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Resolving a Misunderstanding
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Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.
Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.
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Wow, what a good chapter. I like how Albus provided Mother Dragon's heart for their wands, and that bit with defeating Grindelwald was heart-wrenching. Although I doubt that Albus has dissuaded Minerva from loving him, even with his "dubious" past. Extraordinary work.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thank you very much!
There is so much here to respond to, I'm struggling with where to begin.First. It is difficult to understand the nature of soil if you've never dipped your hands into mud. It could be said that Albus spent some time wallowing, but I respect him all the more for turning his back on the temptations offered by those experiences. He learned from it and became a better person for it.Second. To project into the future, this is clearly a reason why Dumbledore would accept Snape. Having been down in the pit and having climbed his own way out, he would be able to show him the way.Third. Whether he understands what he is doing at a conscious as well as unconscious level, he is exposing the darkest bits of himself to the women he loves. If she loves him, he wants it to be for who he truly is, not just an idealised image she may have of him.That is a bit of wisdom it probably takes a hundred or so years for most men to understand.It does mean that he is choosing to take their relationship to the next level. He risked everything in their current relationship to do it. The ball is back in Minerva's court.What will she do?
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
"What will she do?" We shall see. And occasionally, things occur that are beyond our control.
I also thought there had to be a connection between Albus's own experiences and his willingness to give Severus a chance after he'd made an enormously bad decision when he was so young.
Yes, Albus does want Minerva to know him and to love him for all of who he is, not just based the partial picture of him she had before. Her telling him that she loves him was a big impetus for him to do this, even if he didn't explicitly spell that out to himself. But he does think that this IS the new level of their relationship, and believes it is as far as it will ever go.
Next chapter will be up in a few days, most likely. (I've rather spoiled folks with three rapid updates, but I wanted these three chapters not to be broken up too much.)
As always, thank you for reviewing!
Wow, that was an amazing retelling of Albus's life; way beyond anything I was expecting. I actually teared up a couple of times. And I loved it when you incorporated the part about the phoenix tail feather wands. It fits in rather well with canon hp. Thank you for the excellent last few chapters.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
You're welcome -- and thank you! I'm very glad you liked it so well.
I like to think of RaM as canon-compliant through the first six books, at least in terms of character and such, and not contrary to the "facts" that we learn in those first books, so I'm glad you like the way the two phoenix tail feather wands fit in.
Thanks again! The next chapter will be up sometime over the weekend.
Yay for so many updates!However, a note on Hungarian nicknames. Gellért is a Hungarian name, as you probably know. Having lived and studied in Hungary for a time (and started reading this story there), the familiar version of his name would indeed be pronounced Gelly, but it would never be spelled that way. Familiar names are formed by cutting off the last vowel (or occasionally more) and adding -i. So Monika becomes Moni, Erika becomes Eri, Zoltán becomes Zoli, etc. The letter Y only exists in Hungarian in conjunction with specific consonants, and while ly exists, it's more of a yuh sound mashed onto an L than an EE sound. So Gellért's nickname would technically be Gelli, if you're being linguistically accurate. Of course, you may not care (or decide that Albus wouldn't know this), which is fine. /Hungarian cultureI can't wait to hear the rest of Albus' tale and Minerva's reaction to all of it!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Because in English, an "i" is usually considered a feminine ending, I decided on a "y" and making it phonetic, especially since I'm not writing in Hungarian. Unlike when I'm writing in German or French or some other language. Besides, my Grindelwald is from eastern Germany, not from Hungary, and so that is not a real consideration, anyway. (And Germans, just as in other countries, sometimes have names that aren't German -- whether from some of their ancestry coming from another country or because they simply like the other version of the name -- take "Carl," for example. Normally, it would be "Karl," but there are German "Carls." Whatevah! *grin* And I'm also just spelling it as it would be in pronounced.) As I said in my note, I changed his name forthe convenience of having it match what everyone would recognize, otherwise, he'd still be "Gunny" and "Gunther." Anyhow, he ain't Hungarian here and he ain't the DH Grindy and I'm spellin' it phonetically. ;)
This is a much more believable history for Albus than the "other." I firmly believe the betrayal of a friend, especially a kindred spirit, would be more devastating than that based on a romatnic relationship. Not that one couldn't have both in the same person, but it just didn't fit, not for his age, not with the brevity of the relationship or the depth of the experience. This is simply more real-life and hence more believable. At least for me.His kind of brilliance, and magical power, is a gift and a burden. He had to have struggled with how to live with it, and been shaped by those struggles. He had more than his fair share of tragedy, though. I am quite enamored of this particular universe!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Very glad you liked it. (I was so disappointed in DH -- and I did think that she presented it as adolescent hero-worship and adulation & not as a romantic relationship -- even looking at the correspondence -- straight Victorian men wrote more romantic letters to each other than what she put in DH -- not to mention that the rest of the books -- oh, I won't get into all that. I just feel like someone else wrote most of the characters in Book 7, though. Or else in the other books. Poor Lupin -- talk about being made a caricature of oneself. Sigh. And where did Albus's growth, wisdom, and all that disappear to? Even dead, he was dumb as dirt. IMO.)
