XVII: Minerva’s Mission
Chapter 17 of 141
MMADfanMinerva recalls a mission she undertook for the Ministry after she left Hogwarts.
Beginning of Part Four.
PART FOUR
XVII: Minerva's Mission
Minerva was up to her elbows in parchment at the Ministry that cold January afternoon in 1945. She wasn't doing what she would have wanted to, following her NEWTs and leaving Hogwarts. If there had been no war, unquestionably she would have pursued an apprenticeship in Transfiguration. There was, however, a war, and although the Daily Prophet had been predicting its imminent end for the last three years, Minerva knew when she left Hogwarts that there was little chance of the war ending well unless all capable witches and wizards did what they could to bring it to a close preferably one that did not involve Grindelwald controlling all magical and Muggle governments in Europe. So she had applied to the Ministry, as had so many of her classmates. She believed that with her skills in Transfiguration, Charms, and Defence particularly the advanced knowledge of wards she had picked up while working with Dumbledore she would be a valuable asset in the fight against Grindelwald. But she had ended up here, in this little office in the Department for International Magical Cooperation, War Division, researching and recommending charms at the best of times and sorting requisitions for Charmed objects at the worst of time. As she sorted requisitions, she had thought that particular day was one of the worst of times. Then, rather than one of the runty little Scops Owls, which were used by all the other Departments who sent her requisitions, flapping in to make a delivery, she received a purple parchment aeroplane requesting her immediate presence in the office of the Minister for Magic. Her day only got worse.
When Minerva arrived, she was ushered, without a word of explanation, into the large conference room adjacent to the Minister's office. To her astonishment, it appeared that the actual Prime Minister was in the room, as well as three people who appeared to be Muggle officers or were they wizards in uniform? and four Aurors, one of whom Minerva recognised as young Scrimgeour, who was fast making a name for himself as a dedicated and fearsome opponent of all those who supported Grindelwald. They were dressed in muted red cloaks and rusty-coloured trousers and blouses, wartime dress that had been adopted in the last year to ease the Aurors' ability to pass back and forth between the wizarding and Muggle worlds. Minerva thought they still would seem rather conspicuous walking down a Muggle street, but no one had ever asked for her opinion on the subject.
At her entrance, the men who had been standing and examining a map on the far wall, turned, and those who were seated at the table, including Minister Ouellette and the Prime Minister, stood.
The new Minister for Magic, Oliver Ouellette, whom Minerva had met twice in situations in which she thought she would be highly forgettable to someone in his position, greeted her, "We are very glad you could join us, Miss McGonagall."
He came around the table and motioned to one of the Aurors to pull out a chair for her. The chair he indicated was to his right and across from the Prime Minister, who still stood by his chair, chewing an unlit cigar, waiting for her to be seated.
"This is who we've been waitin' for?" asked one of the uniform-clad men. Minerva thought he had an American accent, but maybe it was Australian. "They've brought us a schoolgirl?! We don't need somebody makin' us coffee! This is a serious " He was interrupted by a glare from the Prime Minister, and he ceased his protest immediately. Well, thought Minerva, at least this Yank is well-trained, even if he is disgustingly rude.
"Colonel, Miss McGonagall is a graduate of one of England's finest educational institutions. True, it may be a slightly unorthodox school, but I have been assured by the Ministry for Magic that she is fully qualified, and not a schoolgirl. And if your invective was aimed at her gender rather than her qualifications, I suggest you reconsider. My mother was an American woman, therefore I doubt, sir, that you are unacquainted with the many strengths, as well as the virtues, with which a woman may be endowed. And may I also remind you that you are here as a courtesy to General Eisenhower, which courtesy may be withdrawn at any moment. And I will not hesitate to have these gentlemen in red Obliviate you before you leave." A lesser man would have asked if he had made himself clear; Churchill merely gazed at the American from beneath a stern brow.
Minerva looked on as the Colonel turned beet red, his Adam's apple bobbing, and was surprised when he turned toward her.
"My apologies, Miss Mc- . . . um, apologies."
"Now, if we are done wasting time here, let's get down to it," said Minister Ouellette, nodding curtly to the colonel, who Minerva could now recognize was wearing a different uniform from the other two men, whose uniforms appeared to be from the British Army and the Royal Air Force, respectively. When she had begun working at the Ministry, Minerva had been given a pamphlet with pictures of all the different uniforms worn by Allied troops and explanations of the various ranks, but she hadn't looked at it very carefully. Her menial job never brought her into contact with any Muggles, so it had seemed rather pointless at the time.
Minerva had barely got over being startled by the company in which she found herself and the peculiar reception she had received, when she found out why she had been summoned to the Minister's office so precipitously.
"To put it briefly, Albus Dumbledore is missing." Minerva went cold at the Minister's words, but forced herself to pay attention to what the Minister was saying. She would let herself react later, she thought.
