XLVI: More Relatives
Chapter 46 of 141
MMADfanAfter responding to Poppy's letter, Minerva meets a surprising relative of Gertie's and has another chat with Quin.
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Minerva reread Poppy's letter and decided that she should write back immediately in order to reassure her friend. It must be that Poppy had known something about That Person and Albus, after all, and, for whatever reason, had not ever mentioned it to her. On the other hand, it could simply be that Poppy had some other reason for mistrusting and disliking the witch, but Minerva could hardly think what would call for such vociferous and vehement warnings. Indeed, the mere fact that Albus had been seeing the witch and had broken it off was probably insufficient to have called forth such a response, no matter how unpleasant the witch was. Minerva was very curious now as to what could have provoked Poppy to warn her so strongly. Really! Never be alone with her? What would she do? Hex her?
Minerva put aside her idea of a nap for the moment and pulled out a piece of parchment.
"Tuesday, 9 July
"The Gamp Estate
"Dear Poppy,
"Please do not concern yourself about that witch. I am fine. She is obnoxious, to be sure, but I can handle her. I will do my best not to let her provoke me, as you recommend, but the woman is provocative. All she has to do is enter the room and her mere presence raises my hackles.
"Gertrude had already warned me about her before I first laid eyes on her. She told me a few things about her and said it was likely that she would be unpleasant. Forewarned is forearmed, they say, and it was fortunate that she gave me the warning, as the witch in question made various vague insinuations and thinly veiled insults from the very moment I met her. I have tried not to stoop to her level, however.
"I am interested to hear exactly what prompted your warnings, Poppy. I do not remember you ever mentioning this witch before. I wonder if it is merely her general reputation that concerns you or something more specific, and if it is something specific, whether it accords with what Gertrude told me of her. And, at that, why you believe it has anything to do with me and to such an extent that you feel you must warn me not even to be alone with her! That is an extreme recommendation, you must admit.
"I have spent more time with Gertrude, as you seemed to suggest I should in you most recent letter. I find myself alternating between warming to the witch and feeling offended and annoyed by her. I have since learned something about her which has intrigued me, however, and I have decided to treat her as I would a problem in Transfiguration and try not to view each of her remarks as though it has a hidden meaning intended for me. Instead, I am going to try to figure her out, just Gertrude Gamp, and take myself out of the picture if I can she really can be most irritating, Poppy!
"It is interesting that you also mention Quin in your letter. He and I have spent a good deal of time together, in part out of our mutual distaste for the rest of the company (which makes me wonder why we are here at all!), but also, I think, out of genuine mutual regard. He is odd, as you say, and very different from most wizards of my acquaintance, but amusing and charming, nonetheless, and I have grown somewhat fond of him and feel almost as though we are old friends, despite knowing so little about him and understanding him even less.
"I plan to stay through the party on Wednesday evening. They call it an engagement party, but it's really more like a ball. I am very glad I went to my parents' house Sunday and found some appropriate robes. I think they all find me quite outlandish as it is or they would, except that Quin is even more strange to them than I am! Anyway, Quin and I will be attending the party together as allies, Poppy! Don't go getting any ideas in your head! and it will certainly be interesting. Do you remember Orion and Walburga from school? They're both Blacks. They are the lovely couple. You can just imagine how utterly thrilled I am to help them celebrate their impending nuptials!
"Don't worry about me, Poppy. I am sure I will survive. I have been through worse, I am certain! I do look forward to returning home to Hogwarts on Thursday morning, though. I have given only a little thought to your invitation, but it would be nice to see you soon. Are you still planning to visit your grandmother after your visit at Violet's, or will you be returning to Hogwarts on Sunday?
"Thank you for writing! I am sure we will have a lot to talk about when we see each other.
"Warmly,
"Minerva"
Minerva read it over quickly. Somehow, writing it did make her feel as though everything would be fine and that she was equal to anything this lot could throw at her. She'd post it immediately, glad that the Gamps had their own private owlery. She should still have time for a nap before dinner.
As she walked across the grounds on her way to the owlery, Minerva heard raised voices. One of them was Valerianna's. Minerva stepped closer, then, curious, stopped to listen.
" don't know why she invited that chit here. She doesn't belong. It's not as though she is even a friend of Walburga and Orion's, after all. She's just a stuck-up little bint, scarcely better than a Mudblood!"
Minerva could hear a voice trying to soothe her, but couldn't make out the words.
"Don't you give me that! She must know. He must have told her. Or someone did. She understood too much. She must have finagled that invitation, that's the only explanation. She wriggled her way into Gertie's good graces somehow and came here just to show me up. Well, she won't. She doesn't know who she's dealing with, the little no-account bitch. We'll give her a tale to bring back to her master you will co-operate, Francis, won't you?" she wheedled. "I know how much you want to please me, darling, and this will please me. I know you wanted to wait, but we can't. Not now."
Another almost inaudible response from Flint seemed to please the witch.
"Oh, you are such a darling, Francis! I knew you'd come around. Thank you! I'm sure you'll be happier now, too." Valerianna's voice faded as the couple apparently began to walk away.