Anyway, back to the point -- I tend to meander when it gets late, so I hope you can forgive my digressions -- I am glad you like the RaM universe and RaM!Albus. And Albus certainly did go through a lot, and had to learn how to use his heart to inform his choices and to direct his magic. And that with great gifts comes great responsibility. Hmmm, I don't think I'm making much sense, which means it's time to go to bed!
Thank you very much for your patience and your reviews! (Off to bed so maybe I will be more coherent tomorrow! LOL!)
Response from stardragon (Reviewer)
You were making perfect sense! Absolutely, I agree.I edited out some of my comments because I went off on a digression on DH, and decided that was tmi. :-) I want to read it again, with first reading Books 1-6 too, before deciding how I feel. I did like the book, but yes, a lot of the characters got short shrift in DH, I agree. Certainly Albus didn't spring from the womb so good and pure, and I really resented that she saved his story until after he was dead, so we could get it all from biased third parties. I know this is not a DH discussion board, so...but I had to comment further!I see the next chapter is up. It's going to be a long day at work...
Well, everyone makes mistakes. And I'm sure Albus thinks that Minerva is going to hate him after his tale, but of course she'll only love him more than ever because he is, after all, just an all-too human man. Can't wait for the next update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks! Glad you liked the chapter. :)
Aw, poor Albus having such a downer part of his life of his own creation. Does he ever wonder whether his mom would have lived if he never met Gelly? At least his experiences make him lose some of his arrogance and probably set him on his right path to fulfilling his potential. Excellent, excellent chapter.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
"Does he ever wonder whether his mom would have lived if he never met Gelly?"
Of course. That's precisely the source of his guilt and despair. If she had simply died of natural causes, he might have felt some inadequacies, but not as though he had let a viper into his mother's home, etc. Particularly since he turned down Gelly by telling him he didn't want to leave his mother rather than just telling him he had no desire to join him under any circumstances. If he hadn't been so eager to increase his knowledge, he wouldn't have stayed with Gelly to begin with, and then if he hadn't welcomed Gelly back into his life, despite their previous unpleasant parting, or if he had been truthful to him and told him he had no interest in joining his "elite academy," his mother, he believes, would not have died. (And he would be right, but hindsight is always 20-20, isn't it?)
I'm glad you liked the chapter! The next one will be up soon!
Sometimes, you have to hit rock bottom before you can start over. Albus certainly did that. It is hard to imagine him becoming a bum, but it certainly makes him more human than the Great Albus Dumbledore.Well done.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Thanks!
Very interesting. I really wish I knew what happened to Albus's dad, but maybe it's better not to know.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Sometimes it is better not to know, isn't it? Thanks for reading this far. There will be another chapter up soon.
This story is something of a mammoth is it? Very enjoyable, but it's very long. Can't wait to find out what happens with all these possible couples you're setting up and more of Albus's history.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
It is definitely mammoth, but we are getting very close to the end. I'd say the story is around 85% complete now. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Subverting the Hogwarts house-elves, are we, Minerva?
lol
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
glad you liked that! Thanks for your reviews!
I am very fond of you, too, my dear. Ouch!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
"Ouch!" is right!
It's hard for me to find words about this (isn't that a switch, ha!). I think the most interesting revelation is how deeply this is affecting him in regards to Minerva, his fear that she might reject him because of it, as well as his need to make sure she knows all of him.The contrast between who we know Albus to be now and his inner conflict is sooo powerful. i was totally in his point of view while reading this. "My ray of sunshine"--ah, that cut right through me. What a terrible loss. This is so believable--it's right on his character, and I can see fully how this shaped who he has become.And the worst is yet to come.