"From what we know, he had successfully completed a mission in co-operation with American and British Muggle forces. Two Aurors had accompanied him. They were supposed to be a sort of guard for him, although we all know how well that usually turns out." There were a few grins around the table. "Your Professor Dumbledore has a tendency to leave his Aurors behind if he believes them unnecessary, or inconvenient, since, as he once expressed it to me, he's 'an old coot' and it was better to leave the young men out of any danger, if possible. It is clear that he left the British camp in the company of the two Aurors and two British soldiers, a Lieutenant what was his name? Rogers, and a private, who was driving the vehicle."
"A jeep," added the British Army officer, unhelpfully.
"Yes, just so. Well, perhaps at this point, Auror Scrimgeour might be able to recount the details better than I."
"Ah, no, sir, you are doing very well," replied the Auror, although he proceeded with the narrative. "We know that Professor Dumbledore and the four men he was with inadvertently entered an area in which there was some German troop movement. At the time they had left camp, the most recent intelligence indicated that their route was clear. By the time they went missing, this was no longer the case. We also know that the jeep in which they were riding either drove over a landmine or was hit by a mortar. From the damage to the jeep, it appears to have been the former rather than the latter. That evidence also accords with other information that we have received."
"For heaven's sake, man, get to the point!" The RAF officer was clearly restless at the recitation of facts he already knew.
Without missing a beat, Scrimgeour continued. "The plan in place was that the driver and the officer would drop Dumbledore and the two Aurors near a particular crossroads, where, ostensibly, they would meet up with other members of a special, secret force that is the cover that we normally give to explain the presence of Aurors in Muggle battle zones in actuality, the three wizards would wait until the jeep was well out of sight and then Apparate to our headquarters outside of Amiens, where they could then Apparate or Portkey to their next assignment or, in Professor Dumbledore's case, back to London.
"We know that is not what happened. It looks as though the three wizards left the jeep just before the two roads intersected. It appears to have been fortuitous that they did so since the jeep was destroyed as it entered the crossroad."
"How do you know the three got out before the jeep . . . exploded?" asked Minerva. "If they are missing, isn't it possible that they were all . . . ." Minerva couldn't continue with that thought.
"We know because of certain evidence, Miss McGonagall," said Churchill, evidently also impatient with Scrimgeour's long-winded explanation. "First, we found the jeep and the remains of the two British soldiers. Those remains make it clear that they were in the jeep when it exploded. We also know that Dumbledore did not Apparate away, because we received a message from him. Dumbledore always carried one of those Portkeys with him, in the event that he were ever unable to Apparate."
Minerva marvelled at the ease with which the Muggle Prime Minister used these wizarding terms he seemed to have familiarised himself with the wizarding world to a greater extent than she'd thought possible.
"It was imperative to our government and by 'our,' Miss McGonagall, I speak of His Majesty's entire government, not just the Ministry for Magic that Dumbledore fall into the hands of neither the Germans nor of that rogue wizard, Grindelwald. Your Professor Dumbledore, however, is truly the best of the best of men that this small Island produces: brave in facing whatever lies ahead, unwavering in his conviction to follow the path of Right, and without peer in his readiness to sacrifice his all for the sake of freedom, and the hope of freedom, not for himself alone, but for his comrades and for us all."
As the Prime Minister spoke of Dumbledore's "readiness to sacrifice his all," dread grew in Minerva's heart. They had said "missing" when she had arrived; was that a mere euphemism for "captured" or worse? And why would they want her here? To be sure, her interest in his well-being was great, but these men had no way of knowing that, nor would they waste their time with such long explanations if they merely wished to inform her of her mentor's disappearance or capture. Minerva felt she was scarcely breathing as she waited for Churchill to finish his explanation, which seemed to her as long-winded as Scrimgeour's.
"I am no wizard, Miss McGonagall, but from what I understand of these things, the Portkey in Dumbledore's possession was created so that only he could activate it, and none other, and only he could actually be transported with it. It also has the capacity to carry only one person. These measures were taken in order that, should it fall into the wrong hands, it could not be used to infiltrate our secret wizarding headquarters in France."
Despite his limited understanding of Portkeys (although how many wizards actually understood them?) after all, a Portkey doesn't "carry" you like a motorcar Minerva was struck that Churchill spoke of the wizarding world and the wizarding government as though they were a mere off-shoot of the Muggle world and as though he actually exercised some authority over them or as though he at least had some interest and influence on them. This was highly unusual, from what Minerva understood.
"But apparently when the jeep exploded," the Prime Minister continued, "Dumbledore and the two Aurors were still very close to the vehicle and were caught in the blast. One of the Aurors had been badly injured. Somehow Dumbledore altered his Portkey to allow it to transport someone other than himself. He did not, or was unable to, alter it to allow more than one person to travel with it, however. The injured Auror appeared in British wizarding headquarters outside of Amiens approximately," the Prime Minister drew out his watch, "five hours ago. On his person, in addition to the Portkey, was a note from Dumbledore, written with a biro on a scrap of paper. It indicated his current position, but noted that the explosion had drawn the attention of German soldiers in the area. We believe he may have come under fire, although we do not know that. We do know that some of the blood on the paper, according to your medical wizards, belonged to him and not to the young Auror whose life he saved by giving him the Portkey."
