XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate
Chapter 45 of 141
MMADfanMinerva offends Quin again, learns something surprising about Gertrude, and receives another letter from Poppy.
ReviewedXLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate
Thank goodness for small favours, Minerva thought as she rose from lunch and took Quin's elbow. She had again been seated at the far end of the table well away from Valerianna. She hadn't even had to look at her during this meal, as they were both seated on the same side of the very long table. As more guests arrived, the table lengthened to accommodate them all. Again, no children were present, unless one included Quin.
Minerva had noticed that most couples had been seated either across from one another or even apart from one another entirely. She assumed this was to encourage "mingling," but she had been seated beside Quin again. Minerva wondered whether that was Gertie's doing or Madam Gamp's. She doubted very much that it was sheer happenstance that they had been seated beside one another for the last three formal meals. Of course, the others were established couples, and she and Quin had only just met. The engaged couple had arrived that morning and were seated on either side of Madam Gamp. Gropius was being entertained by an older couple who had been in the parlour that morning, and Flint and Valerianna were seated across from one another just next to them. Minerva was pleased to be as far from them as possible, but fortunately not so near Orion and Walburga, the celebrated couple, as to have to speak with them, either. She was slightly disappointed to see that Ella was seated down at the end of the table near Gropius. She would have enjoyed speaking with Quin's mother-in-law again. Instead, Minerva slogged her way through some rather dull conversation with a Rosier across from her, Druella's older brother whom she knew from school, and with one of the prematurely-aged Blacks on her other side, and poked Quin every now and then so that he would rescue her from some particularly annoying conversation. When Rosier started going on about what a wonderful match Orion and Walburga made, Minerva had all she could do to maintain her attitude of cool detachment.
They were both dreadful, Walburga even more insufferable than Orion, and Minerva couldn't help but wonder what problems their children would suffer from as a result of being born from that union. Minerva cringed as Walburga's strident tones and cackling laugh cut through the murmured voices around her. She seemed happy enough, however, and Orion, who spoke little, seemed neither happy nor unhappy. Minerva thought he looked bored, actually. She doubted that this was a love match. Probably, as with Pollux and Irma, their marriage had been arranged very early in their lives.
Gertrude's Aunt Hesper, Orion's grandmother, sat next to Francis Flint and spent the meal turned slightly away from him, speaking to the Blacks on her other side. She also seemed to drink rather copious amounts of wine. Hesper had been one of the witches talking with Columbine and Gropius in the parlour that morning. Minerva detected only a slight family resemblance between Hesper and Gropius, but she thought that Gertrude actually looked more like her aunt than she did her father, a bent-over wisp of a man who looked as though a strong breeze could carry him away. Hesper, in contrast, was slim but tall, with heavy bones, flat chest, broad shoulders, prominent cheek bones, and piercing grey eyes that maintained their sharpness despite the amount of wine she seemed to imbibe. Gertrude, fortunately, had inherited slightly more rounded features and more of a bosom from her mother's side of the family, but it was clear that she had come by her height and her sturdiness honestly.
Minerva thought that, aside from Gropius, the Gamps, whether a Gamp by blood or by marriage, were the healthiest looking pure-bloods in the room. The Blacks were definitely the most frail-looking, with the Yaxleys and Rosiers coming in somewhere in the middle. Quin, of course, was the very picture of both vitality and virility. Unfortunately, Minerva had to admit that her least favourite person in the room also looked fairly vigorous. Valerianna Yaxley née Crouch was definitely a very healthy witch in her sixties. Minerva could tell that, despite her plain looks, beneath her make-up charms, the witch still had a rosy glow to her cheek that required no Glamour or make-up charm to create. She also moved quickly and energetically, Minerva had noticed, and there was no doubt that the witch was sharp nasty, but sharp.
"Would you like to . . . mingle, or would you prefer a walk or some time in the library?" Quin asked in her ear as they left the dining room.
"Library?" Minerva hadn't seen a library.
His lips twitched. "A girl after me own heart, I see," Quin said in response to her obvious interest. "It is even on the same floor as your bedroom, but in the other wing. Quite convenient."
"Convenient for what?" Minerva asked with faux frostiness.
"Why, nighttime reading when you can't sleep, of course!" He grinned as he led her up the stairs to the Gamp library. "I think you will enjoy this Gertie's parents may not be academically inclined, but her grandfather was quite a famed Arithmancer in his day. He also was almost as talented as your father when it came to Ancient Runes and linguistics in general, he was."
"You know my father?" Minerva asked, puzzled.
"Not personally acquainted, obviously, or to be sure, I would have been after an introduction to la grande dame de la Metamorphosis a long time ago," he said with a wink. "I am familiar with his books, however. He has a fluid and unconventional mind. I possess around eighteen of his books, although I confess I have not read all of them most of them, though!" he said in response to Minerva's look. "I am not one to buy books simply to decorate me shelves. It is simply a matter of time havin' enough of it."
