Marry a Choice
averygoodun144 Reviews | 6.1/10 (144 Ratings, 0 Likes, 208 Favorites )
Hermione's week is going from bad to worse when she's forced to make a choice. My take (and slight parody) of the Marriage Law Challenge.
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Right. I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice". I will. Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)
Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now. I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.
Thank you!
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Just popping over here to see how far the story is.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
The same, as you can see. =)
Ok... I am Loving this... but I need more... soon! I love it... I have to see what happens next ! PLEASE!!!! Hurry and update!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Ok, I'll try to update soon. Thanks.
Excellent chapter! Hermione now has a bit more insight into the mystery that is Severus Snape. I know there is going to be a lot of angst, but Hermione thrives on challenge and I do believe the reward will be well worth the extra work!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thank you. Hermione has a long way to go before she can solve the riddle of Snape, though. One hopes the rewards will be worth it.
I am quite curious as to what happens next. Angst fest? ah man... I feel that he cares for her, not Ron (so I hope anyway) lol I love that Harry and he got on with each other. I am anxiously awaiting the next section. Cheers.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Yep, angst fest. Consider the title a pun, and a warning. Thanks!
very interesting and very good.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thank you.
OMG!! This fic just keeps getting better! I'm glad Hermione got to over hear that very important conversation. I do believe that She has begun to see Severus in a new light! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thanks! Yeah, she's begun to see the light, but she's got nearly seven years of Nasty!Snape to overcome, so it might take her a while. I'm glad you're enjoying this, and hope you continue to.
I've enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad that Harry would approve of Snape. I wonder what it is about Lupin. Does he have another lover? Has he killed one in the past? I certainly hope she thinks things through and decides to not wed him. Blah. There's something funky about him. Great chapter. I am so happy that Snape loves her.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
You'll find out about Lupin in a few chapters. As for Hermione, she's just starting the rollercoaster of indecision. Oh, and did Snape ever say that he loves her? "He's not the most forthright of men," sayeth Dumbledore... Thanks for the review (and sorry about the commas)!southern_witch_69's response: I did notice that he said, "If I did love her..." However, I choose to be optimist!Southern... teehee and am crossing mah fingers. No worries, doll. Keep up the good work.
Wow that's a great story! I really like it! Please submit more chapters soon!!!!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thank you. I'll be updating frequently.
I enjoyed Snape's answers and his reasoning behind her test's failure. I can't wait for the next chapter and am hoping she truly won't marry Remus. blah.... lol
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Danke! I enjoy writing a snarking Snape. As for Remus... ;)
As I told you earlier, I really enjoyed this chapter. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, wanting to see what our dear Potions master has to say about this. Cheers
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thanks. Yes, Snape does have his say... hee hee hee...
teehee... on the contrary, Severus... muahahahaha I'm just loving it. But..uh oh..what do you mean angst fest? should I be afraid??
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Well, if you don't like angst, then yes, but I've read your stories! You do a mean job on angst yourself.
great way to start a story and give us the goods all at once. excellent.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thank you!
Wonderful story, thank you so much!
Dearest, I don't know if you still read your reviews, but I have been MESMERIZED in my re-read of this story. I adored it all those years ago, but I find it just as riveting today. Somehow, you make Remus (though annoying) heartbreaking and Severus a very complex personality. No wonder we were all on the edge of our seats throughout the story. Brava!
You know... *looks thoughtful*... I don't think I've ever read fan fic that started with a letter exchange before! Thumbs up!
I must say that I love your story, and am trying to be patient waiting for an update. (PLEASE UPDATE NOW! Did I mention that patience is not one of my virtues?) I do wish Hermione will wise up soon though, even though from reading your responses to other peoples reviews, it makes me very pessimistic about the whole thing. You got me fearing that she will either be a stubborn idiot and marry Remus, or if she does marry Snape it will be only to find out afterward that he doesn't love her and is only doing it because of his life debt with Ron. I am now torn, between wanting an update to find out what happens, and fearing an update to find out what happens. Either way, please put me out of my misery soon.
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Thank you for being so patient, and I'm not being sarcastic. It has been a long wait, and inexcusable. I'm sorry. Good news is that I've submitted the next chapter, so it shouldn't be long now to find out what happens in the penultimate chapter. I hope you enjoy.
*fumes* I want to whack that girl over the head & knock some sense into her. . . . duh....
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
So do many, many people both within the story and outside. You are not alone. Thanks!
Hurry up and get on with it... ever time i read it i get new hope she will break it off with remus and take severus, but you keep smashing that hope and it hurts my brain when you do that... it makes me feel horrible so i beg of you to stop giving me these horrible feelings of hopes ruined and please bring hermione and severus together soon... other then that its a good story... evil but good... it will be given more stars when severus and hermione get together and you stop toyin with the readers...lol
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
The end is near, so never fear. One beta has insisted that the last two chapters be combined into one, so that only leaves two chapter left. She *will* make a final decision before the end. (Whether the choice is still an option, however... that's another story. (figuratively speaking! there will be resolution, I promise.))
i cant wait to find her decision, in who she will marry! i hope it's severus!
you can learn many things, when you spying on others..
love the last scene with severus & hermione.. severus is perfect match for hermione...
an interesting idea of the marriage law..
More!!! NOW!!! Please? That was just not enough... I nead more... seriously though, I think it's an excellent chapter! Her conversation with Remus. I felt so bad for him. And then Severus. I still haven't quite figured him out. How could he let her go off and marry remus when he loves her so much, without at least telling her honestly how he feels? Nevermind... I forgot for a moment... This is Severus weare talking about... I don't do very good when I write him.. I never can get him snarky enough.. But now, Lucius Malfoy... I think I can get to the depth of his emotion well... LOL... sorry... You are doing a fantastic job!
Response from averygoodun (Author of Marry a Choice)
Chapter 9 is on its way! As for chapter 10... As soon as its back from the betas. Severus is a difficult bloke to figure out. He loves her, but he's a total arse to her. Maybe he'll eventually remember who he's dealing with and 'fess up. We can always hope.
Brilliant, i'm speechless and that doesnt happen very often
LOL, all for a miscast charm. Luckily.