LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat
Chapter 89 of 141
MMADfanMinerva, Melina, and Quin seek the "perfect flat" in Edinburgh.
ReviewedLXXXIX: A Perfect Flat
"Why don't we order a large pot of something, then?" Melina asked. "Would you mind, Min-erva? I know you had rosehip tea, but "
"That's fine, as long as it's not Earl Grey. I don't mind it, but I think I'd prefer something else today."
"An' a fine idea that is, Miss McGonagall," Quin said, signalling the wait-witch.
After they had ordered their pot of tea, Quin turned to Minerva. "In response to your invitation, I would be pleased t' come to tea tomorrow afternoon."
"Good! I'm glad. I must say that I was somewhat surprised when Melina told me you were one of the potential landlords."
"Technically, they're not me properties; they're Alroy's, inherited from his great-grandfather. I'm just takin' care o' them until he's of age. Though I don't normally do very much, just peek in on Ferguson's now and again to see that they're doin' right by him. But when I saw the McGonagall name," Quin said with a smile at Melina, "I couldna' let Mr Shycross show them, all impersonal. And there's th' other property, as well, which I haven't listed with them yet. No application fees if you like that one, Miss McGonagall."
Melina frowned slightly. "That doesn't seem quite fair to Mr Shycross, since I found you through his agency."
"Ah, don't worry yourself about Ferguson's. They will thrive with or without your fees, and I'll take care o' Mr Shycross." Seeing a protest forming on Melina's lips, Quin said, "Consider it a wedding present, Miss McGonagall, if you must!"
"How did you know what I was going to say?" Melina asked.
"'Tis a business man I am, Miss McGonagall. Anticipatin' an objection is part o' me livelihood. And," Quin added with a quirked smile, "you do that same thing with your brow that your aunt does just before she objects to somethin' I've said."
Melina laughed and Minerva snorted.
"Now, 'tis important that a couple has a flat they can live in comfortably. Don't you go and feel you must take one o' mine just because your aunt and I are friends and I hope we become friends, too, even if I'm your landlord. If you like one of 'em, we can have your young man come and look at it, too. An' unlike some, though, either o' you can sign the lease. I'm not t' be insistin' on it bein' your fiancé. I just think he should see it, and I don't mind makin' the time for it."
"We thought we'd both sign the lease, actually," Melina answered.
"Well, that's fine, then. Let me tell you a little bit about them."
The wait-witch brought their tea, and they interrupted the conversation for a few minutes.
"So, they're both on the Floo-Network," Quin continued, "and we'd just need to change the address to one that identifies it with you. Both are also close to Muggle bus lines, as well. I don't know if Mr O'Donald is in possession of an automobile, but the second property I am after showin' you has parkin' in the back. Bein' as they're also Muggle properties, they also have telephone, electric, gas, and all that. Kitchens are fully Muggle, too. There's no cooker in the second place I'm showin' you, as it belonged t' the previous tenants, not t' the property, but we could talk about that."
"That sounds ideal the flat Mr Shycross showed us wasn't on the Floo-Network and it didn't have a telephone line, either. It also wasn't particularly attractive."
Minerva snorted. "That's an understatement. I don't know what your flats are like, Quin, but this one was dark, dingy, grimy, and the rooms were tiny."
Quin took a sip of his tea. "The first place I'll be showin' you is a wee bit on the small side, I'll admit that to you, but the second one is . . . spacious, you might say. But neither of 'em could be described a 'grimy,' I'm thinkin'."
The three finished their tea, Quin insisted on paying the bill, and they set off for the first flat.
"I could Apparate one of you, but not both, and it's only a mile and a half, so unless you wish t' brave the Muggle bus system and I'm not familiar enough with Edinburgh t' say what bus we should take I suggest we simply walk."
Melina said she thought she knew which bus to take, but the two witches agreed the walk would be pleasant, and about twenty-five minutes later, they were standing outside what Minerva thought was termed a "brownstone," and Quin was taking a ring of keys from an inside jacket pocket. He found the one he was looking for and unlocked the front door.
"It's a walk-up. The downstairs tenants are sisters. The older one is a Squib and works for the railway doin' somethin' or other; the younger one works for the Ministry, local magical accidents office, I think. There are two floors to this flat, but it's still fairly small. But it may meet your needs." They followed him up the stairs and stood behind him on the narrow landing as he unlocked the door. "You can feel free to set up wards, but I do expect to be able to enter the flat only using the key. I'd never enter without givin' you advance notice, though, unless there were an emergency o' some sort. And I can't say that I've ever entered a flat when a tenant wasn't home, except for one time when there was a gas leak, unless I was showin' it to prospective tenants. These tenants moved out at the end of last month, so it's completely empty, as you can see."
