CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts
Chapter 109 of 141
MMADfanMinerva leaves Hogwarts to continue her holiday. She visits Edinburgh, seeing a couple she hadn't anticipated seeing together. The next afternoon, Malcolm comes for dinner.
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Minerva had only been home a day, and she was already growing restless, her thoughts turning continually to Hogwarts and Albus. She had seen Albus at dinner on Tuesday evening, but had scarcely been able to speak to him, as there were still a number of other staff members at the castle after Professor Pretnick's small memorial, and it seemed that every one of them wanted the Headmaster's ear. She couldn't blame them, or him, but it did frustrate her. At least she had been able to confirm to Albus that she would be gone from the castle for the next several days, visiting her parents and spending some time with her niece. She had restrained herself from going to see Albus that evening, not wanting to appear too needy after all, they had just spent the afternoon walking through the garden, and she was going to be returning to the school within the week.
Now, though, Minerva wished that she had taken proper leave from Albus, if not that evening, then the next morning before she Apparated to the McGonagall house. Perhaps it would be easier to get him out of her mind if she had seen him again before she left. At least this afternoon she would be going to Melina's and staying for supper, then Malcolm was coming for dinner the next day. She would simply have to keep busy.
Shortly after she had arrived home the previous morning, Minerva had received a letter from Quin in answer to hers of the day before. He was very sympathetic, but tried to encourage her to view things in a positive light and not to focus only on her doubts. He said that he was returning to London that afternoon, bringing both his children with him, and they would spend the next several days together until the children went to spend a week with their Grandmother Ella. Quin would still be having dinner with them every evening he was in town, though, since Ella's flat was in London. But Ella had complained that she had not seen enough of the children in the last few months, and since he had some business travel scheduled, he thought this would provide the children an opportunity to spend time with their other grandmother before Alroy had to leave for Hogwarts. Quin said he would be busy over the next few weeks, between family and business, but that if she wanted to come to London for lunch or dinner, or meet him in Hogsmeade or elsewhere, he would find the time for her.
Minerva had written back and thanked Quin, but said that at the moment, she thought she would just do "family things," as well, hoping that time with her family would provide her some perspective on her situation at Hogwarts. Now, though, sitting the library, a book unopened on her lap, Minerva doubted that her time away from Hogwarts would do anything except make her even more desperate for the slightest gesture of affection from Albus. What would she do during term time, when they were both so much more constrained by their schedules and the presence of so many more people in the castle? Perhaps being that busy would actually be a help . . .
Minerva set the book aside and decided to Apparate to Edinburgh early. Melina would still be at work for the morning, but Murdoch would be in the apothecary. She could do a little shopping in McTavish Street and keep her brother company in the apothecary if it was slow, perhaps give him a hand with something. Minerva told her parents that she was leaving and would be back sometime that evening.
She Apparated to the park and walked over to the apothecary from there, smiling as she remembered how she and Melina had happened into Albus that warm summer's day the week before she was to return to Hogwarts to assist with the wards. She had finally managed to gain some control over herself and It, and she had enjoyed having Albus join them as she treated Melina to a bowl of ice cream. Of course, Albus had ended up treating them, but they had a nice time. It was one of the first times when she was still in school that she felt as though she had related to Albus as one adult to another, and not just as a student to her teacher. Of course, he had bristled when she had suggested that he might be suffering from the heat . . . that much hadn't changed, Minerva thought with a sigh. Sometimes, Albus seemed to welcome her care and concern, and other times, he behaved as though her concern was completely unwanted.
Minerva stepped into the cool apothecary, and a bell rang in the back of the shop. Looking around, she didn't see her brother, but his chime must have alerted him that she had entered. She was just examining a barrel of bulk desiccated Flobberworm larvae and wondering what on earth they were used for when Murdoch stuck his head out from the back room.
"Oh, Minerva! Hello! I wasn't expecting you. I think Melina said she was meeting you here at one and we would have lunch together."
"I was just bored at home. I thought I would pop around early, give you a hand, if you needed it, or go shopping if you didn't," Minerva answered.
"If you would like, you can stay . . . take care of customers for me, unless they have special requests. I'm brewing at the moment and I let Lawrence have the day to visit his sister, since she just had her first baby," Murdoch said, referring to his single apprentice. "And, um, Poppy's here she's keeping an eye on the potion now, but I should really go check it. It will need to have the Doxie wings added soon."
Minerva shuddered at that thought. No wonder she hadn't done particularly well in Potions. The ingredients tended to be disgusting. And Doxie wings weren't the worst of them.
"Poppy's here?" Minerva asked with a smiled. "Well, I'll let you get back to her . . . and your potion." She just restrained herself from giving Murdoch a cheeky wink, as he no doubt would give her under similar circumstances. But if Murdoch and Poppy were hitting it off, even if just as friends, she didn't want to do anything that would make him feel uncomfortable about it.
Murdoch grinned. "Right-o. I'll send her out to keep you company in a few minutes, then. Just give me a shout if you need any help with a customer."
"No need to send Poppy out, not if she's helping you with the potion." This time, Minerva couldn't keep a rather big grin from crossing her face, but Murdoch just grinned broadly, himself, and disappeared back into the rear of the shop.
Minerva was able to assist three customers, though she had some difficulty at first determining the price for the Runespoor eggshells. It didn't help that the customer kept up a running complaint about the fact that Murdoch had no Runespoor eggs and he might just have to take his custom elsewhere.
As Minerva handed the customer his package of shells, she smiled pleasantly and said, "If you are able to find a reputable apothecary anywhere in Britain or Europe that sells Runespoor eggs, I would be most surprised. And any disreputable apothecary that would sell such a thing would probably be providing you with fakes and cheating you."
The customer left, still grumbling about the unreasonable restrictions on necessary potions ingredients.
Finally, Minerva had to fetch Murdoch to help a customer who had questions that she felt best answered by an expert. She walked into the backroom to find her brother and Poppy together, Murdoch sitting on one of his high stools, his back to the potion, and Poppy standing in front of him between his legs, Murdoch's arms loosely around her waist, her hands on his shoulders, and engaged in a very sensuous kiss. Minerva reddened, but knocked loudly on the door frame. Poppy jumped back and Murdoch almost fell off the stool.
"Oh, Merlin, Minerva! You startled me . . . us," Murdoch said.
"If the potion doesn't require your immediate attention," Minerva said, still blushing, "there is a customer who is asking about a few of the potions, and I don't know enough about them to answer her."
"Yes, of course," Murdoch said. He turned back to Poppy and smiled softly. "I'll just be a few minutes. Keep an eye on the potion for me?"
Poppy nodded, and a pleased expression crossed her face when Murdoch kissed her cheek gently before leaving.
"Well, I would say that you two are becoming well-acquainted," Minerva said to her friend, not suppressing her smile.
Poppy blushed and nodded. "I think he likes me, Min."
"I would say so I dare say it's been many a year since he's canoodled with a witch in the backroom. Have you spent much time together over the last week?"