Hmmpf. So Valerianna thought she'd come there just to do something to her? That witch had a serious problem if she believed that Minerva would do anything on her account. Egomania, Minerva thought it was called. Minerva wondered what it was that Francis had agreed to do for her. She hoped it wasn't anything nasty, although considering the two of them, it very likely was. And then that bit about her "master"? Minerva was sure that the woman had been speaking of her, so the only person to whom she could be referring would be Albus. She certainly had a peculiar notion of their relationship. "Master," indeed! And since Albus had never mentioned Valerianna, it seemed doubtful that he had any interest at all in the doings of the witch, especially not three years later. No, Albus had probably dismissed her from his mind just as he had dismissed her from his life. He certainly wouldn't care what news Minerva brought back about her.
Minerva posted her letter. Walking back through the gardens, she found Quin, Ella, and Gertrude, who were watching Aine and Alroy play some incomprehensible game. Minerva greeted them warmly, thankful she hadn't run into Valeriana and her barnacle. She also wanted to talk to Gertrude and mention Poppy's letter to her. Gertrude would surely know whether Poppy was warning her for the same reasons that Gertrude had. Unfortunately, with Ella and Quin both there, Minerva couldn't think of a discreet way to broach the subject. She would have to get Gertrude alone later, she decided. Minerva took a seat on the bench next to Quin; Gertrude and Ella sat in the garden chairs next to each other on Minerva's other side.
Minerva couldn't figure out what it was the children were doing, but they seemed to be having fun.
"How many other children are here this week, Gertrude?" Minerva asked.
"A few. Bella, of course, whom you met, is six. Barty Crouch should be arriving this evening with his parents; you must remember him from school a second-year Ravenclaw. The others are toddlers Bella's two younger sisters and the little Malfoy boy, who arrived with his mother this afternoon."
"Where are they? You'd think they would all be out enjoying the lovely afternoon."
"I am sure I don't know, although the three toddlers may be down for a nap. Bella, it seems, finds the company of Aine and Alroy quite dull," Gertrude answered.
Minerva barked a laugh at that. "She's what? Six? I would think at that age, she'd be thrilled to hang about with older children. Or won't they have her?"
"She has picked up the Black family nose, I am afraid, and has decided that the MacAirt name has rendered me offspring little more than jumped-up half-bloods, she has," Quin said.
"Not that I particularly care, Quin, but it seems that you are not Muggle-born, and your wife surely wasn't, so I don't see where that would come from," Minerva said.
"Ah, the MacAirts have never been particular about blood; families such as the Blacks assume there's so much 'impurity' floating about me family tree, I might as well be half-blood meself." Quin grinned. "O' course, the MacAirts live long, productive lives, unlike the Blacks every time I see'em, they look more sickly. The Malfoys ain't much better. Look at Abraxas younger than me an' cold in the ground already."
"Well, it was dragonpox, dear," Ella admonished gently. "That could strike any of us."
"Me granddad had dragonpox when he was eighty, and he pulled through just fine," Quin said, stretching his long legs out in front of him and lacing his fingers behind his neck. "They inbreed. Just keep weakenin' the line . . . o' course, it means the inheritance gets passed on quicker." He grinned.
"Hush, Quin! Talk like that is as bad as theirs," Gertie chided.
"Hmm. But I do think it amusin' that, for all their talk, they end up more like Muggles than the rest of us," Quin responded. Seeing Gertie's reproving look, he changed the subject. "Speakin' o' family, Gertrude, when is Robert arriving? Or did he decide not to come this year?"
"He should be arriving this afternoon. He told me he'd be here for dinner."
"Robert?" asked Minerva.
"My son," answered Gertrude.
Minerva just blinked. She hadn't yet completely comprehended that Gertrude had once been married. The thought that she may have had children had never entered Minerva's head. Gertrude was certainly one of the least maternal witches she knew.
"He is only coming for a day or so," Gertrude continued. "Thea, his wife, is pregnant and can't travel. She's miscarried four times in the past, and he doesn't want to leave her for long, understandably."
"I'm sorry to hear that. Um, I don't wish to be forward, but my mother, as you may know, is a midwife. She claims to be retired, but she still sees patients. I don't know if your son and his wife would like another opinion, but I know she's dealt with similar cases . . . ."
Gertie looked at Minerva and smiled. "Thank you, Minerva. I shall mention that to Robert. I am not certain whether your mother would want to travel so far, though. They live in Amsterdam."
Minerva grinned. "I'm sure that would be an added attraction. She might even drag my father with her."
Gertie winked at her. "And he'd be wise to go, too no knowing what a witch can get up to in Amsterdam, after all!"
Minerva laughed at the thought of her mother carousing in Amsterdam. "I think she would be happy to take a look at your son's wife, though, Gertrude. She has decades of experience with such things, and she also keeps up with all the latest developments. I am sure that your daughter-in-law has seen the best healers in Amsterdam, but as I said, if she'd like, I am sure my mother would be happy to look in on her, make some recommendations."
Gertrude reached out and patted Minerva's hand, and Minerva could have sworn she saw a tear in her eye. "Thank you. It has been a terrible grief to them both. And to me," she added softly. She took a deep breath and turned back to Ella. "Have you heard from Granville lately?"
"No, no. Last I heard from him, he was leaving India for Nepal. That was a month ago. If you see a vulture winging its way across the grounds, it's likely from him!" She chuckled. Ella turned to Minerva. "Granville is my somewhat unconventional brother. He finds the strictures of the Western wizarding world too confining, so he spends most of his time travelling, rarely staying any one place more than a few months at a time."
