Flight of the Prince
Southern_Witch_69554 Reviews | 554 Ratings, 0 Likes, 370 Favorites )
Although on different sides of the war, Severus and Hermione work together, each for their own reasons. This is my take on the events following HBP and will lead up to the Dark Lord's demise.
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I adore the world of HP. 
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Flight of the Prince
Bella's stuck babysitting Draco - too funny.
Snape out for himself - so believable.
I love this Hermione - she's feisty!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I have some good fun planned with them all.
Ooo, dark, selfish Snape - I like it! I'm more than ready for your madness - the more difficult the journey, the more rewarding the destination.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks so much. I'm such a twisty little girl. teehee
*pants* um... yeah. That was close! I'm glad it didn't happen, though, cause that deception... bad form.
Draco's loyalties aren't clear, eh? That's good. Great story so far! Looking forward to the rest.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I have a bit more with Draco in the next chapter. He's making plans of his own! :) Yeah, I couldn't allow him to really "do" her like that.
Hmm. I obviously haven't read this chapter before (I thought I had). I like the set-up, although I'll agree with Hermione that it's a stupid plan. Snape's bound to show up at some point, and chances are good that he'll know all the wards listed... Hee.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Not a problem. Thanks for reading it now.
well done indeed!Harry saves the day once again, but the seeds have been planted...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
~nods~ :) More to come soon.
That was too close a call....wheeew. Awaiting chapter 5
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading!
Clever set-up! I guess that Hermione will be quite shocked next-time when her expert lover turns again to fumbling :)))
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Oh, yeah. Big time.
My guess was right: Severus gave Hermione pleasure in Ron's form. She's bound to feel the difference next time Ron and her tries "again."
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Uh-huh. She notices that something's just not right.
Excellent, as always! So sexy. I wonder how long it will take Hermione to figure it out - probably the next time Ron touches her, when she realizes he has no idea how to give her pleasure. . . .
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks so much. I appreciate that. Hermione's pretty quick to figure out that something just isn't right! :)
Oh, I was caught between wanting to to just do and it wanting him to stop because he was in ron's body. I like the way you handled it though. Methinks that after some serious pondering, Severus is going to decide there is a certain Muggleborn he'd like to have instead of Narcissa... :D
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Same here! LOL The next chapter shows what Hermione thinks about things though (you may have to close one eye while reading though teehee).
Response from Soul Bound (Reviewer)
Or both. I'll just have someone read it to me and hum to myself during the Scenes of Death.
Okay, perhaps I'm being a bit overdramatic, but not much!
Ut oh- they know Snape is slinking about. Ut oh- Snape is thinking of PJing as ron! *snerk*Happy Holidays!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I have that part written out, and it's been great fun. Muahahahaa
Hmm Snape is getting his own consort...I wonder what will happen to her when Lucius finds out. HG should get a piece of Ron to balance things out. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Lucius may not appreciate things at all. :) Oh, HG will get a piece of "Ron" all right.
Ohhh Snape is chilling in this. Like that Narcissa is still for "the cause".
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks, Drox!!
Oh man! I think Harry is about to explode. I feel for him--he has so much on him right now and all this anger with nobody handy to take it out on.Can't wait to see Snape at Grimmauld Place! Should be very interesting!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yeah, poor Harry's been through so much. Things will be heating up very soon.
its all good
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you for reading.
Excellent chapter Southern!! I always enjoy your writing and this story is no exception. The appearance of Albus was soothing and it was nice to have Harry confide in McGonagall. Let's hope Snape can slip into Grimmauld Place without getting hexed into oblivion.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Hey, thanks for reading. I'd hoped that people would feel a little better about things after hearing that Albus was fine with all that happened. Snape will have an interesting adventure in Grimmauld Place. :)
Severus has such an attitude toward Harry and gang (and almost everyone). So Pince and Filch..good pairing gak,,, Your remarks about what happens next... I'm taking a guess that Severus while under polyjuice snogs Hermione in the chapters coming up. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yeah, I've always found Snape to have a chip on his shoulder with most people. Unfortunately, the Pince and Filch is hinted at in canon, so I just carried on with it. Trust me, no imagery for anything... funky will be forthcoming. Hehehe.You're very right about what's coming. I'll try to make it interesting. :)
I liked the chapter, but I do think that Snape needs to be more careful.? And well, Dumbledore needs to tell someone what Snape did for him.?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Dumbledore wants to keep it a secret for now, as something else needs to happen first, and if Harry knew, he might ruin things. Snape does need to be more careful. That will catch up with him. Harry's a right persistent little bugger.
Nice. I really like how you are setting things up!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks! I'll have more up soon.
Now I'm so excited! Pretending to be Ron - I'm actually not sure wheter that's so simple as Snape thinks...I hope you will update soon, please! It's Christmas :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Grins
Now I'm so excited! Pretending to be Ron - I'm actually not sure wheter that's so simple as Snape thinks...I hope you will update soon, please! It's Christmas :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Teehee. :) I'm going to try, but I think my beta won't be able to get it back to me until after. Unfortunately. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.
Snape polyjuiced into Ron? Interesting indeed. I wonder where that orange smell came from: perfume, shampoo?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
*nods*I'm gonna explain the orange stuff soon. :) Well, I'll be making comments about it until I do explain it.
Gripping. You added another layer of complexity to ol' Sevvie--what are those 'plans of his own'? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I'll have more of that in the next chapter. Muahaha... Of course his plans will just happen to bring him down the same path Hermione and her mates are traveling.
Whew! There's so much going on here--I can't wait to see how this develops. Your Snape is breathtaking in his anger and desperation. I hate what he did to Narcissa but part of me understands it...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you. I do hope it didn't really come across as him "taking" because she truly did want to give. It just wasn't how she'd imagined it. Teehee. More up soon! There will be more about that as well.
I'm intrigued with this story. I like how you showed Severius's emotions after having to kill Dumbledor and how mad he was at Narcissa and Draco. I like reading a darker Severius. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks! There will be more soon. Psst. I do like a darker Snape, too.