"We've seen each other several times . . . I think that since you brought me for dinner last Monday, the only day we haven't seen each other at least for an hour or two was Tuesday, when I was at Hogwarts," the mediwitch answered.
"And why didn't you say anything to me then?" Minerva asked. "I would have enjoyed hearing some good news on that rather sombre day."
"I thought about it, but you were busy, then you disappeared. I didn't stay for dinner because I told Violet I would watch her children while she and Dylan were out that evening. It wasn't something I could mention in the twenty second conversation that we had before the memorial. I liked your speech, by the way."
"Thank you . . . yes, it was a busy day," Minerva agreed. "I am happy to see you and Murdoch getting along so well, so to speak."
Poppy blushed again. "I suppose it's too early to say how serious it is, but I really do like him very much, I enjoy spending time with him and not just doing what we were doing just now, either. He is simply nice, and very funny, too."
A little bell chimed and Poppy picked up a stirring rod and began to stir the potion in a figure-eight pattern. As she stirred, she said, "I don't want to push things along too fast, though. He's been essentially a bachelor for a long time, and living with your daughter and a house-elf is not the same as having a relationship with a witch. I don't want to spook him."
"He didn't look spooked to me," Minerva observed.
Poppy shrugged. "I also don't want to get cold feet. I'm enjoying this too much and I like him too well I don't want to rush, then get nervous about where it's going and then do or say something stupid."
Minerva nodded. "I can understand that . . . does this mean that the quality time you've been spending together has been, um, limited in scope, so to speak?"
"I can't believe you just asked me that, Minerva! This is your brother!" Poppy exclaimed.
"I know that, but I'm just . . . curious. Every day for almost two weeks all right, with the exception of Tuesday that's some very intensive time. And you won't be able to spend that kind of time with him when school starts in less than a month," Minerva said.
Poppy visibly slumped. "I know it. I suppose that is why every time he suggests we get together, I agree, and when he doesn't suggest it, I do. I'm afraid he'll grow tired of spending time with me . . . but that's all the more reason not to move too fast. And that should answer your question. What you just saw, that was almost the extent of, um, our activities."
"It certainly looked promising. I'm surprised either of you can keep from moving beyond that if all of your kisses are like the one I witnessed. It was like your lips were having sex," Minerva said bluntly.
Poppy giggled. "It felt like that, too. But that's one reason why we scarcely even touch each other when we're in the flat, I think. We haven't discussed it, but . . . I think we are both thinking that it's best to keep that sort of temptation at bay. At least for the time being."
"As long as you are both happy. That's what matters, that you are happy and enjoying yourselves. Murdoch certainly looked very happy," Minerva said.
"Murdoch is very happy," a deep voice behind her said. "And I do have a bone to pick with you, Minerva, for not introducing me sooner to this most . . . delightful witch." Murdoch crossed the room and put his hands at Poppy's waist, looking over her shoulder at the potion. "Just another few stirs, Poppy, and it will be good for the next hour."
After Poppy removed the stirring rod and placed it on the slab next to the potion, Murdoch kissed the back of her neck.
"Well, I'll be happy to watch the shop for a while longer," Minerva offered.
"No, that's all right. Why don't you and Poppy go shopping, talk about whatever it is that witches talk about when the brother of one of them is smitten with the other," Murdoch said, not taking his eyes off Poppy, and smiling when Poppy blushed and smiled.
After they were in the street, Minerva said, "I don't think you have to worry about Murdoch losing interest in you. I don't think I've ever heard Murdoch use the word 'delightful' to describe any witch, ever, and the fact that he said, in front of me, that he was smitten . . . I think that means he really is."
"Really? I thought he was just teasing," Poppy said.
"He was teasing, but in such a way that I could tell that he also meant it quite seriously. I think that, whether you want him or not, you now have a Potions master, Poppy. Handle with care!" Minerva said with a laugh. "You never know what might happen with the introduction of volatile ingredients, after all!"
Poppy laughed, and the two went through a few shops, not buying anything, just looking and joking, Poppy's ebullient mood contagious. As they were leaving Enrobed, Robes for Every Day and Every Witch, Minerva looked over at her smiling friend and, for just a moment, she felt a stab of envy. That Poppy could so easily and openly express interest in Murdoch and then take steps to get to know him and explore whether he might reciprocate created a sense of bereavement in Minerva's heart.
Poppy looked over at Minerva at just that moment. "Minerva, are you all right?" she asked, a look of concern on her face.
Minerva smiled. "I'm fine. Where to next?" she asked briskly. "Melina won't be here until one, so we have another half hour. We could just go back to the apothecary and you could help Murdoch with his potion."
"That one should be done already. He said he wasn't going to do much brewing today, with Lawrence away. He thought he might even close up shop early. He said that there is a film he wants to see, and we thought that before the show, we'd eat at an Indian restaurant he likes. I've only been to the cinema twice, and the last time was quite a while ago, so I thought it would be fun."
"Yes, it seems that Brennan is Mugglizing the McGonagall clan. Hopefully, it will stop with the Edinburgh McGonagalls. My life is complicated enough without having Dad thinking he needs to buy an automobile or an aeroplane or some such."
Poppy laughed. "Did you know that Melina is learning to drive?"
"What?" Minerva asked, puzzled.
"An automobile, of course. Brennan is finding the task of teaching a witch the finer points of Muggle traffic laws quite a challenge, I think. We all had dinner together on Sunday, and his stories were quite amusing. He claims to be getting grey hairs from it," Poppy said with a grin.
"It can't be any worse than a Side-Along from her," Minerva said. "Not only is she the loudest Apparater I've ever met, I think she'd make anyone sick to their stomach, not just me. Brennan's probably just trying to avoid having to Side-Along with her anymore!"
The two returned to the apothecary, where Murdoch greeted them with more enthusiasm than necessary since they had seen him only two hours before. When Melina arrived, Murdoch closed up shop and the four of them Apparated to Melina's new flat, Murdoch bringing Poppy in a Side-Along. Brennan arrived for a lunch of soup, bread, and cheese, but had to leave immediately after to return to his shop, and Murdoch Apparated Poppy someplace, telling her he was going to surprise her. Minerva spent the rest of the day with Melina, looking at the house and how she was furnishing it from the odds and ends from the McGonagall attic. It looked quite good, although it still could do with more furniture, and Melina and Brennan were planning another excursion to the attic on the weekend. Melina pointed out the second-floor room that was going to be especially for Minerva when she came to visit.
"Of course, when you're not here, we may have other guests stay in it if the other bedrooms are full, but we thought you might like to have somewhere to go that wasn't the McGonagall place," Melina explained enthusiastically. "You are always welcome here, Auntie Min. If we have other guests, we'll just find other accommodation for them. Otherwise, well, it's fairly private, too, since there's a bathroom up here, and our room is down on the first floor, and if we have a baby, the nursery will be there, as well. And, of course, you're welcome to bring a friend. If you need a separate bedroom for him or her, if it's somebody like Poppy, of course there's the small one across the hall. But I thought I'd do the room in Gryffindor colours and try to make it comfortable for you. Speaking of Gryffindor colours, how is your new set of rooms at Hogwarts?"