The first floor of the flat had a small sitting room in the front of the building, a small dining room in the middle with an archway leading to the sitting room, and a kitchen in the back. The stairs to the next floor were off the dining room, and there was a cupboard under the stairs that opened into the sitting room. Upstairs, there was a bathroom combined with a loo in the back, with a frosted glass window that could be cranked open, a small, dark, windowless bedroom next to the bathroom, and a larger, sunny bedroom in front. There was a door between the two bedrooms.
"'Tis small," Quin admitted. "The previous tenants used the small bedroom for their baby. You would be welcome to create a false magical window, o' course, as long as it wasn't anythin' a visitin' Muggle could see and wonder about. There's not much street noise here, but if you found it bothered you, you could use an Imperturbable at night."
"It's much better than the previous flat," Melina said, "but it's smaller than what we hoped to find."
"There's an attic, too. It's unfinished, but you could use it for storage or your owl." Quin led them into the small bedroom and waved his wand at the ceiling. A trapdoor opened and a set of stairs more like a ladder, actually lowered itself into the room. "It can be opened manually, too, o' course, though it takes a bit of doin' not to get knocked off the ladder or chair when the stairs lower. Or you can tie a rope to the handle, but I wouldn't recommend that if you have any kiddies around. I'll just step outside and wait for you on the pavement if you and your aunt would like to look around in private."
"No, that's fine, Mr MacAirt. Why don't we move on to the next flat?"
"Y'know, Miss McGonagall, you could be callin' me Quin, if you'd like."
Melina laughed. "That would be lovely, and I won't wonder who you're speaking to when you say 'Miss McGonagall.'"
"Ah, that's right! You're a Healer! I have been rude . . . apologies, Healer McGonagall," Quin said with a slight bow.
"No, that's not what I mean I just think you might be addressing Aunt Minerva, then I realise you would call her 'Professor' or 'Minerva,' and you must be speaking to me. Please, call me 'Melina.'"
The three walked back toward McTavish Street.
"This next property is quite a bit larger, you will find, and it's only three streets up from Aphrodite's Apple you'd be only about a fifteen minute walk from your father's apothecary, I believe, Miss Melina. This is the one that hasn't been listed yet."
They reached a large building on a corner. It was another stone building, likely mid-Victorian, Minerva thought, and the street, slightly broader than many in the vicinity, was lined with trees. Looking up at the house, Minerva was impressed by the number of windows, including a large bay on each of the three stories. There were also stairs outside leading down to what appeared to be a basement flat, and for half a moment, she was afraid that was the flat Quin was going to show them. Although it appeared there were windows, they were all half-below ground. But Quin walked up the broad stone steps and opened the front door. Minerva took hold of the wrought iron rail and followed the other two up the stairs and into the building.
"Strictly speakin', 'tain't a flat, but a house," Quin said as he opened a second door leading from a small vestibule into a larger foyer. "There's a small flat below, rented by a watch wizard who works nights. There are three floors and an internal Floo-Network. There's a loo on each floor and two bathrooms, a large one on the first floor and a smaller one on the second. I know it's a bit more than you were lookin' for, but take a peek around. There's a bit o' furniture that comes with the place, but it's been empty since the end of April. Just hadn't got around to decidin' whether I wanted to let it or sell it," Quin said with a shrug.
"Oh, my, it looks . . . lovely," Melina said as they entered the large, bright front room. "But I don't know . . . we do have a budget."
"Look around. See what you think. I'll just wait for you here. If you have any questions, ask me when you've finished. And don't worry too much about your budget. We can work somethin' out, I'm sure, if you like it."
"I don't " Melina began.
Minerva tugged on her niece's elbow. "Let's look at the place, know what it is you are turning down before you do, hmm?" Minerva, knowing Quin's nature and something of his financial situation, had the feeling he would prefer to let the house to someone he liked at a bargain price than make a large profit and rent to someone he didn't care for.
Melina, smiling at the sight of the polished parquet floor in the foyer, didn't need very much encouragement to look around the house. There was a telephone in the hallway, on a small, built-in cupboard. It was quite old-fashioned, pre-War, but they could get a new one from the telephone office if they wanted.
The two gave themselves a tour of the three-story house. The ground floor held the usual front parlour, large dining room, kitchen, pantry, loo, and a smallish sitting room that could serve as a little office or study and the first and second floors had several bright rooms of varying sizes, including a large one on the first floor that appeared to be meant as a library, as the walls on either side of the door contained built-in bookshelves. The back bedroom on the first floor was large, had a door connecting it with the bathroom, and the rear windows looked out onto a courtyard with a small garden and a paved area that was apparently intended for parking. By the time they had finished tramping through the house, opening cupboard doors and admiring the bathrooms, Melina looked near tears.