The two spent a congenial afternoon in the library; when the afternoon sun became too warm, Quin drew the draperies closed and floated small, cool balls of light overhead so that they could read with ease. Minerva thought to ask him about the "personal charm" that Gertie had spoken of, but became so engrossed in her book that any thought of asking him anything flew from her mind.
At about three o'clock, a loud thunking came from one of the windows. Quin got up and drew back a curtain, then opened the window to let in an owl, which immediately flew over and landed on the back of Minerva's chair.
Minerva reached up to take the letter from the bird, and it ruffled its feathers and shifted as she did so. "I'm sorry, poor thing. I haven't any treats for you today."
"I believe there are some in the Gamp owlery, if I can remember where . . . ." Quin looked off into the distance for a moment.
"I don't particularly want to bring the bird down there perhaps she will find her way there on her own."
"He, not she," said Quin, "and there's no need to go down there. Just draw up a few." He reached out toward the owl, closed his fist, and when he opened it, there were several owl treats in his palm.
"Muggle 'magic tricks.'" Minerva snorted, rolling her eyes. "Really, Quin. I am not that gullible."
"Ah, well. I must remember the lady isn't gullible, Mr Owl," he said, addressing the bird that was now perched on his outstretched arm. He grinned at her. "I can't do it with large things, o' course, but with bits o' treats like these, or with water, which flows, if I know where it is, and if I am familiar enough with the source, I can pull it to where I want it. Rather like what you do when you Apparate, but the other way around . . . and, o' course, you aren't doin' the moving."
Minerva considered that for a moment, and its implications, if true. "You could be quite the thief, then. There are a great many valuable things, particularly in the Muggle world, that are very small. . . . That isn't how you've made your money, is it?" asked Minerva bluntly, remembering her conversation with Gertie that morning about Flint's suspicions.
"It's talkin' with Frankie Flint, you've been, then? And here I was thinkin' you had better taste than that."
"No, I haven't been, and I don't suppose it's any of my business, except in a general sort of way, but I would like to know."
Quin sighed and looked at her appraisingly before bringing the owl to the window and letting it fly away. He watched it fade into the distance before closing the window and drawing the curtain again.
He came back and stood in front of her. "So, 'tis either cheap Muggle tricks I am doin', or 'tis proof o' thievery."
"I didn't mean to accuse you "
"You weren't? Just as you didn't accuse me of bein' a negligent father allowin' his son to be destroyin' his magical core? Burnin' his self out, I believe you said."
"I didn't mean "
"'Tisn't entirely your fault," Quin said with a sigh. "'Tis also the world you come from. And it's me own fault as well, for bein' so free with you." He sat. "Better to have let you believe I was just pullin'em from me pocket, or whatever you would assume o' any other wizard who gave a bird treats. I ought to know better by now."
Minerva sat, her letter unlooked at. She watched Quin pick up his book and resume reading.
"I just wanted to know, Quin, because I'd like us to be friends."
Quin didn't look up from the oversized book he was reading. "An' you want to be sure 'tis no thief you have for a friend."
"Not exactly. I'm . . . curious. I always have been."
He put his book in his lap and gazed at Minerva. "No, I do not steal, neither to make me livin' nor to make me livelihood easier, not from Muggles and not from wizards." He looked at her for a moment more, then picked up his book again.
"I didn't mean it to sound as it came out, Quin. Honestly," Minerva said.
"I know that I am not always the model of decorum and good manners, particularly around this lot, but I do not believe that askin' someone if he makes his livin' by stealin' from Muggles is exactly the height of courtesy, Professor McGonagall. At least where I am from. But then, I didn't have the advantages of bein' raised on this blessed isle, an' bein' as I'm unschooled, I probably have missed a lesson or two in polite conversation," he said from behind his book.
"All right, be that way. I may not have phrased it felicitously, and maybe I was even wrong to think such a thing, but it was an honest question, Quin. More honest than most you'd receive under this house. I am . . . I am sorry. I did not intend to offend you, and you do have every right to be offended. I would have been." Minerva waited, hoping that Quin was receptive to her apology. Aside from the fact that she had hoped she had found a new friend, the next couple of days would be very long, indeed, if she no longer had his company.
"Well," said Quin, putting his book aside on the table next to him, "perhaps that wasn't the prettiest apology I've ever heard, but 'twas sincere, I'd like to believe, anyway. . . . An' what are a few infelicitous words between friends, eh?" He quirked a grin and gave a half-shrug. "I'm sure I've said worse t' me friends. And forgiven worse from'em."
Minerva let out a relieved sigh. She hadn't realised until that moment how much she had liked Quin. She really did feel as though she'd known him forever, in a way, although he continually startled her.
