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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Breaching the Otherworld
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Breaching the Otherworld

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

Breaching the Otherworld

Southern_Witch_69

850 Reviews   |   850 Ratings, 0 Likes, 412 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 142,839 Words 46 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Dreams and a magical book draw Hermione to seek the help of Lucius Malfoy, who has a secret of his own: Severus Snape can be brought back from the Otherworld. Will she help?

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Chapters (28)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28


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Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld

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10/10

La Scimmia

Southern_witch, you are one of the most talented fic authors I've read. And I've read a lot! I have my account here on PP set to "Remember Me" on my BlackBerry...my guilty pleasure on the way to work or university!
Keep up the amazing work =D

10/10

beaweasley2

Okay, i actually feel 'caught up' with how it all came abuot and how Hermione and Severus got together. But the potion - did they finish it? Or did that part take place in the earlier chapters and I forgot? 

Gads, I really love this story.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

In the chapter you just read, it says they are not finished. It's why she was so angry that she didn't meet with him, and it's why they can't try to use it on Dumbledore. I've only taken parts from their past and put them in these last few chapters. I didn't feel the need to show every single thing and wanted to leave a great deal of their meetings to the author's imagination. We know the potion gets done because it works in the future, right? :)

10/10

sinbad

And what an enjoyable trip down memory lane!  Too bad canon doesn't follow your better story line.

10/10

June W

poor Severus!  that she could not remember these things must have been hugely aggravating to him, especially her decision that it's not Ron she longs for.  thanks for the new chapter, and I'm looking forward to the return to the present!

10/10

countrymouse

Oh my goodness---so sweet, and so sad!  But still hoping the ending will be worth (in happiness) all the angst in getting there!  :-)

10/10

makaem

No. You can't stop there. I was engrossed in the chapter and didn't notice how close I was to the end until I read your author's note. (Hopefully my 6 year old won't repeat what I said at school  tomorrow.) I've really enjoyed those chapters dealing with the memories. Now I'm looking forward to the rest.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thank you. I debated adding another section to the chapter with another memory, but then I got inspired to re-visit that in another way. Hahaha. Cheers!!

0/10

snapefan2007

that was an awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

10/10

mikimoto

I love the depth with which you write.  There is such a richness to your discriptions and dialogue.  Thank you so very much for all of the hard work you put in to transfer your vivid imagination to paper.  Thank you for sharing it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I really appreciate this. It's something I often wonder and worry about (that I'm not descriptive enough). Cheers. xoxox

8/10

AmyLouise

I'm catching up bit by bit with this story.  In one way, Ithink Hermione made the right decision in obliviatingher own memories, because Severus would have beendead if Bella had known anything of what happened withhim and Hermione.  But as for Ron - no, I could neversee that relationship working; for all his good points,his intellect was sadly lacking, and that would never dofor Hermione.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Welcome back. :) I hope you continue to enjoy this. :)

10/10

Veronica Mia Mars

So I tracked you down from Ashwinder to here, finally caugjt up with the story, and I'm impatiently waiting for more!  I'm scared of Lucius and curious about Hermione wanting to erase her own mind.  I also think that it was not Lucius who cursed Hermione from making love to Ron, but out of jealousy before his "death" Severus did it.  Alas, it is your story with it's wonderful twists and turns.  I just can't wait for more!   Rest up, cause I certainly do! Veronica

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Welcome to TPP. :) I've been working on some things in RL, so I've got behind. Again. Damn.  Hehehe More up now. I hope you like it.

10/10

aura

Great chapter!  Loving the memories, especially this chappie's Drunken Snape.Looking forward to the next!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Drunken Snape is so fun. :)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Not enough, not enough!  I was so glad to see another chapter.  I'd been attempting to de-stress by re-reading this story just a couple of days ago, and here is another chapter entertaining and revealing, but it's not enough!  ;)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool. I'm happy you're liking it, mate. :) The next chapter is definitely "light" and should help with destressing. I hope.

0/10

sunny33

Yes, I agree with your comment about the build-up to a relationship. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

:) ~grin~

10/10

kittylefish

this was a fun chapter.  i liked drunk!snape, and hermione's reactions seemed very appropriate to her age.  looking forward to the next!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. I've been trying to keep her at her age. Sometimes that doesn't work well (in either direction). Hahaha

10/10

Mazzy

Ah, teenaged females. If they don't like a man who likes them, they still don't want him to like anyone else. If a man shows a little attention then they may develope a crush that never would have existed otherwise.~sigh~ I'm so glad those days are over. LOLCan't wait to see this whole mystery unravel. It seems this is the beginning of the SS/HG ship. I wonder what will finally pull them together - and pull them apart.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

You got it. Ahahahaha!!Hope you continue to enjoy.

10/10

Dianne64

i Have enjoyed the story immensley, but am a little confused by the timeline.  Can you refresh my memory?  What was the date in chapter 1?  Thanx!  Please update soon -- as you can tell, I forget quickly!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

When this story begins, it's about a year after the final battle. The last two chapters are Hermione's memories that are coming back to her (things that happened in the past, leading up to Snape's 'death').We'll get back to the regular "time" very soon.:)

10/10

Maddie

I can see the Prof. is already bitter about his attraction to another woman who is interested in someone else and therefore unattainable. Plus there is the whole teacher/student factor at the moment, etc. He is a man after all, not a rock, and at some point his true feelings, longings, whathaveyou would have to leak out. Hermione, I think, is finally seeing the man behind the teacher persona.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I don't think he quite understands his "fondness" for her just yet, but it's niggling at him. Hahaha We'll see when he finally confesses his feelings.

10/10

cocoachristy

Decided to catch up and I'm so glad I did! Awesome chapter. I love that her memories are slowly coming back!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Welcome back. I think you'll like the next few as well.

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL the young girl fantasizes about her professor and wonders if it's normal - too sweet! I loved the slips of the tongue after Slughorn's party. Definately promising.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Teehee. Thanks!

10/10

gersknightlady

Great Chapter really enjoyed it. Hope to see more soon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks!

0/10

Astrea

Enjoying the story and looking forward to the next up date.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks. More up soon.

0/10

GryffKat

I'm here with you until the end. This is one of my all time favorite fics. I was happy to see the update for my Friday night reading. I am also enjoying this portion of the story. Ta,

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Cool, thanks! :) More up soon.

10/10

debjunk

How did that happen, indeed!  I always have to chuckle at the internal dialogue of our beloved characters.  I thoroughly enjoyed drunk!Snape.  It's always kind of fun to see Severus uninhibited. I am enjoying seeing this part of their relationship too.  I do want to get to the part where Hermione realizes what a dunderhead she is and runs back to Severus.  But I will wait.  Everything was so dark and nasty before.  I'm enjoying this lighter side of the story, illustrating their getting together.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

I also like "intoxicated!Snape" sometimes. Bwahahaha. There isn't much more of this. :) So we'll be back to our regularly scheduled program shortly. haha

10/10

Lady K

This is my favorite WIP. I am greatly looking forward to reading more about their relationship of the past!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

Thanks so much!

0/10

RhiannonAvon

Building up to the relationship is the most fun to read, but I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione's remembered everything and we get back into real time.  Bet it'll be interesting.Looking forward to the next chapter. =)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Breaching the Otherworld)

That won't be much longer. :)

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