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The Plight-Trothed Bride
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Hermione, Ginny and Luna, sharing a girl moment, decide to cast a Pairing-Plight Troth Charm on themselves for fun. Each placed in the cauldron one yesterday-today-and-tomorrow flower with sugar and spice and everything nice, and a snip, a snail and puppy-dog tail as they each said the rhyme. For Ginny, the results are exactly what she expected, and for Luna, she was only mildly surprised. However, for Hermione, the results were disastrous! She thought she’d be paired to Ron and live happily ever after. So what happened and why is she seeing Professor Snape in her dreams? He’s dead – isn’t he?
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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.
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Reviews for The Plight-Trothed Bride
Still love this story! Perhaps she could have spent the night just not in his bed. It would have been a perfect opportunity to spend more time getting to know him. It seems like each encounter starts off with angry fireworks but when they calm down and start to talk sensibly she gets scared. To bad for Severus he must be getting really frustrated, maybe he should have the marriage annulled.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you very much. I'm flattered. really.Sheis 18, and is intimitated, doesn't wan tto be used anymore and is trying to sort things out. she'll get help from a unexpected source (her view) and books. Yes, he's getting/is frustrated. but annulment, although offered, would only be a piece of paper... magical bindng was involved. You'll see. Thank you so much for the review.
Seems to me Severus wants to stay with Hermione. Too bad she isn't sure of herself as of yet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
You hit it on the head. He knows she is his, magically bonded for life. She needs books. Gonna get some real soon, and lunch, and advice and books. a real eye opener for her... Thank you for the review.
I can understand Hermione wanting to not have sex until their relationship is on sounder footing, but that is a hard step to get take backwards. No wonder she's confused. Minerva is handling this far better than expected. I'm curious to see if that holds true once Hermione is back at school. You had the meeting take place in Minerva's office. Did he ever speak to Dumbledore? In a previous chapter, you had Severus remembering reading about a way to strengthen the bond. Did he ever find it?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, for a 18 yar-old girl she is acting like a uncertain teem. I'm sorry. She is just not going to let him use her again like that. She needs answeres. and will get plenty in the upcoming chapters. from a unexpected source. and books. and lunch. Confusion will be straightened out in two chapters... (Or one reallly long one) Yes, Minerva has a firm understanding of what is going one, what a Bonding is and knows she needs to be supportive. Yes, the informal meeting was in Minerva's office. Severus is secure enough in his role as Headmaster and wanted to start things off in a friendly way with her. No, he hasn't sen DD port yet. I wrote that, but it didn't fit here - I had other things that needed to come first. OH! You remembered about that strengthening of the Bond! good. yes. you'll see...Thank you so much for his review. I really enjoyed it.
Thank you for the update! You sure knows how to play with our emotions; Either I am mad at Severus for being a insensitive git, giving mixed signals on wanting a wife, someone to warm his bed (not overly concerned about who) or noone at all. Or I am mad at Hermione for not growing a backbone and make up her mind. With regards to Lucius and Narcissa and their comments about Hermiones behaviour: Anyone who have played hosts to Voldibutt and kissed his snaky arse for a umpt number of years are lacking the skills to tell anyone on how to behave......Update again soon!
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
, I really did enjoy your comments. Yes, he's trying, with a wife he got, literally, by magic not choice, to deal with. She is hoping that she can hold him off long enough to find answers. books. Hogwarts library = the place you get answers. Hehehehe and the Malfoys, yes, ol' Voldie grovelers are fairly high and mighty considering... but they have a point. (IF and I mean If you believe everything you read in the Prophet)Thank you so much for the review - I think You'll love the next chapter. Hermione gets her eyes opened - and lunch!
Oh dear, the road is still mighty bumpy...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Well on this road, Hermione is about to be thrown into the ditch, have lunch, get advice from someone she never expected, and books. That will help. Thank you for the review.
You know, these to remind me an awful lot of some friends of mine who were both so set in their own ways, and stubborn that they nearly ruined their only chance and happiness. LOL Do you know them too?? ;] Excellent!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
If not them then a pair jsut like em! You have hit it on the head! At least this isn't a train wreck anymore... Thank you for the cute review. Did everything work out for your friends?
