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Resolving a Misunderstanding
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Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.
Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.
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Reviews for Resolving a Misunderstanding
It took me a while to find my way back to this story, but I am still enjoying it. Poppy gives such good advice. I'm looking forward to seeing if Minerva realizes just exactly what Poppy is telling her.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thank you! Minerva was certainly vehement in her protest that she didn't know what Poppy was talking about, wasn't she? *grin*
Oh the poor Silent Knight!! But i liked his story, still. Still wondering what's going to happen to him...I was particularly touched by the scene where Minerva covers Albus with the afghan. I also thought Albus blushing about the Flamels was adorable. Could you please write a one-shot where Albus introduces them to Minerva? It was sweet that Albus was sentimental about the ritual, and chose those robes. The ritual was cool, and it was great that Albus could also enjoy the sensation of her magic reaching into his. Actually, I was quite surprised that Minerva wanted him right there in the Heart of Hogwarts...like doing it in a cathedral or something...of course who said sacred places should be sex free? when she wants him, she wants him!!! Also pleased that he packed early + is FINALLY staying the night!!!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, the poor Silent Knight!
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much -- and that yes, Albus is staying the night -- and he was so looking forward to their holiday, he packed early. He can be a sweetie when he finally comes around!
I'm glad you were able to catch up -- it will be a while before the next chapter of RaM, as I'm writing the holiday as a separate story (for many and varied reasons), but the first chapter of that is up, and it will likely have a chapter posted every other day. The chapters are normal-length, and the story is short, so it will be finished up soon enough, and we'll be back to RaM again.
Have a great week!
oops! I just realized I left one review for two chapters!!! Both are Grrrrrr8 !
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hey there! I've been without internet at home for two weeks....great to be able to read your fic again!!! Malcolm is kinda hot!!! And I love the dragon riding!! I felt so bad for Gertrude when she cried, knowing her history. And Albus-show off! But the warnings about Riddle...he had a good point about that. And I LOVE Minerva's Grandmother!! I was half hoping that she'd figure out there relationship and give Albus the dickens!!! Well, I am looking forward to seeing how Poppy reacts!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Isn't it annoying when you don't have access to the internet? It's hard to imagine life without it anymore! I'm glad you're back!
Glad you think Malcolm is kinda hot! Gertrude thinks so, too. (I don't know why this suddenly turned blue.) And, of course, the dragon-riding! Albus can be a little bit of a show-off, can't he? Siofre will turn up again in the next chapter for a bit, as well.
I hope you enjoy the next couple of chapters. When you've caught up, you can read all about Albus & Minerva's holiday in "A Holiday with the Headmaster," which I've posted here on TPP.
Thanks for reviewing!
What a nice family M'nervy has. Good chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked them!
You have really caught me! I started off thinking I was going to read just another MMAD romance, to say it a bit bluntly. And in the start it sort of felt like that, though there were details and lose ends (lose, at that time only :-) ) indicating more...But now, the further I come, the more interesting, intriguing and simply wonderful I find the whole of your story, enjoying each and everything, not just the romance. And I find that I have to go back, cause I have skipped too much in my impatience and, quite unusual for me, I, on hindsight, want to know it all, want to know the whole plot. Your imagination, the credibility of eveything you describe in its wonderful detail (details which do not get boring, as is often the case with me elsewhere), your characters, the suspense...my dear Lady, hats off to you: your first FF is one to cherish and of exceptional depth. So there you have it: I'm back to chapter one. With my deep respect, Maria