"Oh, it's wonderful, but we could never afford it. It's perfect . . . just perfect," Melina said in a desperate sort of cry.
"You don't know you can't afford it. Quin said he could work things out. Let's hear what he has to say before you give up," Minerva replied.
"But I don't want to be beholden "
"Listen to what he has to say, Melina. And although I haven't known him long, I think I know him well enough to say that he would not have you feeling beholden to him."
"He might not, but I still would . . ."
Melina let Minerva bring her down to talk to Quin about what he had been thinking when he said that they could work something out. It turned out that he would "reduce" the rent if they looked after the downstairs flat and dealt with any problems that cropped up and, if the current tenant moved out, they took responsibility for finding a new tenant and showing the flat. The price he named for the flat was on the upper end of what Melina had told Minerva she could afford, but then she was concerned about the cost of upkeep, and Quin promised to owl her the records of the last year's electric, gas, and heating oil bills. The Floo-Network and telephone bills would be the same wherever they lived, since the internal Floo-Network didn't have any fees attached.
"Spells are all well and good, Minerva," Melina said, putting a hand on the radiator cover, "but Brennan's a Muggle. I can't have him relying on my warming charms or my lighting magical lamps and candles. It just wouldn't be right. I want him to be able to live here as though there was no such thing as magic."
"Think on it, lass, and I'll send along the records for you. I'd like t' have you and your young man livin' here, though. Speakin' o' which . . . I don't know when the pendin' nuptials are, but, um, I don't inquire into the livin' arrangements o' me tenants."
Melina blushed. The Squib landlords had made it clear that until the two had married, they did not expect them both to spend the night under the same roof. It had quite embarrassed Melina that they had brought it up, and it had embarrassed Mr Shycross to have to relay their wishes, but it had convinced her that Minerva had been right about the dangers of living in the same building as your landlord. Melina hadn't even given that aspect of things very much thought, but it struck her that it was her private business, and it wasn't as though she was going to have a different man in every night of the week.
"I'd like to show it to Brennan." Melina paused. "I don't know if it would be an imposition, but do you suppose you could show it to us both tomorrow morning? Or early afternoon, before Minerva's tea?"
"O' course. Tomorrow at, say, two o'clock? And the Floo-Network is still open. We could Floo direct from here. I'll owl the records to you this evening so you can look at them before you return with Mr O'Donald."
Melina nodded happily. "I know that Brennan will like this, too; it's just the cost, to be honest. I'd take it this minute, otherwise. And I have no idea how we'll furnish a place this big. I always took furnished rooms when I was a student, and Brennan's just got a small flat above the shop, and he thought he'd leave most of the furniture and try to rent it out."
"Our attic is full of furniture, Melina. I am sure that Mother and Dad would be pleased to have you go through it and put some of it to use."
"Yes . . . she actually said something about that, but I'd forgotten. She'd just finished talking to me about, well, you know it wasn't dinner table conversation and my mind was elsewhere." Melina turned back to Quin. "I suppose I shouldn't seem so eager to have this place, but it's more perfect than anything I imagined. We could even stay here after we have children which is a ways off, but it's a consideration. And it's so close to my work and McTavish Street, but it's not far for Brennan to get to his shop he could even walk to work in good weather, if he liked. Or cycle. He has been trying to get me on a bicycle for weeks; he can't believe I don't know how to ride one. Well . . . let's look at the expenses involved, and Brennan can look at it, and we'll see."
"Good! So . . . it's getting to that time. I'm peckish. Would you ladies care to have lunch?" Quin asked.
"I'm meeting Brennan back at his shop. In fact, he's probably wondering where I am, so I will have to decline. But it was good to meet you, Quin," Melina said, holding out her hand, "and I look forward to seeing you here tomorrow afternoon."
"It's me own pleasure, Melina!" Quin said, shaking her hand. "Feel free to pop off right from here, if you like."
Melina gave her aunt a kiss and then Disapparated with a loud crack.
"Mmm, she's a loud one," Quin said, shaking his head dramatically as though to clear his ears. "If she takes this flat, we'll have to put some charms on the place to muffle that or the Muggles will think there's been an explosion!"
Minerva laughed. "She's always Apparated loudly. She's never Splinched, though, and I can't say what it is she's doing that makes it that loud, but it certainly is rather deafening! And don't ever accept a Side-Along Apparition from her if you are at all prone to nausea. I was quite sick this morning, and we only Apparated a few miles."
"I will bear that in mind," Quin said with a grin. "But what about you, love?"