"We all thought Granville had finally settled down when he spent more than a year in Hawaii a few years back, but then he apparently discovered that Hawaiian witches think that courtship should lead to marriage, just as their British counterparts do, and so he, um, moved on," Quin said with a chuckle as he put an arm around Minerva's shoulders.
Minerva smiled. "And what of your own family, Quin? Do you have brothers? You mentioned a sister."
"I have four lovely sisters, I do. Three older, one younger."
"Ah! That explains it!" Minerva grinned.
"What is that?" he asked.
Gertie quirked a half smile. "I think that Minerva may be speaking of your general manner around ladies, Quin."
"Hmmph! I'll have to tell me sisters, then, that they're the reason I turned out to be the rogue I am!" He winked. "An' then I'll be thankin'em for it!"
Minerva elbowed Quin lightly in the ribs, but laughed along with the other women. As they were kidding Quin about his habit of charming the ladies, Gertrude suddenly sprang from her seat.
"Robbie!"
Minerva looked over to see a tall, young, traditionally-dressed wizard with reddish-brown hair striding toward them, his forest-green robes flapping about his long legs. She assumed it was Gertrude's son. He had the witch's widely-spaced grey eyes, high cheekbones, and sturdy build. Quin stood and smiled at the approaching wizard.
Robert Crouch, as Minerva supposed he must be, bent his head to kiss his mother lightly on the cheek as she grasped his arms in a half-embrace. He smiled slightly at her. "Hello, Mother. Krantzy told me I would find you here," he said softly.
"I'm glad you could come, Robbie. How is Thea?"
"She's well. Resting, which she hates, of course, but she's well." Minerva thought she could detect a slight, indefinable accent to his speech.
"I'd like you to meet one of my colleagues," Gertrude said, turning toward Minerva. "This is Minerva McGonagall, the Transfiguration teacher. Minerva, I would like you to meet my son, Robert."
Minerva held out her hand. "Pleased to meet you."
Robert smiled and took her hand. "It is good to finally meet you, Minerva. I have heard so much about you for so many years, I feel as though I know you. You must forgive me if I am too familiar," he said quietly but warmly, his grey eyes smiling down at her.
Minerva returned his smile, unsure what to say to that. He had heard about her for years? How very . . . curious.
"Ah, but she's been used to me company now, Robbie. You'll be a proper gentleman in comparison!" Quin said, shaking the younger wizard's hand and clapping his shoulder. "You do look well, but a mite pale. We'll have to get you out for a clamber later!"
Robert smiled and nodded, greeted Ella, who was smiling genially from her chair, then he turned back to his mother. "Is Uncle Albus here yet?"
"He's not coming this year, Robbie," his mother replied softly.
Uncle Albus? Minerva looked at Gertrude and her son. He couldn't mean that literally. Could he? No, Gertrude's husband had been a Crouch. A great-uncle, perhaps? But that seemed unlikely.
Robert frowned slightly. "Oh. That is a disappointment. It has been so long he was not here last year, either."
"He is busy with the school, you know that. Come, now, take a walk with your old mother!" Gertie took her son's arm, and the two excused themselves and set off down the path toward the hedge maze.
Quin sat down again, this time in the chair vacated by Gertrude. Ella excused herself, saying she thought she'd take a nap before dressing for dinner.
Minerva glanced at Quin, who was stretched out, eyes closed. The children had run off to another part of the garden some time before. "Quin?"
"Mmm?"
"Do you know Robert well?"
"Fairly. Not as well as I know Gertrude. He doesn't get to England often. I visit him when I'm anywhere near Amsterdam. He only lived here for a couple of years after his father died. When he came of age, he joined the fight against Grindelwald, much to his mother's distress, and he met Thea and her family at that time. They married as soon as Grindelwald was defeated, and he settled in Amsterdam with his wife."
"Why was Gertie distressed when he joined up to fight against Grindelwald?" asked Minerva suspiciously.
Quin opened one eye and looked at her before closing it again. "Do you really need to ask, Minerva? You may not be a mother, but . . . ."
"Oh. Of course." Minerva was still uneasy. "But surely she would want her son to do what he could to bring down the wizard who killed his father?"
"Who killed his father, and then, a few years later, killed her brother," Quin answered. "He is her only child, Minerva. And she already almost lost him once to that madman, she did."
"You always say things that just raise more questions than I started with, Quin! What do you mean 'she already almost lost him once'?"
"Robert was almost sixteen when his father was killed. He and a few of his friends thought it might be a good idea to exact revenge," Quin responded, shaking his head at their foolishness. "They took off from home, scarin' their parents half to death, but they actually managed to track down one of Grindelwald's top men and were in the process of trying to discover their headquarters as if a bunch of teenagers could have detected it, let alone penetrated its wards! when they were very nearly caught. Albus swooped in just as they were comin' under attack what they had thought was a very clever ambush had actually been a trap for them. Albus was able to rescue all four o' the muttonheads. O' course, he couldn't rescue them from the ire of their parents, but it was a daft, dangerous thing to be after doin'. They all would surely have been captured or killed. Even at that time, Grindelwald was not known for his hospitality toward his enemies, and it is doubtful that he would have cared that they were all fifteen and sixteen years old."
"Oh. I see now. When was this?"
