Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Excellent beginning! Up to your usual high standards. Thank you for sharing this
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Oh boy! What a compelling start! I wonder...what KIND of distraction Snape has fallen prey to.
Thank you for writing a sequel.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I simply cannot NOT write sequels ;-) And I promise, lately after easter i will update fast and regularly. But there is a challenge entry I have to take care of first...
When will those boys ever grow up! Mind you I supposed they have some catching up on fun to do, for all the time they spent as kids in danger/emotionally unstable/bearing the world's responsibilities on their shoulders!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Aren't Ashwinder Eggs used in Love Potions? What have they done now? Well done. Irish
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Ashwinder Eggs... hmmm, my wonderful beta Dreamy_Dragon gave me the hint. I originally wanted to use Dragonfly Tears, lacking better ideas. But I think the eggs are more... appropriate.Thanks for reviewing!
Uh oh! Harry and Ron had best run for the hills now! Hermione is going to really be pissed when she finally figures it all out. This does not set well with me at all! Poor Snape!Livvy
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
They are too daft to run. But even if they did - Hermione would get them in the end. I promise she will *g*Thanks for reviewing!
I liked this, well written and an intriguing plot!!! I hope Ron and Harry will be taugth a lesson in consequences for stupid actions? Update again soon!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hi,
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
,nice to hear from you, dear! And I promise, Ron and Harry will be taught a lesson. The update, though, might have to wait for another few days - challenge entry and Easter bunnie stories come first, I'm affraid. But after Easter I will update fas and regularly.
great start, keep it coming!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Poor Snape - pls make sure he gets better soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I wonder what those jerks did to Snape?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm quite intrigued! A wonderful start...
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you! I truly hope you will like the rest of it as well.
Very interesting, can't wait to see what exactly the potion did. Wonderful job.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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Hehe! As a fellow sequel-writer (I seriously need to stop planning sequels to stuff I've written before I die under a swamp of WIPs!), I would have to say hurrah to this whole idea! :-D
Author's Response: I must admit, I feel cursed - whenever someone asks for a sequel, I write one, and if no one asks, I write one nevertheless ;-) How good to know that I'm not the only one who's worrying about her future *g*
Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, what a beginning. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Those boys are idiots, aren't they?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*ggg* Oh, yes, they are! But this time, there will be revenge...
it's marvellous!thank you for such a wonderful story!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
It was my pleasure - thanks for reading and reviewing!
Poor Snape! Lucky Hermione? Yes, most definetly lucky Hermione and fortunate Snape. Fucking Harry and Ron! The bastards! Guess she's in for the night of her life. In a good way. Snape won't be happy, but I bet he'll be greatful. I have a feeling that Dumbledore worked out the general nature of the prank. I'm assuming that if he has, he won't seek out the perps until he knows how things turn out, but now he is aware that a student or students did something against a thousand school and maybe even Ministry rules to his Postion's Master. I hope he expels the shits. I really hope this turns out to be a good thing for Severus and Hermione.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Not so lucky, at first. And not by the end of the night, either. Yep, Dumbly has a vague idea about things, but keeps his mouth shut. It's up to H. to deal with this, and with S. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Those two boys are not only immature but they are shear idiots! Don't they realize who they are dealing with? Even if they don't know he's the HBP, they know he was a spy that could stand up to Voldemort for 15 years. He is dangerous, powerful and a legilimense. Not to mention, testy and has no sense of humor when it comes to being humiliated. Has Harry had Occlumency lessons from Snape in this story? Do they really think he will never find out? They deserve to die just for their stupidity alone. Harry is getting just a little too confident. I hope they pay big time!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Eventually, H. will make sure they pay for what they've done. I never thought about the Occlumency lessons; all that counts for this story is that no one knows S. is the HBP. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
You know, there really isn't enough backdoor action in the HG/SS fanfic world. Thanks for the super hawt chapter!! I'm really looking forward to reading on...
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I read only a few fics with backdoor action myself, and it is always Hermione who is at the receiving end, so to speak. If it is Snape, it is slash. I wanted to correct that :-)Thanks a lot for reviewing, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I read only a few fics with backdoor action myself, and it is always Hermione who is at the receiving end, so to speak. If it is Snape, it is slash. I wanted to correct that :-)Thanks a lot for reviewing, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.
very enjoyable. keep up the good work!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
:-) I'm sorry to say so, but at the moment I don't do much else but writing. So more stories will be up soon.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
:-) I'm sorry to say so, but at the moment I don't do much else but writing. So more stories will be up soon.Thanks a lot for reviewing!
I wonder how many times in the history of mankind have thoughtless children played a prank or cruelly done or said something that unintentionally and unbeknownst to them permanently changed someone's or even several person's lives forever in a terrible or painful way, then have blithely gone on to live out their own lives never ever knowing that their immature thoughtlessness had permanently ruined someone else's life forever? I am certain it has happened billions upon billions of times throughout history. Is it fate, bad luck, man's sinful nature, mischievous spirits, Satan or simply random chance, dearest chivalric?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Do not talk about thoughtless kids. My boy is twelve right now. Very thoughtless about everything. Just the child to play a prank without thinking ahead what might happen *sigh* Let's hope he never gets his fingers onto a lust potion. Thank you for reading and reviewing, dear!
Haha - this epilogue was the best of it, but I liked the rest of the story quite a lot, too 
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
hört sich irgendwie deutsch an... falls das der Fall ist, vielen Dank fürs Review und fürs Lesen und fürs Mögen. Otherwise - thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
That is totalk crap! SHE gets sent away after what he did? It wasnt technically his fault but she was completely blameless! If he didnt want to teach her, he should have resigned.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Now are you telling me that my story is crap or his reaction? Would make a slight difference to me ;-)He can't resign, it would cause questions he doesn't want to answer. And he only wants to protect her - in this story, he isn't the mean bastard. He cares more for her than for himself, and he considers sending her away the best solution. And it is not as if he had sent her to the desert or abandoned her from the wizarding world. And it's not that he doesn't want to teach her - he couldn't anymore.Well, anyway - thanks for reviewing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Now are you telling me that my story is crap or his reaction? Would make a slight difference to me ;-)He can't resign, it would cause questions he doesn't want to answer. And he only wants to protect her - in this story, he isn't the mean bastard. He cares more for her than for himself, and he considers sending her away the best solution. And it is not as if he had sent her to the desert or abandoned her from the wizarding world. And it's not that he doesn't want to teach her - he couldn't anymore.Well, anyway - thanks for reviewing.
fantastic end for a fantastic story
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much!
I'll have to thank you for your warning up front. Student-Teacher relationships don't offend me, but I don't like them. Too often, I've wasted time reading a story when they don't give me a warning, then I leave feeling dirty. Thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Certainly the first time in a few hundred reviews that someone left a review for a story she hasn't even read :-) Glad my warning helped you to stay away from a story you would not have enjoyed; thank you for letting me know that warnings do make sense, actually. It took me a while to learn this; I will make sure that in future, should I post more fanfic, I will put all the necessary warnings up.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Certainly the first time in a few hundred reviews that someone left a review for a story she hasn't even read :-) Glad my warning helped you to stay away from a story you would not have enjoyed; thank you for letting me know that warnings do make sense, actually. It took me a while to learn this; I will make sure that in future, should I post more fanfic, I will put all the necessary warnings up.