Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 6.76/10 (325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
Chapters (9)
About chivalric
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
Great ending. I love the babysitting part -- it makes them so human. Wonderful story. You cleared up a lot of questions with just this chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I'm so glad this chapter isn't considered too soppy - at least not by people who leave reviews ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I'm so glad this chapter isn't considered too soppy - at least not by people who leave reviews ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Hmm, the plot thickens...you've done delirious!Snape very well, and Hermione's reaction is perfect. I don't think I'd know whether to be scared, turned on, or helpful, either! Very interesting set-up for teh smut indeed ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Well, let me know if it is smutty enough for you... amongst other things like angst and humour and some revenge.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Well, let me know if it is smutty enough for you... amongst other things like angst and humour and some revenge.Thanks for reviewing!
OMG!!!! i am so freaking HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have totally been so freaking busy that i havent had time to read this!! my bf is still at work and i had the time now... lol too bad for him he will have to read it some other time!!! lol lol lol. i was totally not expecting this!!! i am so happy!!!! *deep breath* k, i have to say again that i totally love you and this story is def my fave of the year, i have a copy in my big book of fave stories (it is actually *turns to count* five binders crammed with stories. i cannot wait for another story (even if this one is finito :( ) good luck hun!!!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Well, I had no plans writing it. It was my readers' fault, as they nagged and asked and weren't happy with the ending I had in mind ;-)Glad you're happy. Hope bf will like the chapter as well *lol*And your review makes me feel as if I could embrace the whole world! That people actually read what I write and tell me about it is so absolutely fabulous, nothing else (well, not much else) can give me such a kick. Yes, this story is finished, apart from the sequel, which is sad and apart from an in-between story about Sam. Other stories are out there, though, or I am writing them right at the moment. Some will be dirty...Hugs from Germany, dear! Keep reviewing!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Well, I had no plans writing it. It was my readers' fault, as they nagged and asked and weren't happy with the ending I had in mind ;-)Glad you're happy. Hope bf will like the chapter as well *lol*And your review makes me feel as if I could embrace the whole world! That people actually read what I write and tell me about it is so absolutely fabulous, nothing else (well, not much else) can give me such a kick. Yes, this story is finished, apart from the sequel, which is sad and apart from an in-between story about Sam. Other stories are out there, though, or I am writing them right at the moment. Some will be dirty...Hugs from Germany, dear! Keep reviewing!
Anonymous
Great Epilogue! Or rather a small story in its own right... I could see Sam's face virtually before me, as well as Snapes struggle with maintaining his reputation despite the situation... really well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. I struggled with the concept of writing an epilogue for this story, but now I'm glad I was nudged into doing it.
Thanks as always for reviewing!
Oh! That was really lovely. A sweet ending to an interesting story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for your review and sorry for my late response. Busy writing the sequel ;-)
Anonymous
When I pick a new book or fanfic online to read, my method is to flip to the middle and read a few paragraphs. If it catches me, I go back to the beginning. Well... I picked up on chapter 4 and started drooling. Went back to the beginning, read straight thru to the epilogue, and oh, my! What a fantastic story! In love, I am!
Actually, I'm glad I didn't start this sooner, because I would have been dying for an update and probably spamming you with nonsense like, "So? Next one done yet?"
Glad it ended happily. I was worried when Hermione showed up, the rain, the, the, the you-know! Angst city, man. My tummy was all upset.
Anyway, great job!
Author's Response: Well, I updated fairly regularly, as I hate to wait for new chapters myself ;-) Glad you found and read my story - I am very fond of it and treasure each review. And of course it ended happily, despite the angst in the middle.
But then... there's the sequel I'm just writing... and more angst... and more tears...
Hope to see you again, and many thanks for reviewing!
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed until now. I just couldn't stop reading long enough. This was fantastic!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
In this case - you are forgiven ;-)Glad you enjoyed the story. Very happy that you did review in the end!