"All right, and can I ask that you be understanding in the future when you startle me like that? I'm bound to be . . . offensively honest again, I'm sure," she said with a smile.
"Mmm. You remind me of Gertie. Prettier, of course, and more fun."
"I never! I do not! I am nothing like her!" Minerva sat up straight, indignant and put out by him comparing her to the Slytherin witch.
"Oh, it's just that I have to forgive Gertrude at least once every visit for some blunt remark or another that would mortally wound a more sensitive soul than I," he said with a grin, quite amused by Minerva's outrage. "O' course, she's usually not askin' for me forgiveness in so many words, not as you did. But I recognise her apologies now."
Minerva was quite uninterested in what Gertie's apologies might look like. "Well, you'll just have to get to know me better, then, and you'll see how much we differ."
"I already said you were prettier and more fun! Isn't that what every witch would like to hear?"
Minerva rolled her eyes. "I swear, Quin, you can be so irritating! I don't know why I wanted to apologise!"
"'Tis me charm and me breedin', naturally," he replied with an impish smile. "Speakin' of breedin', by the way, what did you think of the happy couple?"
"Oh, just . . . awful. Especially her. I knew her slightly from school, and she's even worse than I remember. Orion seemed bored."
"He probably was. I think he wishes he weren't a Black, but he'd never say that. He may not even admit it to himself. But he is rather hemmed in by his family. Limited choices in life. He even apparently had an inappropriate liaison with someone unacceptable, but the family forgave him let him sow his wild oats, so to speak but in the end, he'll marry that witch. She's a shrew in the making, isn't she?"
"Shrew perfect word for her. And given how Orion just sat there, he'll probably let her have her way in the little things, then go out and have a bit on the side, as they say."
"Mm. I doubt meself that he ever really stopped seein' the 'inappropriate' witch."
"Was she Muggle-born?"
"I don't think so; 'twould'a been too much, even for a rebellious son, if he still wants his inheritance I think it was her mother or father who was, I don't pay that much attention to such gossip . . . only enough to use it later, if I have to."
"You sound Slytherin."
"You say that like it's a bad thing, Minerva."
"Well . . . most of the people here are Slytherins. You can't say they exemplify many of the virtues I would hope you want to instill in your children."
"Not them, but Gertrude is Slytherin, and I wouldn't mind if Alroy and Aine took a few lessons from her."
Minerva raised an eyebrow, but said nothing against her hostess.
"You know, I was teasin' you about just bein' acquaintances an' all, but you really don't know her at all, do you?"
"I have known her since I was a third-year. I took Arithmancy from her for five years. I have taught with her for about six months. During those six months, we rarely spoke, and when we did, it concerned the school. Her invitation came as a surprise."
"To hear her talk, though, she seems to know you fairly well," Quin said, puzzled.
"Yes, well, she is friends with Professor Dumbledore. He has been . . . something of a mentor to me. A friend, in fact. Gertrude no doubt has a better sense of who I am simply from speaking with him and, as you said of the gossip about Orion, she probably listened to what Albus had to say about me in order to use it later on if she needed to."
"Hmm, that sounds rather cold."
"It is Slytherin," Minerva responded succinctly.
"Well, I've known Gertie since I first met me Aileen, and I can tell you that she is not merely . . . manipulative, as you make 'Slytherin' sound. No more than I am, and perhaps less so."
Minerva raised an eyebrow. "Perhaps I ought to reconsider our acquaintance then," she said, only partially in jest. "And what are these other qualities that you believe she possesses?"
"Loyalty, for one."
Minerva gave a short laugh. "I have heard her described that way before, actually."
"You have; well, 'tis true. And if she'd made a different choice at eleven, we'd not be havin' this conversation at all."
"What do you mean?"
"We may have had another sorta conversation, about how she wasn't only loyal, but was also pragmatic and wily."
"I still don't follow . . . ."
"Well, I didn't go to Hogwarts, as you know, but as most of me friends have, I do know something of the Houses. Isn't one of the traits of Hufflepuff supposed to be loyalty?" Quin asked.
Minerva knit her brow. "Yes, but "
"Young Gertie very nearly was sorted into Hufflepuff, but the prospect distressed her so, that hat-thing put her in Slytherin, instead, where her family usually is put."
Minerva looked at Quin in astonishment. "No! I don't believe it! Hufflepuff?!"
"It's doubtin' me word again, is it?"
"No, no, that's not what I meant. I mean, I can't believe it. Hufflepuff? Half of them are Muggle-born, and half of those who aren't are mixed blood. And they certainly aren't known for their . . . ambition and cunning!"
Quin shrugged. "Always seemed like a daft thing to me, these Houses. But none o' me business. Just seems that most people are a mix o' this an' that, an' doesn't strike me as particularly healthy to divide kids up like that so young. 'Tis one o' me reservations about sendin' me own kids there. But Aileen went, and she turned out just fine."
