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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


About Southern_Witch_69

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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

June W

I'm still cringing at the thought of Hermione with Ron for the next many months, while poor Severus has to watch.  I'm glad he has a birthday dinner invitation -- surely, there will be chocolate!  thanks for the update.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep. I'm thinking it's not bothering Severus too much at this moment, but yes, it will once he realizes he has feelings for her. :) More up very soon (for real). Hhahaa

10/10

blue artemis

That was truly enjoyable. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks! :)

10/10

makaem

This is so much fun. I'm glad you are going into detail rather than giving us a paragraph or two of flashback.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!! :) I think it makes it a bit more fun as well.

0/10

kimjo2

great perspective of the relationship thru thp eyes!  terrific update.  thanks so much

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

glad you're enjoying! :)

10/10

sinbad

What a tease!  Poor Hermione will have to hide her emotions (which I hope will fail, so Severus can see the gem right in front of him).

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

She's going to try her best, but... :) Hahaha

10/10

livvy6

I always like the weaving of a fic with canon. I'm curious to read the next chapter!Livvy

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I think that makes it fun as well. :)

9/10

Shadows Zephyr

This is a great story so far i can't wait to see how it ends..

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Not all that much more. :) xoxo

10/10

debjunk

I enjoyed how you weaved canon into this, yet managed to make it different.  Can't wait to see what they uncover and how this relationship develops.  I also can't wait to see Hermione get back with Severus.  (I can hope, can't I?)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

thanks! always room to hope. Hehe

10/10

Maddie

It is nice to hear about the back story of how Hermione and Severus became closer. At least I assume this is where you are going. The Prof. appears to be asking Hermione to relay information to him, like a spy. A spy for the spy.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, a spy for the spy. :) Cute. More up soon!

10/10

kittylefish

i enjoyed reading about how things began with them working together on the potion, and seeing how you fitted your story in amongst the edges of the books.  and i can't wait to see how things developed, and especially, for  hermione to remember how she felt about him and to find out exactly why she made the decision she did.  in other words, i'm looking forward eagerly to your next update!  :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

See for me, that's the fun part (the build up to the feelings for her and him). Sighs happily. Mah fave I tell ya. I hope I do it justice.

10/10

aura

I love seeing the books from another character's perspective.    It's so interesting seeing how their backgrounds influence their takes on things, especially since they can't always be present to witness the same events.  Finding out there was an even more complex and intriguing story 'going on' behind the scenes is always fun.  Really enjoyed this chappie!  Liked how Severus is already staring to show her another side, by appreciating her 'cheek' rather than automatically deducting points, for instance.  Looking forward to more of this and catching up with the current story-line as well. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you are enjoying it, mate. :) There's more to come very soon.

0/10

kimjo2

that was a blast from the past!  i just love these little back stories behind the books.  well done, or as we say in the navy bravo zulu.  thanks so much

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you! :) More to come soon.

0/10

WriterMerrin

It is so good to finally see a little of what their project was about and how their friendship started to develop.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

glad you like it! I think the backstory part is so fun. I get to revisit things and give them a bit of hg/ss spin. :)

Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)

Yes, the scene outside the leaving feast was my favorite coulda-been-canon moment.

0/10

mock_turtle

more, please!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Very soon!

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, a stroll down memory lane, filling in the murkey and void so we know waht happened between them ! Whooot!! Glad to have it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool Thanks! :)

0/10

sunny33

Darcilo Von Dinea, very clever! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks :)

0/10

RhiannonAvon

I'm glad you're starting to bring out the backstory now....I was starting to get antsy on how everything came about....can't wait to see more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool! Glad you like it. Now we get to see the build up to love. Cheers :)

10/10

makaem

That was fun to read. And there was a lot of information, I feel like I should start again from the first chapter, but pay more attention to detail this time.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Glad you liked it. :) I know what you mean. I have to keep going back to make sure I'm tying up all my little threads. LOL

0/10

sunny33

Now she is onto it.  A bit late, but not irrevocably so. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL too right

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL too right

10/10

blue artemis

Definitely angsty, but I think they will be better without that bond. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~nod~ :) Thanks

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

~nod~ :) Thanks

10/10

makaem

Fabulous!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! :)

10/10

Muggline

Thank you very much for this very intense chapter. Although it hurts very much, I guess it's better they removed this bonding thing. Severus will certainly see at one point that it is much better to be loved for himself and not for some magical near enslavement.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely. :) Thank you

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Definitely. :) Thank you

10/10

Mazzy

As soon as Ginny mentioned the picture, I knew that must be Hermione's clue. When she didn't go rushing to find and break it I was thinking 'you dolt! Brightest witch of your age? ha!' LOL I guess I spent this chapter rooting for her to figure it out before it got to this point. I can see why you took it in this direction though for sure - it's better that Hermione know for certain it isn't the bond manipulating her - and I'm glad she is on the right track now with figuring out her past. I can't wait to see what will be revealed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL I guess she had other things on her mind. Bwahahahaha Definitely better to have the bonding lifted. :) More up soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

LOL I guess she had other things on her mind. Bwahahahaha Definitely better to have the bonding lifted. :) More up soon.

0/10

AmyLouise

I think Hermione's handling the situation very well, and itwill be interesesting to see whether Severus will at lasttell her the whole truth.  I suspect he might when he findsout what Narcissa tried to do - that might just be enough to put an end to his divided loyalties.You're really keeping up a good pace with this one - although it's been a long time in the writing, the storylinehasn't flagged at all.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. I was worried about that. Sometimes when we authors take too long to update, we lose that.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. I was worried about that. Sometimes when we authors take too long to update, we lose that.

10/10

Lady K

Hermione Granger...the Nancy Drew of the wizarding world! Severus' raw emotions really got me in this chapter. :/ It was very bitter and yet so sweet.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it

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