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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

Maria Lynette

This chapter is SO hot. I'm addicted to the teacher/student thing, so this is probably going to be my favorite chapter. It's perfect. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee! Thanks! :)

10/10

Maria Lynette

The dialogue between Severus and Hermione in this chapter is amazing. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Sometimes I question my ability to write dialogue that sounds real, so I appreciate the comment.

10/10

Grace52373

I was hoping you would come back and finish this! I loved this story, and it was nice to see Hermione act the fool for a change! Looking forward to your next story!

10/10

Maria Lynette

I love this story so far, and this chapter is crazy. Hermione is right to leave Severus, yet I still feel bad for him!!! It's so interesting how twisted their relationship is. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I know exactly what you mean!

0/10

sunny33

An Obliviated Lucius sounds like a much better proposition.  Start fresh and train him well! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Uh-huh. If he is indeed Obliviated.~smirk~

0/10

sunny33

Eww.  That was one awful nightmare! :0

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, interesting how they can start off with intent and then the dreamer's imagination gets the best of them.

0/10

WriterMerrin

Wow.  It's hard to believe it's finally over;)  I think it's great that you were able to tie everything up in one chapter.  Severus' 'do you mind' resonated no matter how long it's been since reading those chapters, and I'm sure it resonated with Hermione, too.  Brilliant ending!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I'm glad the "do you mind" part brought back memories. :)

10/10

debjunk

Oh yay! You finished it! I'm glad it all worked out. She FINALLY made the right decision. Good for Severus to make her sweat it out a bit.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Yep, he needed to have her make sure. :)

10/10

blue artemis

All's well that ends well, I guess.  I'm glad they ended up together after all of that.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Me too. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

 very fitting ending. I think Lucius losinghis memory was fitting, and I hope Narcissa has learned something of a lesson.  I enjoyed this story very much, doll. Hugs~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I think Cissy has learned something, though she's not happy about it. Haha... but has Malfoy lost his memory? My beta and I keep snickering about that.

10/10

June W

Perfect!  Now Draco can remake his father, instead of Lucius and Cissa making over Draco.  I'm glad Severus didn't draw out his reconciliation with Hermione, and that he and Hermione left without seeing Harry jump out of the cake.I wonder who Lucius contacted, the ones who would join us without much prodding.  I hope Severus got the names somehow before he hexed Lucius; Draco doesn't need those "friends" showing up.Thank you for an exciting story.  You're truly fabbo!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! Sorry it took so long the last few chapters. :) ~imagines Harry in a cheesy thong jumping out of cake~ahahahaha

10/10

makaem

That was wonderful.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks for reading! :) xoxox

10/10

sinbad

Great ending Southern!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. Glad you liked it!

0/10

sunny33

Such admirable restraint on both their parts! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Indeed.

10/10

HBAR

I'm still with you.  I have read a ton of amazing stories on this site and have been really bad at reviewing.  I was inspired by another author to review on a regular basis and so it has been my August resolution to do so.  I am finding it much easier to keep an August resolution than those silly new years ones I abandon annually...but I digress.  I don't believe I have reviewed this story yet,  so let this one speak for all chapters when I say how much I am enjoying this.  They are at a critical point in their relationship (or whatever you want to call it at this time) and I am nervous about how it will turn out for them.  On the otherhand, I know I will not be disappointed with whatever you have in store for them.  I hope RL allows you to update quickly but I understand if not.  Hope to see more from you soon!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Reviewing is awesome. It gives us so much inspiration and motivation! :) Thanks so much for the kind words. xoxoxoxo

0/10

Astrea

Really enjoying your story hope you update soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks! Sorry for the delay.

10/10

Cliche

I'm still here and I'll wait for however long it takes to finish. =)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you!

0/10

Queen_of_Stars

Poor Lucius? Somehow I don't think that quite fits the bill =) I love the story so far!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

10/10

Lkmaide

I think we can let you live for now.  You are such a good writer after all.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you!

10/10

debjunk

I certainly haven't lost interest, although RL has kept me from reading this chapter as soon as it was posted.  This is one of those stories that's so unique and intriguing, you just can't put it down.  And despite the length between updates, I usually remember exactly where it left off.  I don't find too many stories that grab my attention quite so firmly.

Hopefully, all will work out and Severus and Hermoine will reunite.  I was a bit surprised she went to tell her friends everything before finding Severus and kissing his feet. 

0/10

Allegra Angora

Quit reading? No way! I have to know what happens next!

10/10

Maddie

I would never drop a story you are writing        (SSHG).

I know RL has been stressful, and that is putting it mildly, I am sure. You have been in my thoughts and prayers and I hope your recovery goes well.

0/10

kimjo2

how could i ever drop this story?  it's too faboo!  i hope you are feeling better.  thanks so much

0/10

sunny33

But where'd Ron go? :)

10/10

countrymouse

Don't worry, I'm still here!  And your masterful portrayal of Severus has me REALLY wondering now---who is he, really, and what is he truly planning?  Has Hermione indeed only been used as a tool?  Is he somehow possessed by the Dark Lord, or planning to set himself up as a new Dark Lord?  Is he under Lucius' power somehow, and this is not the way the 'real' Severus would act at all?  Or does he deserve to win this year's Oscar?  Do update again soon!

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