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, RaM does have a carefully constructed plot, with details building on each other and continuing to be relevent as the story continues, and there's an overall story arc from the beginning to the end, which is one reason I made it one long fic rather than a series of sequels, since no part really would be a stand-alone story. So I'm glad that you've found the story so intriguing and gripping and are going back and rereading! :-)One of my favorite parts still is Part 8, the Gamp house party chapters, and although the ADMM romance still continues (through letters, introspection, etc.), the two aren't together for most of that section. But it was great fun to write and has a lot of important detail that we learn along with Minerva while she's there. It was also fun to write her interactions with the various guests -- it's neat to explore different facets of a character by the way they interact with different sorts of people, I think.I am very glad that you've enjoyed it so well! I think you'll also enjoy Death's Dominion when you read that (I'm hopeful that you will read it, anyway!), and perhaps even more, or in a different way, than you enjoyed RaM. (BTW, tiny bit of a mini "spoiler," don't be alarmed by the prologue! As Malcolm said after his "spree" with Albus, appearances can be deceiving! )Thanks again for all your reviews! They've cheered me up and also helped encourage me to pick up my writing again! I am very glad that my fic has given you so much pleasure!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
Part 8 was highly enjoyable indeed, and I read it very attentively. As I said before, I am a very slow reader, concentration difficulties, so I tend to skip to speed it up, but in your book that is not working out (in so many other things I read, it is easy enough to follow the whole story, in spite of not having read it all, as so many things are cliché and you can quite well guess what has been written). Reading your book, there is no use to try and guess, you must be informed to get it all :-) I'm very happy to know that you are writing again! Thank you!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks!I'm glad that you do agree that it's "more than a romance," and in a positive sense. I think sometimes people who are looking for a simple ADMM romance are disappointed, or even frustrated, because the romance is just kind of the background for the story, and a unifying thread, but it's not the full substance of it. (I don't know if I could write pure romance for over 800 thousand words! What a frightening thought! Eeep! lol)I actually wrote quite a bit of a chapter last night, so I'm feeling good about that.Thanks again!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
Ah, difficult, i would love to just now start reading your new things too, and the lemon stuff and about the holiday and Death's Dominion, like you mentioned above, but I have to tell to myself "Patience, my dear, patience" Sigh, so frustrating. But let me tell you at least how absolutely breathtaking I found the scenes in Hogwart's Heart...the floating magic, the colours, the careful sharing of the magic, the blood, Minerva's vow, the congratulations not to forget of course...so I've reread it several times, to absorb it all. Made me happy! Take care!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I know that mantra of "patience, patience!" myself! :-) It'll be there when you get to it -- and RL does require some care, too! LOL!
Wonderful! What an awesome match, and how happy I am that Albus remained by far superior, yet Malcolm will have earned everybody's respect. Haha, this was really like any great sportsmatch, thrilling, sometimes scary and with a great ending! I loved Siofre and Blampa here also. Thanks once again!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Hey there! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! It was a chapter I really sweated over, as you can imagine, getting the pacing and such right, and it turned out to be one of my favorite chapters of the fic. Having you take a minute to review it makes me smile! Thanks very much!
Well, to be read with a sweet blush, i guess, but I really love it. There is so much emotion involved, it just tells about the beauty of love between lovers. There is no vulgarity whatsoever in my opinion. I love the development in their relation, how they are discovering each other and being amazed to learn about each others past. Then there are the details, like the fun surrounding the lovemaking, the transfigured robe, how their magic is a deep part of their life and being and intertwined in the whole story, not just as a few tricks that facilitate a wizards life.I'm sorry,I can't but admire your story and your writng:-),no critical remarks whatsoever, apart from the occasional typo in only a very few of the chapters (if you'd like me to mention those,I could do that)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
If you see a typo, I'd love to know, but not in a review -- you can just contact me via my author's page on TPP and I can go in and correct it. It's always amazing to me that no matter how many times my beta & I read a chapter, I still find typos months or years later if I go back and read part of the story to refresh my memory for something I'm currently writing. Sometimes I go in and fix it on TPP, sometimes I don't, depending on what sort of typo it is. :-)I'm very glad that you're enjoying the lemons. There are a range of lemons in this fic, and others that I write, so not all of them may be to your taste, but that's why I always mark a chapter if there explicit sexual content -- that way people can skim over any bits they don't find enjoyable. I do try to make all of my lemons about the two characters involved; I see love-making as a kind of communication between the characters and also as expressions of their personalities. I think that some of them work better than others, of course.Thanks very much for your review!