Minerva protested their setting aside a bedroom especially for her use, but Melina insisted, reminding her that it was rather impractical for her to have a flat when she spent most of the year at Hogwarts. And sometimes one wanted a place to go, Melina declared, other than the family home, as nice as that was.
"Besides," Melina added, "it would be difficult for you to impose on us, since you are at the school most of the time, required to be there, even. And that is all the more reason for you to have somewhere to go when you can get away from the school. Any time, Minerva, really. Whatever is going on here, you're family, and without you, it would have been so much harder for us. If it hadn't been for you and Professor Dumbledore, I don't know whether we would even still be together now, let alone be getting married in two weeks!"
Minerva stayed for dinner, watching as Melina used the Muggle cooker.
"It took some getting used to, but now I'm quite adept, if I do say so myself. I still use a lot of magic, of course, but we had to have Muggle appliances not just for Brennan's sake, but because when our friends come by, many of them are Muggles, and I can't have them wondering about our kitchen, or anything else they may see."
Brennan arrived for dinner, and Minerva learned that, although he had moved over many of his things, he was still living in his flat over the shop. She was somewhat surprised by this, and it must have shown in her face.
Brennan grinned and said, "Well, we do have to save something for after the wedding, and spending an entire night together in our own place seemed manageable."
"It is sometimes, difficult, though," Melina added. "It's hard for me to let him leave some nights, which is why I think we'll be doing supper at his place from now until we're married. I can just Apparate away before bedtime . . . it will be so nice not to do that any longer."
Finally, Minerva said that it was time for her to be going, and she offered to Side-Along Brennan back to his address. She had never been in his flat, but she'd been to the shop. Minerva said it would be no problem to Apparate him to the alley behind it.
"Brennan doesn't like to Side-Along, Min," Melina explained as Brennan hesitated. "He'd rather take Muggle transportation, even if it costs him money."
"Has he ever Apparated with anyone but you? No? Brennan, I think that you might have an easier time of it if I give you a Side-Along no offense, Melina, but yours are truly dreadful. I think even Dad would have a hard time, and nothing ever seems to bother his stomach." She turned back to Brennan. "You may still experience a moment or two of vertigo, but it shouldn't be too bad. And if you are sick, we'll know not to do it again."
Brennan reluctantly agreed, and Minerva discreetly stepped into the foyer while he said good-bye to his fiancée. It took them ten minutes, but finally, Brennan emerged.
Minerva said, "You aren't a wizard, but I still think you might be able to make it easier at least on yourself by visualising the alley. So close your eyes, visualise the alley, and breathe regularly, even if you feel nervous. And don't open your eyes immediately upon arrival just keep visualising the alley for a moment or two, then open them. It might help with your vertigo a little."
She had Brennan stand beside her and put one arm around her shoulder while she put one of hers around his waist. After he confirmed that he was visualising the alley, Minerva waved good-bye to her niece and Disapparated. When they arrived in the alley, Minerva waited to make sure that Brennan wasn't going to faint or fall over, then she let go.
"How was that?" she asked.
Brennan opened his eyes and blinked a few times before letting go of Minerva.
"All right, actually. I was a little dizzy at first, but there was no nausea at all, and I didn't feel like the world was spinning around me." He seemed astonished at that.
"I am going to see if I can have someone help Melina with her Apparating. She'll likely take some offense, but if I tell her it's so that she can Apparate with you more easily, I think she'll do it. She's never Splinched, that I know of, but she is dreadfully noisy, and her Side-Alongs, well, you know about them."
"Spinched?" Brennan asked, puzzled, as they began to walk to the end of the alley.
"Splinched. It can happen if one doesn't have enough determination, or if they don't have their destinations firmly fixed in their mind. You leave a bit of your body behind, so part of you arrives and part of you doesn't. Come to think of it, until Melina has the extra . . . tutoring, don't Apparate with her unless it's an emergency. Splinching is almost never fatal, although if it isn't repaired immediately, it can cause permanent injury. And I have a very strong feeling that Splinching would not be as easy on a Muggle, and unless you only lost a fingernail or some hair or something of that sort, it could be quite serious. Yes, I will definitely talk to Melina about this. I'll write her a letter in the morning, in fact."
Brennan had grown quite pale as Minerva discussed Splinching, and he assured Minerva that he would not be Apparating Side-Along with Melina again until she had received some remedial training.
The next day, Minerva spent the morning with her father working on his latest acquisition, an ancient Pali wizarding text. She wasn't very much help, since she knew no Pali, but she enjoyed helping her father find the most apposite English translations, although some of them were such circumlocutions, Merwyn said, that the original meaning seemed impossible to capture. Finally, at about eleven o'clock, he suggested a cup of tea and a change of focus.
"After we have our tea, why don't we take a look at the translation you said you were having difficulty with, Min?"
Minerva had brought home her copy of The Book of Taliesin, and she was working on a poem that was particularly difficult to translate. She had worked on it shortly after receiving the manuscript, then put it aside and worked instead on some of the less difficult ones. She was only just now returning to it. The poem was one of the ones that appeared in neither the oldest Muggle copy nor in the oldest publicly-known wizarding copy, and Minerva was finding it very frustrating and remembered now why she had abandoned it more than a decade before.
After they had their tea in the kitchen, Minerva fetched the manuscript and they returned to her father's study. Merwyn examined the Welsh original, then looked at Minerva's most recent attempt at translation.
"Hmm, yes, I see where your problem lies. The inflections are unusual, and you have also been trying to translate each word rather than looking at the phrasing which is also somewhat unusual. This is certainly the oldest text of the ones I've looked at in this manuscript, and the least changed by the scribe who copied it. See, here's your translation:
"Born to light in darkness I was
"and falling high and brightly
"I rose to sun-soaked plains and clouds
"a life ungiven and last I releasing life
"grasp to come out again and find once more
"what unlearned I had long forgotten
"and so will I climb again
"up the ravine and down the cairn
"to birth myself anew
"and gain through sorrow
"all undeserving I swallowed whole once
"and in my quest unaccompanied
"will I be by silence or roar or crash of sea
"not that will one await in quiet din
"and lead final steps of mine
"to ultimate fire and summit power."
Merwyn read out her translation, then he went through the Welsh, phrase by phrase, with Minerva, and when they were finished, they had a new translation:
In darkness, I was born to light,
and falling, high and brightly,
I rose to sun-soaked plains and clouds,
to a life ungiven.
From life, I release my final grasp
to reemerge and find again
what, unlearned, I had long forgotten.
And so will I climb again
up the ravine and down the cairn
to birth myself anew
and earn through sorrow
what, all undeserving, once I swallowed whole.
In my quest, unaccompanied
will I be, not by silence, nor by roar or crash of sea;
instead, one will await me in the din of quiet
and lead me in my final steps
to ultimate flame and power's summit.