Response from rhiannon113 (Reviewer)
Happily yes, but only after driving nearly everyone they knew completely mad with their constant bickering!! =]
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
OH gods! Severus muse and Hermione bunny are doing the same thing with me!!!
okay, she went to his house, but she is still being reluctant to really give him a chance, and it seems that Severus is doing all the "work" (cleaning his house, going where she wants to go, accepting her friends and her stories, etc.). come on, Hermione! give a little!thank you for the new chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, she went to his house, but I did add her 'thoughts' about not wanting to have sex with him yet. And he didn't clean - Narcissa's house-elves did. LOL Although, yes, he did go to Burger King with her. You are very welcome for the update - the next one will be ready shortly! Thank you for the review.
Hmmm. Interesting developments...oh, for pete's sake, stop being such a ninny, Severus!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL I'll pass that on! Thank you for the review.
I SOOOOO can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. PLEASE! :D
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Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I'll update as soon as I clena up all my commas and typos. I promise.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I'll update as soon as I clena up all my commas and typos. I promise.
I really like this story. Now I'm off to read the next chap. :D
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I'm very glad you are enjoying this story. Happy reading.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I'm very glad you are enjoying this story. Happy reading.
I can understand that Severus would be really angry at the situation. It's interesting to know exactly how well Lucius can relate. Thanks for the update, and I am very much looking forward to seeing how this fairy tale unfolds (love the references to the damsel-in-the-tower fairy tales).
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I wanted Lucius and Severus to be close friends and having Narcissa Bonded to Lucius was just a way of showing that some Betrothal Charms can be controlled. Still, it will serve Severus in the end to have someone who can talk some sense in him that he knows went through a similar thing.
As for the damsel-in-the-tower fairytales or witchtales, that was really fun to include and I thought added a bit of frivolity. I hope to have my next chapter out soon. Just have to have it beta read and cleaned up first.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thank you. I wanted Lucius and Severus to be close friends and having Narcissa Bonded to Lucius was just a way of showing that some Betrothal Charms can be controlled. Still, it will serve Severus in the end to have someone who can talk some sense in him that he knows went through a similar thing.
As for the damsel-in-the-tower fairytales or witchtales, that was really fun to include and I thought added a bit of frivolity. I hope to have my next chapter out soon. Just have to have it beta read and cleaned up first.
Your story is much more interesting than cannon. I like having so much about Luna in this story. She isn't this prominent in most SS/HG stories and I really like her. I hope while this is going on that Severus is simmering down regarding his anger at Hermione. He has the right to be upset but it isn't in his best intrest to hold a grudge right now. If he can get ahold of his temper, they could be good together. Well, he also needs to get ahold of his control issues too. I think thery are going to need some counseling.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Thankyou very much. wowzers! It was fun typing her and I too love her character. Oh things are not at all simmering down, they are jsut starting! I'm doing the best I can in couseling them, working through their issues as I wrote this, but they were not at all being cooperative at this point. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Good for Hermione! When does she hex Ron? What revenge will she get on Skeeter?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL love the questions, but you'll have to wait and see if... and what... and Thank you for reading and for the review.Hugs
F@ck!!!! He won't show up tomorrow and Hermione won't know why unless Ron 'fesses up. Kill Rita Skeeter! I hate her guts. Next time they find her in her animagus form they should smash her and say they didn't know it was her. I'm glad Lucius had a talk with Severus. I'm also glad that Hermione stood up to him a little. It wouldn't do to get in his face when she's the one who did this, but she should let him know how she feels and when he is hurting her. We need to get a message to Kingsley. I am hoping it will get to Ron or Harry or Mr. Weasley that Severus has been captured. I hope they don't torture him. I really, really hope that Hermione isn't pregnant. This would be a bad time for a baby.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
LOL a twosie! I love the reaction you have in this review, and I have to admit it makes me smile. Got to you, maybe? That's the best type of review, where the reader is expressing her/his emotions. Hang in there, all will be answered, sorted out, and no She's Not Pregnant. Thank you for reaind and the duplicate review.