The poem, the whole situation, brought tears to my eyes. So beautiful and so ethereal, symbolizing all true love, for which ever couple in which ever place...Just can't stop reading, and as I read slow, so I have decided to skip a bit, but surely to return later to the omitted chapters.I can keep repeating myself, but I find so many beautiful glimpses, considerations, emotions so true to life, but which nevertheless are mostly ignored in stories, because it is easier.I am not a critic, have no background to support this thought, but I must wonder if parts of your story are not actually literature, and are well beyond being "just a fanfic", i hope you don't mind me saying that.:-)Whatever,perhaps it is simply enough to say that reading your story is giving me a never foreseen pleasure and whole array of emotions. Once again: thanks!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm very glad that you're enjoying it so well. Hope you're not missing important plot elements, but I'm glad you're enjoying the read so well! The poem was a bit repetitive, putting it here, too, I'm afraid, but since I was posting it serially, and a lot of readers were reading it over a long period of time and days and weeks in between updates, I thought it was okay to put it in twice. Thanks again for your review and letting me know how much the story means to you. I really appreciate it!
Response from Mars_M (Reviewer)
I know that it was a repetition, when it was first mentioned I had also attentively read it and found it so very touching, but imagining him reading it out loud there on the cliffs, making his words (your words :-) ) so much more intense and a wonderful declaration of love...so no, in this particular case, it did not feel as repetitivePlease, i hope you can allow me to ask? There are quite a few references to Germany, Switzerland, German words etc, could you be from either of the two countries? And if so, are you also not a native speaker of English? I find myself still struggling with the language (as well as enjoying it!), living in London and speaking it over 20 years in our marriage does not change it.Do you also experience such frustration and how do you manage to write at this level? (IF you are not a native of course:-)) I know, hard to answer: a few words should suffice, if you even wish to say anything...
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Nope, not from there, though I lived in Germany for a few years and am rather fond of the country. :-) However, I did have to read, write, and converse in German, including about such subjects as Kant's categorical imperative (!), so I'm well acquainted with the joys and frustrations of communicating in a second language. What was particularly weird for me was when I was learning German intensively, speaking only German with native German speakers, and found myself incapable of speaking English on the phone with my mother! LOL! That was also the stage at which I'd find myself with thoughts that I could not express in German, but I couldn't come up with them in English in order to try to translate them (rather than just automatically speaking them in German). That was very frustrating -- and enlightening! Although perhaps it may be true that without language to express an idea, the idea is ineffectual, ephemeral, and without substance, it is possible to have an idea with no words to express it!I'm glad you didn't find the repetition at all irksome. I worried about it at the time a bit, I remember, but decided that it suited the setting and that it was more effective to repeat it than merely to report that Albus read it to her.Thanks again for all your reviews!
Aww, this chapter was too cute. Poor Albus wondering what he did wrong. Guess he's not very omniscent where Minnie is concerned. I like the way he developed the relationship with her when he accpeted his job. You're making me a MMADfan too! :D
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad! I must warn you, however, that being a MMADfan can convolute your thinking and warp your sense of humor! *grin* I'm *very* glad you liked the chapter and his introduction to Minerva, though. The next chapter is in the queue; hopefully, it will be up in a day or two. (If you liked this chapter, you should *really* like Parts VI & VII -- I hope!) Thank you very much for your review!!!
Engaging! I "love" discussions on the awful memories and power of love. Well, they are professors after all, drawing to them a "public" with certain depth and interests and (hopefully for the couple) writers with enough substance to write about them :-) (I think i can safely say this to you: you'll understand. :-) )It's good to see this being a serious story and not just a romance, makes me curious if you write outside the ff-realm too? Poetry? Short stories? Anything else?I had to smile about the Schweizerdeutsch, previous chapter. Schweizerdeutsch is awesome, so melodious and a bit funny (not "laden" but "Ladeli", meaning "shop", so different from German in feeling)Wishing you lots of inspiration and a great time, maria
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks so much! I do think that they have conversations about things other than radishes and rutabagas! (Just to recall the conversation that Albus and Merwyn had on their first meeting.)Schwyzerdütsch is very amusing and musical to listen to, and quite different from Hochdeutsch, certainly. I thought that Johannes would find that amusing. I write a lot of Serious Stuff in RL. Since RaM was the first fiction I wrote, I was rather surprised to see that I could do anything other than Serious Stuff. In fact, I still am! Thanks very much, Maria!
