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Flight of the Prince
Southern_Witch_69554 Reviews | 7.15/10 (554 Ratings, 0 Likes, 370 Favorites )
Although on different sides of the war, Severus and Hermione work together, each for their own reasons. This is my take on the events following HBP and will lead up to the Dark Lord's demise.
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I adore the world of HP.
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Flight of the Prince
*sucks in a breath*
Oh, dear. Stupid boys, making matters worse. God, I hate Ron. What a moron... At least now Hermione will know what a real man looks like. *chuckles evilly*
Let the games begin!
PS--I like this Draco. He's a smart one.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Ron's gonna get better. Muahahaha. But, too right, she's with the real "man" now. I've sent the next to Nay! :)
You're so cruuuuuuuuuuuuel!!! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wayt to see how it progresses! :-)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
*grins!!* I've sent the next bit to Nay, so you won't have to wait long. Weeheee
I guess the Trio should not have messed with the Spy, and I guess the Spy got itchy fingers. Great chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Most definitely! LOL More to come soon. I'm about to send off the next to my beta. :)
"And now the fun begins." - ah... Looking forward to the fun!Poor Hermione!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks so much. I can promise that Hermione will not be harmed, though Bella likes picking on her a little. :)
I shall eagerley wait for the next chapter. It will be fun th read Hermione's interactions with Draco, Narcissa, Severus and the others.I also wonder what Ron will make of Severus' attitude.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I'm having fun with is so far and am very inspired. If my beta allows, I may post it sooner than next week. Ron's going to really think things through in this fic. Harry's a bit angry at first, but....
So, Hermione feels betrayed and so does Snape. For all her bravado, I think she will lose this round with Snape. Liked her thoughts on Ron. She's trying, but can't get there and it pisses her off because she wants to get there! Excellent chapter, my dear! Can't wait for more!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yeah, I'm thinking Snape now has the upper hand. LOL More up soon, sweets.
uh oh, I wish I was in Hermione's shoes.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Uh huh. Things will be quite interesting. :)
exciting chapter.
thanks a bunch.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Hey, thanks for reading! Happy you liked it!
Evil, evil cliffie! (laughs) Which means it's perfectly done, of course!
Loved your explaination of her and Ron here:
Her relationship with Ron was suffering a little. Each time he’d tried to touch her since then, she’d shied away, not really wanting his touch. It wasn’t anything against him, and she wasn’t so stupid as to think it was Snape again, she just felt odd about it. Oh, she’d relented and allowed him to have his way with her lately, but her mind and heart weren’t into it. She couldn’t help but to think of Snape when Ron touched her. Furious, she tossed the picture across the room.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks! I wanted to show that things truly weren't the same. :) That plays a big part in some decisions in the future. *waves* Glad you like, doll.
The boys really just can't help but mess things up, can they? Then again, it's not like Snape came without backup either, apparently.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep, those cheeky buggers. That'll "learn" them. LOL Yeah, Hermione's going to point that out to Snape. Teehee
"And now the fun begins."
Ain't that the truth? LOL
The boys never have been very bright, have they? They certainly blew that plan all to hell.
Now Snape has Hermione! Can't wait to see the end of that conversation. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Muahahaha! It's going well so far (I've already started!). Thanks for reading! :)
Oh dear, here comes the land of misunderstandings. Surprised? No, but it sure complicates everything, adding mistrust to the mix. Let's say that I wouldn't want to be in HG's shoes right now.Excellent writing, keep up the great story telling. *bows* Cheers!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
~snerk~ Complications indeed! It's going really well (the next chapter). I'm not at a part where I'm inspired and having great fun!
I absolutely love Hermione's reaction to Snape's revelation. Amazing what a hard time they're all having taking Dumbledore's portrait's words at face value. Well, maybe not that amazing. Typical for Harry and Ron, actually, and Hermione is clearly giving the matter some thought. Good on Tonks for pointing out some things Hermione was failing to notice with Ron, too, even if she didn't intend to.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading and for reviewing. I'm glad her reaction was plausible. I think I might have had something similar. LOL More up soon! :)
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
I look forward to it!
I was snickering at your Ron the whole way through. I really should review as I am reading, I can never remember exactly what I want to say by the end. But, I am intrigued as to where this is going. Hmmm, I wonder who Snape will pick after he is bored with Narcissa? *snerk*
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Hahaha! That's exactly why I review as I go as well. Otherwise, I forget what I'd wanted to say. Muahahaha... I wonder whom he will pick indeed! :) The next chapter is with my beta. Thank you very much. I appreciate the read. :)
OH damn! ron got to her.....oh well, be patient I guess. SW won't dissapoint ;DNice work with Harry, Ron and HG as characters.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep, he sure did, but fear not, she realizes exactly what was so off in the next chapter. :) Thanks!!
HMM- so HG did get a little from ron. Lovely room you described.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
She did get some indeed. LOL Thanks
LOL- nearly caught! ah the joys of being a teenager. So what happens when Ron is the fumbling boy?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
*grin* I'm sure you know by now what's happened, but I must say that in the next chapter I upload .... Muahahahaha
Yes, here I am again, being sucked into to one of your WIP's. LOL. Nice start. I don't mind Snape with Narcissa at all (no comment on HG/RW *snerk*).
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks so much. I'm glad you're reading. Heh, I'm with you on the RW/HG bits. Luckily, they won't last long.
Sorry I didn't review again after I finished reading!! You know I'm not much of a Hermoine fan, but this IS an interesting mix of characters and lots of storylines to dig through. I am going to be very interested to see what else Snape has up his sleeve!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
No problem. I sure wished that you liked Hermione. It would be great to see what you could do with the pairing. :)
I cannot belive he was about to say "Way better than Lavender." Hermione needs a MAN. *smirk*
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Ahahaha! You caught it, too. Only one other person noticed that (who mentioned it anyway). The poor sod. LOL
First of all, yes, I'm reading this ... have been over the last two nights. Second of all, you are frustrating ... almost giving us a taste of pleasure, but not quite. I am now forging onward, hoping that Hermione gets what she deserves, a little Severus!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Oh, good. I'm so glad. I put effort into it, and it seems like nobody cares sometimes. LOL Thanks for reading. I'm a bit naughty indeed.
Ohhh what a bastard he is! Our Snapey. I always like "really bad" Snape! I'm looking forward to more!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
LOL I never heard from you again. Not your cup of tea or were you unable to read any more? :)
Two things:
1. Well done.
2. Poor Draco.
;-)
Lipasnape
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks. I appreciate that. I feel sorry for Draco, too. He's got a good little plan though. :)