ROFL what a wonderful proposal!

Hmm. What to do?

There's still still time to change her mind yet.

'E's up to summat, the ole codger!

 I just came across this story again and re-read it.  It occurs to me that even though Hermione made a mistake with the charm, perhaps it was for the best in the long run.  Hermione is clearly someone who not only thrives on but needs a challenge (which is probably one of the reasons why she was Sorted into Gryffindor rather than Ravenclaw) -- and while there's no question that Kingsley is a very intelligent man (supported by the fact that he became a top Auror and then Minister of Magic), I'm not certain that Hermione would have found it truly fulfilling to be in a relationship which was too easy.

I am leaving a review of an unseen story in the hopes that I may read said story. I am 50 years old.

The letter format is very clever. You had my undivided attention from the beginning. I love the beginning and cannot wait for more!

Yes, I will go mad before this ends.  Can't wait to read the next chapter tho!

AGGG!! Snape you FOOL!  yeah yeah, nobody ever said he wasn't a fool.  I'm driven mad by this roller coaster!  I'm also loving it and can't wait to read the next chapter.  Excellent!

That was fun.  Excellent story so far!

well done.  I'm okay with an angst fest.  Snape is his own worst enemy.  Silly man.  Do Slytherins ever HAVE real relationships?  Skirting around issues and pretending to hate what they love.  It is crazy-making.  I am loving this story, though.  I'm looking forward to more of Snape's confused emotions!

LOL.  Oh my god, I love it. 

Okay.  I'm holding my knives at bay.  Just because I'm almost at the end.  I have been absolutely loving this fic until Hermione and Remus....I can't even say it.  You have a lot of making up to do!  ;)

I've been reading this once again and still love it! Slytherin men are not a easy choice, but at least she knew it.Harry being a menace on a broom "these days" -- that simply  hilarious!

great sory

I absoutely loved your story! I'd say one of the best MLC's (: This is going on my rec's list... once I've made it, that is. :P

Lovely, lovely story. I so enjoyed Severus' proposal and his subsequent request of Remus.

Just curious, is there a reason you didn't put this last letter exchange up on Ashwinder? That's where I originally read this story, so I was just wondering. Although it's nice to know that my suspicions about those interview parchements were right; she DID do it wrong! Heh. Goes to show that magic isn't everything, eh? I think knowing how their life together ends will make "She Married Her Choice" even more fascinating to read, as you continue to tell us how Hermoine and Severus waded their way through life together. :)

Oh I wish you had made the rich voice Kingsley. I almost fell off my chair laughing just at the idea of it. I did like reading your story, even if Severus gets the girl ;-). What is it about the Potions Master that is so beguiling? Thanks for your time and effort you have put into this piece. I have just started to write and now know how difficult it is to write anything near the target of good. Is your name avery or is it  just somthing you like?