Minerva had thought she was cold before, but at these final words, her blood seemed to turn to ice in her veins.
At that point, the sandy-haired American colonel picked up the story with his peculiar drawl. "As soon as we got word that he was missin', we sent out a search party, bein' as we were the closest. Our platoon found the jeep with the two dead Brits, but no sign of General Dumbledore or the other man. We were only able to make a brief search since it was daylight, and the jerries were too thick on the ground. There was evidence that the area had come under fire recently my men found bullets and shell casings though nothin' that would tell us whether the men fought back, or whether they escaped or were captured."
"At least Dumbledore must have been injured, that was clear enough from the blood," continued Scrimgeour, taking over again, "and probably fairly badly, because he didn't Apparate. Although, of course it is possible that the second Auror was too injured to transport by Side-Along-Apparition and Dumbledore wouldn't leave him behind."
Minerva, finding her voice now, at what appeared to be the end of their story, said, "You keep referring to the two Aurors who were with him, but haven't said who they were. Who were they? And are they trustworthy?"
The oldest of the Aurors, a short man with a small mustache and a round belly, spoke for the first time. "They are completely trust-worthy, Miss McGonagall; I believe you know them both. The one to whom Dumbledore gave his Portkey is a young man named Alastor Moody."
Minerva nodded; she remembered him well. He'd been a year behind her at Hogwarts, but was almost two years younger than she. She was shocked they would have sent someone so young into such a dangerous situation.
"The other, whom I believe you also know," he continued, "is named Murphy Colin? no, Carson Murphy."
"Carson?" Of all of the people who could have disappeared with Albus, to Minerva's mind, he was both the best and the worst. The best because Minerva knew him to be intelligent, brave, and true; the worst because she was already sick with worry about Albus. She now had another friend whose unknown fate made her stomach roil.
"I thought you would know him you were both the same year at Hogwarts, weren't you?" he asked.
"We were both prefects," she replied, nodding, aware of how little that said of their friendship.
"Let us get to the reason that we brought you here, Miss McGonagall," said Minister Ouellette. "We know of your Animagus ability."
Of course you do, thought Minerva, it was on my application to the Ministry! And you stuck me in a windowless office sorting requisitions.
"We had thought to make use of it prior to this, but, well, perhaps the time wasn't right. . . . Are we correct in believing that you" here the Minister consulted a parchment in front of him "become a domestic cat?" At these words, all three of the Muggle officers goggled at her. Churchill's expression did not change.
"Yes, sir, a tabby cat."
"We really must make Animagus registration mandatory when this is all over," Ouellette muttered to himself, making a note on the parchment. "Am I also correct in understanding that you worked with Albus Dumbledore on a special, shall we say, classified project?"
"I don't know what you're talking about, sir, unless you mean the extra credit Transfiguration projects I did with him." Minerva had never forgotten her promise to her mentor that summer before her sixth year never to reveal the nature of the warding project to anyone. He had never included the Minister of Magic, the Prime Minister of England, or any of these other men, as exceptions to that promise.
"Capital, my dear, capital," Churchill said, with the closest thing to a smile that Minerva had yet seen from the man, nodding to Minister Ouellette. "Yes, she is to be trusted."
Minerva had hoped that when Dumbledore had recommended her to the Ministry, he might have made some mention of her work with him on the wards. She thought it might have got her a better job, one where she could really make a contribution. She had always believed he hadn't said anything to anyone at the Ministry, and, given the nature of the warding project, she hadn't blamed him. Now it seemed that at least one or two of the people in the room might already know about her participation in it. Nonetheless, Minerva wasn't going to say anything more.
Ouellette gazed at her hard for a moment, then asked, "Is it fair to say, however, Miss McGonagall, that you are familiar with Professor Dumbledore's magic and perhaps with some of the ways he might use it in such a situation?"
"After studying with him so closely, and after training with him to become an Animagus, I can certainly say that I am familiar with his magic. As to any ways he might use it in this situation . . . I am not an Auror, sir, nor have I had any training from the Department of Magical Law Enforcement or the Department of Mysteries in battle tactics or espionage." Though not for want of trying, she thought, considering all her applications for transfer to another division.
"I understand that in your Animagus form, you take on some of its unique characteristics, such as improved night vision and a heightened sense of smell, that sort of thing," questioned Ouellette.
"Yes, sir."
"Well, then, Winston," he said, turning to the Prime Minister, "I believe we have the answers we need other than the final one, of course. What do you think?"
"Winston," who did not appear to appreciate the familiar address, bared a canine after the manner of the bulldog so many likened him to, and replied curtly, "Yes, she will do well, I believe." He turned to Minerva. "Miss McGonagall, may I ask that you serve your country, and your mentor, by entering German-occupied France and searching for no, finding your Professor Dumbledore?"
"Of course, sir," Minerva said without hesitation. "I am ready to leave at this moment." An entire hour had passed while they had been discussing the situation. Anything could have happened to Albus and to Carson in that time.