"What was she?" Minerva asked.
"You mean what House? So you want to be judgin' me late wife, one o' the finest witches to ever grace this earth?"
"No, it's just, if she was a Gamp . . . I was wondering if she were in Slytherin, too. It would be another surprise, that's all."
"Why? Bah . . . no point in arguin' about such nonsense. She was Ravenclaw. Seems the best o' the Houses, to me, an' no offense to Gryffindor."
"None taken." Hmm. Hufflepuff?
"I should be off to check on me kids. You're invited, if you'd like to come. Alroy seemed to take a shine to you. He said you talked to him like a real person, not like he was 'half daft,'" Quin said with a grin.
"I should hope so. But, no, I don't think I will this afternoon, Quin. I think I'll read my letter and perhaps take a nap before dinner."
"May I escort you to dinner? I will be properly attired and attempt to behave meself," he said with a twinkle, reminding her of the previous evening.
Minerva smiled. "Yes, I'd like that. If you don't see me downstairs at the first gong, feel free to come fetch me."
Minerva went back to her bedroom and took pleasure in fixing herself a cup of peppermint tea from Albus's little care package, then curled up in one of the armchairs with it and her letter. Minerva had been surprised to see that Poppy was writing to her so soon after having sent her first "rescue owl" she hadn't anticipated another one until the next morning. She held her tea mug in one hand and unfolded the letter to read what Poppy had to say that couldn't wait until the next day.
"9 July
"Dear Minerva,
"Whatever you do while you are there, avoid Valerianna Yaxley like scrofungulus! She is a nasty piece of work. I am not surprised that you say she took an instant dislike to you, but do not pay any attention to anything she says! She's likely to say some very ugly things to you, given half the chance. Do not give her that chance, do not listen to her, and, most especially, do not respond to any of her provocations she will try to provoke you, Minerva, please just take my word for it.
"I wish I had known that witch was going to be there, or I would have warned you in advance. I didn't think that the Gamps would have her around, but perhaps they couldn't avoid it. Stick with Gertie and that Quin fellow. Gertie has mentioned him to me before, and he sounds decent, if a bit peculiar. Don't go near Valerianna, particularly not alone, but if you must be in the same room with her, at dinner or such, just smile and act like she's speaking Greek (you don't speak Greek, do you?). Anyway, just act as though she's saying nothing at all, or it's complete gibberish. It will be!
"I hope this week isn't a complete disaster for you. Well, they say that what doesn't kill us makes us stronger so just think of this as an exercise, or something. I hope that Gertie has the sense to keep you two apart.
"I will send you another letter in the morning, in case you want to leave. If you'd like, you can come visit me at Violet's. I will be here at least until Sunday.
"Take care of yourself, and if you decide to stay, please write me tonight and let me know you are surviving. I am sure you are. But I am nervous anyway.
"Poppy."
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954 Reviews | 6.45/10 Average
Okay...I think it's time for a Gertrude and Malcolm story. If you got any ideas like the proposal or her pregnancy I'm all ears. I've read this story 100 times but just wanted to say that this story is great every single time I read it, it always feels like my first time.
I have a love hate relationship with this fic. I do not enjoy stories where people spend time angsting when they could just tell each other how they feel and be done with it, no matter how it plays out. I enjoyed this because of Quin. If you hadn't had he or Getrude, this story wouldn't have worked for me. The witty dialogue is what kept me interested to the end. Well done with your OCs.
Review in progress... :-)
Putting myself in Albus's shoes - from his vantage point of what had played out between them - I can very well imagine how awfully guilty he must have felt, how repulsed by his own behaviour, how defeated, with no option but to assume things were over. Really sad and horrible, for him.
But then Gertrude...oh, how I love that woman! Her questioning of Albus, her coclusions: brilliant! Utterly love that small scene! :-)
Forgot to rate...
Must have been very upsetting, embarrassing and worrying for Albus indeed, to have found a young woman attractive for a few moments, only to find out that she's actually his student. I can so imagine how he must have been shocked and appalled by himself.
I loved seeing these two lively, bright and, both of them, determined and decisive girls: Melina seeing the need to educate on healing spells, before even being allowed to hold a wand; and Minerva, trying to take matters in hand concerning Albus's health as well as the running of Murdoch's household. Yet, I always find Melina bordering on overpowering and you already show that here, in her as a young girl.
"And what a pity we can’t hold hands as innocently as Melina does." I love this observation, which, I'd say, actually counts for all of us.
You made me realize it's a bit sad, isn't it? Holding hands is comforting and gives a sense of closeness, but once you're above a certain age (and experience?), there's just no way the innocence will ever come back, unless it's holding hands with a small child. Which means that I, and most likely by far the most of us, hardly ever hold hands anymore. Alas.