Yes, Sir Cadogan told me he saw the whole thing. And he was shocked, SHOCKED, at Minerva's use of that vulgar word. Sir Cattogan is of the opinion that profanity is the coward's use of language.
We certainly hope, Sir Caddogun and I, that is, that Albus is able to look beyond her dastardly vulgarity and figure out that she's got it bad for him.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
*grin* Minerva requests that you ask Sir Cadogan to mind his own business -- but if he can't do that, he should keep his eyes peeled and grill the house-elves, as well (they see all kinds of interesting things)! LOL
It will take them both a while to figure it all out. But if it didn't, there wouldn't be a story!
Well, again so much to love and to admire...the romance is becoming breathtaking and toe-curlingly painful at the same time...as it should to make the longing almost unbearable but I also like the research that you've obviously put into it.The geographical names you are using are correct (I'm from Holland and familiar with Germany too).The botanical explanation, your fully correct use of German and its flawless translation quite a few chapters ago and so many else that you mention...I can't find fault with it and that makes me trust more and more in your capacity and devotion as a writer :-)So once again: thank you so much for sharing this story!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm blushing here! And smiling!Thank you so much for your review! I'm very happy you're still enjoying it and finding the romance excruciating! lol! The longing does build!Thanks again!
There is so much wonderful stuff in this chapter. It would take much longer to review properly than I have time at the moment, but I can't go to bed w/o writing *something* in the little white box!
I think my favourite bit is when Minerva convinces Albus to make love to her in Hogwarts Heart. Not b/c it is a steamy, exciting, energizing lemon, which it is, but b/c it says so much about their relationship and their personalities.
On a meta-level, it's so richly symbolic of their relationship--the profound ways their magic is linked; the use of the mated wands; that their magic is now literally intertwined, in amidst the Hogwarts wards and magic; the use of blood tying Minerva to Hogwarts and thus indirectly to Albus, since he is also tied to Hogwarts the same way; the way their friendship and love had its origins at Hogwarts; the way the next 40 yrs of their life together, through times ordinary and times Interesting, will be devoted to fulfilling the vows each of them has made in that place.
On the more mundane level, once again Minerva is the sexual leader (I was going to say 'aggressor,' but that's not a fitting term for their lovemaking), as she has been throughout the story thus far (and also in 'Obliging..', and even usually in AAoL---it's a distinctive and consistent dimension of your Minerva...). (And given all the potency of the magic and the symbolism, no wonder she needed Albus so!) Albus's initial shock at her suggestion is quite understandable, as Hogwarts Heart is in a sense a sacred space w/in this universe. But that he gets over his shock quickly, and energetically responds to her demand also shows a) that he is growing in his own sexual confidence in the relationship; and b) that he is, I think, really beginning to fully appreciate how deeply linked he and M are and always have been, in ways far beyond his understanding at the time, and that really there is nothing profane about celebrating such an extraordinary, magically blessed relationship on that very ancient and magical table. Perhaps feeling the way their magic interacted with their desire when she took the wards from him helped deepen his appreciation of the many levels of the links between them. (It will be interesting when he finally hears her description of her magical accident and the arrival of It....I do hope that revelation happens w/in the timeframe of RaM.)
I think it is extremely fitting that the music box is decorated w/ ivy. Magical ivy, I presume. Perhaps there was more to Gertrude's selection of it so many years ago than she realized at the time.
And Albus's agreeing to spend the night, w/o even having to be convinced, is a very good sign for the beginning of their holiday. I know Minerva is truly enjoying spending the first complete night snuggled together as a couple! Awww! Even sweeter than their very sweet couch-snuggle earlier in the day.