"What about me?" Minerva asked.
"Lunch. Care to join me?"
Minerva hesitated.
"If not, or if you have someplace to be, that's fine "
"No, I would like to. I'm just trying to think of where. I would love to have lunch with you, and to talk to you about . . . what we haven't discussed, but I don't want it to be someplace public, and Mother and Dad are home "
"Chez moi, ma Grande Dame de la Metamorphosis?"
"Your place?"
"At my place in London. As I said, the Floo is still hooked up, we can Floo. I'll go through first and open it for you. It won't be anything fancy; Mrs Manning doesn't work on Saturdays if the children aren't home, but I can do us up a simple lunch and we will have all the privacy that you could ask for."
Minerva smiled. "I'd like that. And don't worry about what we eat as long as you aren't like your cousin Carson, and apologising for everything as you serve it, I'm sure it'll be fine."
Quin smiled wistfully. "An' 'tis a pity Carson ain't standin' here in me stead. He would've been a good friend to you, I'm sure, and you wouldn't be needin' me."
Minerva nodded soberly. "I was thinking something similar recently, in fact before I'd met you, though. Not that I wouldn't want to be friends with you or talk to you, but I thought that I might have been able to tell Carson and he would have understood."
Quin reached out and gently caressed her cheek. "I'll try t' be the friend you need, Minerva. I'll do me best," he said softly.
Minerva smiled slightly. "Well, if we're going to eat, and you're going to cook, we ought to be going."
Quin nodded and went over to the fireplace, pulled out his wand, lit a small, blue fire in the grate, and picked up the pot of Floo-Powder.
"Just give me a minute when I get to th' other side to let me open it for you, then follow on."
Minerva nodded and took the Floo-Powder pot from Quin and watched him Floo away. She sighed, some apprehension beginning to settle in her stomach at the thought of confiding in him, and wondering at the wisdom of it, but considering Quin already seemed to have half a notion anyway, she thought it might be a relief to finally share her secret with someone.
Note: I hope you enjoyed this little transitional chapter.
Next: "A Confidant" Minerva has lunch with Quin.
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Okay...I think it's time for a Gertrude and Malcolm story. If you got any ideas like the proposal or her pregnancy I'm all ears. I've read this story 100 times but just wanted to say that this story is great every single time I read it, it always feels like my first time.
I have a love hate relationship with this fic. I do not enjoy stories where people spend time angsting when they could just tell each other how they feel and be done with it, no matter how it plays out. I enjoyed this because of Quin. If you hadn't had he or Getrude, this story wouldn't have worked for me. The witty dialogue is what kept me interested to the end. Well done with your OCs.
Review in progress... :-)
Putting myself in Albus's shoes - from his vantage point of what had played out between them - I can very well imagine how awfully guilty he must have felt, how repulsed by his own behaviour, how defeated, with no option but to assume things were over. Really sad and horrible, for him.
But then Gertrude...oh, how I love that woman! Her questioning of Albus, her coclusions: brilliant! Utterly love that small scene! :-)
Forgot to rate...
Must have been very upsetting, embarrassing and worrying for Albus indeed, to have found a young woman attractive for a few moments, only to find out that she's actually his student. I can so imagine how he must have been shocked and appalled by himself.
I loved seeing these two lively, bright and, both of them, determined and decisive girls: Melina seeing the need to educate on healing spells, before even being allowed to hold a wand; and Minerva, trying to take matters in hand concerning Albus's health as well as the running of Murdoch's household. Yet, I always find Melina bordering on overpowering and you already show that here, in her as a young girl.
"And what a pity we can’t hold hands as innocently as Melina does." I love this observation, which, I'd say, actually counts for all of us.
You made me realize it's a bit sad, isn't it? Holding hands is comforting and gives a sense of closeness, but once you're above a certain age (and experience?), there's just no way the innocence will ever come back, unless it's holding hands with a small child. Which means that I, and most likely by far the most of us, hardly ever hold hands anymore. Alas.
Very nice, serious chapter and probably decisive in Albus's later 'hesitations' towards Minerva. Right???
Soap in the eyes indeed! Malcolm is such a twit ... its hard not to like him at least a little ... still ... I think Gertrude is far too big a catch for the likes of this McGonagall ... *snorts*
Forgive me Madam Raven ... I'm bound to get uppity with at least one of your characters.