"Umm, '35, I think, or '36. It was a couple o' years before Gertrude started teachin' at Hogwarts. I didn't meet Aileen yet, so I didn't know them. They were livin' in Germany since before Robert was born. Gertrude moved back here and kept Robert on a short leash until he returned for his last year of school."
"He didn't go to Hogwarts, then."
"He didn't; he went t' Durmstrang. She had him safely home during the holidays where she could keep an eye on him."
"Is that why Robert calls him 'Uncle Albus'?" Minerva asked.
"Rather doubt it. O' course, it may be why he continues to, even as an adult."
"I was confused for a moment it crossed my mind that he might really be Robert's uncle."
"As far as I know, Dumbledore is not closely related to either the Crouches or the Gamps, although it's possible, I suppose. I think Dumbledore's mother was a Muggle-born, though leastwise, that's what I remember so if he is related to them, it'd have to be through his father, and I've never heard the Crouches braggin' that they're related to the Dumbledores, sure an' they would be if 'twere true."
Minerva sat and digested this. She hadn't heard anything about Albus's parents. But of course, there were likely few alive now who had known them, and those few were likely quite old themselves, now. But Minerva didn't care about Albus's parents. She did wonder about Albus and his relationship with Gertrude and her son. But if Robert lived in Amsterdam, it was likely they rarely saw one another. Minerva felt that any further speculation on her part would appear to Quin to be both rude and peculiar, so she changed the subject.
"Speaking of relations, Quin, I was wondering if you are related to Hafrena MacAirt, the Divination teacher at Hogwarts."
"Mmm." Quin had closed his eyes again. "She's me cousin. Me father's first cousin, t'be precise."
"Huh. So she's related to Carson?"
"Mmmhm."
"Am I keeping you up, Quin?" Minerva asked, raising an eyebrow.
"Well, you did keep me up last night, lass, an' then Gertrude sent one godawful ugly son-of-a-house-elf to wake me at the crack o'dawn as you may remember an' then I was busy with the kiddies in the mornin', followed by the pleasure of lunchin' with all those charmin' folk this noon. Is it a wonder a man'd like a bit o'shut-eye?" Quin sat up and grinned at her. "Why don't we walk? We can find the kids, or not, and it'll keep me awake and concentratin' on your lovely self an' not the back o' me eyelids!"
Minerva laughed and took his arm.
"You were askin' after me cousin, Hafrena ain't she lumbered with a name, though? I don't know her well."
"Neither do I. I dropped Divination after my fifth year. Load of rubbish."
Quin smirked at her. "Rubbish?"
"I'd always wondered why Carson continued with it. Must be because his cousin was teaching it and he didn't want to hurt her feelings."
Quin laughed out loud. "It never occurred to you that he might like it or have a talent for it?"
"Well, I suppose he might have. He'd always just laugh when I expressed my opinion on the subject."
"Very tolerant boy, was Carson. Divination skills run in the MacAirt family, Minerva. Don't look at me that way! That's worse than when you thought I was lettin' me boy burn his self out! O' course, the witches are the ones with the real Gift. But most o' the rest of us are a fair shake at it. Carson probably had a bit o' talent for it."
Minerva chuckled. "Well, I think it's a bunch of imprecise poppycock, and if you make enough predictions and word them mysteriously enough, there's bound to be a few that could be interpreted to have come true."
"Divination isn't only about predictin' the future, Minerva. You should know that. That's just the part of it that people want most to exploit. It's also about knowin' the present. Knowin' the people around you. In business, I use it to help me decide whether a person or an enterprise is worth my trust and investment, not necessarily to predict how an investment will turn out."
"Hmmph. Still all seems vague and shadowy to me. You're better off just getting to know the people and doing some research."
Quin shrugged a shoulder. "Perhaps. But it works for me, most times. Not that I'm particularly gifted. Me gran, on the other hand, she was remarkable. Course, she was mostly interested in folks makin' good matches, not in business partnerships, but she could look at you wouldn't even need to do anythin' and she could tell you about the match that would make you happy. An' what ones would bring you to ruination. She tried warnin' some couples away from ill-advised marriages. They didn't listen, and you can imagine the results." Quin shook his head dramatically.
"What? A lifetime of happiness and a houseful of children?" asked Minerva with a smirk.
"Unhappiness, death, ill-fortune, all kinds of sadness. Gran never said 'I told you so,' though."
Minerva looked at him skeptically. "Yes, well, I can look at Walburga and Orion and say that they are fated for disaster, and their children are, as well. I don't think there's an ounce of Divination involved. Just common sense."
Quin grinned. "Well, not all folks have got common sense."
Minerva stifled a yawn.
"Now who's keepin' who up?" Quin asked.
"Oh, I had thought to have a nap this afternoon, but I will settle for a splash of cold water before I dress for dinner," Minerva answered. "I suppose we should head up to the house to change now."
"You go on ahead. I'm goin' to find me kids and make sure they are scrubbed up proper."
Minerva headed back to the house, wishing she had had an opportunity to ask Gertrude about the contents of Poppy's letter. She'd try to catch her alone after dinner for a few minutes. Minerva didn't want to monopolise her hostess's time; after all, Gertrude rarely saw her son, but he probably wanted to socialise with some of the other guests, anyway. She was sure she could catch her for a few minutes and find out more about what was going on that would warrant such an almost hysterical reaction on Poppy's part.