"It is still daylight, Miss McGonagall," said the unidentified pot-bellied Auror who had spoken earlier. "We have arranged a Portkey for you for dusk, which will bring you close to the crossroads where they were last known to be. You will be accompanied by an experienced Auror sorry, Scrimgeour, not this time," he said in response to that Auror's slight cry of protest. "In the meantime, I suggest you eat and study these maps. There are both Muggle and wizarding maps of the area surrounding the crossroads, covering a three mile radius."
"Only three miles?" Minerva interrupted.
"Yes. First, it is unlikely that, given the presence of the Muggle enemy troops and the fact that one or both of them is injured, they could have made it any further than that. Second, you will Portkey in after having Transfigured, and you will stay in your Animagus form until they are found, except for brief periods when you may need to speak with Auror Frankel. As a cat, there is a limit to the distance you can travel." Hmmpf, thought Minerva, he evidently doesn't know the first thing about cats.
"Third, we have intelligence that suggests Grindelwald may be active in the area just to the south of that. Unless they had no other choice or had become badly disoriented, I do not believe Dumbledore or Murphy would have headed in that direction. This surmise also narrows your focus. Let me make clear, Miss McGonagall, that Auror Frankel is in charge of this search. Unless he tells you otherwise, you are to cast no spells, and you are to remain in your Animagus form at all times unless it becomes necessary to communicate with him. Are you clear on this?" the little man asked.
"Of course, sir," she responded, thinking, Until he gets in the way of finding Albus, he can be 'in charge.'
"We chose Frankel not only because he is an experienced Auror, but also because he speaks fluent German, having German grandparents. He will be dressed in Muggle civilian clothes. In the unlikely event that you meet any Germans, you must remain in your Animagus form and stay hidden. He will communicate with them."
"And what if we meet any French?" asked Minerva, "Does he speak French, as well?"
"Only a little, but unless they are collaborators, that should pose no problem. He is also authorised to Obliviate anyone, as necessary, or to eliminate other 'obstacles' in whatever way he sees fit. I am more concerned with the possibility of your being discovered by any of Grindelwald's followers or any witch or wizard, for that matter, since he utilises somewhat extreme tactics to gain information from reluctant witnesses; thus, even coming to the notice of an innocent wizard could have negative consequences for both you and the witness."
As the little pot-bellied Auror was finishing his speech, Churchill began to rise from his seat. The other men around the table did so as well, and as Churchill approached her, Minerva got to her feet.
"His Majesty's government thanks you for your readiness to serve your country in her hour of need, Miss McGonagall. It is with pride that I extend this thanks, pride that you have risen to take this challenge which, unlooked for, Fate has presented you. It is the youth of our nation who expend their lives in defence of us all; the bloom of youth has not yet left your cheek, and, loathe though we are to send our young women where must needs we send our young men, that loathing diminishes neither our pride nor our gratitude. I wish you the strength and courage that God gave to you and Britain made in you, Miss McGonagall, and may Fortune, sister to Fate, lead you to your goal and then home again."
With that, the Prime Minister and three Muggles left the conference room. Minerva barely had a moment to wonder where they were going or how they would get there from the Ministry, when she was aware the Minister for Magic was speaking to her again.
"I shall leave you, then, in the capable hands of Auror Sprangle, and I will have my secretary send in some food for you. This is as good a room as any for you to prepare and wait for the Portkey." Sprangle must be the little fellow with the belly, thought Minerva.
Unbidden, the words "spero et expecto" came to Minerva's mind, the first password Albus had set her for his classroom. "Minister, Auror Sprangle, I was wondering . . . a request." Minerva hesitated, the others observing her, clearly wondering whether she was going to change her mind. "Could the Portkey be set to respond to the words 'spero et expecto'?" she asked.
"Certainly, Miss McGonagall, it makes no difference what the trigger word is." The Minister turned to Scrimgeour and said, "Go take care of the Portkeys now and then send up Frankel." Turning back to Minerva, he added, "you two should meet."
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954 Reviews | 6.45/10 Average
Okay...I think it's time for a Gertrude and Malcolm story. If you got any ideas like the proposal or her pregnancy I'm all ears. I've read this story 100 times but just wanted to say that this story is great every single time I read it, it always feels like my first time.
I have a love hate relationship with this fic. I do not enjoy stories where people spend time angsting when they could just tell each other how they feel and be done with it, no matter how it plays out. I enjoyed this because of Quin. If you hadn't had he or Getrude, this story wouldn't have worked for me. The witty dialogue is what kept me interested to the end. Well done with your OCs.
Review in progress... :-)
Putting myself in Albus's shoes - from his vantage point of what had played out between them - I can very well imagine how awfully guilty he must have felt, how repulsed by his own behaviour, how defeated, with no option but to assume things were over. Really sad and horrible, for him.
But then Gertrude...oh, how I love that woman! Her questioning of Albus, her coclusions: brilliant! Utterly love that small scene! :-)
Forgot to rate...