On a more upbeat note, yay for Quin! Subtle and overt at the same time--neat trick! Love he slipped in "She's yours." Ogg?? That certainly gives "blinded by love" a new twist!Loved his thoughts on falling in love with Minerva. (Did we see that letter? Hmm, is it as honest as his thoughts were just then?)Looks like I found my words after all! Wonderful piece of writing!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
We saw him write the parchment -- it was back in one of the Gamp party chapters, in "Shall We Dance," I believe.
I'm glad you are enjoying reading of Albus's personal history so far. I look forward to your thoughts on the next couple chapters.
I'd write more, but it's late, I'm falling asleep, and there will be a new chapter up sometime tomorrow.
Thanks very much for your thoughtful reviews! I really appreciate them. :)
Wonderful title, I love Mary Poppins. Guests never do what you want them to at parties do they? Best to go with the flow.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
No, they don't, and it's probably for the best, isn't it?
Sounds like those robes were meant for Albus. I'd love to see them for real. I'm glad Minerva has someone to give her a little kickstart. Someone has to make the first move and neither one looks likely to do it anytime soon.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I'd love to see them for real, myself -- I imagine a planetarium show sort of on the robes. :)
Well, I'm not sure how you could have nightmares over a shaved beard, but it would be a huge shock. He'd certainly get everyone talking if he kept that look.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I do believe she was teasing him. And he certainly would get everone talking!
Aw, poor Albus. At least Minerva finally gets the tale. Good work! :D
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Ta very much. :)
A carefully placed word or two from Quin may just be the key to getting Albus to take one step through that curtain he has set up that blinds him to the nature of Minerva's affections.You really do need to get Quin those wings. Doesn't Cupid wear a loin cloth, too? Oh, the possibilities.Thank you for giving us more backstory on Albus. Obviously, this Albus and another author's Albus are totally different characters. Her's was born much later. Perhaps a distant relative, but that's all.Your muse is not only on overdrive, it is consuming energy drinks
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Coffee is the energy drink of choice for this Muse -- she's a traditionalist! LOL!
Yup, I think the author's Albus is a sort of AU-Albus. What if he hadn't stayed born in 1840 and had been born forty-one years later and what if his parents were younger and what if he had a sister and what if . . .
RaM!Grindelwald is also not the author's Grindelwald. Although I did change his name from "Gunther" to "Gellert" so that people wouldn't be too confused. Although RaM is so non-DH-compliant, I don't know how confusing it would have been!
My Muse has informed that she wants to take a holiday, and I may give her one!
Ouch, poor Minerva! Albus is not going about this the right way at all, although the dinner invitation is a hopeful sign. He needs to be put out of his misery--some hot sex should do it!
Masterful writing, as usual. Albus is not saying anything out of the ordinary, but the distance he is keeping from Minerva is painfully obvious. Quin is wonderful, as always. Looking forward to the next chapters--maybe we're going to find out why Albus is so insecure about loving Minerva? Can't wait!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Albus thinks he's going about it all the right way because he really doesn't understand completely how Minerva feels about him. So he's trying very hard, but he's always just a bit . . . off of where he should be, I suppose one could say.
We will find out all kinds of things about Albus in the next several chapters. I'll be especially interested in your reactions to the next three chapters.
I'm glad you like the writing! (plus *blush!*)
Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Chapter 100! What a milestone! Congrats!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Vielen dank!
Honestly, he gives flowers, chocolates(a torte is better than most box chocolates anyway), and sends loving little notes, which she also sends. They share meals and go out to a concert. They are doing all the typical date things without actually dating. Rather cute of them, in a very blind to the truth way.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Yes, there are dates that aren't dates, and there are non-dates that are dates. ;)
Blue pee, lol.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Purple pee, actually -- the blue pee comes later! LOL!
Huh, not so sure I want to know much about Hagrid's sex life. Poor guy though, he's another that's gotten the shaft in life.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
I loved people's reactions to that chapter! LOL
A committee? How could she suggest that, horrible things.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)
Utterly. Gives me a headache merely comtemplating the word. ;P