Oh that was such a wonderful ending. For a minute there I was trying to figure out where Hermione was... I was getting a little nervous! :-) But all was well and it was so sweet to see how Miss Sasha had Severus wrapped around her little finger!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Kids can do that - my boy does it on a regular basis, and I believe that, when Sasha is older, Snape will have a hard time not to melt with love whenever he sees her ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Absolutely adroable! I was so surprised to see an update, but I'm very glad to see an epilogue. I always love to know what happens afterward.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you! My betas gently mentioned that they wouldn't mind betaing an epilogue ;-)
Wow, I really, really like this story very much. Not only the hot part is really hot, but the story around is very good. Especially you characterisation of Snape is brillant.Thanks for this story and please more of them!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much! I am very fond of Snape and would hate to have written him wrongly. Glad you liked it - and him!
I like this ending much better than the last one. It definitely leaves it in a much better place. Thank you. Thank you, thank you!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I got too many reviews asking for a different ending ;-) So I obeyed.Thanks for reviewing!
Response from mugglemomof3 (Reviewer)
I'm so glad that you obeyed. I just read it again, and seeing that rose in the bedroom brought a tear to my eye. What a ride this fic has been. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I just loved all of it!!! Hugs, Muggle Mom
Much better note to end on. Still cute and fluffy, but it's not healthy to wallow in angst and suffering all the time. Excellent fic, excellent chapter. Loved the babysitter angle. This definately rocks! Cheers!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much - and I agree. There had been enough angst, it was time for a bright light. And what's brighter than a child, especially when it's peacefully asleep *g*
Response from helshez (Reviewer)
Totally agree, love my daughter to bits, but especially when she's asleep and not up to mischief!
Thanks for an amazing read. I especially liked chapter 7. It was brilliantly written.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you - some considered it too dark, too brutal, but I considered it only fair. And it ended up happily for both of them.
Terrific story! ThanksI don't usually like epilogues, but that was delightful. Sam is so charming; I hope to see more of him in the sequel.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Ah, the sequel, yes. Well, my beta is currently scared out of her head as she thinks I will do something nasty... And I had no plans to involve Sam. So far. It seems I will have to write an in-between-story about Sam and Sasha ;-)Thanks for reviewing!
Loved it - good work. I know Sam was totally thrown for a loop - Severus human - what a revelation. Good writing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks - glad you liked it!
Very cute! 
I love how absent-minded Severus seems, and how fearful Sam is at the start.Looking forward to the sequel. 
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Um... no, you don't. You might like the in-between story I'm going to write, but you won't like the sequel. None of you will *grins evilly*But still - thanks so much for reviewing!
What a sweet fluffy epilogue. Thanks!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks - I was in a fluffy mood after a horrible week at work.
That was absolutely lovely. And I can't wait for the sequel.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Don't count on it - you won't like it. Hope that makes waiting easier ;-)
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
Um, OK. I won't wait for it, then, I hope to be pleasantly surprised.
snurk. I LOVE the last bit of this chapter...props to reets67! and thanks for a nice story :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Yay for reets - and thanks to you for reviewing!
What a wonderful story! The epilogue was wonderful - loved the ending: "I bet not even the fabulously brave Harry Potter would have come up with such an unthinkeable prank." Love it!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Cudos to reets for that one!And many thanks to you for reviewing.
Oh this was lovely and such a nice surprise.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Sometimes I can't help myself ;-)Thanks for taking the time to review.
Brilliant.Thank you.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I couldn't let it end like that. Thanks for agreeing on that ;-)
What a perfect, sweet and funny ending! I loved the glimpse of the Snape's home life and their daughter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I really hoped you would like it - after all, you were the main reason that I posted the story in the first place. Without your help, your comments, and your nagging about POV, this would still slumber on my notebook. Hugs from Germany, dear!
Response from Dreamy_Dragon (Reviewer)
*blushes and hugs back*