Must have been very upsetting, embarrassing and worrying for Albus indeed, to have found a young woman attractive for a few moments, only to find out that she's actually his student. I can so imagine how he must have been shocked and appalled by himself.
I loved seeing these two lively, bright and, both of them, determined and decisive girls: Melina seeing the need to educate on healing spells, before even being allowed to hold a wand; and Minerva, trying to take matters in hand concerning Albus's health as well as the running of Murdoch's household. Yet, I always find Melina bordering on overpowering and you already show that here, in her as a young girl.
"And what a pity we can’t hold hands as innocently as Melina does." I love this observation, which, I'd say, actually counts for all of us.
You made me realize it's a bit sad, isn't it? Holding hands is comforting and gives a sense of closeness, but once you're above a certain age (and experience?), there's just no way the innocence will ever come back, unless it's holding hands with a small child. Which means that I, and most likely by far the most of us, hardly ever hold hands anymore. Alas.
Very nice, serious chapter and probably decisive in Albus's later 'hesitations' towards Minerva. Right???
Soap in the eyes indeed! Malcolm is such a twit ... its hard not to like him at least a little ... still ... I think Gertrude is far too big a catch for the likes of this McGonagall ... *snorts*
Forgive me Madam Raven ... I'm bound to get uppity with at least one of your characters.
Even with my aggravation, I did enjoy Malcolm and Gertie's banter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Awww, you'd like Gertrude to be single and still all shades of mourning? Poor Malcolm! He adores her, you know! :-) ;-) He also amuses her & brings her some vitality. Glad you enjoyed their banter! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I know I know ... and you know why, of course ... his arrogance and swagger embarrass me because .... yes ... exactly ... reminds me of a younger version of ... someone foolish ... not saying whoooooo ... *whistles innocently*
And of course we can't have Gertie in all shades of black forever! She needs her lime green suits - just like in this chapter - she redresses in three shades of ... GREEN! Gertrude Spring! Seee! That's where I got the lime green from! *grins*
That and I would want her to find joyous love ... I love Gertie too much not to. Even if it has to be Malcolm. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There's a place in life for people who are a bit brash. Aside from their entertainment value! haha! But don't be down on those characteristics of yourself. You've noted yourself that you've learned to tone down a bit and not just say whatever pops into your head! :-)Yep, Malcolm got her to wear green, green, and green, and look all nice and cheerful. I was pretty sure you were remembering her post-Malcolm greenness when you mentioned the lime green suit. hee!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I will share something simple I have learned. Humility is a virtue and pride is a liability. *nods* And I has lots more liabilities than virtues, me thinks.
I so love this chapter. The dragon riding is just so incredible ... and then the duel is ABSOLUTELY awesome! I love the giant field of sunflowers and the fireball - aka - fire don't hurt phoenixes - snap you're stunned, Buddy bit.
Give me a Madam!
Give me a Raven!
Ravenclaw's Madam Raven!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Holy COW! Bloo knows English!
Dragons Dragons Dragons!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It was a stunner to get any review from Bloo that didn't consist of "Cheers for posting." It became so tiresome to keep opening TPP review alerts, go to the review page, and discover yet another of the exact same three words. I didn't want to turn off alerts altogether because I was still getting a lot of real reviews for fics that were still WIPs at the time.I'm glad you enjoyed the dragon riding and the "whoops, you're Stunned!" at the end. :-)Thanks!
Madam Raven, remind me which house Siofre was sorted into?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's Ravenclaw. And Lydia is Slytherin. Siofre's first husband - Merwyn's father - was Gryffindor, and her second husband Herbert was Hufflepuff.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I thought she was Ravenclaw. Still no idea who Lydia is ... I know her daughter is Maisy, or Maise or something like that.
Forgive me, I get all the McGonagalls and their affiliates, across yours, mine and Squibby's universes confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Lydia's her sister-in-law, remember? Murdoch Tyree's wife. She's a major CSG character. (I thought you were reading that at one point, but I must have misremembered.)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
No I was reading it (you are correct), but in the last six months I've lost about 40 IQ points and have forgotten nearly everything I used to know ... so I am behind on RaM-verse extensions. Bad me ...
*sighs* Albus ... Albus ... Albus ... most romantic man to ever grace .... fiction. If only men could be so romantic anymore. That poem is beautiful ... I am guessing, since there are no foot-notes, that it is one of your originals?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yep, Albus and I wrote that way early in the story. I'm not much of a poet, but I thought it felt and sounded like a poem that Albus would write.
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“Ah, well, it’s best not to rush things. Enjoy it, Minerva, savour it. He’s likely nervous, as well. The age difference is probably causing him far more concern than it is you. His perspective is different from yours, and as I said when you were here on Friday, he is from a different time and place. He also has had experiences in his life that you and I, fortunately, have been spared, and that I can only dimly imagine.”