"Well, that makes a little more sense, I suppose," Minerva said. "At least superficially. But I can't say I really understand it."
"It is one of the mystical, prophetic poems, so the language is meant metaphorically," Merwyn explained. "No doubt, it meant something to the poet and, perhaps, to the small audience to which it was addressed. The 'I' could be the poet himself or it could represent someone or something else entirely. Perhaps once you have translated a few of the other texts unique to this manuscript, its meaning will become clearer. They may be related, and that may be why they appear in this manuscript and none of the other extant copies."
They perused some of the other translations that Minerva had made over the years, her father offering suggestions for improvements, until Egeria arrived home at one o'clock, and they had lunch. Malcolm had owled his mother the day before and said that he would be arriving some time that afternoon, but had not been any more specific than that. Minerva and her father were in the library playing chess when Malcolm walked in, wearing a kilt and sporran rather than either robes or trousers.
"It was a warm day today," Malcolm explained, "and I had some work for a few wizarding folk and spent some time around Muggles, as well."
He sat and watched the other two play chess for a while, then got up and wandered off, saying something about finding his mother and asking about gathering some herbs from her garden.
"Wonder what he wants with Mother's herbs," Minerva said idly as she moved her rook.
"Probably for some pest-control potion or other," Merwyn replied. "Or maybe just for seasoning his dinner tomorrow!"
After she had beaten her father for the first time in months, Minerva decided to quit on a high note, and went off to find her brother. She found him in the herb garden with their mother, who was explaining the best method for harvesting the small leaves of a particular plant and admonishing him, probably unnecessarily, to take only a few from each plant.
"I don't want to come out here tomorrow morning and discover that one of them has been completely denuded, Malcolm!" Egeria said.
Malcolm grinned. "I think I can manage that, Mother. Hello, little sister! Done defeating Dad?"
"Yes, so I thought I would rest on my laurels for a little while, at least, and come find you," Minerva answered.
"I'm going to go see Fwisky about dinner. You two have fun!" Egeria said, dusting off her green robes.
"So, doing a little cooking, Malcolm? Or brewing?" Minerva asked, curious.
"Wouldn't cook with these unless I wanted to make myself rather ill," Malcolm responded. "I'll gather them before I leave tonight. How is Hogwarts biding?"
"Much the same as usual. We had a memorial service on Tuesday for Professor Pretnick," Minerva answered.
"Bitten by a werewolf . . . can't say I'd make the decision he did, but I can understand it," Malcolm said.
"Please don't, if you ever are bitten, Malcolm. You may irritate me, but I would miss you!"
"No worries there, little sister. I don't plan on being bitten, and if ever I am . . . there are remote places one can go, chase a few beasts and encounter no human beings. Suicide is certainly an extreme solution for a problem that only crops up a few days a month," Malcolm said.
"Have you ever dealt with werewolves?" Minerva asked.
"Mmm. Singly. Werewolves, unlike true wolves, as you most likely are aware, are not pack animals, but solitary hunters, seeking their favourite prey, and, unlike vampires, who often develop an attachment to those they have turned, during the full moon, werewolves do not seek out those they have infected, and when they are human, they are unaware of anyone whom they may have bitten. They could pass each other on the street, and although they would likely recognise a fellow sufferer of the curse, they would have no way of knowing whether one of them infected the other," Malcolm said. "And because of the stigma attached to being a werewolf, even when they recognise each other in their human forms as being fellow sufferers, they do not usually speak of it. In fact, they tend to avoid one another." He shrugged. "Just as well, I suppose. Folk might become paranoid if werewolves started gathering during their human time. Think they were up to something, despite the fact that the werewolves don't remember their true selves when they transform, nor when they awaken after the last night of the full moon. There should be better formal support systems for them, but . . . no one in the Ministry would listen to me, in any case."
"Have you ever had to kill one?" Minerva asked hesitantly.
"Once, about twenty-five years ago," Malcolm answered softly, quite serious for once. "I have developed a rather nice variation on the Stunner since then, however, which is effective against werewolves, and I find that is quite sufficient. Try an ordinary Stunner, and they don't even blink."
"A pity that Robert didn't know that one . . ." Minerva said softly.
Malcolm nodded soberly.
The two strolled through the garden in a thoughtful silence for a while, ending up at the gazebo near the ornamental flower garden. They sat, Malcolm stretching his long legs out in front of him and folding his hands behind his head.
"Do be mindful of how you sit when wearing that thing, Malcolm," Minerva said jokingly. "Don't want to know too much about my brother, after all!"
Malcolm quirked a sideways grin. "The sporran helps keep the kilt in place, covering everything it should. Now, if I were to put stone or throw a weight, you might like to cover your maidenly eyes! My spinning has been known to have the ladies fainting, and even a few gentlemen. From shock or desire, I haven't yet determined!"
Minerva laughed, then remembered Quin's curiosity about Malcolm's visit. Malcolm's mention of both ladies and gentlemen raised her own curiosity.
"Quin tells me you two had lunch a while back."
"Mmm-hmm. Fascinating chap, your friend," Malcolm answered laconically.
"I think he was a little surprised you found him."
Malcolm grinned. "Tracking is part of what I do, after all. I've even, on occasion when I needed the brass, tracked a few errant husbands in my time. And he wasn't making any effort to hide, so it was quite easy."
"What brought you to even look for him like that? Why not owl him and set something up? It could be quite unnerving for someone to have you track them down unexpectedly like that," Minerva pointed out.
"Didn't seem unnerved. But he seems quite unflappable, though I wouldn't want to get on his bad side, I'm thinking. He's fair powerful, though he wastes it, in my opinion. But the chap's a father, and that does tie him down, I suppose."
"Yes, he's a father . . . he was very devoted to his late wife, Aileen. Very devoted," Minerva emphasised, recalling Quin's concerns, as unlikely as they were. "The love of his life, from what he says."
"Yes, he did tend to wax on about her." Malcolm shrugged. "Don't fancy being that tied down, myself, but . . . life can bring surprises, I suppose, even to the most wary wizard."
"So why did you track him down?"
"Wanted to get to know him a bit better, as I mentioned to you last time I saw you. He's interesting. Not all moulded by Hogwarts and the Ministry. Refreshing . . . besides, a brother might want to know what a wizard's intentions were toward his sister."
"His intentions toward . . . me? Oh, really, Malcolm! I don't think you would have to worry about that!"
"I'm not. Just saying I might, that's all. But he doesn't seem interested in anyone in particular, though he did speak rather glowingly of you. If you were interested in him, you could probably just " Malcolm made a flicking motion with his little finger " tip him right over. If you wanted."
"Well, neither of us want that; we are quite happy as friends. I do hope you will approach him in a more conventional manner next time, though, Malcolm. Or at least, don't sneak up on him."
"No sneaking involved, little sister. Walked right up to him on a public street, face-to-face. But I'll try not to startle him," Malcolm said with a laugh.
