story I have written, and things will calm down a bit now that the sun is up. No relapse, promise *g*Next chapter should be up towards the end of the week. And thanks a lot for reviewing!
Hot. Absolutely hot. Can't find better words right now. I'm still panting as much as Severus had been.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
And now Hermione faces the question we've all been posed at one time... will he still want her in the cold light of day? Excellent smut and a bit of tugging on the heartstrings for good measure. Nice work, thanks.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Anonymous
Beautiful! Really well done.
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I can't wait for more!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I'm working on it, in fact, I barely do anything else!Update hopefully next week.
Now for the fun part, revenge
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
WOW! That was an awesome story! Please update soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Oh, no! She shouldn't leave him...What if he relapses?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
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I loved it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Evil cliffie! And of course he had to time falling asleep just right. *smirks*I'm very curious to see how they'll handle things now. Potion induced or not, this night is hardly something that could be quietly and conveniently ignored after all!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Give him some credit - he was exhausted!And no, this night won't be ignored, by neither of them. Thanks a lot for reviewing, and let me know if you are satisfied with the next chaper. Please.
Another great chapter, I can't wait for him to wake up, talk to her and have her stay with him for the rest of their lives...Oh, you're the author? Well, I'll leave you to it, but one can make suggestions, right? ;-)gab
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I always like suggestions *g* Sometimes, I even listen to my betas, recommending changes. Occasionally, I take hints from my readers and work them into the story. So you will have to continue reading to find out what I did :-))
Thank you so much for the update, a very well written chapter as always:-)Based on your replies to other reviewers I do fear that Severus will hurt Hermione, intending to do so, to protect his fragile ego. If he does (and most stories have plots based on him doing so), he is no better than Harry and Ron with regards to other peoples feelings. If that is the scenario to come, could you then please at least not let Hermione forgive him by the first sloppy excuse he utters in her direction, usually in the seccond to last chapter? It would be nice if, still based on that my hunch of Severus hurting Hermione for some idiotic reason, he has to pay a price for his actions and actually has to do an effort to undoe the damage, earn her forgiveness and prove that she can trust him to not play games with her feelings again?And don't forget the revenge on Ron and Harry, as much as I want my happy ending for Severus and Hermione, I want the two dunderheads to pay a price for their idiotcy!Update again soon!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hi, dear!Now then - an update should be possible next week, as soon as my betas have erased my mistakes. And I have done my last minute changes :-) It will be a long chapter, and I guess you will be killing me for the cliff hanger. In this Story, Snape's ego isn't fragile, and he is not trying to protect himself. Actually, you shouldn't read my replies to other reviews ;-))I won't tell you what the plot is here, you'll have to wait, but actually, he cares a lot about her feelings. Concerning revenge: you'll learn about that in the next chapter as well *g*
Response from Sampdoria (Reviewer)
Of course I have to read your replies, I could be so lucky that you "slipped" and let out some information about what to come....:-)) I don't kill authors for evil cliffhangers, that would be a bad idea if I want to know what happens next. Collecting rotten tomatoes and taking aim, that is something completly different:-)))
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I must admit, I like to give little hints. And they are all true :-)Hmmm, rotten tomatoes - is that a threat? Is it wise to threaten an author you want to end the story to your satisfaction?? I could kill them both... I could let her fall in love with Ron (hehehe!)... he could be gay and revolted by women... Better think about the tomatoes again and change them into a nice box of chocolate frogs. I might fall for bribery, you know *g*
Response from Sampdoria (Reviewer)
I respond very well to threats like that:-) Chocolate Frogs it is, I have also added some of Honeydukes best chocolate:-))
And now, the aftermath. will either one of them act as if nothing had happened?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Poor Hermione to be left in the dark about what he was going to say, especially as she has just realised she is falling in love. I do also hope that once Severus is ok again he sorts out some revenge on Harry and Ron!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
He won't; she will. They are in trouble with the next update *g*
Wow! Hot, but emotional and passionate...lovely...
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
AUGH! Evil cliffie! What was he going to say??? I am soooo looking forward to reading more.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
this story is so intense, in a really good way, emotionally as well as sexually. it was so hard to see how much pain he was in at the beginning of the chapter and then - wow! i am very interested to see what happens the next time they see each other.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
At one point, he will laugh. At one point, she will cry. Hope that helps ;-)
ah! What did he want to tell her?! Cruel cliffie to a wonderful chapter, I eagerly (as always) await more!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Well, I hope she stays in his bed after all the did that night - she could claim exhaustion??? He could understand that.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Exhausted, confused, worried about him... she certainly has a lot to think about.
I hope they had been using a scourgify here and there even if it would be painful to do, I am having trouble not imagining that the anal came before the oral and am a little squicked. Anyway hope you keep to your word and update quickly.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
:-) Lots of scourgifys, naturally. Sometimes, it comes in handy to have magical abilities. And yes, I will update soon. My betas are doing extra night shifts so I can update this sometime next week.
I would love to have me some snape, but am feeling sorry for hermione she must be completely chaffed(sp?) no matter how much she wants it at this point.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Good chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!