Very nice, serious chapter and probably decisive in Albus's later 'hesitations' towards Minerva. Right???
Soap in the eyes indeed! Malcolm is such a twit ... its hard not to like him at least a little ... still ... I think Gertrude is far too big a catch for the likes of this McGonagall ... *snorts*
Forgive me Madam Raven ... I'm bound to get uppity with at least one of your characters.
Even with my aggravation, I did enjoy Malcolm and Gertie's banter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Awww, you'd like Gertrude to be single and still all shades of mourning? Poor Malcolm! He adores her, you know! :-) ;-) He also amuses her & brings her some vitality. Glad you enjoyed their banter! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I know I know ... and you know why, of course ... his arrogance and swagger embarrass me because .... yes ... exactly ... reminds me of a younger version of ... someone foolish ... not saying whoooooo ... *whistles innocently*
And of course we can't have Gertie in all shades of black forever! She needs her lime green suits - just like in this chapter - she redresses in three shades of ... GREEN! Gertrude Spring! Seee! That's where I got the lime green from! *grins*
That and I would want her to find joyous love ... I love Gertie too much not to. Even if it has to be Malcolm. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There's a place in life for people who are a bit brash. Aside from their entertainment value! haha! But don't be down on those characteristics of yourself. You've noted yourself that you've learned to tone down a bit and not just say whatever pops into your head! :-)Yep, Malcolm got her to wear green, green, and green, and look all nice and cheerful. I was pretty sure you were remembering her post-Malcolm greenness when you mentioned the lime green suit. hee!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I will share something simple I have learned. Humility is a virtue and pride is a liability. *nods* And I has lots more liabilities than virtues, me thinks.
I so love this chapter. The dragon riding is just so incredible ... and then the duel is ABSOLUTELY awesome! I love the giant field of sunflowers and the fireball - aka - fire don't hurt phoenixes - snap you're stunned, Buddy bit.
Give me a Madam!
Give me a Raven!
Ravenclaw's Madam Raven!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Holy COW! Bloo knows English!
Dragons Dragons Dragons!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It was a stunner to get any review from Bloo that didn't consist of "Cheers for posting." It became so tiresome to keep opening TPP review alerts, go to the review page, and discover yet another of the exact same three words. I didn't want to turn off alerts altogether because I was still getting a lot of real reviews for fics that were still WIPs at the time.I'm glad you enjoyed the dragon riding and the "whoops, you're Stunned!" at the end. :-)Thanks!
Madam Raven, remind me which house Siofre was sorted into?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's Ravenclaw. And Lydia is Slytherin. Siofre's first husband - Merwyn's father - was Gryffindor, and her second husband Herbert was Hufflepuff.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I thought she was Ravenclaw. Still no idea who Lydia is ... I know her daughter is Maisy, or Maise or something like that.
Forgive me, I get all the McGonagalls and their affiliates, across yours, mine and Squibby's universes confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Lydia's her sister-in-law, remember? Murdoch Tyree's wife. She's a major CSG character. (I thought you were reading that at one point, but I must have misremembered.)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
No I was reading it (you are correct), but in the last six months I've lost about 40 IQ points and have forgotten nearly everything I used to know ... so I am behind on RaM-verse extensions. Bad me ...
*sighs* Albus ... Albus ... Albus ... most romantic man to ever grace .... fiction. If only men could be so romantic anymore. That poem is beautiful ... I am guessing, since there are no foot-notes, that it is one of your originals?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yep, Albus and I wrote that way early in the story. I'm not much of a poet, but I thought it felt and sounded like a poem that Albus would write.
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“Ah, well, it’s best not to rush things. Enjoy it, Minerva, savour it. He’s likely nervous, as well. The age difference is probably causing him far more concern than it is you. His perspective is different from yours, and as I said when you were here on Friday, he is from a different time and place. He also has had experiences in his life that you and I, fortunately, have been spared, and that I can only dimly imagine.”
*snip*
I really like that. That shows uncommon wisdom.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“No, simply . . . odd, disorienting, I suppose,” Albus replied, though Minerva thought that he did look tired and drawn. “It was so long ago, it is almost like remembering a dream. Collum was actually almost five years younger than I, in Aberforth’s year, but he was in my House, and I was also good friends with Perseus. Perseus and Crispinian were cousins of some sort, and Crispy was great friends with Collum, who was only a couple years younger than he. Anyway, for some reason – I don’t remember why, now – we were all here for a few days that summer after my NEWTs. I had just married, and I remember that Dervilia persuaded me that we should accept the invitation because I would be beginning my apprenticeship soon and would have much less time for my friends. I hadn’t been inclined to, wanting to spend the time with her, and feeling that they were all still children while I was a married man – at all of eighteen! But we actually had a good time. I remember that the girls – Siofre and Gwyn – visited once for the day and gave Dervilia some relief from our masculine company.” Now Minerva was beginning to feel peculiar. Gwynllian and Siofre, the “girls,” were her grandmothers. Perseus was Gwynllian’s brother, and Crispinian was her other grandfather. For a dizzying moment, Minerva felt as though she had stepped back in time, to a point when her Great-uncle Perseus was just a boy, friends with Crispinian, not knowing that Crispinian would marry his sister, Gwyn, nor that Collum would marry Siofre and die in an accident when his son, Merwyn, was just a baby. And Albus and Dervilia . . . that their happiness would be very short-lived.
