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Resolving a Misunderstanding
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Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.
Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.
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Reviews for Resolving a Misunderstanding
Minerva is right about two things:1) if he was her wizard, she would treat him very well (though she has had her moments, as has he) and2) he does have a way of dragging out the bliss in the time they spend together!!!Too bad Minerva didn't reach up and kiss him, sigh!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, when he's not being overly cautious or uptight, he can really bring great pleasure & joy to their time together, but then when he begins to overthink either their relationship or something else serious in life, he can certainly put a damper on things!Still, a nice evening, if I remember correctly!
Ok, I have your next story idea, though it will be a bit AU for the RaM-verse. Minerva DOES call for Albus' assistance in the shower that day. Hmm, what happens next??? I know it's about time for some good ole fashioned ADMM lemonade!!! lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeppers, that would be a hot story -- and AU RaM! hee! (I do love that picture, though . . . "Oh, Albus! Come hand me a towel . . . and some soap . . . and perhaps some shampoo . . . wash my hair, won't you, dear?" "With pleasure, as soon as I've taken care of this . . ." )
Response from HogwartsDuo (Reviewer)
See, it practically writes itself!!! So, what are you waiting for??? You should have it half done by now!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hee!
Minerva is great at second guessing her instincts, just as Albus is at thinking the worst of things sometimes. It's a miracle they didn't go mad with all the second guessing. haha.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
They almost did go mad by the end! But no more of that here! (Spoilers for others who may read the reviews & review responses.) It is kind of a miracle they managed to get together at all! :-)
Another interesting and yet frustrating interaction with Albus and Minerva. He is so sweet when he lets down his guard. Of course, if Minerva had been a little bolder, things might have really blossomed. He was in his nightwear after all, haha. And Gertie and her darn way of saying what she thinks is obvious but is actually more like riddles .... ugh. lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, she thinks she's being very clear, but Minerva just doesn't get it -- partly because she's so darned sure herself that things are a particular way and that a romantic relationship between her & Albus isn't possible, that she just can't see the direction that Gertrude is trying to steer her in! Yes, now, Minerva should have been just a little bit bolder, and we may very well have been able to get them together that much sooner! They'd have had three weeks more of the summer to spend together! Oh, well . . . ;-)
This chapter wasn't any easier to read this time than it was the first time. I know what happened with Albus and Gertie in the staff room but it still pained my heart to read Minerva's impressions of it and then having her put her foot in her mouth at dinner didn't help either. I found myself not liking Gertie for a bit and really not liking Albus.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, poor Minerva! It all ended well, though, thankfully, and her bad day ended up having some rather bright consequences! Poor Gertie, too, suffering that day with all her painful memories, and trying not to let it show too much, then she has to be patient with Minerva, as well. Fortunately, it actually ended up bringing the two closer together, as well, which was a huge benefit to Minerva.Haven't we all had those really rotten days where everything seems to go wrong and where we only see events through our own depressed or moody lenses, and that just makes things worse. I hate those kinds of days!
I absolutely adore this part of the chapter:She pulled her wand from her pocket again and looked at it. “That this wand chose me . . . and you possess its mate. It just seems . . . it should mean something, I guess.” Minerva shrugged.“It does, Minerva. It means that the quality of our magic is similar. It is that simple.”“Surely not, Albus!” Minerva looked at him disbelievingly.Albus laughed. “My, Minerva! You asked me, and now you don’t believe me?”*** There's something about the way Albus tries to put off the notion that there is more to the mated wands they possess. He's trying his best to be vague. I wish he'd open up and let his true feelings show, though I know that's not happening for a bit. lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is trying to put off acknowledging that there is something connecting them even on a deep level, and that their mated wands are one sign of that -- glad you enjoyed that bit! Minerva certainly felt as though there was more to it, even if she didn't want to articulate precisely what it was she felt! :-)Thanks very much!
I'm glad Minerva had a nice outing with Quin, though it would have been a different ballgame altogether if Albus had joined them. I do think it's funny that he calls Albus Minerva's. After all the times I've read this story, I just realized that Quin said he'd loaned the Hog's Head some money for a new roof. Was this under Aberforth's watch or was it before he owned the Hog's Head? And if he's the one who borrowed the money, why didn't he borrow it from his brother???