Even with my aggravation, I did enjoy Malcolm and Gertie's banter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Awww, you'd like Gertrude to be single and still all shades of mourning? Poor Malcolm! He adores her, you know! :-) ;-) He also amuses her & brings her some vitality. Glad you enjoyed their banter! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I know I know ... and you know why, of course ... his arrogance and swagger embarrass me because .... yes ... exactly ... reminds me of a younger version of ... someone foolish ... not saying whoooooo ... *whistles innocently*
And of course we can't have Gertie in all shades of black forever! She needs her lime green suits - just like in this chapter - she redresses in three shades of ... GREEN! Gertrude Spring! Seee! That's where I got the lime green from! *grins*
That and I would want her to find joyous love ... I love Gertie too much not to. Even if it has to be Malcolm. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There's a place in life for people who are a bit brash. Aside from their entertainment value! haha! But don't be down on those characteristics of yourself. You've noted yourself that you've learned to tone down a bit and not just say whatever pops into your head! :-)Yep, Malcolm got her to wear green, green, and green, and look all nice and cheerful. I was pretty sure you were remembering her post-Malcolm greenness when you mentioned the lime green suit. hee!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I will share something simple I have learned. Humility is a virtue and pride is a liability. *nods* And I has lots more liabilities than virtues, me thinks.
I so love this chapter. The dragon riding is just so incredible ... and then the duel is ABSOLUTELY awesome! I love the giant field of sunflowers and the fireball - aka - fire don't hurt phoenixes - snap you're stunned, Buddy bit.
Give me a Madam!
Give me a Raven!
Ravenclaw's Madam Raven!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Holy COW! Bloo knows English!
Dragons Dragons Dragons!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It was a stunner to get any review from Bloo that didn't consist of "Cheers for posting." It became so tiresome to keep opening TPP review alerts, go to the review page, and discover yet another of the exact same three words. I didn't want to turn off alerts altogether because I was still getting a lot of real reviews for fics that were still WIPs at the time.I'm glad you enjoyed the dragon riding and the "whoops, you're Stunned!" at the end. :-)Thanks!
Madam Raven, remind me which house Siofre was sorted into?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's Ravenclaw. And Lydia is Slytherin. Siofre's first husband - Merwyn's father - was Gryffindor, and her second husband Herbert was Hufflepuff.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I thought she was Ravenclaw. Still no idea who Lydia is ... I know her daughter is Maisy, or Maise or something like that.
Forgive me, I get all the McGonagalls and their affiliates, across yours, mine and Squibby's universes confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Lydia's her sister-in-law, remember? Murdoch Tyree's wife. She's a major CSG character. (I thought you were reading that at one point, but I must have misremembered.)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
No I was reading it (you are correct), but in the last six months I've lost about 40 IQ points and have forgotten nearly everything I used to know ... so I am behind on RaM-verse extensions. Bad me ...
*sighs* Albus ... Albus ... Albus ... most romantic man to ever grace .... fiction. If only men could be so romantic anymore. That poem is beautiful ... I am guessing, since there are no foot-notes, that it is one of your originals?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yep, Albus and I wrote that way early in the story. I'm not much of a poet, but I thought it felt and sounded like a poem that Albus would write.
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“Ah, well, it’s best not to rush things. Enjoy it, Minerva, savour it. He’s likely nervous, as well. The age difference is probably causing him far more concern than it is you. His perspective is different from yours, and as I said when you were here on Friday, he is from a different time and place. He also has had experiences in his life that you and I, fortunately, have been spared, and that I can only dimly imagine.”
*snip*
I really like that. That shows uncommon wisdom.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*
“No, simply . . . odd, disorienting, I suppose,” Albus replied, though Minerva thought that he did look tired and drawn. “It was so long ago, it is almost like remembering a dream. Collum was actually almost five years younger than I, in Aberforth’s year, but he was in my House, and I was also good friends with Perseus. Perseus and Crispinian were cousins of some sort, and Crispy was great friends with Collum, who was only a couple years younger than he. Anyway, for some reason – I don’t remember why, now – we were all here for a few days that summer after my NEWTs. I had just married, and I remember that Dervilia persuaded me that we should accept the invitation because I would be beginning my apprenticeship soon and would have much less time for my friends. I hadn’t been inclined to, wanting to spend the time with her, and feeling that they were all still children while I was a married man – at all of eighteen! But we actually had a good time. I remember that the girls – Siofre and Gwyn – visited once for the day and gave Dervilia some relief from our masculine company.” Now Minerva was beginning to feel peculiar. Gwynllian and Siofre, the “girls,” were her grandmothers. Perseus was Gwynllian’s brother, and Crispinian was her other grandfather. For a dizzying moment, Minerva felt as though she had stepped back in time, to a point when her Great-uncle Perseus was just a boy, friends with Crispinian, not knowing that Crispinian would marry his sister, Gwyn, nor that Collum would marry Siofre and die in an accident when his son, Merwyn, was just a baby. And Albus and Dervilia . . . that their happiness would be very short-lived.