F@ck!!!! He won't show up tomorrow and Hermione won't know why unless Ron 'fesses up. Kill Rita Skeeter! I hate her guts. Next time they find her in her animagus form they should smash her and say they didn't know it was her. I'm glad Lucius had a talk with Severus. I'm also glad that Hermione stood up to him a little. It wouldn't do to get in his face when she's the one who did this, but she should let him know how she feels and when he is hurting her. We need to get a message to Kingsley. I am hoping it will get to Ron or Harry or Mr. Weasley that Severus has been captured. I hope they don't torture him. I really, really hope that Hermione isn't pregnant. This would be a bad time for a baby.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yep, troubles. Ron fess up...? You'll see. No one likes Rita Skeeter - well, except for her magical fans and 'avid readers.' Good idea about the squiching... mabe...? Yes, Lucius is a good friend to Severus. Yep, she is standing up for him, and will. Oh, everyone will know - Daily Prophet keep quiet on a story like this one? really?Thank you for reading and for the review.
I thought Severus was coming tomorrow night? Ron is Damned lucky Severus didn't see him mauling Hermione. He would have hexed him 8 ways to Sunday. I'm very worried about what damage Rita Skeeter will do. I can't believe Hermione was so distracted that she really believed Skeeter would leave that easy. I know there were a lot of surprising visitors that had just shown up and Skeeter didn't seem the most dangerous on the surface because she didn't pull her wand, but they have a history. Knowing that nosey beetle is poking around should set off alarm bells. Is she a witch or not? She should have scanned for Skeeter before talking. I'm sure she will learn that lesson the hard way. I'm glad Severus couldn't get into George's apartment with him that angry. He is eventually going to have to come to terms with his control issues. Right now Hermione is trying to appease him but it isn't in her nature to be naturally submissive. I think it is ridiculous for her to go back to Hogwarts as a student now. Maybe she can move in with Severus and take private classes from the teachers. I think that Hermione might be able to find Lucius to end up as an ally and even a friend.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Nope he missed it... delayed. Yep, Ron is one lucky wizard right about now. Rita, well, Kingsley does get copies of the Daily Prophet and he will not like... oops, spoiler. But again - wand-at-the-moment- reaction and pick your fights, the more urgent first. Nope, Severus wasn't invited to the party. I bet wizard invitations have portkeys magic? Wouldnt that be kewl - it would telaport you to the 'entry' at a specific time. No late comers to Narcissa's events. I may use that in a story. Thanks! You're right, he definately will, it's one of the 'issues' on the list, me as their therapist, are going to have to address. You'll see, it will be a problem. oops spoiler. Yes, right now she is, but how long do you think she'll tolerate it... oopsspoiler. Nope, she wants to earn her NEWTs and learn the advanced spells and ... stop this! You're making me give too much away! Thankyou for reading and for the review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Kidding! I'm loving these reviews. NAd love your reactions, and the ideas you have and the ones you've given me. Thankyou!
Why didn't they obliviate Rita Skiter? Too bad they didn't get her into a jar fast enough. They should get her for trespassing and report to the aurors that she travels around on them in her animagus form. Maybe they don't care, but I bet Kingsley would want to know it. I understand why Severus is upset. I think he will eventually be very glad about this. I love Lucius' attitude about it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Oh, they didn't think of that. Too wrappe dup in the situation, and reacted spot-of-the-moment! Well, now all the Weasely's know - hense Arthur! Arthur likes following the rules and obeys the laws! he'll say something, likelyYep, Lucius sees it from the outside and has a non-involved perspective. Severus not angry? Have you been follwoing his reactions carefully through this...? lol He won't like it, but now he's in jail. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well he is being a dick tonight, but I do understand for a control freak, this is giving control over to person he hadn't been searching for. Or Doesn't think he would have ever chosen for himself. But the punishemennt of using her as a sex doll without making love to her isn't wise. He may concider it a consequence for what she has done with out his say, but if they are truely bound for life, and if he would be willing to look down the long road he might see that how well or how mean he treats her now is goin got come back to him as long as he's alive. He needs to asccert his pride and need for controle some other way than just sexually using her. He is going to have to care about her feelings too. It will only improve his situation. If your wife isn't happy... You kow the saying. I think it would be best for her to just stay at the Malfoys and make friends with Cissi. His friends will give them more support than her friends, I think. Severus' friends want to see him happy and have been judged enough to know that judging this Muggle born harshly will not help Severus' happness.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, grudge sex, to get back at her. And you're absolutely right, wrong way to go. There will be reprocussions later. Keep this feeling you have in mind when he starts to come aroound and she's.... well, you'll see. But you are so right on the money here, hit it on the head, down! No, believe it or not, her friends, and a 'brother', will all be supportive and a shoulder to lean on. You'll see. But keep these sentiments in mind. The harm done now, will haaunt him, and it will make things rough for a long time (many chapters) because, as I've stated, I wrote this in real time, and pain like this won't resolve in three chapters. Thank you for reading and for the reivew. Hugs