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Aberforth is just a barman at the Hog's Head. And I'm not certain that Aberforth ever is said to own the Hog's Head in canon, although I do have him owning it by the time that AAoL/DD/LVS roll around. (It comes in handy during DD!) I think that in HwtH, Albus says something about Aberforth "working at" the Hog's Head, though I'm not sure. I'd have to go back and look. But no, it was the current owners of the Hog's Head who borrowed the money for the new roof.
It's either feast or famine. Unfortunately for Minerva, in this instance, it's both. She could enjoy a lovely quiet dinner with Albus, alone and uninterrupted. Or, she could have a lovely meal with Albus and Quin, feeling most uncomfortable for most of it but still sharing the company of both over a good meal. But, in this instance, she's left meeting Quin and wishing she was with Albus. Sigh!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, their timing doesn't seem to be ideal, does it?
Simply a very lovely chapter! Have been reading with a big grin all the time. The reactions of Minerva's family are precious. And her father is such a good man, serious and warm and unconventional, which allows him to quite easily, in the end, embrace her and Albus' Animagus project. But his remark about "unrequited love", indeed rather embarrassing for Minerva, could be one of those smal small pushes that made the aspect of "to be in love" instead of just to love, slowly wax, deep in Minerva's heart. You are succeeding to make me read fast and with concentration, it makes me enjoy the reading very much. What you write is just so well written and captivating and has a very warm (or "loving", that says it better) feeling about it! Which was for me, btw, also one of the most important reasons why the HP-series was enjoyable. Thanks, as always!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Now I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy! Thanks very much for the lovely review!I'm glad you like Merwyn and hs fatherly reaction to Minerva's odd behavior & to her Animagus project. Yes, that little bit of gentle teasing probably did push Minerva's feelings along in that direction a bit.Thanks very much for the review!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
My pleasure. Really!
Oh the handy details of the witches dress and dressing: automagically self-supporting and stockings without the garters (not to mention the robes - not handy, but so very dressy - something else than jeans with a t-shirt) and good looks at the wave of a wand...sigh! But that is not the stretch of this chapter, of course. Minerva deciding she has to address It. Yeah girl, I think It is a bit simplified term for your feelings...high time you give It a proper name! And then the very first steps of her becoming that beautiful tabby, in the care of her Professor. Lovely chapter again, that read like a train. Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hi! I'm glad you enjoyed all those little dressing details! Automagical self-supporting charms sound much more comfy than underwire bras! At least in theory!Yes, after all these years, Minerva's finally reached the point where she can't ignore "It" any longer and has to give "It" a proper name and actually deal with it. Good first step!!!Thanks for the review! I'm very glad you're still enjoying the read & finding it smooth and engrossing!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
i've banned the wires long ago, replaced it with tight and sturdy, but automagically sounds far more attractive! Oh forgot about Albus' nom de plume...if I get it right he chose for a pretty "self-destructive" name. These Apiaruses are not exactly the sweetest of beetles, it seems
So very girly and typical for any teenager: the idea that anyone would know that you have to use underclothes is so very embarrassing, haha. The side-along is breath-taking and who would not fall head-over-heels in love with Dumbledore, feeling his arm, his heartbeat and the thrum of his overwhelmingly powerful and beautiful magic? But she knows it's not appropriate and so she manages to restrain herself and so does he. I admire them for that! Minerva's thoughts about how to behave, how not to be a burden, how to dress are all very realistic. Like I said before: girly and teenager-like, but a very sensible and sensitive teenager, at that. This was yet another chapter that read so wonderful and which I enjoyed a lot! Thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks! Minerva may be sensible, but she is still a teenager! And like so many teenagers, too, she can go from being quite grown-up in one minute to being very young in the next. Yes, Minerva knew she couldn't act on it, and that if she were to, the results wouldn't be good. Of course, Albus doesn't have a clue here that she's fallen in love with him, or even that she might have a crush on him, even though he does care for her deeply & feel drawn to her as another human being.I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks very much!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