*snip*
Woah ... yeah that would make me uncomfortable as well ... that is ... well that is just ... well ... my head would be swimming if I were Minerva.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it is dizzying for Minerva, and it gives her an appreciation for some of the points her mother made, and for how and why Albus would not be completely comfortable yet.
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“Hold still, Merwyn! Your collar is all askew here,” Egeria said with slight impatience.“Don’t see why we have to get all dressed up,” Merwyn grumbled. “I thought what I was wearing this morning was perfectly acceptable.” “Those old brown robes make you look like Friar Tuck,” Egeria grumbled back.“They do not! Besides, I thought you liked my brown robes. That’s what you said the last time I wore them!” “No, it isn’t. I said I liked taking them off of you. There is a difference,” Egeria said with a smile. She patted his tummy and added, “And you are right, you don’t look like Friar Tuck. You have a much nicer figure – though heaven only knows why, when you sit behind your desk all day or in the library with your feet up.”
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Tee hee hee ... now Madam Raven, don't take my head off here, as you know I tend to picture your characters in my mind regardless of how you describe him ... but I thought you'd like to know how I picture Merwyn ... and here I see that I was wrong.
I picture Merwyn of average height, black hair that is now full of silver and white, and a very round figure ... probably from all that sitting behind his desk.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva laughed. “Fly without a broom? No, haven’t mastered that, wouldn’t try. It’s not possible.”It was Albus’s turn to laugh. “Not impossible, merely very rare in this part of the world. And the Ministry would like to keep it that way. Hard to regulate that sort of thing. Most witches and wizards couldn’t accomplish it, anyway.”Minerva stopped and looked back at him. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Not at all. I rarely do it, myself, although when I was with Master Nyima, I became quite adept. I would sometimes fly with Mother Dragon. I think that is one reason she took a liking for me, actually.”Minerva looked at him a moment, digesting this information, then she shook her head and continued the climb. Well, she hadn’t believed it was possible to become as completely invisible as Albus could, either. In fact, at the time, she had actually thought that she had always believed becoming invisible was as impossible as flight without a Charmed object. Apparently, it was, though not the way that she had believed. She should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore.
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*grins* I like this.
See ... we HP fans know that Dumbledore is brilliant and amazingly powerful ... but just to say it, well its a bit of a let-down, and harder to take as fact. But showing it ... especially in a sideways manner such as this ... an off-handed type of author's compliment, well that seems to me, to be perfection. I can truly appreciate his amazing talents here ... especially considering that Minerva (who is particularly powerful and talented) is amazed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you liked that. :-)I remember knowing that I would slip that in way back when I wrote the chapter where Dumbledore invisibly observes Minerva doing her tutoring session, and I always envisioned it happening at her family home -- I'd originally been going to have him actually fly, but without a good reason, it would have felt too stilted, especially since his Animagus form flies, so that would be more natural.
*shakes head* Malcolm, Malcolm, Malcolm ... there is such a thing as tact .... *groans* sadly .... I think I get most frustrated with Malcolm because he reminds me of myself ... er ... I should clarify, my younger self, who was obnoxiously blunt and said what ever came to my mind ... and I likely came off as gruff and uncouth as Malcolm does ... so its an annoying reminder of just how ungracious I can be. *grumbles*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
FINALLY! Hooray for Quin and Wilspy ... *steals Wilspy and takes her to the island where she's stashed Gertrude*
I thought about stealing Quin but ... I am on this celibacy kick ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Oooohhhhh noooooes! *MMADfan enlists Quin to help find and steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*Quin turns on the charm , turning
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
's celibate knees to jelly so she can't chase after MMADfan as she steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*floats like a jellyfish (uber slow) across the water while she sees Quin, Gertrude and Wilspy sail off on the boat. Is quite sure Wilspy and Gertrude are crying and waving in mourning as Quin steals them both from the enchanted island*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Heheheh!!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its an island enchanted to have no mosquitos, sand flies, fire ants or thorny trees/bushes but lots of beautiful fish, both shell and fin, and a huge variety of fruit trees and veggies year round, and maintains a perfect temperature and humidity level ... *sighs*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I wanna go there!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Me too!
This is the chapter that I want to throttle Minerva and grant Quin sainthood ... honestly ... what she does to that poor man ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know. Minerva was not at her best there, was she? Poor Quin!