It's as I thought. This will mean trouble for Severus. Why aren't all the same letters being sent that Harry and Ginny then Luna and Neville received? Maybe you just haven't gotten to that part. And she is assuming Snape put the spell on Hermione. It isn't against the law is it? Is it considered dark magic? Hermione will make it right if he is accused of magically binding her against her will. She actually magically bound him against his will, or at least without his consent. Didn't the register lady wonder about these things with the other two couples? I see trouble coming. It always has to doesn't it? It's what makes stories have more than 3 chapters. I just get so anxious. I get way too involved in long stories and in movies. I can't help it. It's in my nature to have a very vivid imagination. If only I were as clever as you, I could make this imagination thing into story writing, but I don't have the capasity to do it. I've tried. I have 3 stories started but I get stuck trying to come up with clever turns of plot. I have a plot bunny, but never a clever resolution. I'm so glad there are people like you who can make what I wish I could write happen so that I can live it inside my head and heart. You create an oasis when the checking account is low and the children are making me want to shove a poker in my ear.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, it's not a relationship - but keep in mind, he's not happy about being trapped. As you'd expect. She's willing to give a go, but he's angry. She's on one side of the swing - he's on the other, and clashing will ensue. Oh, letters will be forthcoming. And many of them will be (or tried to) be sent to Severus. (Not all shown in story) and Hermione will get a few. It will be a mess for a while. Harry and Ginny, and Luna and Nevile are easily located, and they are happy about their matches, (Neville a bit confused) but happy - so they haplily go along with Maggie's forms. Severus....? And yes, Hermione magically bonded Seveurs to her agaisnt his will, without his knowledge or concent and forced it on him... oh, yea, he's goign to take that well! You're right, trouble coming. If Seveurs could If you'd like to contact me, bounce your ideas off me, I'd be happy to be an alpha reader. Sometimes talking through, helps, and I'm happy to obligue. if only to help you see your story come together and be finished. (put together: working for weekends @yahoo .com) Thank you for the compliments. A not to one with a vivid imagination: I have a pshychology degree, and this story, I'm taking two people, who are a opposing sides, looking at this bonding from opposing perpectives and who are not in sync at all, and playing therapist. Plus this is goign to happen in real time (I mapped this out on a daily planner/calander and (as much as people grumbled) Hermione is only 18. She isn't ready for this Bonding 'marriage' - she's willing to try a relationship with him - but you know Severus. He can carry a grudge for a long time. He can be quite difficult and demanding and stubborn and ... it's a rough road ahead. So realise that it won't be solved in a day, or a month. I have two very different people to deal with who in the end I hope to make into a healthy normal realtionship. Ineeded all teh luck I could find. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Each erotic chapter gets better. You are getting better or I'm more into it. I think he is falling in love with her. I wonder if she looked in the mirror if she would see his love bites. Then she would know he is experiencing this with her. There hasn't seemed to be any consequences of the Ministry finding out he isn't dead. Maybe Kingsley already knew? Severus didn't hide himself at the Malfoy's party, apparently. However, even though Arthur goes to the Ministry every day, he doesn't seem to know Severus is alive. I'm sure he would tell Harry if he knew. Tomorrow he's going to find her? Really? Ron is going to have a heart attack! I hope Hermione has a chance to talk to Luna before he finds her. I really want to hear that conversation. Of course Severus would have made a potion against Nagini! JKR is admitting that Hermione would never be content with Ron. I wonder if she will ever admit how un-Snape-like her arrangement of his death was. Maybe someday she will tell us he didn't really die. I would if I were her even if she only decideded to say so after the fact. It would make her seem less lame to admit that the death scene didn't go with Snape's character but that she meant for it to be that way because he isn't really dead. Your story just keeps getting better. Keep up the good work!!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
I'm glad that you are enjoying the dream love, and no, if she looked in the mirror there wouldn't be any marks. No, no consequences yet, it has to be proven in a way... and they have to find him. Nope, Arthur doesn't work in the Aurory, or in conjunction with Magie's office. It's a need to know, investigation, and you'll see... Well, he'll have to find her, he'll be drawn to where she is and yes, it's tomorrow. Ron's reaction will be, er, coming up. I know that JKR finally admitted that Hermione?Ron wasn't the best pairing - that's why there is so much fanfic with her paired with other wizards ( and a few witches) because WE all knew that! Nope, in interviews she said she meant to kill off Severus. Sad but she didn't like him very much. He was a gem of a character, as a baddie good guy, but he was modeled after a teacher she hated. so.... Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, Hermione didn't bargain for a deviant lover with a dark side. She likes it so far, but he hasn't tried to throttle her while they have sex yet, either. Would she go for that? She doesn't like to be bitten. Are they making love? Isn't this spell about revealing your love to you? Maybe they just haven't had the time to fall in love. At least they are compatible. What will he do when he finds out she did this to herself? Will he be angry? Can she blame it on Luna and Ginny? I doubt he will have any patcients for her claiming peer pressure.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
No she's not. At this point Severus is starting to control the dreams and has figured out that he's under the spell - one he didn't cast. A victim, and there is some foreshadowing here. Not all is roses, and even roses have thorns. Keep in mind, Severus isn't happy about being the brut of being under a spell, and that will continue for awhile. Have patience, and faith. Thank you for reading and for the review.