*snip*
I really like that. That shows uncommon wisdom.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*
“No, simply . . . odd, disorienting, I suppose,” Albus replied, though Minerva thought that he did look tired and drawn. “It was so long ago, it is almost like remembering a dream. Collum was actually almost five years younger than I, in Aberforth’s year, but he was in my House, and I was also good friends with Perseus. Perseus and Crispinian were cousins of some sort, and Crispy was great friends with Collum, who was only a couple years younger than he. Anyway, for some reason – I don’t remember why, now – we were all here for a few days that summer after my NEWTs. I had just married, and I remember that Dervilia persuaded me that we should accept the invitation because I would be beginning my apprenticeship soon and would have much less time for my friends. I hadn’t been inclined to, wanting to spend the time with her, and feeling that they were all still children while I was a married man – at all of eighteen! But we actually had a good time. I remember that the girls – Siofre and Gwyn – visited once for the day and gave Dervilia some relief from our masculine company.” Now Minerva was beginning to feel peculiar. Gwynllian and Siofre, the “girls,” were her grandmothers. Perseus was Gwynllian’s brother, and Crispinian was her other grandfather. For a dizzying moment, Minerva felt as though she had stepped back in time, to a point when her Great-uncle Perseus was just a boy, friends with Crispinian, not knowing that Crispinian would marry his sister, Gwyn, nor that Collum would marry Siofre and die in an accident when his son, Merwyn, was just a baby. And Albus and Dervilia . . . that their happiness would be very short-lived.
*snip*
Woah ... yeah that would make me uncomfortable as well ... that is ... well that is just ... well ... my head would be swimming if I were Minerva.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it is dizzying for Minerva, and it gives her an appreciation for some of the points her mother made, and for how and why Albus would not be completely comfortable yet.
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“Hold still, Merwyn! Your collar is all askew here,” Egeria said with slight impatience.“Don’t see why we have to get all dressed up,” Merwyn grumbled. “I thought what I was wearing this morning was perfectly acceptable.” “Those old brown robes make you look like Friar Tuck,” Egeria grumbled back.“They do not! Besides, I thought you liked my brown robes. That’s what you said the last time I wore them!” “No, it isn’t. I said I liked taking them off of you. There is a difference,” Egeria said with a smile. She patted his tummy and added, “And you are right, you don’t look like Friar Tuck. You have a much nicer figure – though heaven only knows why, when you sit behind your desk all day or in the library with your feet up.”
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Tee hee hee ... now Madam Raven, don't take my head off here, as you know I tend to picture your characters in my mind regardless of how you describe him ... but I thought you'd like to know how I picture Merwyn ... and here I see that I was wrong.
I picture Merwyn of average height, black hair that is now full of silver and white, and a very round figure ... probably from all that sitting behind his desk.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva laughed. “Fly without a broom? No, haven’t mastered that, wouldn’t try. It’s not possible.”It was Albus’s turn to laugh. “Not impossible, merely very rare in this part of the world. And the Ministry would like to keep it that way. Hard to regulate that sort of thing. Most witches and wizards couldn’t accomplish it, anyway.”Minerva stopped and looked back at him. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Not at all. I rarely do it, myself, although when I was with Master Nyima, I became quite adept. I would sometimes fly with Mother Dragon. I think that is one reason she took a liking for me, actually.”Minerva looked at him a moment, digesting this information, then she shook her head and continued the climb. Well, she hadn’t believed it was possible to become as completely invisible as Albus could, either. In fact, at the time, she had actually thought that she had always believed becoming invisible was as impossible as flight without a Charmed object. Apparently, it was, though not the way that she had believed. She should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore.
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*grins* I like this.
See ... we HP fans know that Dumbledore is brilliant and amazingly powerful ... but just to say it, well its a bit of a let-down, and harder to take as fact. But showing it ... especially in a sideways manner such as this ... an off-handed type of author's compliment, well that seems to me, to be perfection. I can truly appreciate his amazing talents here ... especially considering that Minerva (who is particularly powerful and talented) is amazed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you liked that. :-)I remember knowing that I would slip that in way back when I wrote the chapter where Dumbledore invisibly observes Minerva doing her tutoring session, and I always envisioned it happening at her family home -- I'd originally been going to have him actually fly, but without a good reason, it would have felt too stilted, especially since his Animagus form flies, so that would be more natural.
*shakes head* Malcolm, Malcolm, Malcolm ... there is such a thing as tact .... *groans* sadly .... I think I get most frustrated with Malcolm because he reminds me of myself ... er ... I should clarify, my younger self, who was obnoxiously blunt and said what ever came to my mind ... and I likely came off as gruff and uncouth as Malcolm does ... so its an annoying reminder of just how ungracious I can be. *grumbles*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
FINALLY! Hooray for Quin and Wilspy ... *steals Wilspy and takes her to the island where she's stashed Gertrude*
I thought about stealing Quin but ... I am on this celibacy kick ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Oooohhhhh noooooes! *MMADfan enlists Quin to help find and steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*Quin turns on the charm , turning
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
's celibate knees to jelly so she can't chase after MMADfan as she steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*floats like a jellyfish (uber slow) across the water while she sees Quin, Gertrude and Wilspy sail off on the boat. Is quite sure Wilspy and Gertrude are crying and waving in mourning as Quin steals them both from the enchanted island*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Heheheh!!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its an island enchanted to have no mosquitos, sand flies, fire ants or thorny trees/bushes but lots of beautiful fish, both shell and fin, and a huge variety of fruit trees and veggies year round, and maintains a perfect temperature and humidity level ... *sighs*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I wanna go there!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Me too!