The somehow confusing person is Albus for me. Not that you are writing him as confusing, but his position is confusing. Yes, he absolutely manages a professor-pupil relation with Minerva. But at the same time she is already so much more to him, in her full personality, which he easily recognizes.The love for her is dormant because he knows she is his pupil and he is absolutely a gentleaman and because she is simply too young for him as a woman and yet he must be aware, somewhere, that this is the woman of his dreams, of his destiny, albeit latently.I can't put a finger on it, what I'm feeling exactly, because it would simply be awful, were he to admit, in this time as her Professor, that he loves her as a woman (and physically she would also not have reached that stage in his eyes).But yet, it is so eternally inescapable that it makes me tingle with that love that is palpable and yet non-existent. Sigh.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that he certainly does love her, but that it hasn't grown into a romantic love yet, and it doesn't occur to him at this point that it could do that.It actually does occur to a few other people quite early on that there is a potential there for the two of them, but they also recognize a) that it would be inappropriate at this point (and likely unsuccessful, since Minerva is still too young to be a partner to him -- a succinct and not wholly satisfactory way of putting it, but it'll do), and b) neither Albus nor Minerva are aware of it yet (although Minerva does become aware of it in this chapter, or at least, of her own deep feelings).I (like Quin of future chapters!) dislike the term "soul mate," since it's usually used in contexts too sweet and over-the-top for me, but despite that, I'll say that I think that Albus does have some deep sense that Minerva is a soul mate, though he would never articulate it in that way, and certainly not as a soul mate in the romantic sense. He does recognize that she has become important in his life, and that she's not just another of his students -- though he is careful not to treat her differently in class and so forth, and he does care for all of his students -- but he would be startled and likely also somewhat amused if someone suggested that he might be the love of her life, and she of his.I'm glad you're enjoying all this potential building up here in these chapters where we see the two of them together when she was so young! They were enjoyable ones to write! Even the melodramatic teenage certainty that she would die of "It"! And yet at the heart of that melodramatic teenage storm of feeling was the true, deep, and abiding love, and the sensation of despair at believing that it could never blossom in the open air.
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
This line holds the answer that ought to satisfy me, i think: "...but he would be startled and likely also somewhat amused if someone suggested that he might be the love of her life, and she of his." But people sometimes have a notion of "fate" or "destiny" very deep in them and yet it is impossible to recognize, let alone name it...i think that is what i'm hinting at. Forgive me! (andnowI'llstopdiggingsenselessly)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
"But people sometimes have a notion of "fate" or "destiny" very deep in them and yet it is impossible to recognize, let alone name it"I agree!
Albus is so sweet and I love the sound of the photo and frame he gave her. He really is a romantic at heart, even if he's not trying to be at that moment.The tale of their wands was really inspired and I enjoyed learning more about that, too!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He certainly has a deep romantic streak, doesn't he? And he can't help but romance Minerva even when he doesn't intend to! :-)Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying the reread!
So nice to read, very fluent rhythm in this chapter. Well, one should perhaps not elaborate about the feelings of and between an elder teacher and a fifteen year old student, but the closeness and ease and the understanding between them, to say the least, already seems to hold that what later develops between them. Though Minerva remains utterly respectful and so does Albus, but it is undeniably there. His tears and his weariness, if I remember well, later in the story we come to know what is the reason for them, am I right? (I will not spoil anything more here :-) )
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
We do learn more of it from Albus's perspective much later, you're right! :-)Yes, there is a closeness, trust, and deep affection between them even here, but not yet metamorphosed into the more mature love it became later. Still, they have a strong, almost innate, affection for each other, and "recognise" and are drawn to each other even then.Thanks for the review!