"Still, I think if you hadn't been my brother, Quin might have been less likely to go to lunch with you. He has had some bad experiences with the Ministry, and it crossed his mind that your distaste for them might have been an act and you were really with the Department of Magical Law Enforcement or the Department of Mysteries, or something. So you see why he was a little troubled."
Malcolm sat up and looked at Minerva. "I can understand that quite well. I will apologise to him. That didn't occur to me," he said seriously.
"I reassured him I presume, truthfully that you would have nothing to do with the Ministry, let alone work for them to trap honest businessmen," Minerva said. "So you needn't apologise unless you feel you must."
"I do. No wonder he seemed not to want to discuss what it was like to work with Muggles . . . I will owl him and ask him to have coffee, or, better yet, to come to my flat for lunch. My croque monsieur is quite tasty, I have recently been informed," Malcolm said with a grin.
"Um, hmm, I don't know. Coffee might be sufficient. In Diagon Alley," Minerva suggested. "He likes Fortescue's coffee."
"I think lunch. I could show him some of my finds he might even know of some good buyers for a few of the rarer objects. Murdoch is already snapping up the last of my Erumpent horn at a very good price, I might add. The family discount!" Malcolm said.
"Erumpent horn? Isn't that "
"Restricted? Yes, but a friend of mine knows someone in the French Ministry who is old friends with the harridan currently in charge of the Department of International Magical Cooperation, and he was able to get me a permit to import it. Should be enough to keep me going for a few years. Not that I have stopped working. You never know when there might be a dry spell. Besides, I bore easily."
"I have noticed," Minerva said drily. She thought a moment. "Malcolm, may I be frank with you?"
"Always, little sister," Malcolm replied, an eyebrow raised in curiosity.
"Quin was worried . . . once he had dismissed the notion that you were from the Ministry, he wondered whether, well, whether you were interested in him."
"Of course, I am; he's not the run-of-the-mill oh, you mean interested in him!" Malcolm chuckled. "Well, Quin is pretty. Lovely blue eyes and long legs, not to mention his dimples. And yet rugged at the same time. A delicious but uncommon combination in a wizard. Most are one or the other. And he is quite the charmer. Yes, quite an attractive package. But, no, dearest sister-of-mine, pretty as he is, I am not interested him romantically or sexually. So you can both iron out your twisted knickers and relax," he teased.
"Well, all right, don't be that way," Minerva said crossly. "I did try to reassure him on that point, as well, but I wasn't certain. I mean, you were eying him at the party, and you expressed interest in him, and some of the things that you said, right there in public you can't blame me for not being sure, myself."
"You weren't certain yourself, but you reassured him that I wasn't after his, um, masculinity?" Malcolm said, obviously amused. "Is that the act of a true friend?"
"Well, I also thought that even if you were interested in him, you have enough . . . integrity and, um, concern for others' feelings that you wouldn't pursue him if he didn't return your interest," Minerva said, put out, and increasingly uncomfortable with the topic. "Look, I'm going up to the house now. Come if you want. I don't care. You may not be an underhanded Slytherin, but sometimes you are worse." Minerva stood.
"Hold up, there, little sister!" Malcolm interrupted, his mood suddenly shifted. "Underhanded Slytherin? Aside from the implications you are making about my own character, I have to inform you that I have known many an underhanded witch or wizard who was sorted into one of the other three Houses. Just because Slytherins may be a bit more successfully 'underhanded,' as you put it, doesn't make that either their sole province or theirs alone. I have seen good Slytherins wounded and dead, doing the right thing, and believe me, their bodies go cold and their blood flows red just as much as any Gryffindor's does. So you go on up to the house, Minerva. I expected better from the new Head of Gryffindor, but perhaps that position just ingrains all the old House prejudices." Malcolm got up and left, striding south, away from the house.
Minerva was speechless. She had rarely seen Malcolm get hot under the collar, and she hadn't meant anything by her remark, it was just a manner of speaking . . . she had been irritated with him and his teasing. She sat back down. Of course he was right. And perhaps she should avoid that manner of speaking in the future, particularly as Head of Gryffindor. House rivalry was one thing, but she certainly should not be encouraging prejudices. They seemed to spread too easily, as it was, without people in authority appearing to approve of them. Minerva got up and followed her brother down out of the garden. She owed him some thanks. But she wasn't going to apologise. No, that would be going too far, after his annoying teasing. Malcolm did take being an older brother to new heights or lows. Murdoch, for all he was a Ravenclaw, restrained his teasing more than Malcolm did. And Morgan, well, he was sweet, but dull. No teasing from that quarter. Malcolm certainly made up for it, though.
By the time the two returned to the house for dinner, Malcolm was relaxed and teasing again, and Minerva was putting up with him in better humour than she had. Dinner was lively, though Minerva found herself increasingly distracted by thoughts of Hogwarts. When her father suggested another chess game after dinner, she declined, reading instead, and looking up occasionally to observe her father and Malcolm go at it. They played fast, at practically breakneck speed, and Malcolm had a tendency to bounce in his seat as he considered his moves, which drove Minerva batty, but Merwyn seemed able to ignore that and everything else. They were playing with the wizarding chess set, and Malcolm's pieces, regardless whether he played white or black, seemed unnaturally bloodthirsty. The pawns even pounded their chests and clashed their armour with each piece they took out, and his queen licked her dagger when she took a knight. Minerva found it most disturbing, and she finally excused herself and retired for the evening. Egeria took her knitting and left with her.
"Malcolm certainly thinks he can throw your father with his tactics, but I will not be surprised if Malcolm still loses more games than he wins. Your father is not easily perturbed," Egeria said with a chuckle. "Of course, I have found some methods of distracting him from his game over the years none of which I could use with you children in the house!"
"Mother!" Minerva blushed. "I am glad you spare us that!"
"Mmm, but it is a technique you may wish to try with a wizard one day . . . I'll leave to your imagination precisely what the technique might involve," Egeria said with a wink.
Minerva laughed. "I am sure I will be able to use my imagination should the occasion ever arise, Mother but it is an interesting idea, and one I hadn't considered before."
"Mmm, best not to use it too frequently, of course. And you have to start off innocently, as though you have no intention whatsoever to distract him, so that by the time he twigs to it, he is so distracted, he doesn't care. Of course, by that point, you both may completely forget the game."
"I'll remember that bit of advice." Minerva smiled. "Good night, Mother!"
"Good night, sweetness. See you in the morning," Egeria said, giving her daughter a quick, one-armed hug.
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Okay...I think it's time for a Gertrude and Malcolm story. If you got any ideas like the proposal or her pregnancy I'm all ears. I've read this story 100 times but just wanted to say that this story is great every single time I read it, it always feels like my first time.
I have a love hate relationship with this fic. I do not enjoy stories where people spend time angsting when they could just tell each other how they feel and be done with it, no matter how it plays out. I enjoyed this because of Quin. If you hadn't had he or Getrude, this story wouldn't have worked for me. The witty dialogue is what kept me interested to the end. Well done with your OCs.