*snip*
Woah ... yeah that would make me uncomfortable as well ... that is ... well that is just ... well ... my head would be swimming if I were Minerva.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it is dizzying for Minerva, and it gives her an appreciation for some of the points her mother made, and for how and why Albus would not be completely comfortable yet.
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“Hold still, Merwyn! Your collar is all askew here,” Egeria said with slight impatience.“Don’t see why we have to get all dressed up,” Merwyn grumbled. “I thought what I was wearing this morning was perfectly acceptable.” “Those old brown robes make you look like Friar Tuck,” Egeria grumbled back.“They do not! Besides, I thought you liked my brown robes. That’s what you said the last time I wore them!” “No, it isn’t. I said I liked taking them off of you. There is a difference,” Egeria said with a smile. She patted his tummy and added, “And you are right, you don’t look like Friar Tuck. You have a much nicer figure – though heaven only knows why, when you sit behind your desk all day or in the library with your feet up.”
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Tee hee hee ... now Madam Raven, don't take my head off here, as you know I tend to picture your characters in my mind regardless of how you describe him ... but I thought you'd like to know how I picture Merwyn ... and here I see that I was wrong.
I picture Merwyn of average height, black hair that is now full of silver and white, and a very round figure ... probably from all that sitting behind his desk.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva laughed. “Fly without a broom? No, haven’t mastered that, wouldn’t try. It’s not possible.”It was Albus’s turn to laugh. “Not impossible, merely very rare in this part of the world. And the Ministry would like to keep it that way. Hard to regulate that sort of thing. Most witches and wizards couldn’t accomplish it, anyway.”Minerva stopped and looked back at him. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Not at all. I rarely do it, myself, although when I was with Master Nyima, I became quite adept. I would sometimes fly with Mother Dragon. I think that is one reason she took a liking for me, actually.”Minerva looked at him a moment, digesting this information, then she shook her head and continued the climb. Well, she hadn’t believed it was possible to become as completely invisible as Albus could, either. In fact, at the time, she had actually thought that she had always believed becoming invisible was as impossible as flight without a Charmed object. Apparently, it was, though not the way that she had believed. She should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore.
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*grins* I like this.
See ... we HP fans know that Dumbledore is brilliant and amazingly powerful ... but just to say it, well its a bit of a let-down, and harder to take as fact. But showing it ... especially in a sideways manner such as this ... an off-handed type of author's compliment, well that seems to me, to be perfection. I can truly appreciate his amazing talents here ... especially considering that Minerva (who is particularly powerful and talented) is amazed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you liked that. :-)I remember knowing that I would slip that in way back when I wrote the chapter where Dumbledore invisibly observes Minerva doing her tutoring session, and I always envisioned it happening at her family home -- I'd originally been going to have him actually fly, but without a good reason, it would have felt too stilted, especially since his Animagus form flies, so that would be more natural.
*shakes head* Malcolm, Malcolm, Malcolm ... there is such a thing as tact .... *groans* sadly .... I think I get most frustrated with Malcolm because he reminds me of myself ... er ... I should clarify, my younger self, who was obnoxiously blunt and said what ever came to my mind ... and I likely came off as gruff and uncouth as Malcolm does ... so its an annoying reminder of just how ungracious I can be. *grumbles*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
FINALLY! Hooray for Quin and Wilspy ... *steals Wilspy and takes her to the island where she's stashed Gertrude*
I thought about stealing Quin but ... I am on this celibacy kick ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Oooohhhhh noooooes! *MMADfan enlists Quin to help find and steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*Quin turns on the charm , turning
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
's celibate knees to jelly so she can't chase after MMADfan as she steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*floats like a jellyfish (uber slow) across the water while she sees Quin, Gertrude and Wilspy sail off on the boat. Is quite sure Wilspy and Gertrude are crying and waving in mourning as Quin steals them both from the enchanted island*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Heheheh!!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its an island enchanted to have no mosquitos, sand flies, fire ants or thorny trees/bushes but lots of beautiful fish, both shell and fin, and a huge variety of fruit trees and veggies year round, and maintains a perfect temperature and humidity level ... *sighs*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I wanna go there!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Me too!