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Finally, at midnight, he went down to his office and opened the cupboard in which he kept his Charmed parchments. He rarely used them, and he hesitated to now. It would be prying . . . it would be for his own personal gain, not for school business. But he cast the necessary spells, and the results were clear and easy to read, there were so few people in the castle. Johannes was in his bedroom in Ravenclaw Tower. Gertrude and Malcolm . . . were both together. In her rooms. In her bedroom, in fact. Well, that answered one question that he hadn’t wished to ask. Johannes’s name was steady, but Gertrude’s and Malcolm’s names seemed to pulse, becoming thicker and bolder, then returning to the normal script. He could imagine what that might mean, and he averted his eyes. But Minerva’s name was not on the list. There was Fawkes listed. For some reason, he was perched in the Astronomy Tower. But no other being or creature was named. Albus still hadn’t set the wards properly to detect the ghosts. It had been a low priority, and he had never managed to get to it.
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OOOOOOOOOooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT's how the Mara's Map was created! Or at least, that is one way ... nice little intry there, Madam Raven!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the magic that allows those Charmed parchments is the magic that was tapped into to create the Marauders' map. It's part of the magic that was being tested and fixed that summer when Minerva helped with the wards, changing back and forth into her Tabby self to see whether the wards detected her identity when she turned into her Animagus form -- the wards had been so damaged that they no longer detected someone who was in Animagus form.Many years later, this became important for seeing Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black on the map. Also, by the time that he enlisted Minerva's help, Dumbledore had already fixed the ward that detected the true identity of someone who was disguised using Polyjuice -- meaning that during GoF, Potter saw that B. Crouch was searching Snape's office. Of course, he thought that it was B. Crouch senior, not the crazy son who had supposedly died in Azkaban. The fake Moody (Barty Crouch) took the map from Harry so that Harry wouldn't notice that Moody never left his office (where he was stuck in the trunk), and that where Moody apparently was, Crouch actually was.
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“I thought I was being seduced, but it has been a while . . . I may have been wrong,” Gertrude answered, her breath warm upon his face.
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I just love her wit.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She is one sharp Slytherin, and she loves answering a question at a different level than it was being asked. :-)
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“Yes, you mentioned that at the party. You are aware of how Gertrude’s husband died, though?” Minerva asked.
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What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Goodness - Minerva has a serious voyeur problem, doesn't she? Naughty!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's concerned that Malcolm might bring up a sensitive subject in an inappropriate way, for one, but mostly, she's worried that Malcolm might just be in it for the fun and that Gertrude is vulnerable if he just up and leaves. Gertrude hasn't formed any other attachment since the trauma of having her husband killed in such a gruesome manner, as far as Minerva knows, so Minerva's worred that Gertrude is opening herself up in a rare manner and that her brother might just be too cavalier with her feelings. (I'd have to reread the section, but that's what I remember o fher motivation.)I'm sure Minerva wishes she had better timing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
As I continued to read, Minerva's concern was apparent, as usual, in my typical Gryffie fashion - we leap before we look ... or rather, we shoot our mouths off before we have all the facts. *sighs*
Oh hooooo! Malcolm may think he doesn't want to become too ... attached ... but his heroic defense of 'good' Slytherins sure tells me something or other about a recent acquaintance of his.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is definitely defensive here! Seems he is becoming more than a little attached to a certain Slytherin!
I so love Gertrude. I want a Gertrude in my life! *steals Gertrude and runs away*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*MMADfan puts on her running shoes and jogs after
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“It was a long time ago, as I said, that it all began. When I was a child, really, I suppose. I would like to be able to say with some modesty that my time as a student was unremarkable, but it was not. I excelled at whatever I put my hand, mind, and magic to. I was eager to learn, even more eager than you were – indeed, the Sorting Hat very nearly put me in Ravenclaw, but it decided, in the end, that my nature and my need were Gryffindor. “I chafed at what I saw were restrictions on me and my progress. I found most of my teachers wanting, and believed them dull and unimaginative. Nonetheless, I wanted to please them, and please them I usually did. But I pushed every boundary and stretched it. If it weren’t for the guidance and firm hand of Professor Futhark, I might have become even more insufferable than I no doubt was. But despite my general attitude, I found myself with friends of all types, and, with a rather foolish and overblown sense of my own importance, I came to believe myself not only advanced academically but also better than my peers and their natural leader. And, I suppose, I was – academically advanced and a leader, not better than they,” he clarified.
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I really like this ... it sounds very Albus to me ... save for the Ravenclaw bit *grins* but sometimes you just gotta tout yer house, right?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that sometimes, it's really clear that there's one House that a witch or wizard belongs in, and other times, there are others that would suit, too. I think Albus could have fit in with Ravenclaw -- he certainly pursued knowledge, both Light and Dark -- but there were bits of his personality that drove him that were Gryffindor that shaped his intellect and his use of it. (I can't have written that part of the monologue and really substituted "Hufflepuff" -- though I think that with a few tweaks to the text, Slytherin could have been included as an option -- he is a wily wizard, after all!)I'm glad you like it. It's one of the reasons that I think this section, these chapters, work better as a first-person recounting than as I had originally written it -- in the third person as a kind of flashback. We get to see Albus's personality then and now, and his own take on his character as a teen and young man, and how it developed.