I keep saying it every chapter, or at least I ought to!, but I enjoy reading RaM so much! And this time, with much more attention than the first time, because I now know, with how much detail and many, many small unmissable parts of information hidden everywhere, as well as humour and awesome dialogues you have written it. It is not my habit, to read everything and attempting to fully concentrate, but you deserve it my dear, as I get so much back in this story! (I know, almost too much flattering, BUT after all I do know my appalling reading habits and you have altered them). Haha, you dare! Churchill with possible wizarding blood. Great! I loved it in "JK" and I love it in your stories: the mixing up of RL and story in such a matter of fact way, that it becomes very real! Oh man, I can keep coming with things that struck me, but it is getting too much. Let me summarize it, that I absolutely love this introduction to the relation of Minerva and Albus, with WWII as backdrop. Magnificent chapter!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks very much! (And I'm glad you're not cheating yourself of the pleasure of sinking yourself into your reading here! )Of course, many wizards would think that a mere Muggle would have to have some wizarding blood in them in order to achieve the kind of moving oratory that Churchill was capable of, but whether he did or not -- a mystery! (He does seem to glom on to magical concepst quite well though -- to be seen in a future chapter which you may remember!)I'm glad you enjoyed seeing Albus & Minerva's early relationship in this chapter!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
and I didn't even mention Blampa, the bath, Minerva in the bath, reflecting on her relationship with Albus. i just got totally carried away when reading that last part. Not bad, actually
Forgot to mention: you talked about the danger of muggles having knowledge about wizzards, like in a love-relation between a witch and a muggle is unavoidable...for a moment this notion surprised me, after all, the wizards seem to be so much more powerful in their world than we muggles are in our.But it's a clever idea you have mentioned it, in a way mixng up RL and fiction.We just have to remember the witch-hunts of not so long before - under what pretense people were declared to be witches - let alone what would have happened had they proof of real witches...Makes me wonder: has the HP-series and movies about Merlin and what not more (much) attention there has been for magical people, prepared our world to accept witches this time around??!To remain hyothetical, of course, but nevertheless: you have written a few thought-provoking lines! Thanks!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
Hypothetical, not hyothetical (i don't want to look that much stupid, haha)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Well, there are the Muggle protection laws in HP, and the international codes of secrecy, but there's also an underlying implication in the books that it wouldn't be only that the Muggles who would be endangered by the magical world if it became common knowledge, but vice versa, as well. There are also several mentions of couples in which the Muggle partner didn't know the other person was a witch or a wizard until after the marriage (sometimes disastrously so, sometimes only surprisingly so).I'd imagine that one danger to witches & wizards would be that Muggles (since there are so very, very many more of them) might want to exploit them into performing magic for them rather than relying on mundane technology. And, of course, there are always people who want to destroy things and people who are "different" or who are scary. So I think that the separation (which began to protect witches & wizards more than Muggles) has evolved to protect Muggles, as well, but still serves to protect the magical world from Muggles.Anyway, those are my thoughts on the separation of the magic/Muggle worlds in HP! Some of them, anyway!
Very nice, the meeting of the three young witches. Clearly girly, though Minerva a bit more serious and picky (about the pink, yuck! :-)) I've been reading this chapter with a smile.Melina has landed in quite a situation, but her lie about her Dad is absurd, I can imagine Minerva's laughter But oh Minerva's suppressed pain about Albus, it hurt me too, understanding what she would have felt there,...though she dealt with it, which makes her Minerva of course
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it was one of those silly lies that just popped out of Melina, and now she has to deal with it! Yes, that does make her Minerva, dealing with the situation at hand and putting her own difficult feelings aside.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! (And yes, very "girls' outing-ish"!)
Where in the last chapter we were following Albus' thoughts, there this chapter starts in the mind of Minerva...and I notice a clearly different "voice"! Makes me observe that you succeed to go into the depth, into their minds and expressing those minds into, for both MM and AD, clearly identifiable "speach" (am I explaining this a bit awkward, or what? But I guess you will get what I want to say ) I feel for Minerva, banished to an empty class-room and quarters at the fourth and then to have to listen to her parents worries at home...no wonder she gets a bit on the edge. Nice and easy flowing chapter to introduce us a bit to the McGonagalls. I like Murdoch: he's soft but not a softie me thinks.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, you know, I think you've hit on an apt description for Murdoch! I'm glad you like him!I'm glad you "heard" a difference in the characters' voices, and that they seemed distinctly different people. RaM was my first fic, but that is something that I've always worked on -- trying to get "into the skins" -- and hearts and minds -- of each character and give each one a distinctive presence & voice. I'm glad it seemed evident here!Thanks for reviewing!
Sigh. I simply felt so good reading this chapter. It was wonderful to be carried on his stream of thoughts and memories. By doing so, he (you) handed us a lot of information, but in such a smooth and captivating way! "...her tirade seemed simultaneously to ring in his head and to be utterly impossible." Haha, so well caught, such an highly embarrassimg situation. I loved the story about how he came to Hogwarts and what were the reactions to that. The explanation about how he uses lists and seeing him actually working with these lists on his Minerva-problem: awesome. Looks tempting enough to give it a try once. :-) Great description also about how to transfigure a book. i'm pretty sure Mistress MMADfan that you yourself must be highly skilled in performing this spell, haha.Please allow me a question: I know from reading RaM the first time, that you have made a very beautiful and highly evolved and detailed theory about the wards. it just makes me wonder how far it is your own theory? Or have you based it on readily available ward-theories of other books? I know at least that in JK's HP's there is not too much to be found on it.Thanks for a great chapter, as always, Maria
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hi! I'm very glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and that you liked hearing how and why he came to Hogwarts. I happen to like lists, myself, though mine aren't nearly as eccentric as Albus's! haha! ;-)As to the ward theory, I imagine that it was subconsciously influenced by other things that I've read or seen, but what I did was take the little bit that we learn about magic and wards in the first five or six books and extrapolated from that. I have a very visual sense of how the wards work, and how complex wards are layered and woven together, different sorts of effects and magical strands woven in different ways, and in a three-dimensional fashion, rather like a complex wall of magic, layers of a basket woven together, or something of the sort. I don't imagine that my ward theory is entirely original, but I didn't borrow it from any specific source.I'm glad you liked the chapter and Albus's introspections! Thanks for the thoughtful review!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
So the wards...pretty much your own theory indeed. Now why did I already expect that? Thanks for clarifying it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
You're welcome!