This is the chapter that I want to throttle Minerva and grant Quin sainthood ... honestly ... what she does to that poor man ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know. Minerva was not at her best there, was she? Poor Quin!
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Finally, at midnight, he went down to his office and opened the cupboard in which he kept his Charmed parchments. He rarely used them, and he hesitated to now. It would be prying . . . it would be for his own personal gain, not for school business. But he cast the necessary spells, and the results were clear and easy to read, there were so few people in the castle. Johannes was in his bedroom in Ravenclaw Tower. Gertrude and Malcolm . . . were both together. In her rooms. In her bedroom, in fact. Well, that answered one question that he hadn’t wished to ask. Johannes’s name was steady, but Gertrude’s and Malcolm’s names seemed to pulse, becoming thicker and bolder, then returning to the normal script. He could imagine what that might mean, and he averted his eyes. But Minerva’s name was not on the list. There was Fawkes listed. For some reason, he was perched in the Astronomy Tower. But no other being or creature was named. Albus still hadn’t set the wards properly to detect the ghosts. It had been a low priority, and he had never managed to get to it.
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OOOOOOOOOooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT's how the Mara's Map was created! Or at least, that is one way ... nice little intry there, Madam Raven!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the magic that allows those Charmed parchments is the magic that was tapped into to create the Marauders' map. It's part of the magic that was being tested and fixed that summer when Minerva helped with the wards, changing back and forth into her Tabby self to see whether the wards detected her identity when she turned into her Animagus form -- the wards had been so damaged that they no longer detected someone who was in Animagus form.Many years later, this became important for seeing Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black on the map. Also, by the time that he enlisted Minerva's help, Dumbledore had already fixed the ward that detected the true identity of someone who was disguised using Polyjuice -- meaning that during GoF, Potter saw that B. Crouch was searching Snape's office. Of course, he thought that it was B. Crouch senior, not the crazy son who had supposedly died in Azkaban. The fake Moody (Barty Crouch) took the map from Harry so that Harry wouldn't notice that Moody never left his office (where he was stuck in the trunk), and that where Moody apparently was, Crouch actually was.
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“I thought I was being seduced, but it has been a while . . . I may have been wrong,” Gertrude answered, her breath warm upon his face.
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I just love her wit.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She is one sharp Slytherin, and she loves answering a question at a different level than it was being asked. :-)
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“Yes, you mentioned that at the party. You are aware of how Gertrude’s husband died, though?” Minerva asked.
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What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Goodness - Minerva has a serious voyeur problem, doesn't she? Naughty!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's concerned that Malcolm might bring up a sensitive subject in an inappropriate way, for one, but mostly, she's worried that Malcolm might just be in it for the fun and that Gertrude is vulnerable if he just up and leaves. Gertrude hasn't formed any other attachment since the trauma of having her husband killed in such a gruesome manner, as far as Minerva knows, so Minerva's worred that Gertrude is opening herself up in a rare manner and that her brother might just be too cavalier with her feelings. (I'd have to reread the section, but that's what I remember o fher motivation.)I'm sure Minerva wishes she had better timing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
As I continued to read, Minerva's concern was apparent, as usual, in my typical Gryffie fashion - we leap before we look ... or rather, we shoot our mouths off before we have all the facts. *sighs*
Oh hooooo! Malcolm may think he doesn't want to become too ... attached ... but his heroic defense of 'good' Slytherins sure tells me something or other about a recent acquaintance of his.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is definitely defensive here! Seems he is becoming more than a little attached to a certain Slytherin!
I so love Gertrude. I want a Gertrude in my life! *steals Gertrude and runs away*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*MMADfan puts on her running shoes and jogs after
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“It was a long time ago, as I said, that it all began. When I was a child, really, I suppose. I would like to be able to say with some modesty that my time as a student was unremarkable, but it was not. I excelled at whatever I put my hand, mind, and magic to. I was eager to learn, even more eager than you were – indeed, the Sorting Hat very nearly put me in Ravenclaw, but it decided, in the end, that my nature and my need were Gryffindor. “I chafed at what I saw were restrictions on me and my progress. I found most of my teachers wanting, and believed them dull and unimaginative. Nonetheless, I wanted to please them, and please them I usually did. But I pushed every boundary and stretched it. If it weren’t for the guidance and firm hand of Professor Futhark, I might have become even more insufferable than I no doubt was. But despite my general attitude, I found myself with friends of all types, and, with a rather foolish and overblown sense of my own importance, I came to believe myself not only advanced academically but also better than my peers and their natural leader. And, I suppose, I was – academically advanced and a leader, not better than they,” he clarified.
