thats an AMAZING movie!! And i'm loving your story as well.

Excellent fic. I love the storyline.

I really like the way it ends, sometime an epilogue ruins it.

I really like the way it ends, sometime an epilogue ruins it.

see? this is why this is so unbelievable, he must know HErmione is on the side of th elight and these are all her friends who are coming in? How can he thin kshe is afraid of them.... He should be using her as a hostage... but he seems to thin kthat she is at their side, which would be illogical because she is a muggleborn... which he knows and he has hated them and killed them his whole life.... It just seems so illogical. But Hermione will know what to do in the end, i wonder what side Rastaban will choose, his believes cant be that firm if the way he treats Hermione is anything to show... lol, not sure if two half-giants in such a building is really a good idea, it might collapse. Ok Hermione look out, get a wand and stun Rastaban and get the package. Funny, he calls Draco a traitor but he must know she is still for the right side, the fact that you fuck someone, as you like to call it, doesnt indicate that you just simply change side after a whole life especially if you are muggleborn and those tend to be raped and killed by said side you were supposed to move to, why is he protecting her and letting draco, a pureblood boy, die because he thinks he is a traitor? Lol, how can that madwoman believe Narcissa will still be on thier side when she hurts their son, pathetic. Not sure if it is a good idea to leave Ron there, someone might get smart and use him as a shield. I wonder if Rastaban killed George, sigh why did Ron not use the killing curse on him? It could have been over then. Now everyone think these are Hermiones friends. Hmmm wonder what will happen to everyone now.

I still find this between Hermione and Rabastan very out of character and frankly unbelievable. I still wonder though that mission where he went on and that thing that fell in the water, is that a horecrux? If so it iwll be gone forever and Harry cant destroy it. How can Draco say that, the git! This might bring HErmione in this too The death eater might turn o nher, Draco is being a fatalistic git, i guess he thinks if I die then so does she.... He left her behind though. She cant help it Ron got him into it. Hmm so Draco is being noble after all, good, I hoped he had it in him... A pity Ginny wasnt more featured in this fic... I wonder if osme of them will survive and find happiness in the end.

Sigh, what will they do with Draco and Ron now that Rabastan knows. I guess Snape cant obleviate him? Duh, how can she not regret this when Draco and Ron might die because they tried to rescue HER ro nbeing spurred on by Her making love to someone else while shwe was in a relationship with HIM? Yes Ron was a fool, i still hope he and Draco will live though, maybe she can distract Rastaban, knock him out somehow and help the boys escape if Snape hasnt found their broom syet, HErmione finally kicking some arses around would be nice. I hate helpless Hermione, i liked it more when she purposely fed Umbridge to the centaurs, lol.

Lol, would just serve him right if she says Rons name when they have sex, his own fault. Hmm I would find it rather offputing if wsomeone would say 'i want to fuck you' rather curde if I translate it into Dutch. But everyone has his or her own taste I guess... Well, at least he isnt sugar coating it or making it out as more then what it is to him., a release of frustration. I hope the boys get going and free her soon.

I hope that Rabastan fucking dies in his own blood, I hate dumb selfish ignorant pricks like that. I really dont think Snape would be friens with a primitive, crude, obnoxious leacherous man like that. What could his value/worth be? Why he should not have her, ehm because she is someone elses girlfriend and there against her will maybe? I think they might be compatible in other situations, they are both brilliant and not th emost social persons, both not real pretty looking. Both stubborn. Both ruthless in their own way, both loyal, both have quite a temper and can hold grudges. Poor Hermione, I hope she will get free soon and that she will find happiness in the end.

I wonder why Snape is friends with such a fucking bastard as rabastan, apparently a death eater through and through... I hope he dies in the last battle. UGH the fucking dumb shallow git. Insensitive gits all of them DUH HErmione is in a relationship with Ron, how woul dyou like it to have to have sex when you are in a relationship....

I hope Harry and Ron will get of their arses soon and mount a rescue mission/that Hermione will try something new.