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954 Reviews | 6.45/10 Average
Okay...I think it's time for a Gertrude and Malcolm story. If you got any ideas like the proposal or her pregnancy I'm all ears. I've read this story 100 times but just wanted to say that this story is great every single time I read it, it always feels like my first time.
I have a love hate relationship with this fic. I do not enjoy stories where people spend time angsting when they could just tell each other how they feel and be done with it, no matter how it plays out. I enjoyed this because of Quin. If you hadn't had he or Getrude, this story wouldn't have worked for me. The witty dialogue is what kept me interested to the end. Well done with your OCs.
Review in progress... :-)
Putting myself in Albus's shoes - from his vantage point of what had played out between them - I can very well imagine how awfully guilty he must have felt, how repulsed by his own behaviour, how defeated, with no option but to assume things were over. Really sad and horrible, for him.
But then Gertrude...oh, how I love that woman! Her questioning of Albus, her coclusions: brilliant! Utterly love that small scene! :-)
Forgot to rate...
Must have been very upsetting, embarrassing and worrying for Albus indeed, to have found a young woman attractive for a few moments, only to find out that she's actually his student. I can so imagine how he must have been shocked and appalled by himself.
I loved seeing these two lively, bright and, both of them, determined and decisive girls: Melina seeing the need to educate on healing spells, before even being allowed to hold a wand; and Minerva, trying to take matters in hand concerning Albus's health as well as the running of Murdoch's household. Yet, I always find Melina bordering on overpowering and you already show that here, in her as a young girl.
"And what a pity we can’t hold hands as innocently as Melina does." I love this observation, which, I'd say, actually counts for all of us.
You made me realize it's a bit sad, isn't it? Holding hands is comforting and gives a sense of closeness, but once you're above a certain age (and experience?), there's just no way the innocence will ever come back, unless it's holding hands with a small child. Which means that I, and most likely by far the most of us, hardly ever hold hands anymore. Alas.
Very nice, serious chapter and probably decisive in Albus's later 'hesitations' towards Minerva. Right???
Soap in the eyes indeed! Malcolm is such a twit ... its hard not to like him at least a little ... still ... I think Gertrude is far too big a catch for the likes of this McGonagall ... *snorts*
Forgive me Madam Raven ... I'm bound to get uppity with at least one of your characters.
Even with my aggravation, I did enjoy Malcolm and Gertie's banter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Awww, you'd like Gertrude to be single and still all shades of mourning? Poor Malcolm! He adores her, you know! :-) ;-) He also amuses her & brings her some vitality. Glad you enjoyed their banter! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I know I know ... and you know why, of course ... his arrogance and swagger embarrass me because .... yes ... exactly ... reminds me of a younger version of ... someone foolish ... not saying whoooooo ... *whistles innocently*
And of course we can't have Gertie in all shades of black forever! She needs her lime green suits - just like in this chapter - she redresses in three shades of ... GREEN! Gertrude Spring! Seee! That's where I got the lime green from! *grins*
That and I would want her to find joyous love ... I love Gertie too much not to. Even if it has to be Malcolm. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There's a place in life for people who are a bit brash. Aside from their entertainment value! haha! But don't be down on those characteristics of yourself. You've noted yourself that you've learned to tone down a bit and not just say whatever pops into your head! :-)Yep, Malcolm got her to wear green, green, and green, and look all nice and cheerful. I was pretty sure you were remembering her post-Malcolm greenness when you mentioned the lime green suit. hee!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I will share something simple I have learned. Humility is a virtue and pride is a liability. *nods* And I has lots more liabilities than virtues, me thinks.
I so love this chapter. The dragon riding is just so incredible ... and then the duel is ABSOLUTELY awesome! I love the giant field of sunflowers and the fireball - aka - fire don't hurt phoenixes - snap you're stunned, Buddy bit.
Give me a Madam!
Give me a Raven!
Ravenclaw's Madam Raven!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Holy COW! Bloo knows English!
Dragons Dragons Dragons!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It was a stunner to get any review from Bloo that didn't consist of "Cheers for posting." It became so tiresome to keep opening TPP review alerts, go to the review page, and discover yet another of the exact same three words. I didn't want to turn off alerts altogether because I was still getting a lot of real reviews for fics that were still WIPs at the time.I'm glad you enjoyed the dragon riding and the "whoops, you're Stunned!" at the end. :-)Thanks!
Madam Raven, remind me which house Siofre was sorted into?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's Ravenclaw. And Lydia is Slytherin. Siofre's first husband - Merwyn's father - was Gryffindor, and her second husband Herbert was Hufflepuff.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I thought she was Ravenclaw. Still no idea who Lydia is ... I know her daughter is Maisy, or Maise or something like that.
Forgive me, I get all the McGonagalls and their affiliates, across yours, mine and Squibby's universes confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Lydia's her sister-in-law, remember? Murdoch Tyree's wife. She's a major CSG character. (I thought you were reading that at one point, but I must have misremembered.)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
No I was reading it (you are correct), but in the last six months I've lost about 40 IQ points and have forgotten nearly everything I used to know ... so I am behind on RaM-verse extensions. Bad me ...