What a way for the Ministry to find out that Severus isn't dead! I am going to assume that Kingsly knows Severus was a spy and isn't holding anything against him until they can clear his name. That must have been quite a shock to the he and Hermione! Well, he has a reason to live now. He's engaged! How is Hermione going to explain this to Ron? I imagine now that the Ministry knows, the cat's out of the bag as they say. Lovely dreaming love making. Hermione is a lucky girl. Her lover was experienced and considerate. I would expect Luna to be OK with a toe fetish and like to have her ears licked, but, maybe not? It's the quite ones like Neville that surprise you. BTW-How did you chose Sean for Severus' middle name?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, a bit of a shock to a few people, as you'll find out. Oh, you'll see King's reaction in upcoming chapter. And Hermione and Ron's 'conversation' on this is also coming up... you'll see. Luna is goign to be happy with Neville. Sean: I picked it randomly, and wanted one that wasn't used before. Thank you for reading and for the review.
OOO i didn't realize you had continued and I almost missed a heck of a story! I can't wait to make you a favorite when the voting is over!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Wow, thank you very much. I’m truly flattered!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Wow, thank you very much. I’m truly flattered!
I've got to love Lucius for suggesting a threesome! Narcissa would murder him of course, but still... I wish Severus would consider it. Just a little bit. :p
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
As much as I think Lucius would go for it – heck even making it a foursome – I think he mentioned it to get a rile out of Severus. I see them as long time friends, Lucius and Severus, going back even to Lucius days as Severus’ prefect. I suppose it was just friendly banter, but yes, both Severus and Lucius knows he would – gladly! Still, his tactic worked – Severus became jealous even just over the idea of sharing Hermione. That was Lucius’ point and his reason for saying the comment. Truly Slytherin of him – don’t you think?
Response from Moreteadk (Reviewer)
I know. :) But the thought of Severus/Hermione/Lucius still makes me all weak-kneed. :p
Well... at least he made the request a threesome instead of asking if he could 'borrow' her (I'm not adverse to that thought either). That might have been dangerous for his health. :p
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
As much as I think Lucius would go for it – heck even making it a foursome – I think he mentioned it to get a rile out of Severus. I see them as long time friends, Lucius and Severus, going back even to Lucius days as Severus’ prefect. I suppose it was just friendly banter, but yes, both Severus and Lucius knows he would – gladly! Still, his tactic worked – Severus became jealous even just over the idea of sharing Hermione. That was Lucius’ point and his reason for saying the comment. Truly Slytherin of him – don’t you think?
Response from Moreteadk (Reviewer)
I know. :) But the thought of Severus/Hermione/Lucius still makes me all weak-kneed. :p
Well... at least he made the request a threesome instead of asking if he could 'borrow' her (I'm not adverse to that thought either). That might have been dangerous for his health. :p
OMG, now I have to wait for update. I do love that update bookmark.Wow, that worked out well for everyone except the baddies!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Plight-Trothed Bride)
Yes, I'm sorry, I am ot ready to submit the next one jsut yet. Soon tough. Thank you very much for the reveiw. Hugs