Review in progress... :-)
Putting myself in Albus's shoes - from his vantage point of what had played out between them - I can very well imagine how awfully guilty he must have felt, how repulsed by his own behaviour, how defeated, with no option but to assume things were over. Really sad and horrible, for him.
But then Gertrude...oh, how I love that woman! Her questioning of Albus, her coclusions: brilliant! Utterly love that small scene! :-)
Forgot to rate...
Must have been very upsetting, embarrassing and worrying for Albus indeed, to have found a young woman attractive for a few moments, only to find out that she's actually his student. I can so imagine how he must have been shocked and appalled by himself.
I loved seeing these two lively, bright and, both of them, determined and decisive girls: Melina seeing the need to educate on healing spells, before even being allowed to hold a wand; and Minerva, trying to take matters in hand concerning Albus's health as well as the running of Murdoch's household. Yet, I always find Melina bordering on overpowering and you already show that here, in her as a young girl.
"And what a pity we can’t hold hands as innocently as Melina does." I love this observation, which, I'd say, actually counts for all of us.
You made me realize it's a bit sad, isn't it? Holding hands is comforting and gives a sense of closeness, but once you're above a certain age (and experience?), there's just no way the innocence will ever come back, unless it's holding hands with a small child. Which means that I, and most likely by far the most of us, hardly ever hold hands anymore. Alas.
Very nice, serious chapter and probably decisive in Albus's later 'hesitations' towards Minerva. Right???
Soap in the eyes indeed! Malcolm is such a twit ... its hard not to like him at least a little ... still ... I think Gertrude is far too big a catch for the likes of this McGonagall ... *snorts*
Forgive me Madam Raven ... I'm bound to get uppity with at least one of your characters.
Even with my aggravation, I did enjoy Malcolm and Gertie's banter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Awww, you'd like Gertrude to be single and still all shades of mourning? Poor Malcolm! He adores her, you know! :-) ;-) He also amuses her & brings her some vitality. Glad you enjoyed their banter! :-)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I know I know ... and you know why, of course ... his arrogance and swagger embarrass me because .... yes ... exactly ... reminds me of a younger version of ... someone foolish ... not saying whoooooo ... *whistles innocently*
And of course we can't have Gertie in all shades of black forever! She needs her lime green suits - just like in this chapter - she redresses in three shades of ... GREEN! Gertrude Spring! Seee! That's where I got the lime green from! *grins*
That and I would want her to find joyous love ... I love Gertie too much not to. Even if it has to be Malcolm. *grins*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There's a place in life for people who are a bit brash. Aside from their entertainment value! haha! But don't be down on those characteristics of yourself. You've noted yourself that you've learned to tone down a bit and not just say whatever pops into your head! :-)Yep, Malcolm got her to wear green, green, and green, and look all nice and cheerful. I was pretty sure you were remembering her post-Malcolm greenness when you mentioned the lime green suit. hee!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I will share something simple I have learned. Humility is a virtue and pride is a liability. *nods* And I has lots more liabilities than virtues, me thinks.
I so love this chapter. The dragon riding is just so incredible ... and then the duel is ABSOLUTELY awesome! I love the giant field of sunflowers and the fireball - aka - fire don't hurt phoenixes - snap you're stunned, Buddy bit.
Give me a Madam!
Give me a Raven!
Ravenclaw's Madam Raven!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Holy COW! Bloo knows English!
Dragons Dragons Dragons!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It was a stunner to get any review from Bloo that didn't consist of "Cheers for posting." It became so tiresome to keep opening TPP review alerts, go to the review page, and discover yet another of the exact same three words. I didn't want to turn off alerts altogether because I was still getting a lot of real reviews for fics that were still WIPs at the time.I'm glad you enjoyed the dragon riding and the "whoops, you're Stunned!" at the end. :-)Thanks!
Madam Raven, remind me which house Siofre was sorted into?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's Ravenclaw. And Lydia is Slytherin. Siofre's first husband - Merwyn's father - was Gryffindor, and her second husband Herbert was Hufflepuff.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I thought she was Ravenclaw. Still no idea who Lydia is ... I know her daughter is Maisy, or Maise or something like that.
Forgive me, I get all the McGonagalls and their affiliates, across yours, mine and Squibby's universes confused.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Lydia's her sister-in-law, remember? Murdoch Tyree's wife. She's a major CSG character. (I thought you were reading that at one point, but I must have misremembered.)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
No I was reading it (you are correct), but in the last six months I've lost about 40 IQ points and have forgotten nearly everything I used to know ... so I am behind on RaM-verse extensions. Bad me ...
*sighs* Albus ... Albus ... Albus ... most romantic man to ever grace .... fiction. If only men could be so romantic anymore. That poem is beautiful ... I am guessing, since there are no foot-notes, that it is one of your originals?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yep, Albus and I wrote that way early in the story. I'm not much of a poet, but I thought it felt and sounded like a poem that Albus would write.
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“Ah, well, it’s best not to rush things. Enjoy it, Minerva, savour it. He’s likely nervous, as well. The age difference is probably causing him far more concern than it is you. His perspective is different from yours, and as I said when you were here on Friday, he is from a different time and place. He also has had experiences in his life that you and I, fortunately, have been spared, and that I can only dimly imagine.”
*snip*
I really like that. That shows uncommon wisdom.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*snip*
“No, simply . . . odd, disorienting, I suppose,” Albus replied, though Minerva thought that he did look tired and drawn. “It was so long ago, it is almost like remembering a dream. Collum was actually almost five years younger than I, in Aberforth’s year, but he was in my House, and I was also good friends with Perseus. Perseus and Crispinian were cousins of some sort, and Crispy was great friends with Collum, who was only a couple years younger than he. Anyway, for some reason – I don’t remember why, now – we were all here for a few days that summer after my NEWTs. I had just married, and I remember that Dervilia persuaded me that we should accept the invitation because I would be beginning my apprenticeship soon and would have much less time for my friends. I hadn’t been inclined to, wanting to spend the time with her, and feeling that they were all still children while I was a married man – at all of eighteen! But we actually had a good time. I remember that the girls – Siofre and Gwyn – visited once for the day and gave Dervilia some relief from our masculine company.” Now Minerva was beginning to feel peculiar. Gwynllian and Siofre, the “girls,” were her grandmothers. Perseus was Gwynllian’s brother, and Crispinian was her other grandfather. For a dizzying moment, Minerva felt as though she had stepped back in time, to a point when her Great-uncle Perseus was just a boy, friends with Crispinian, not knowing that Crispinian would marry his sister, Gwyn, nor that Collum would marry Siofre and die in an accident when his son, Merwyn, was just a baby. And Albus and Dervilia . . . that their happiness would be very short-lived.
*snip*
Woah ... yeah that would make me uncomfortable as well ... that is ... well that is just ... well ... my head would be swimming if I were Minerva.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, it is dizzying for Minerva, and it gives her an appreciation for some of the points her mother made, and for how and why Albus would not be completely comfortable yet.