This is the chapter that I want to throttle Minerva and grant Quin sainthood ... honestly ... what she does to that poor man ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know. Minerva was not at her best there, was she? Poor Quin!
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Finally, at midnight, he went down to his office and opened the cupboard in which he kept his Charmed parchments. He rarely used them, and he hesitated to now. It would be prying . . . it would be for his own personal gain, not for school business. But he cast the necessary spells, and the results were clear and easy to read, there were so few people in the castle. Johannes was in his bedroom in Ravenclaw Tower. Gertrude and Malcolm . . . were both together. In her rooms. In her bedroom, in fact. Well, that answered one question that he hadn’t wished to ask. Johannes’s name was steady, but Gertrude’s and Malcolm’s names seemed to pulse, becoming thicker and bolder, then returning to the normal script. He could imagine what that might mean, and he averted his eyes. But Minerva’s name was not on the list. There was Fawkes listed. For some reason, he was perched in the Astronomy Tower. But no other being or creature was named. Albus still hadn’t set the wards properly to detect the ghosts. It had been a low priority, and he had never managed to get to it.
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OOOOOOOOOooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT's how the Mara's Map was created! Or at least, that is one way ... nice little intry there, Madam Raven!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the magic that allows those Charmed parchments is the magic that was tapped into to create the Marauders' map. It's part of the magic that was being tested and fixed that summer when Minerva helped with the wards, changing back and forth into her Tabby self to see whether the wards detected her identity when she turned into her Animagus form -- the wards had been so damaged that they no longer detected someone who was in Animagus form.Many years later, this became important for seeing Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black on the map. Also, by the time that he enlisted Minerva's help, Dumbledore had already fixed the ward that detected the true identity of someone who was disguised using Polyjuice -- meaning that during GoF, Potter saw that B. Crouch was searching Snape's office. Of course, he thought that it was B. Crouch senior, not the crazy son who had supposedly died in Azkaban. The fake Moody (Barty Crouch) took the map from Harry so that Harry wouldn't notice that Moody never left his office (where he was stuck in the trunk), and that where Moody apparently was, Crouch actually was.
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“I thought I was being seduced, but it has been a while . . . I may have been wrong,” Gertrude answered, her breath warm upon his face.
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I just love her wit.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She is one sharp Slytherin, and she loves answering a question at a different level than it was being asked. :-)
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“Yes, you mentioned that at the party. You are aware of how Gertrude’s husband died, though?” Minerva asked.
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What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Goodness - Minerva has a serious voyeur problem, doesn't she? Naughty!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's concerned that Malcolm might bring up a sensitive subject in an inappropriate way, for one, but mostly, she's worried that Malcolm might just be in it for the fun and that Gertrude is vulnerable if he just up and leaves. Gertrude hasn't formed any other attachment since the trauma of having her husband killed in such a gruesome manner, as far as Minerva knows, so Minerva's worred that Gertrude is opening herself up in a rare manner and that her brother might just be too cavalier with her feelings. (I'd have to reread the section, but that's what I remember o fher motivation.)I'm sure Minerva wishes she had better timing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
As I continued to read, Minerva's concern was apparent, as usual, in my typical Gryffie fashion - we leap before we look ... or rather, we shoot our mouths off before we have all the facts. *sighs*
Oh hooooo! Malcolm may think he doesn't want to become too ... attached ... but his heroic defense of 'good' Slytherins sure tells me something or other about a recent acquaintance of his.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is definitely defensive here! Seems he is becoming more than a little attached to a certain Slytherin!
I so love Gertrude. I want a Gertrude in my life! *steals Gertrude and runs away*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*MMADfan puts on her running shoes and jogs after
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“It was a long time ago, as I said, that it all began. When I was a child, really, I suppose. I would like to be able to say with some modesty that my time as a student was unremarkable, but it was not. I excelled at whatever I put my hand, mind, and magic to. I was eager to learn, even more eager than you were – indeed, the Sorting Hat very nearly put me in Ravenclaw, but it decided, in the end, that my nature and my need were Gryffindor. “I chafed at what I saw were restrictions on me and my progress. I found most of my teachers wanting, and believed them dull and unimaginative. Nonetheless, I wanted to please them, and please them I usually did. But I pushed every boundary and stretched it. If it weren’t for the guidance and firm hand of Professor Futhark, I might have become even more insufferable than I no doubt was. But despite my general attitude, I found myself with friends of all types, and, with a rather foolish and overblown sense of my own importance, I came to believe myself not only advanced academically but also better than my peers and their natural leader. And, I suppose, I was – academically advanced and a leader, not better than they,” he clarified.