*sighs* Albus ... Albus ... Albus ... most romantic man to ever grace .... fiction. If only men could be so romantic anymore. That poem is beautiful ... I am guessing, since there are no foot-notes, that it is one of your originals?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yep, Albus and I wrote that way early in the story. I'm not much of a poet, but I thought it felt and sounded like a poem that Albus would write.
*snip*
“Ah, well, it’s best not to rush things. Enjoy it, Minerva, savour it. He’s likely nervous, as well. The age difference is probably causing him far more concern than it is you. His perspective is different from yours, and as I said when you were here on Friday, he is from a different time and place. He also has had experiences in his life that you and I, fortunately, have been spared, and that I can only dimly imagine.”
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I really like that. That shows uncommon wisdom.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“No, simply . . . odd, disorienting, I suppose,” Albus replied, though Minerva thought that he did look tired and drawn. “It was so long ago, it is almost like remembering a dream. Collum was actually almost five years younger than I, in Aberforth’s year, but he was in my House, and I was also good friends with Perseus. Perseus and Crispinian were cousins of some sort, and Crispy was great friends with Collum, who was only a couple years younger than he. Anyway, for some reason – I don’t remember why, now – we were all here for a few days that summer after my NEWTs. I had just married, and I remember that Dervilia persuaded me that we should accept the invitation because I would be beginning my apprenticeship soon and would have much less time for my friends. I hadn’t been inclined to, wanting to spend the time with her, and feeling that they were all still children while I was a married man – at all of eighteen! But we actually had a good time. I remember that the girls – Siofre and Gwyn – visited once for the day and gave Dervilia some relief from our masculine company.” Now Minerva was beginning to feel peculiar. Gwynllian and Siofre, the “girls,” were her grandmothers. Perseus was Gwynllian’s brother, and Crispinian was her other grandfather. For a dizzying moment, Minerva felt as though she had stepped back in time, to a point when her Great-uncle Perseus was just a boy, friends with Crispinian, not knowing that Crispinian would marry his sister, Gwyn, nor that Collum would marry Siofre and die in an accident when his son, Merwyn, was just a baby. And Albus and Dervilia . . . that their happiness would be very short-lived.
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Woah ... yeah that would make me uncomfortable as well ... that is ... well that is just ... well ... my head would be swimming if I were Minerva.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it is dizzying for Minerva, and it gives her an appreciation for some of the points her mother made, and for how and why Albus would not be completely comfortable yet.
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“Hold still, Merwyn! Your collar is all askew here,” Egeria said with slight impatience.“Don’t see why we have to get all dressed up,” Merwyn grumbled. “I thought what I was wearing this morning was perfectly acceptable.” “Those old brown robes make you look like Friar Tuck,” Egeria grumbled back.“They do not! Besides, I thought you liked my brown robes. That’s what you said the last time I wore them!” “No, it isn’t. I said I liked taking them off of you. There is a difference,” Egeria said with a smile. She patted his tummy and added, “And you are right, you don’t look like Friar Tuck. You have a much nicer figure – though heaven only knows why, when you sit behind your desk all day or in the library with your feet up.”
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Tee hee hee ... now Madam Raven, don't take my head off here, as you know I tend to picture your characters in my mind regardless of how you describe him ... but I thought you'd like to know how I picture Merwyn ... and here I see that I was wrong.
I picture Merwyn of average height, black hair that is now full of silver and white, and a very round figure ... probably from all that sitting behind his desk.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva laughed. “Fly without a broom? No, haven’t mastered that, wouldn’t try. It’s not possible.”It was Albus’s turn to laugh. “Not impossible, merely very rare in this part of the world. And the Ministry would like to keep it that way. Hard to regulate that sort of thing. Most witches and wizards couldn’t accomplish it, anyway.”Minerva stopped and looked back at him. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Not at all. I rarely do it, myself, although when I was with Master Nyima, I became quite adept. I would sometimes fly with Mother Dragon. I think that is one reason she took a liking for me, actually.”Minerva looked at him a moment, digesting this information, then she shook her head and continued the climb. Well, she hadn’t believed it was possible to become as completely invisible as Albus could, either. In fact, at the time, she had actually thought that she had always believed becoming invisible was as impossible as flight without a Charmed object. Apparently, it was, though not the way that she had believed. She should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore.
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*grins* I like this.
See ... we HP fans know that Dumbledore is brilliant and amazingly powerful ... but just to say it, well its a bit of a let-down, and harder to take as fact. But showing it ... especially in a sideways manner such as this ... an off-handed type of author's compliment, well that seems to me, to be perfection. I can truly appreciate his amazing talents here ... especially considering that Minerva (who is particularly powerful and talented) is amazed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you liked that. :-)I remember knowing that I would slip that in way back when I wrote the chapter where Dumbledore invisibly observes Minerva doing her tutoring session, and I always envisioned it happening at her family home -- I'd originally been going to have him actually fly, but without a good reason, it would have felt too stilted, especially since his Animagus form flies, so that would be more natural.