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“Hold still, Merwyn! Your collar is all askew here,” Egeria said with slight impatience.“Don’t see why we have to get all dressed up,” Merwyn grumbled. “I thought what I was wearing this morning was perfectly acceptable.” “Those old brown robes make you look like Friar Tuck,” Egeria grumbled back.“They do not! Besides, I thought you liked my brown robes. That’s what you said the last time I wore them!” “No, it isn’t. I said I liked taking them off of you. There is a difference,” Egeria said with a smile. She patted his tummy and added, “And you are right, you don’t look like Friar Tuck. You have a much nicer figure – though heaven only knows why, when you sit behind your desk all day or in the library with your feet up.”
*snip*
Tee hee hee ... now Madam Raven, don't take my head off here, as you know I tend to picture your characters in my mind regardless of how you describe him ... but I thought you'd like to know how I picture Merwyn ... and here I see that I was wrong.
I picture Merwyn of average height, black hair that is now full of silver and white, and a very round figure ... probably from all that sitting behind his desk.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva laughed. “Fly without a broom? No, haven’t mastered that, wouldn’t try. It’s not possible.”It was Albus’s turn to laugh. “Not impossible, merely very rare in this part of the world. And the Ministry would like to keep it that way. Hard to regulate that sort of thing. Most witches and wizards couldn’t accomplish it, anyway.”Minerva stopped and looked back at him. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Not at all. I rarely do it, myself, although when I was with Master Nyima, I became quite adept. I would sometimes fly with Mother Dragon. I think that is one reason she took a liking for me, actually.”Minerva looked at him a moment, digesting this information, then she shook her head and continued the climb. Well, she hadn’t believed it was possible to become as completely invisible as Albus could, either. In fact, at the time, she had actually thought that she had always believed becoming invisible was as impossible as flight without a Charmed object. Apparently, it was, though not the way that she had believed. She should never underestimate Albus Dumbledore.
*snip*
*grins* I like this.
See ... we HP fans know that Dumbledore is brilliant and amazingly powerful ... but just to say it, well its a bit of a let-down, and harder to take as fact. But showing it ... especially in a sideways manner such as this ... an off-handed type of author's compliment, well that seems to me, to be perfection. I can truly appreciate his amazing talents here ... especially considering that Minerva (who is particularly powerful and talented) is amazed.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you liked that. :-)I remember knowing that I would slip that in way back when I wrote the chapter where Dumbledore invisibly observes Minerva doing her tutoring session, and I always envisioned it happening at her family home -- I'd originally been going to have him actually fly, but without a good reason, it would have felt too stilted, especially since his Animagus form flies, so that would be more natural.
*shakes head* Malcolm, Malcolm, Malcolm ... there is such a thing as tact .... *groans* sadly .... I think I get most frustrated with Malcolm because he reminds me of myself ... er ... I should clarify, my younger self, who was obnoxiously blunt and said what ever came to my mind ... and I likely came off as gruff and uncouth as Malcolm does ... so its an annoying reminder of just how ungracious I can be. *grumbles*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He doesn't always employ his internal censor, and he doesn't always have the best way of putting things, but his heart's usually in the right place. And when he wants to, when he puts his mind to it, he can be tactful. But that takes work for him!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Sounds like someone I know ... *groans* Another reminder for me. I guess some of us are just ungifted with the 'gracious' gene.
FINALLY! Hooray for Quin and Wilspy ... *steals Wilspy and takes her to the island where she's stashed Gertrude*
I thought about stealing Quin but ... I am on this celibacy kick ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Oooohhhhh noooooes! *MMADfan enlists Quin to help find and steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*Quin turns on the charm , turning
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
's celibate knees to jelly so she can't chase after MMADfan as she steal back Wilspy and Gertrude*
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
*floats like a jellyfish (uber slow) across the water while she sees Quin, Gertrude and Wilspy sail off on the boat. Is quite sure Wilspy and Gertrude are crying and waving in mourning as Quin steals them both from the enchanted island*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Heheheh!!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Its an island enchanted to have no mosquitos, sand flies, fire ants or thorny trees/bushes but lots of beautiful fish, both shell and fin, and a huge variety of fruit trees and veggies year round, and maintains a perfect temperature and humidity level ... *sighs*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I wanna go there!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Me too!
This is the chapter that I want to throttle Minerva and grant Quin sainthood ... honestly ... what she does to that poor man ...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know. Minerva was not at her best there, was she? Poor Quin!
*snip*
Finally, at midnight, he went down to his office and opened the cupboard in which he kept his Charmed parchments. He rarely used them, and he hesitated to now. It would be prying . . . it would be for his own personal gain, not for school business. But he cast the necessary spells, and the results were clear and easy to read, there were so few people in the castle. Johannes was in his bedroom in Ravenclaw Tower. Gertrude and Malcolm . . . were both together. In her rooms. In her bedroom, in fact. Well, that answered one question that he hadn’t wished to ask. Johannes’s name was steady, but Gertrude’s and Malcolm’s names seemed to pulse, becoming thicker and bolder, then returning to the normal script. He could imagine what that might mean, and he averted his eyes. But Minerva’s name was not on the list. There was Fawkes listed. For some reason, he was perched in the Astronomy Tower. But no other being or creature was named. Albus still hadn’t set the wards properly to detect the ghosts. It had been a low priority, and he had never managed to get to it.
*snip*
OOOOOOOOOooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, so THAT's how the Mara's Map was created! Or at least, that is one way ... nice little intry there, Madam Raven!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the magic that allows those Charmed parchments is the magic that was tapped into to create the Marauders' map. It's part of the magic that was being tested and fixed that summer when Minerva helped with the wards, changing back and forth into her Tabby self to see whether the wards detected her identity when she turned into her Animagus form -- the wards had been so damaged that they no longer detected someone who was in Animagus form.Many years later, this became important for seeing Peter Pettigrew and Sirius Black on the map. Also, by the time that he enlisted Minerva's help, Dumbledore had already fixed the ward that detected the true identity of someone who was disguised using Polyjuice -- meaning that during GoF, Potter saw that B. Crouch was searching Snape's office. Of course, he thought that it was B. Crouch senior, not the crazy son who had supposedly died in Azkaban. The fake Moody (Barty Crouch) took the map from Harry so that Harry wouldn't notice that Moody never left his office (where he was stuck in the trunk), and that where Moody apparently was, Crouch actually was.
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“I thought I was being seduced, but it has been a while . . . I may have been wrong,” Gertrude answered, her breath warm upon his face.
*snip*
I just love her wit.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She is one sharp Slytherin, and she loves answering a question at a different level than it was being asked. :-)
*snip*
“Yes, you mentioned that at the party. You are aware of how Gertrude’s husband died, though?” Minerva asked.