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I really like this ... it sounds very Albus to me ... save for the Ravenclaw bit *grins* but sometimes you just gotta tout yer house, right?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that sometimes, it's really clear that there's one House that a witch or wizard belongs in, and other times, there are others that would suit, too. I think Albus could have fit in with Ravenclaw -- he certainly pursued knowledge, both Light and Dark -- but there were bits of his personality that drove him that were Gryffindor that shaped his intellect and his use of it. (I can't have written that part of the monologue and really substituted "Hufflepuff" -- though I think that with a few tweaks to the text, Slytherin could have been included as an option -- he is a wily wizard, after all!)I'm glad you like it. It's one of the reasons that I think this section, these chapters, work better as a first-person recounting than as I had originally written it -- in the third person as a kind of flashback. We get to see Albus's personality then and now, and his own take on his character as a teen and young man, and how it developed.
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“Not a bit of trouble, my dear man, not a bit of it! A friend of the Headmaster’s is a friend of mine, I’d like to think! And dear Gertrude, of course.” He winked at Quin. “She’s quite the witch, isn’t she? Knew each other as students of course. Had a bit of a crush on me at the time, I think.”
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I have to laugh at this ... I just do ... he's a younger and less wise Slughorn than the Sluggy I know from HBP, so it does make sense that he'd brag a bit louder and exaggerate a bit stronger ... but saying that of one's co-worker - wow! That takes some ... something ...
You know I have a soft spot for Slughorn I think it would be fun to pick his brain and study him ... especially try to determine what conditions cause him to puff out his chest the most ... call me weird.
I also love any and all descriptions of the various houses, since we only see two of them in the movies - Slytherin and Gryffindor ... never did get a chance to see Ravenclaw's or Hufflepuff's ... shame really. I'd love to see the Badger room, all decked out in black and yellow - I think I'd feel like I was snug inside a giant bee hive! Oh and I would imagine there would be plenty of honey.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, Sluggy's sense of grandiosity is quite at its peak here. And it's not yet been burst by the emergence of the Slytherin "Death Eater sect" led by one of his former star pupils. So he's amiably pompous, tries a bit too hard to chum-up to Quin, and yet there is a part of him that genuinely likes other people (in my view) and simply wants them to like him in return. I really enjoyed envisioning the Slytherin dorms and some of the more decent Slytherins in "The Sorting of Susie Sefton." It was fun to look at them from a different POV than we had in the books, and yet try to make it all still recognizably Slytherin.It would be neat to experience Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. And I wonder if Hufflepuff would be all honey with no stings attached ...
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“It is worth far more than that, Horace, as you know,” Gertrude said, “and even if you offered what it might fetch on the open market, you know the Headmaster still wouldn’t part with it. Your grumbling about it every time he generously chooses to share it is most unseemly and detracts from our enjoyment.”
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HAHAHAHAHA! Stop complainin and enjoy the bloody mead, yeh buggar!
I do like this chapter, I love just the idea that being a head of house, or even just a teacher, creates some sort of bond, or weave, in the magical wards and structure of the castle. And its nice to see the faculty supporting each other.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh and, I also love lore with the Sorting Hat - for some reason I find that 'character' of Rowling's to be fascinating.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I like to imagine that each teacher in the history of Hogwarts, especially Heads of Houses and Headmasters/mistresses, leave some of themselves, some of their magic, in the wards, helping to strengthen the school long after they're gone. That would be a heritage.The Sorting Hat is fascinating, and I think it is intriguing to contemplate whether it's sentient or not, and what its existence says about sentience, at least in the HP/Hogwarts universe.
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Besides, when I first began teaching, it wasn’t long after Reginald died. It didn’t feel as though it had been long, anyway. I was not particularly concerned with what I looked like. It became a habit. And now I’m too old to be worried about such things.”
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Oh how I can relate to that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, I think Gertrude is quite human here. But it's interesting how when Malcolm comes into her life, she begins to take an interest in her clothes again! Or at least, they reflect a cheerier self. :-)
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Albus smiled and sliced them each a piece. The cake itself was chocolate, and it was filled with raspberries and thick whipped cream. There was more whipped cream, Minerva thought, than cake. The icing was chocolate, one layer of an almost brittle icing, then a softer chocolate butter cream over that in decorative curlicues and rosettes. Whole raspberries topped it all off.
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GAH! I want a cake like that for my birthday - ANY birthday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Me too!
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“All right. Are you finished, then? Would you like more wine? I have another bottle – ”Albus laughed. “Are you getting me in practice for your brothers?”Minerva smiled. “I don’t think I could drink any more, either, but I thought I would offer. We can have some cognac with our dessert.”Albus pushed back from the table. “We could try out your wireless,” he suggested.“Good!” Minerva would be agreeable to almost anything he suggested right now.
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I'll bet she would!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva looked up at him and was struck by how very attractive he was. In that moment, she would have agreed that the sound of monkeys banging ashcans was nice. Fortunately, this was the station’s “music for the dinner hour,” and really was pleasant.
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*bursts out laughing, barking in fact*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Minerva is in a very agreeable mood!