*shakes head* Malcolm, Malcolm, Malcolm ... there is such a thing as tact .... *groans* sadly .... I think I get most frustrated with Malcolm because he reminds me of myself ... er ... I should clarify, my younger self, who was obnoxiously blunt and said what ever came to my mind ... and I likely came off as gruff and uncouth as Malcolm does ... so its an annoying reminder of just how ungracious I can be. *grumbles*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
FINALLY! Hooray for Quin and Wilspy ... *steals Wilspy and takes her to the island where she's stashed Gertrude*
I thought about stealing Quin but ... I am on this celibacy kick ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Oooohhhhh noooooes! *MMADfan enlists Quin to help find and steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*Quin turns on the charm , turning
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
's celibate knees to jelly so she can't chase after MMADfan as she steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*floats like a jellyfish (uber slow) across the water while she sees Quin, Gertrude and Wilspy sail off on the boat. Is quite sure Wilspy and Gertrude are crying and waving in mourning as Quin steals them both from the enchanted island*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Heheheh!!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its an island enchanted to have no mosquitos, sand flies, fire ants or thorny trees/bushes but lots of beautiful fish, both shell and fin, and a huge variety of fruit trees and veggies year round, and maintains a perfect temperature and humidity level ... *sighs*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I wanna go there!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Me too!
This is the chapter that I want to throttle Minerva and grant Quin sainthood ... honestly ... what she does to that poor man ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know. Minerva was not at her best there, was she? Poor Quin!
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Finally, at midnight, he went down to his office and opened the cupboard in which he kept his Charmed parchments. He rarely used them, and he hesitated to now. It would be prying . . . it would be for his own personal gain, not for school business. But he cast the necessary spells, and the results were clear and easy to read, there were so few people in the castle. Johannes was in his bedroom in Ravenclaw Tower. Gertrude and Malcolm . . . were both together. In her rooms. In her bedroom, in fact. Well, that answered one question that he hadn’t wished to ask. Johannes’s name was steady, but Gertrude’s and Malcolm’s names seemed to pulse, becoming thicker and bolder, then returning to the normal script. He could imagine what that might mean, and he averted his eyes. But Minerva’s name was not on the list. There was Fawkes listed. For some reason, he was perched in the Astronomy Tower. But no other being or creature was named. Albus still hadn’t set the wards properly to detect the ghosts. It had been a low priority, and he had never managed to get to it.
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OOOOOOOOOooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT's how the Mara's Map was created! Or at least, that is one way ... nice little intry there, Madam Raven!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the magic that allows those Charmed parchments is the magic that was tapped into to create the Marauders' map. It's part of the magic that was being tested and fixed that summer when Minerva helped with the wards, changing back and forth into her Tabby self to see whether the wards detected her identity when she turned into her Animagus form -- the wards had been so damaged that they no longer detected someone who was in Animagus form.Many years later, this became important for seeing Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black on the map. Also, by the time that he enlisted Minerva's help, Dumbledore had already fixed the ward that detected the true identity of someone who was disguised using Polyjuice -- meaning that during GoF, Potter saw that B. Crouch was searching Snape's office. Of course, he thought that it was B. Crouch senior, not the crazy son who had supposedly died in Azkaban. The fake Moody (Barty Crouch) took the map from Harry so that Harry wouldn't notice that Moody never left his office (where he was stuck in the trunk), and that where Moody apparently was, Crouch actually was.
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“I thought I was being seduced, but it has been a while . . . I may have been wrong,” Gertrude answered, her breath warm upon his face.
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I just love her wit.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She is one sharp Slytherin, and she loves answering a question at a different level than it was being asked. :-)
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“Yes, you mentioned that at the party. You are aware of how Gertrude’s husband died, though?” Minerva asked.
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What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Goodness - Minerva has a serious voyeur problem, doesn't she? Naughty!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's concerned that Malcolm might bring up a sensitive subject in an inappropriate way, for one, but mostly, she's worried that Malcolm might just be in it for the fun and that Gertrude is vulnerable if he just up and leaves. Gertrude hasn't formed any other attachment since the trauma of having her husband killed in such a gruesome manner, as far as Minerva knows, so Minerva's worred that Gertrude is opening herself up in a rare manner and that her brother might just be too cavalier with her feelings. (I'd have to reread the section, but that's what I remember o fher motivation.)I'm sure Minerva wishes she had better timing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
As I continued to read, Minerva's concern was apparent, as usual, in my typical Gryffie fashion - we leap before we look ... or rather, we shoot our mouths off before we have all the facts. *sighs*
Oh hooooo! Malcolm may think he doesn't want to become too ... attached ... but his heroic defense of 'good' Slytherins sure tells me something or other about a recent acquaintance of his.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is definitely defensive here! Seems he is becoming more than a little attached to a certain Slytherin!
I so love Gertrude. I want a Gertrude in my life! *steals Gertrude and runs away*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*MMADfan puts on her running shoes and jogs after
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“It was a long time ago, as I said, that it all began. When I was a child, really, I suppose. I would like to be able to say with some modesty that my time as a student was unremarkable, but it was not. I excelled at whatever I put my hand, mind, and magic to. I was eager to learn, even more eager than you were – indeed, the Sorting Hat very nearly put me in Ravenclaw, but it decided, in the end, that my nature and my need were Gryffindor. “I chafed at what I saw were restrictions on me and my progress. I found most of my teachers wanting, and believed them dull and unimaginative. Nonetheless, I wanted to please them, and please them I usually did. But I pushed every boundary and stretched it. If it weren’t for the guidance and firm hand of Professor Futhark, I might have become even more insufferable than I no doubt was. But despite my general attitude, I found myself with friends of all types, and, with a rather foolish and overblown sense of my own importance, I came to believe myself not only advanced academically but also better than my peers and their natural leader. And, I suppose, I was – academically advanced and a leader, not better than they,” he clarified.