I loved it! First that horribly painful situation with Albus still there I felt sorry for all three of them , with each for their own reasons. Thankfully Poppy says a few sensible words, allowing Albus to leave. I must say I admire Albus' guts, or is it slight impudence? to mention the men's-vigour-potion in front of two young employees, his beloved included Poppy is awesome, saying and guessing all the right things. This is a great chapter I think, because it is so highly believable and flows naturally in what happens as well as the conversation.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks! Yes, I'm afraid that mentioning the men's vigour potion did not ease Albus's discomfort with the situation, but he was rambling a bit, wasn't he?Poppy is a pretty intuitive witch, and a sympathetic Hufflepuff, so I'm glad you enjoyed her reactions in this chapter.Thanks for the review!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
My pleasure :-)
This is setting off my second read of RaM and I'm brimming with excited anticipation. I know already what a wonderful story it is, but I want to relive it again. And this time want to be more aware of all the magnificent detail you have written into it and the intricacy of the story. But I'm looking forward most of all to be reintroduced to your many characters, being the interesting, developed and full-blown personalities that they are. I love your first chapter, tickling our fantasy with hints of possible developments and character-traits. Minerva in full-blown rhetorical-question-mode is pretty scary, I admire Poppy's courage and control to deal with the Lady, haha.To paraphrase Albus: "Hmm, interesting start, Professor MMADfan. Certainly an interesting start!" Thanks! Maria
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks! I hope that you enjoy your reread! I bet stuff that went "under the radar" before now jumps out at you. I'm glad that you had fun rereading the first chapter. It is a rather explosive beginning, isn't it?
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
Yes it is! "F*** Alb"..."Minerva!!! Go wash your mouth!!!" (OK, i shall not tell you what uncouth language sometimes happens to slip from me. So i'll not protest at Minerva's And to be called "a good girl"...that surely warrants a bit of strong language. LOL) Thanks for responding!
Great chapter! It makes me very curious about your next ff's to learn if Malcolm will be succesful as an Animagus. Awesome scenes of, let's say, raised temperature. Albus in the meeting and reliving it with his beloved...wonderful! I love the dialogues between them , in these scenes :-) The developping relation between Minerva and Gertrude is also too my liking! Thanks, as always!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
If you read Charming the Scottish Garden, which is set in 1959, you'll see more of Malcolm, and you'll learn more about his Animagus training. :-)I'm glad you enjoy the warm dialogue between Minerva & Albus! Glad, too, that you like seeing Malcolm & Gertrude together. They're good for each other. :-)Thanks very much for reviewing! I appreciate it!
Wow!Whilst looking for something interesting to read over the christmas hols, I stumbled upon this story, and it has quite honestly taken over my life since, until I have completed it this evening. I have been hooked and loved every single chapter. You have created such multidimensional characters and an amazingly detailed world for them to live in, I am going to find it difficult to go back and read HP again without expecting Gertrude or someone to pop up somewhere!I look forward to reading more of your work soon, although I think a brief respite will be required first to get back to real life!Keep writing :)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hi, katty-kit! Thanks so much for your review! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story so much. It's great to hear that it absorbed you so much -- though I agree that real life does need tending to! -- and that you liked the various characters and situations.Thanks again! I hope you enjoy some of the other stories in the series -- or those not in the series!