Response from esoterica1693 (Reviewer)
Oh, one other thing I have to mention...from M's chat w/ Johannes and Siofre at lunch, the flame poem....I wouldn't have pictured M as having read obscure bits of Nietzsche (!!!), but it just shows what a well-rounded witch she is intellectually. Clearly her father's daughter. That's something that's conspicuously absent in HP canon--any sense that wizards spend any time learning about Muggle culture, the sorts of things most of us get in our liberal arts BAs. Aside from Arthur's interest in plugs, one gets the sense that the two worlds really are radically segregated. Much less so in RaM, and I like your take on it much better! Since wizards presumably have much more free time (no cooking, cleaning, etc. to do :-) I should hope they'd spend it in edifying pursuits, not just Quidditch matches!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I think that is probably one of the less obscure bits of Nietzsche, and certainly one of the easiest to remember (heck, my ability to quote sucks, but I remember it and only had to correct one word, lol). I actually do think that the two worlds are radically segregated in Britain and elsewhere (as is mentioned at times), and that Minerva and her family are quite unusual (Well, some members of her family. Morgan is thoroughly entrenched in his own little world, and although Merwyn is well-read, he is a complete fish-out-of-water in the Muggle world.) I see people who are bright and curious about things as being also curious about the Muggle world, and their interest expressing itself according to their temperaments. I think that Quin's observations are right on -- and btw, remember that it is his connections in the Muggle world that make him the target of the Ministry investigation. It just ain't normal! lol As for what they learn formally, most of it is nonsense -- remember Minerva's thoughts on her own Muggle Studies teacher when she was reflecting on James not being quite as much of a fool? And how many ordinary "Muggles" do you know -- and I don't mean academics, who are a peculiar bunch -- who spend much time in "edifying pursuits"? Magic folk are like the rest of the human race -- quite varied, and most of them not particularly interested in edification. It makes Hogwarts a kind of haven for those who may be more interested in such things.
Minerva is younger and has had an active sex life in the more recent past, though they are somewhat temperamentally different. But Albus has his own dominant side, for lack of a better way of putting it. He intentionally has allowed Minerva to take the lead on most occasions, which have been few so far, because he wants her to feel secure. Kind, but a bit misguided on his part . . .
I am glad you appreciate the symbolism and such in the Hogwarts Heart. If I didn't absolutely NEED my cup of coffee, I'd say more, but . . . my caffeine addiction is going at full-throttle right now, and the aroma is tantalizing me.
As for the ivy motif, that was just a case of the universe creating coincidences in Albus's life, little reminders at intervals that the other wand exists, nothing to do with Gertrude specifically. Besides, ivy is a common decorative motif, and when something has significance to you, you begin to see it everywhere. It is in the identical places for everyone else in the world, but without bearing the same meaning for them, and goes unnoticed by them.
And now I MUST have my COFFFEEEEEE! (Hey, I can drag & drop the emoticons, since they don't seem to want to respond to my mouse clicks anymore!)
Response from esoterica1693 (Reviewer)
Hope you got to your coffee in time! Far be it from me to stand between a woman and her caffeine fix! Merlin forbid! Not even expounding on the metaphysical meaning of Hogwarts Heart could justify that!
All points well taken, esp. about "intellectual curiousity, comma, lack thereof in most of world." I've been blessed to always move in circles where intellectual curiousity was prized, and its absence is a total deal-killer for me, especially in any kind of friendship or romantic relationship. I could give Merwyn and Albus a run for their money in books-per-cubic-inch-of-living-space....oh for some good shrinking charms!
Once Minerva takes the initiative to start a sexual encounter Albus does let his more dominant side show, you're right--he can be very physical sometimes, if always considerate. Hopefully he'll soon get over his whole "I want her to feel secure so I'd best always let her take the lead" thing!
Oh, the knight's tale is lovely! I'm really curious to know when and how he will be freed.It's so good to see Minerva and Albus together!I'm always ;loking forward updates! *MarinaP.S.: Thank you! That's one of the best MMAD stories ever!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you enjoyed the knight's tale! And the entire story! Thank you!