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I really like this ... it sounds very Albus to me ... save for the Ravenclaw bit *grins* but sometimes you just gotta tout yer house, right?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that sometimes, it's really clear that there's one House that a witch or wizard belongs in, and other times, there are others that would suit, too. I think Albus could have fit in with Ravenclaw -- he certainly pursued knowledge, both Light and Dark -- but there were bits of his personality that drove him that were Gryffindor that shaped his intellect and his use of it. (I can't have written that part of the monologue and really substituted "Hufflepuff" -- though I think that with a few tweaks to the text, Slytherin could have been included as an option -- he is a wily wizard, after all!)I'm glad you like it. It's one of the reasons that I think this section, these chapters, work better as a first-person recounting than as I had originally written it -- in the third person as a kind of flashback. We get to see Albus's personality then and now, and his own take on his character as a teen and young man, and how it developed.
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“Not a bit of trouble, my dear man, not a bit of it! A friend of the Headmaster’s is a friend of mine, I’d like to think! And dear Gertrude, of course.” He winked at Quin. “She’s quite the witch, isn’t she? Knew each other as students of course. Had a bit of a crush on me at the time, I think.”
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I have to laugh at this ... I just do ... he's a younger and less wise Slughorn than the Sluggy I know from HBP, so it does make sense that he'd brag a bit louder and exaggerate a bit stronger ... but saying that of one's co-worker - wow! That takes some ... something ...
You know I have a soft spot for Slughorn I think it would be fun to pick his brain and study him ... especially try to determine what conditions cause him to puff out his chest the most ... call me weird.
I also love any and all descriptions of the various houses, since we only see two of them in the movies - Slytherin and Gryffindor ... never did get a chance to see Ravenclaw's or Hufflepuff's ... shame really. I'd love to see the Badger room, all decked out in black and yellow - I think I'd feel like I was snug inside a giant bee hive! Oh and I would imagine there would be plenty of honey.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, Sluggy's sense of grandiosity is quite at its peak here. And it's not yet been burst by the emergence of the Slytherin "Death Eater sect" led by one of his former star pupils. So he's amiably pompous, tries a bit too hard to chum-up to Quin, and yet there is a part of him that genuinely likes other people (in my view) and simply wants them to like him in return. I really enjoyed envisioning the Slytherin dorms and some of the more decent Slytherins in "The Sorting of Susie Sefton." It was fun to look at them from a different POV than we had in the books, and yet try to make it all still recognizably Slytherin.It would be neat to experience Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. And I wonder if Hufflepuff would be all honey with no stings attached ...
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“It is worth far more than that, Horace, as you know,” Gertrude said, “and even if you offered what it might fetch on the open market, you know the Headmaster still wouldn’t part with it. Your grumbling about it every time he generously chooses to share it is most unseemly and detracts from our enjoyment.”
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HAHAHAHAHA! Stop complainin and enjoy the bloody mead, yeh buggar!
I do like this chapter, I love just the idea that being a head of house, or even just a teacher, creates some sort of bond, or weave, in the magical wards and structure of the castle. And its nice to see the faculty supporting each other.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh and, I also love lore with the Sorting Hat - for some reason I find that 'character' of Rowling's to be fascinating.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I like to imagine that each teacher in the history of Hogwarts, especially Heads of Houses and Headmasters/mistresses, leave some of themselves, some of their magic, in the wards, helping to strengthen the school long after they're gone. That would be a heritage.The Sorting Hat is fascinating, and I think it is intriguing to contemplate whether it's sentient or not, and what its existence says about sentience, at least in the HP/Hogwarts universe.
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Besides, when I first began teaching, it wasn’t long after Reginald died. It didn’t feel as though it had been long, anyway. I was not particularly concerned with what I looked like. It became a habit. And now I’m too old to be worried about such things.”
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Oh how I can relate to that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, I think Gertrude is quite human here. But it's interesting how when Malcolm comes into her life, she begins to take an interest in her clothes again! Or at least, they reflect a cheerier self. :-)
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Albus smiled and sliced them each a piece. The cake itself was chocolate, and it was filled with raspberries and thick whipped cream. There was more whipped cream, Minerva thought, than cake. The icing was chocolate, one layer of an almost brittle icing, then a softer chocolate butter cream over that in decorative curlicues and rosettes. Whole raspberries topped it all off.
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GAH! I want a cake like that for my birthday - ANY birthday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Me too!
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“All right. Are you finished, then? Would you like more wine? I have another bottle – ”Albus laughed. “Are you getting me in practice for your brothers?”Minerva smiled. “I don’t think I could drink any more, either, but I thought I would offer. We can have some cognac with our dessert.”Albus pushed back from the table. “We could try out your wireless,” he suggested.“Good!” Minerva would be agreeable to almost anything he suggested right now.
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I'll bet she would!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva looked up at him and was struck by how very attractive he was. In that moment, she would have agreed that the sound of monkeys banging ashcans was nice. Fortunately, this was the station’s “music for the dinner hour,” and really was pleasant.
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*bursts out laughing, barking in fact*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Minerva is in a very agreeable mood!