Didnt start off right ey, he wanted to use her as a tool, nothing worth more the ntrash, a hated mudblood, would have killed her probbab ly if asked, fucking bastard. And now, suddenly he appreciates her worth even if she is just a mudblood? Bah all he knows Severus is raping her. Awww SEverus being a bit jealous... I hope she will be able to leave the mboth soon. I really dont know if it is plausible thar his friend gets over his hatred for mugleborns so soon. I guess if you really hate people like htat, you dont see them as persons but as things that have to be destroyed. I dont find it plausible that he just goes to talk to hermione like that, treats he rlike a person, an equal... I mean if he is a loyal dath eater which his tales earlier of killing a muggle boy seem to indicate. Oh yes Rabastan thats his name... I think he would not care if she wanted to save him or not, her just being another mudblood, but maybe he is just too intoxicated most of the time to use his brain. And he has been i n azkaba nmost of his life I guess. I dont doubt they can eventualy be in a healthy relationship, but only when the war is over.

I guess Narcissa really loves her son and he loves her. I wonder how Lucius fit sin, we never really learned in the books. Howdoes he think of his wive and son? I got the impression from the oboks that he just wants his so nto follow his footsteps, not really the loving husband or father. I wonder how Snape thinks about Draco/if he is sorry he cant put him o nthe right path so to speak. I wodner why snape told Rabastian or did he just follow him? I thought he was a loyal follower to the dark lord? Snape could have been in trouble if he found out what he gave Hermione. I guess potter appearing was useful for him after all or his double status could have been betrayed to the dark lord. Oh shit Hermione is in danger now.... I hope Draco will overcome his hatred and help her, maybe she can flee with him and Narcissa. Hmm Draco is still a slytherin though, i hope at least he and his mother will be able to flee because I doubt Severus will be able to protect them against Lucius AND the dark lord, besides the order can use some help now that Hermione is gone. I dont know, Hermione and Rabastan in one place...

I really wonder what will become of everyone, Ron fopr starters and Harry and Ginny, and what will happen to the whol emalfoy family....

I hope Draco and maybe even Narcissa will come around. I wonder how you will portray Lucius.

UGH, I cant say I am a fan of Narcissa and Snape living together. Also not sure if he would act like this if Lucius is really his friend

Interesting, this was written before dh. I always liked Draco and thought it was a pity he di dnot join th elight, we never really knew how he felt about everything. I wonder how you will develop Severus in this one.... I have never read mudh draco/Hermione but I guess that pairing could work as well... Draco is smart and cunning... I thought the vow had ended after Dumbledores death, I udnerstand Snape had to kill him, i hope he wont be as dark as in your last fic I read.... I think Snape is a petty bully and a nasty anti-social ugly git at times but I think he was loyal to Dumbledore he may be somewhat of a byronic figure, dark, moody, brooding..... Well lets just see where this is headed. I bet he faults Draco for the fact hehad to kill dumbledore, his mentor and having his soul endangered. Wow Narcissa is funny, lol. URGH bah, he wants to have sex with Narcissa? Why would he want that BAH. URGH DISGUSTING. Why would Severus want something like this... Hmm Ron and Hermione isnt my favourite pair either, lol.
I wonder what Snape and Draco will be doing...

I really enjoyed this.  Now I am going on the hunt for more of your HP work.  Keep writing!

I found this story this morning by hitting the random story link, I've been sitting at the computer since then.  I love this story.  I had read some of your other stuff on Ashwinder-- and I really thought I had read all of your longer works.  Obviously not.  Wonderful story, the ending may be my favorite of all endings.  I've been trying to figure out what I'm going to read when the stories I've bookmarked are finished.  I think now that I'm just going to work through your archived stories.

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY!

In spite of all the trials, this was a beautiful love story. I truly believe Hermione would never be happy with Ron. Definitely not in this story and in canon also. I've read of few of your other stories and you are one of my favorite story tellers. Thanks for the story.

Oh, *sighs happilly*, another great story from you. Perfect ending, perfect dialogues. Bravo!

I loved this story. I read the whole thing in the past day.  I was so caught up in it, I didn't even want to stop to eat!  Thanks for another great story.  I love your work and look forward to your next one.  Thanks.

Another 5 star penmanship - Great characterisations and great read. I almost cried at the reveal of Severus's new patronus and when Hermione called him Sev, not to mention when others tell Hermione that he loves her...oh and when she stuns Ron...Aw shucks it was the whole d*mn thing. Thanks for a wonderfully romantic story to read and remind me of what love can be, after a horrid day having to deal with my ex... RL sucks, I prefer to be sailing on the good 'ship SSHG.

I Loved this story and I hope you write a epilogue. I love it when Sev finally get a chance at a good life and Hermione is so perfect for him. Actually I read a lot of your fics as you are an excelent writer. I love to read and only finish if the first page grabs me. So far I have finished every fic of yours I have started. (5 star story)