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Unkissed
chivalric325 Reviews | 325 Ratings, 0 Likes, 464 Favorites )
*2008 Winner for best PWP at the New Library*
Harry and Ron play a prank on Snape, but have no idea what actions and reactions it might cause, and who will get entangled in the magic.
This is a sequel to "Valentine Mischief."
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Unkissed
ok this is going to get intresting no i cant wait to see what happens next thank you fo another wonderful chapter
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Good start.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
That was a great chapter!Hopefully the next chapter has what Severus was going to say in it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Erm... no. Sorry. You'll have to wait a bit longer for that. And come to think of it - did I actually promise she would ever find out? *smirk* And hugs for your review!
Gah! Oh, the angst, the angst, the angst! Angst monger! Give me more? ::looks charmingly at chivalric::
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*g* I can see you fluttering your eyelashes at me! More to come next week - my betas are working on the next chapter. And it will be about double as long as this one. And - thanks for your review!
Oh, my. What will happen after that? I can't wait.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
oh hell no..... you did not just leave it like that... oh you did. that was so mean!!!! *Sighs* *boyfriend ran off to get ice* lol once again, you have written a masterpiece that will be forever bookmarked in thousands of computers. i wonder what ppl think of us fanfic writers/readers... *boyfriend is back...*ttyl!!! p.s. this story is amazing to read with your significant other...
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I'm most relieved that you and boyfriend are still with me *smirk*Hope you had fun with the ice :-)Will update soon, promise!
Hopefully Severus heals fairly quickly. I'm just as curious as Hermione as to what he wanted to tell her. Too bad he won't tell her in the morning. Perhaps he will act unlike the Potions Professor, but likely not. *sigh*
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
You certainly have a good idea what will happen next. No he won't tell her. And yes, he will be mean, at the end of the next chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Well I wasn't expecting that, I thought he had diarrhea, lol.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
stay dammit!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*g* We are talking about Hermione here. Yo really think she would stay? When there are classes waiting and when there is homework to do?
OOOOOO now that is an evil cliffy! Well done as always, but I still say that Harry and Ron are fairly safe. Irish
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Hi, Irish, how lovely to see your review again!In the next chapter you will find out about the boys, and I try to post it early next week. Depends on my wonderful betas, Dreamy_Dragon and CharmedForce. Let me know if you consider the revenge appropriate...
I just love that she was able to make him lose control and scream at the end. What a marvelous end to the night... and something that I hope will help them in the future.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
beautiful continuation. You've really struck a good balance between the pleasure and horror and pain of this condition. I'm not clear on why Hermione has to leave, unless she's just too afraid of what he'll be like when he wakes up, embarrassed at what he's been doing with her all night. Look forward to an update soon.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
I hope to update next week; and no, she's neither afraid of him nor embarrassed. But she is a logical thinking girl - she knows that his desire had been potion induced, she knows Dumbledore is awaiting her, and she just doesn't have a good reason to stay.And besides - he's done, he'll sleep for hours :-)
OH, I'm dying here. So painful and angsty at the end, and I want her to stay, and I want him to say something wonderful.
Fabulous chapter. Fabulous story.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*beams* Thank you! Will update asap, depending on my betas feedback on the next chapter(s). Lately next week chapter 6 will come up. And - just a thought to ponder on - since when Snape ever says something wonderful?
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Never.But that's beside the point.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Be asured, he will at least talk in the next chapter. To her, even. After he's woken up :-)
*catches breath* Brilliant! Wonderful! What happens once the sun comes up? This is just fantastic!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*beams* Thank you!
Oh no! What will happen next?! More, pls!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Somehow hot and heartrending together... very well done. I loved it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Very sultry story
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
A very interesting plot indeed... look forward to the next chapter (I think:))
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
No you don't. Believe me. Keep the bucket at hand, smoggy, my dear!*grin*
Sweet! That was so cool. I love they way their pillow talk is so matter of fact. It makes a nice topping for the lemons!
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
You are brilliant--that was a very difficult line to walk between dub- con and something else. I'm very impressed.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you! For taking the time to review and for making me smile widely!
:THUD:Awwww, self-sacrificing Hermione is about to get her reward. ;-D
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Naughty! More, please?
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Soon. Next chapter goes into the queue on Friday.
Oh, my. That was something. And I like how Hermione approached the whole thing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Brilliant. Bloody brilliant.
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
*grins widely from ear to ear*Thank you so much! And watch out for the next chapter, as this will be the one with the salve-scene...
whew! what a chapter!! * fanning madly*
Response from chivalric (Author of Unkissed)
What shall I say - take a deep breath, as there is more to come *g*