"Do i have all this time that you are costing me" she asked with a smile and warmth in her voice...oh, really, you have got me totally hooked on this story and I can't drag myself away to attend family-needs. Sigh :-)You know, i'm mostly a hurried reader, skipping fast through scenes of less interest and only focussing on the MMAD scenery.But you have made this really interesting, i loved about the uncontrolled magic by children, the wizzarding economics, the whole family stuff of Gertrudes'.That is only possible because the quality of your storyline and your wording is so high, that there is no escape... :-)Thanks a lot! Maria
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you're enjoying the ride! :-)The Gamp house party chapters were fun to write, and they have lots of stuff in them that becomes really important later on in chapters that are more directly ADMM-ish. But I'm glad you're having fun spending this time with Minerva, following her around as she navigates pureblood society. lol!I hope your family doesn't entire waste away while you're reading, though! Thanks for the review! Very happy to hear you're still enjoying the story!
Fantastic chapter! I really enjoyed hearing the Knight's tale, although it was quite sad! And Albus's way of congratulating Minerva was quite ingenious - and I do hope that it is only she whom he congratulates that way! (Also, I'm glad that Albus could experience having the wards taken from him :D) Great chapter, as always, and PLEASE update soon!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the Knight's tale, and Albus's reward to Minerva!
Delightful, as always. I am very happy to hear the knight's story at last. Clever, charming, and nicely circular, although I do wonder at the original identities of this magician and his lady.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I am glad that you enjoyed it! His story is, as you say, circular, and helps to bring RaM full-circle, as well!
And as to their identities . . . you will need to continue wondering! ;-) (For some reason, I can't get the emoticons to insert lately. Must be firefox acting up.)
Thanks!
It's good that Albus doesn't use that Phoenix trick very often, since he's going to need it to escape from Hogwarts in Order of the Phoenix. How mortifying to have Poppy speculating about that. Perhaps Albus is in need of a nice massage and a good hot bath. I wonder who might help him with that. It isn't surprising that after the long dry spell, he might even wrench something, which would be dreadful.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, he's generally fairly circumspect about how much he shows and when, but this was a good opportunity for him to exercise a bit.
As far as the other exercise from the previous day, fortunately he is feeling quite well now, with no lasting difficulties! ;)
Glad you liked it!
I definitely need a house-elf. I would also like to attend a magical rodeo where the cowboys wear kilts or golden robes and ride on brooms. I do hope that Malcolm wasn't going commando while riding the dragon. Oh the potential for chafing!That was clever dueling between our two heroes and a credit to your imagination!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
He would never even dream of not being traditional when wearing a kilt. He's no sissy. He was a bit . . . sore, but he would have been anyway. No real man wears anything under his kilt! Especially if it's not below freezing! LOL (And he wouldn't have a clue what "commando" referred to -- he'd think it had something to do with some peculiar Muggle orders. haha!)
I'm glad you enjoyed the duel! ;-) I found it more difficult to write than the lemons. I suppose because I've never been in a magical duel . . .
Thanks very much!
Whew! (Fans self). That was hot!I guess if you're going to do nature sex, having a wizard around to manage the privacy issues is helpful.Poor Albus, all that insecurity about their age differences keeps coming back.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Very handy, that -- and reassuring to know he's not likely to blunder it! ;)
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Very handy, that -- and reassuring to know he's not likely to blunder it! ;)
This chapter.... intense
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Thank you,
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This chapter.... intense
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Thanks!
Another fantastic chapter. Malcolm and Gertrude are so wonderful together--he's fallen hard, hasn't he? *sigh* I cried right along with Gertrude, you have a gift for creating and reaching strong emotions!The discussion about the fireball was quite interesting, as was his foreshadowing of the dark times to come. I also liked what Albus had to say about Malcolm's power and ability, and the responsibilities that go along with it. Loved the your place or mine bit, hee hee. Great chapter! It's going to be hard to let go of this story, but I do like how you are wrapping things up. I'm curious to find out where they finally agreed to take their holiday!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
There are a few more chapters to come.
I'm glad you enjoyed Malcolm & Gertrude together!
Oh, this was wonderful! I do love Malcolm, of course! The imagery here is terrific--it is very visual, and I feel it, too, as though I was right there in the stadium! The dragon was a delight, but I really loved the duel. Fabulous!Very busy week for me, I've been unable to read this, and now there's another chapter up! Must go refill my coffee and read on...Fantastic!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter -- and Malcolm! I'm especially pleased that the duel scene worked.
Thanks for reviewing!