*snip*
What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Goodness - Minerva has a serious voyeur problem, doesn't she? Naughty!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
She's concerned that Malcolm might bring up a sensitive subject in an inappropriate way, for one, but mostly, she's worried that Malcolm might just be in it for the fun and that Gertrude is vulnerable if he just up and leaves. Gertrude hasn't formed any other attachment since the trauma of having her husband killed in such a gruesome manner, as far as Minerva knows, so Minerva's worred that Gertrude is opening herself up in a rare manner and that her brother might just be too cavalier with her feelings. (I'd have to reread the section, but that's what I remember o fher motivation.)I'm sure Minerva wishes she had better timing! lol!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
As I continued to read, Minerva's concern was apparent, as usual, in my typical Gryffie fashion - we leap before we look ... or rather, we shoot our mouths off before we have all the facts. *sighs*
Oh hooooo! Malcolm may think he doesn't want to become too ... attached ... but his heroic defense of 'good' Slytherins sure tells me something or other about a recent acquaintance of his.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he is definitely defensive here! Seems he is becoming more than a little attached to a certain Slytherin!
I so love Gertrude. I want a Gertrude in my life! *steals Gertrude and runs away*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*MMADfan puts on her running shoes and jogs after
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
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Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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“It was a long time ago, as I said, that it all began. When I was a child, really, I suppose. I would like to be able to say with some modesty that my time as a student was unremarkable, but it was not. I excelled at whatever I put my hand, mind, and magic to. I was eager to learn, even more eager than you were – indeed, the Sorting Hat very nearly put me in Ravenclaw, but it decided, in the end, that my nature and my need were Gryffindor. “I chafed at what I saw were restrictions on me and my progress. I found most of my teachers wanting, and believed them dull and unimaginative. Nonetheless, I wanted to please them, and please them I usually did. But I pushed every boundary and stretched it. If it weren’t for the guidance and firm hand of Professor Futhark, I might have become even more insufferable than I no doubt was. But despite my general attitude, I found myself with friends of all types, and, with a rather foolish and overblown sense of my own importance, I came to believe myself not only advanced academically but also better than my peers and their natural leader. And, I suppose, I was – academically advanced and a leader, not better than they,” he clarified.
*snip*
I really like this ... it sounds very Albus to me ... save for the Ravenclaw bit *grins* but sometimes you just gotta tout yer house, right?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that sometimes, it's really clear that there's one House that a witch or wizard belongs in, and other times, there are others that would suit, too. I think Albus could have fit in with Ravenclaw -- he certainly pursued knowledge, both Light and Dark -- but there were bits of his personality that drove him that were Gryffindor that shaped his intellect and his use of it. (I can't have written that part of the monologue and really substituted "Hufflepuff" -- though I think that with a few tweaks to the text, Slytherin could have been included as an option -- he is a wily wizard, after all!)I'm glad you like it. It's one of the reasons that I think this section, these chapters, work better as a first-person recounting than as I had originally written it -- in the third person as a kind of flashback. We get to see Albus's personality then and now, and his own take on his character as a teen and young man, and how it developed.
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“Not a bit of trouble, my dear man, not a bit of it! A friend of the Headmaster’s is a friend of mine, I’d like to think! And dear Gertrude, of course.” He winked at Quin. “She’s quite the witch, isn’t she? Knew each other as students of course. Had a bit of a crush on me at the time, I think.”
*snip*
I have to laugh at this ... I just do ... he's a younger and less wise Slughorn than the Sluggy I know from HBP, so it does make sense that he'd brag a bit louder and exaggerate a bit stronger ... but saying that of one's co-worker - wow! That takes some ... something ...
You know I have a soft spot for Slughorn I think it would be fun to pick his brain and study him ... especially try to determine what conditions cause him to puff out his chest the most ... call me weird.
I also love any and all descriptions of the various houses, since we only see two of them in the movies - Slytherin and Gryffindor ... never did get a chance to see Ravenclaw's or Hufflepuff's ... shame really. I'd love to see the Badger room, all decked out in black and yellow - I think I'd feel like I was snug inside a giant bee hive! Oh and I would imagine there would be plenty of honey.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, Sluggy's sense of grandiosity is quite at its peak here. And it's not yet been burst by the emergence of the Slytherin "Death Eater sect" led by one of his former star pupils. So he's amiably pompous, tries a bit too hard to chum-up to Quin, and yet there is a part of him that genuinely likes other people (in my view) and simply wants them to like him in return. I really enjoyed envisioning the Slytherin dorms and some of the more decent Slytherins in "The Sorting of Susie Sefton." It was fun to look at them from a different POV than we had in the books, and yet try to make it all still recognizably Slytherin.It would be neat to experience Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. And I wonder if Hufflepuff would be all honey with no stings attached ...
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“It is worth far more than that, Horace, as you know,” Gertrude said, “and even if you offered what it might fetch on the open market, you know the Headmaster still wouldn’t part with it. Your grumbling about it every time he generously chooses to share it is most unseemly and detracts from our enjoyment.”
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HAHAHAHAHA! Stop complainin and enjoy the bloody mead, yeh buggar!
I do like this chapter, I love just the idea that being a head of house, or even just a teacher, creates some sort of bond, or weave, in the magical wards and structure of the castle. And its nice to see the faculty supporting each other.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh and, I also love lore with the Sorting Hat - for some reason I find that 'character' of Rowling's to be fascinating.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I like to imagine that each teacher in the history of Hogwarts, especially Heads of Houses and Headmasters/mistresses, leave some of themselves, some of their magic, in the wards, helping to strengthen the school long after they're gone. That would be a heritage.The Sorting Hat is fascinating, and I think it is intriguing to contemplate whether it's sentient or not, and what its existence says about sentience, at least in the HP/Hogwarts universe.
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Besides, when I first began teaching, it wasn’t long after Reginald died. It didn’t feel as though it had been long, anyway. I was not particularly concerned with what I looked like. It became a habit. And now I’m too old to be worried about such things.”
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Oh how I can relate to that!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yeah, I think Gertrude is quite human here. But it's interesting how when Malcolm comes into her life, she begins to take an interest in her clothes again! Or at least, they reflect a cheerier self. :-)
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Albus smiled and sliced them each a piece. The cake itself was chocolate, and it was filled with raspberries and thick whipped cream. There was more whipped cream, Minerva thought, than cake. The icing was chocolate, one layer of an almost brittle icing, then a softer chocolate butter cream over that in decorative curlicues and rosettes. Whole raspberries topped it all off.
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GAH! I want a cake like that for my birthday - ANY birthday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Me too!
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“All right. Are you finished, then? Would you like more wine? I have another bottle – ”Albus laughed. “Are you getting me in practice for your brothers?”Minerva smiled. “I don’t think I could drink any more, either, but I thought I would offer. We can have some cognac with our dessert.”Albus pushed back from the table. “We could try out your wireless,” he suggested.“Good!” Minerva would be agreeable to almost anything he suggested right now.
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I'll bet she would!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
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Minerva looked up at him and was struck by how very attractive he was. In that moment, she would have agreed that the sound of monkeys banging ashcans was nice. Fortunately, this was the station’s “music for the dinner hour,” and really was pleasant.
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*bursts out laughing, barking in fact*
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Minerva is in a very agreeable mood!