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“Not a bit of trouble, my dear man, not a bit of it! A friend of the Headmaster’s is a friend of mine, I’d like to think! And dear Gertrude, of course.” He winked at Quin. “She’s quite the witch, isn’t she? Knew each other as students of course. Had a bit of a crush on me at the time, I think.”
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I have to laugh at this ... I just do ... he's a younger and less wise Slughorn than the Sluggy I know from HBP, so it does make sense that he'd brag a bit louder and exaggerate a bit stronger ... but saying that of one's co-worker - wow! That takes some ... something ...
You know I have a soft spot for Slughorn I think it would be fun to pick his brain and study him ... especially try to determine what conditions cause him to puff out his chest the most ... call me weird.
I also love any and all descriptions of the various houses, since we only see two of them in the movies - Slytherin and Gryffindor ... never did get a chance to see Ravenclaw's or Hufflepuff's ... shame really. I'd love to see the Badger room, all decked out in black and yellow - I think I'd feel like I was snug inside a giant bee hive! Oh and I would imagine there would be plenty of honey.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, Sluggy's sense of grandiosity is quite at its peak here. And it's not yet been burst by the emergence of the Slytherin "Death Eater sect" led by one of his former star pupils. So he's amiably pompous, tries a bit too hard to chum-up to Quin, and yet there is a part of him that genuinely likes other people (in my view) and simply wants them to like him in return. I really enjoyed envisioning the Slytherin dorms and some of the more decent Slytherins in "The Sorting of Susie Sefton." It was fun to look at them from a different POV than we had in the books, and yet try to make it all still recognizably Slytherin.It would be neat to experience Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. And I wonder if Hufflepuff would be all honey with no stings attached ...
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“It is worth far more than that, Horace, as you know,” Gertrude said, “and even if you offered what it might fetch on the open market, you know the Headmaster still wouldn’t part with it. Your grumbling about it every time he generously chooses to share it is most unseemly and detracts from our enjoyment.”
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HAHAHAHAHA! Stop complainin and enjoy the bloody mead, yeh buggar!
I do like this chapter, I love just the idea that being a head of house, or even just a teacher, creates some sort of bond, or weave, in the magical wards and structure of the castle. And its nice to see the faculty supporting each other.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh and, I also love lore with the Sorting Hat - for some reason I find that 'character' of Rowling's to be fascinating.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I like to imagine that each teacher in the history of Hogwarts, especially Heads of Houses and Headmasters/mistresses, leave some of themselves, some of their magic, in the wards, helping to strengthen the school long after they're gone. That would be a heritage.The Sorting Hat is fascinating, and I think it is intriguing to contemplate whether it's sentient or not, and what its existence says about sentience, at least in the HP/Hogwarts universe.
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Besides, when I first began teaching, it wasn’t long after Reginald died. It didn’t feel as though it had been long, anyway. I was not particularly concerned with what I looked like. It became a habit. And now I’m too old to be worried about such things.”
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Oh how I can relate to that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, I think Gertrude is quite human here. But it's interesting how when Malcolm comes into her life, she begins to take an interest in her clothes again! Or at least, they reflect a cheerier self. :-)
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Albus smiled and sliced them each a piece. The cake itself was chocolate, and it was filled with raspberries and thick whipped cream. There was more whipped cream, Minerva thought, than cake. The icing was chocolate, one layer of an almost brittle icing, then a softer chocolate butter cream over that in decorative curlicues and rosettes. Whole raspberries topped it all off.
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GAH! I want a cake like that for my birthday - ANY birthday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Me too!
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“All right. Are you finished, then? Would you like more wine? I have another bottle – ”Albus laughed. “Are you getting me in practice for your brothers?”Minerva smiled. “I don’t think I could drink any more, either, but I thought I would offer. We can have some cognac with our dessert.”Albus pushed back from the table. “We could try out your wireless,” he suggested.“Good!” Minerva would be agreeable to almost anything he suggested right now.
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I'll bet she would!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva looked up at him and was struck by how very attractive he was. In that moment, she would have agreed that the sound of monkeys banging ashcans was nice. Fortunately, this was the station’s “music for the dinner hour,” and really was pleasant.
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*bursts out laughing, barking in fact*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Minerva is in a very agreeable mood!