*snip*“Well, Blampa, it would make me very happy . . . .” Minerva could see that Blampa was quivering with house-elf excitement at the prospect of making her Professor happy. “But . . . .” Minerva paused dramatically, shaking her head. “No, I just don’t think it would be fair of me to ask this of you, please forgive me, Blampa.” Minerva tried to maintain her attitude of utter dejection, which wasn’t difficult, given the day she was having.“Oh, nooo!” wailed Blampa. “Oh, Miss Professor Minerva, Blampa try very very hard to make Miss Professor Minerva happy. Blampa want to serve Miss Professor!”“Well, if you really think you could try . . . you see, Blampa, when I was growing up, we had house-elves serve our family, too. Oh, and they were very good house-elves, and they all still serve McGonagalls. Yes, they were very good house-elves.” Minerva sighed. She could see that Blampa was quivering with desire to be as good a house-elf as a McGonagall house-elf. “But you’re not a McGonagall house-elf, Blampa. You are a Hogwarts house-elf.” Minerva shook her head again, as if discouraged by the thought.How very Slytherin of our dear Transfiguration mistress... its funny, but I can't help but feel bad for poor Blampa here... she's so sweet and Minerva is so MOODY!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*“Of course, Professor Minerva; I, Blampa, wakes Professor Minerva for her appointment. Professor Minerva not to worry. Professor Minerva take happy nap with happy blanket and not worry!”Lolololololzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Happy nap with happy blanket... I am loving that!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
The flashback to young Minerva practicing on Albus' hand was extreamly intimate and most generous and trusting of Albus. Very, very tender.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, poor Blampa! Trying so very hard to please in the only way she knows how, and Minerva in a very bitchy mood, though trying to contain it a bit. That scene with Minerva and Albus when Minerva is exploring his hand and then Transfiguring it is very intimate, and it requires a good deal of trust. Even then, he was able to relax and trust her, as many years later, he trusted her with his heart and his life, in a very literal sense. (A good DD scene to reread at this point would be the one in which she acts on the Celebrare.)Do you have a happy blanket? Maybe that's what you need,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I have an old Marine blanket that my best dog Lewis chewed on, its dark green and super itchy and I love it for those reasons - Lewis chewed on it - and I loved Lewis perhaps as much as I could love my children - at the time - please don't hate me, I really did - and Lewis made me feel secure - all the time during my last pregnancy and all the pain Greg caused, Lewis was always snuggled up to me and kissing me - he died when my son was about 10 months old, massively aggressive lymphoma, in my arms, we didn't even have the blood work back to find out what he had - his came to me, was sitting at my desk, and he pawed at me, so I snuggled him a bit to me (he was 80 pounds) and he lay on the ground by my feet, and 4 minutes later he was seizing up - and I had to keep Greg from grabbing him so he woudln't get bit as he died - dogs can do that - just reflex, then I held him after he stopped quaking so hard - just held him for a few hours, then I burried him under my orange tree, in the rain, at 3 am.But I can't use my happy blanket because its so bloody hot here, right now...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think it's beautiful that you loved him so much, and I can tell from what you say that he loved you, too. Too bad you don't know any handy cooling charms . . . :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Lewis was the best dog that ever lived.... yup, loved us - cooling charms, well I could dump a bucket of ice in my lap and then wrap up, but then I'd just be soaking wet under the blanket and, since my dryer doesn't work, I'm trying not to dirty up all my clothes - got to go elsewhere to wash.... *le sigh*
Wow, that was exciting!But I have to say that the thing I enjoyed most in the last two chapters was Minerva's interaction with her house-elf. The two are really cute together!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
LOL! Glad you like Minerva and Blampa together! Their relationship has certainly evolved, hasn't it? I think these may be my two favorite chapters in the story, or two of them, anyway. I'd worried about "A Spree" when I was writing it, but I liked the way it turned out. Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying it!
That's a very interesting idea to have Albus and Minerva deal with a werewolf on staff that early - might explain their attitude towards Remus Lupin later on. I also really liked the conversation between Albus, Gertrude and Minerva at the end of the chapter. Minerva finally seems to be really warming towards "Gertie" in spite of her fits of jealousy. You definitely have a way with dialogue. It really sounds quite life-like, something I find very hard to do. I really wonder what Hagrid's problem is. Will read on now in hope of finding out ;-)
Inga
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hi! I thought it would be interesting if their experience then helped shape their decisions later.Glad you're enjoying the dialogue! I like writing it, and I tend to "hear" it as I'm writing.You'll find out what Hagrid's problem is fairly shortly!Have fun, and thanks for the review!