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Flight of the Prince
Southern_Witch_69554 Reviews | 7.15/10 (554 Ratings, 0 Likes, 370 Favorites )
Although on different sides of the war, Severus and Hermione work together, each for their own reasons. This is my take on the events following HBP and will lead up to the Dark Lord's demise.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for Flight of the Prince
really hot chapter
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading! :) more up soon
At least Snape asked Hermione! Be it simply wanting an itch scratched, too much to drink, being grateful for her helping Rabastan or even maybe starting to actually like the Know-It-All, he did ask and then kept to what he wanted and her set limitations. Good man, that Snape.
“Well, you won’t catch me going *look, will you?”[This line needs 'to' added to it. Or leave 'going' out and make it 'looking'.]
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep, that's something I hoped people noticed (that he did ask and didn't do any more than what she'd agreed to). If she'd turned over and said, "Sod off," he would have let her be, though he'd have been disappointed. LOLFor the other one, since it's in dialogue, not the narrative, I'll leave it. People don't always speak correctly, especially when being emotional.
Incredably hot chappie SW. Merlin you had me drooling, OK off for a ice bath.........
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks, I'm happy you liked it.
Looks like the masquerades are heating up on all sides in different ways! Glad I finally got caught up on this!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Indeed! Thanks! :) More up soon.
Another excellent chapter.
Snape is brilliant!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you very much. I'm happy you liked it. :)
So Harry's learning more about Snape (and learning to think and understand), while Snape and Hermione have passed a definite turning point in their relationship... intriguing!
Heh. I wonder, if Ron found out (or saw even the staged memories), he and Harry might not have to stage another fight! Although I have to wonder if he's not on the way to realising that he may well have lost Hermione already.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
You got it (about hg/ ss and hp).Ron has a big part coming up. Things will have to go south for a bit, ya know? lol Hope you enjoy that. And at this point, he's hating what he thinks is going on (her being forced into sex, etc.), but when he... Well, I can't say or it'll ruin it. But you get the idea. :)
ooooh, that was yummy!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
~grin~ :) Thanks. More up soon.
Oh good God! I guess things are heating up :) Been hoping this story would update soon and although I guess we didn't learn a whole lot from this one, the bit of a Snape/Hermione turning point was very interesting - drinkin', it always gets you into trouble! :) I knew there was a reason I liked these NC-17 fics (blush) I think Snape's blantant use of the umm, more colorful vocabulary really drove home the point of that particular moment - not love, and I wouldn't even say lust specifically for each other, but lust all the same, or maybe just primal urges :) tomato, tomato - hmmm guess that doesn't work in typing :)Anyway, excellent writing as usual! Looking forward to what comes next.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep, I was just hoping to show that they are developing feelings for each other (and hopefully showing that he's kind of treating her the way he did Lily, which means he's falling for her -- just doesn't know it).Liquor = look out, baby! LOLRight. Not love. Not yet. But getting there. :) The break through is that it's the first time he's openly admitted to really wanting her. LOL "Oh, er, it was the liquor... Yeah..." </lie> LOL
Darn it! So damn close.... will they ever do the nasty in its entirety? You are such a tease, SW. LOLGreat last few chapters, sorry I hadn't taken the time to review until now.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Oh, Yeah, that's "coming" soon. LOL Not a problem. I'm just happy you are enjoying this.
I bet if he had tried to be a bit more romantic than "let me fuck you," he might've gotten more than a hand job.Men...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
LOL. Possibly. Bwahahaha.He's not at the romantic stage just yet.
Oh, my. Hermione is not sure where she is going now, is she? Harry knows her quite well.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Harry knows her very well indeed. :)
Bloody Brilliant!
More please
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading! MOre soon.
Gah!! Evil cliffhanger!!! GAH!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Sorry about that, mate! :) More up soon. Teehee
And here I thought that I've read everything there is to SS/HG sex in fandom. But Southern still surprises and gives us a hot, albeit forced, scene where the only intimacy those two actually shared was a kiss. Marvelous.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading! :) I'm happy you liked it. I'm working on the next bit right now and should have it sent to my beta later today. ~grin~
Response from nata (Reviewer)
Excellent! I hope we will also see more of Malfoys' submission to Weasleys. It must be so hard for them to bow their heads with all the pureblood nonsense filling their brain cavities. Although, some time on a filthy floor for their devoted servise to The Lord might give one a bit of a perspective.
Wicked chapter. I can't decide if Snape set that whole Rabastan confrontation up with his friend to make Hermione more pliable in accepting physical favors as a means of protection or if Snape is genuinely protecting her. You really have me going back and forth as to what to think. Great chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks,
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
. I'm happy you've read it. I'm thinking Rabastan is getting a bit frustrated with things and will show that via convo with Snape soon. :) Thank you!
I just found this story and it's very good. Poor Hermione and Snape. They are both so confused by what just happened. Looking forward to more soon. I think I need a cold shower after that chapter!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Great! Thanks for reading. I appreciate it. I shall have more up soon. :) Things will sort out soon.
Whoa, lady! Update soon! Things are heating up in all aspects of the story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Hey, thanks, mate! :) More up soon
Love it!!! Great chapter. At last we get the good stuff! I'm in love with Snape, how can Hermione not be?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
She will be. Oh, did I say that? Blast!
(cue applause) Of course she liked it! Heh, heh. Anyway, this is great so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I would have liked it as well. She's understandably confused, but that will pass. :) Thanks!
wow. great story, hawt "sex", malfoys in a chicken coop! lol waiting not so patiently for another chapter. *drools* lemons.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Man, I got a kick out of imagining them in that coop. Hahaha! You just know how much they hated that--and hated going to the Weasleys for help. teehee... A little bit more lemons in the next chapter. That should be up soon. Thanks so much. :)
I like the direction you are heading :), but I feel awfully sorry for Hermione, such a poor girl, torn between her feelings and her thoughts :(The teaser-scene had Southern-witch-at-her-best- quality :))
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I was in naughty mode. Teehee. There is more in the next chapter (already wrote out that part). Hahaha! Things will work out for Hermione soon, so don't worry too much. :)
Poor Hermione, this must be so confusing and stressful for her.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep, but she'll work through things. :) I promise I'll fix it soon.
I liked it, but the hypocritical Malfoys make me want to hurl, and Snape's placating Rabastan makes me with he'd removed said Death Eater's 'bits' instead, while he had him in a Levicorpus.
Oh, well. Good chapter, but now I'm depressed. *SIGH*
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Uhhuh. Molly had the right of it when she said she knew if things were in reverse they'd not do the same. They are lucky the Weasleys are so kind. Rabastan's not a nice guy at all, and Snape does have to keep up the pretense. Truth be told, he's still peeved at Hermione for the Malfoy stunt, though she doesn't "know" it. Things will be fixed up soon. :) Thank you for reading.
LOL An almost-lemon! Poor Hermione! She's so confused and conflicted by her new feelings toward Severus. Something will have to give eventually....The Malfoy's at the Burrow? Now that's a bit of a surprise. Can't wait to see what happens next over there.good chapter... keep it up! Go, Southern, go! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Something will give indeed. Teehee. I have some more stuff planned out and will be posting the next chapter very soon (some is already written up).