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I really like this ... it sounds very Albus to me ... save for the Ravenclaw bit *grins* but sometimes you just gotta tout yer house, right?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that sometimes, it's really clear that there's one House that a witch or wizard belongs in, and other times, there are others that would suit, too. I think Albus could have fit in with Ravenclaw -- he certainly pursued knowledge, both Light and Dark -- but there were bits of his personality that drove him that were Gryffindor that shaped his intellect and his use of it. (I can't have written that part of the monologue and really substituted "Hufflepuff" -- though I think that with a few tweaks to the text, Slytherin could have been included as an option -- he is a wily wizard, after all!)I'm glad you like it. It's one of the reasons that I think this section, these chapters, work better as a first-person recounting than as I had originally written it -- in the third person as a kind of flashback. We get to see Albus's personality then and now, and his own take on his character as a teen and young man, and how it developed.
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“Not a bit of trouble, my dear man, not a bit of it! A friend of the Headmaster’s is a friend of mine, I’d like to think! And dear Gertrude, of course.” He winked at Quin. “She’s quite the witch, isn’t she? Knew each other as students of course. Had a bit of a crush on me at the time, I think.”
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I have to laugh at this ... I just do ... he's a younger and less wise Slughorn than the Sluggy I know from HBP, so it does make sense that he'd brag a bit louder and exaggerate a bit stronger ... but saying that of one's co-worker - wow! That takes some ... something ...
You know I have a soft spot for Slughorn I think it would be fun to pick his brain and study him ... especially try to determine what conditions cause him to puff out his chest the most ... call me weird.
I also love any and all descriptions of the various houses, since we only see two of them in the movies - Slytherin and Gryffindor ... never did get a chance to see Ravenclaw's or Hufflepuff's ... shame really. I'd love to see the Badger room, all decked out in black and yellow - I think I'd feel like I was snug inside a giant bee hive! Oh and I would imagine there would be plenty of honey.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, Sluggy's sense of grandiosity is quite at its peak here. And it's not yet been burst by the emergence of the Slytherin "Death Eater sect" led by one of his former star pupils. So he's amiably pompous, tries a bit too hard to chum-up to Quin, and yet there is a part of him that genuinely likes other people (in my view) and simply wants them to like him in return. I really enjoyed envisioning the Slytherin dorms and some of the more decent Slytherins in "The Sorting of Susie Sefton." It was fun to look at them from a different POV than we had in the books, and yet try to make it all still recognizably Slytherin.It would be neat to experience Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. And I wonder if Hufflepuff would be all honey with no stings attached ...
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“It is worth far more than that, Horace, as you know,” Gertrude said, “and even if you offered what it might fetch on the open market, you know the Headmaster still wouldn’t part with it. Your grumbling about it every time he generously chooses to share it is most unseemly and detracts from our enjoyment.”
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HAHAHAHAHA! Stop complainin and enjoy the bloody mead, yeh buggar!
I do like this chapter, I love just the idea that being a head of house, or even just a teacher, creates some sort of bond, or weave, in the magical wards and structure of the castle. And its nice to see the faculty supporting each other.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh and, I also love lore with the Sorting Hat - for some reason I find that 'character' of Rowling's to be fascinating.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I like to imagine that each teacher in the history of Hogwarts, especially Heads of Houses and Headmasters/mistresses, leave some of themselves, some of their magic, in the wards, helping to strengthen the school long after they're gone. That would be a heritage.The Sorting Hat is fascinating, and I think it is intriguing to contemplate whether it's sentient or not, and what its existence says about sentience, at least in the HP/Hogwarts universe.
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Besides, when I first began teaching, it wasn’t long after Reginald died. It didn’t feel as though it had been long, anyway. I was not particularly concerned with what I looked like. It became a habit. And now I’m too old to be worried about such things.”
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Oh how I can relate to that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, I think Gertrude is quite human here. But it's interesting how when Malcolm comes into her life, she begins to take an interest in her clothes again! Or at least, they reflect a cheerier self. :-)
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Albus smiled and sliced them each a piece. The cake itself was chocolate, and it was filled with raspberries and thick whipped cream. There was more whipped cream, Minerva thought, than cake. The icing was chocolate, one layer of an almost brittle icing, then a softer chocolate butter cream over that in decorative curlicues and rosettes. Whole raspberries topped it all off.
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GAH! I want a cake like that for my birthday - ANY birthday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Me too!
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“All right. Are you finished, then? Would you like more wine? I have another bottle – ”Albus laughed. “Are you getting me in practice for your brothers?”Minerva smiled. “I don’t think I could drink any more, either, but I thought I would offer. We can have some cognac with our dessert.”Albus pushed back from the table. “We could try out your wireless,” he suggested.“Good!” Minerva would be agreeable to almost anything he suggested right now.
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I'll bet she would!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva looked up at him and was struck by how very attractive he was. In that moment, she would have agreed that the sound of monkeys banging ashcans was nice. Fortunately, this was the station’s “music for the dinner hour,” and really was pleasant.
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*bursts out laughing, barking in fact*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Minerva is in a very agreeable mood!