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Potions Under Duress Flight of the Prince
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Flight of the Prince

1: Chapter 1

2: Chaper 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

Flight of the Prince

Southern_Witch_69

554 Reviews   |   554 Ratings, 0 Likes, 370 Favorites )

Romance Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 103,835 Words 30 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Ronald Weasley Bellatrix Lestrange Draco Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy The Grey Lady Rabastan Lestrange Lucius Malfoy Peter Pettigrew Molly Weasley Minerva McGonagall

Although on different sides of the war, Severus and Hermione work together, each for their own reasons. This is my take on the events following HBP and will lead up to the Dark Lord's demise.

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chaper 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Flight of the Prince

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10/10

Sniv

Mooooooooooooooooore! Oh my...how did I not see this fantastic fic when you first posted it? Argh I feel so ashamed! I always felt that Ron and Lavender would be more suited - so it would suit me just fine if Ron could ...transfer his love... And argh Snape. The whole story about Lily and Snape was so sad - you did a great job concerning Harry and the way her eventually "grew up" - it just breaks my heart. Hermione you know who is the one for you - go to him!!! 'Cause I'm afraid he won't come to you... Listen to Harry... I could go on - there are so many great moments in this fic! The Malfoys made it -of course- but it was nice to see how uncomfortable they were from time to time... Looking forward to more! =)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Well the good thing is that you finally found it! :) Yay!! xoxooxoxoxox

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Well the good thing is that you finally found it! :) Yay!! xoxooxoxoxox

9/10

sunny33

I loved Ron blurting out that Sinistra was "hot', it's so him....clueless!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah, lol! hahahahaha

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah, lol! hahahahaha

10/10

Cloud72

Hello help, I love this story, so please, please, pleasy continue......Hope to read the next chapter soon. My best wishes Cloud

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

~smile~ Thank you!!

10/10

hogwartsgirl007

i am totally in love with you right now... she is going to end up with Severus right? omg she had to. this is so sad i was almost crying. keep up the amazing work hun. i will let you get back to updating this wonderful story (you might also find it amusing that when i got the email saying that this story had been updated i gave a little scream and clapped my hands... to the amusement of my family) *hugs*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Teehee. So glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you so much for the comments and support!

10/10

hogwartsgirl007

AHHHHHHH!!!!  i have been waiting for this!!! omg i hope that my severus is ok!!! and Hermione! omg omg omg!! sweets this is def the best sev/hermione story in fanfiction today! i cannot wait to read the next chapter!!! *hugs*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

LOL Smile. :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Poor Hermione didn't know they were trying to hex him and now she has to pay for their foolishness.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Uhhuh... prats!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Uhhuh... prats!

0/10

OpalJade

I absolutely love this story! So well written and believable!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you so very much for the reviews.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you so very much for the reviews.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

So Hermione now knows that it was Snape and she can compare notes.  lol   So he has been thinking about her huh?  I bet she starts thinking about him now too.  lol

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

LOL!! He has... :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

LOL!! He has... :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

So Severus knows what he is doing.   Don't settle Hermione for boring Ron,  he won't get better.  He can have who ever he did first.  He didn't even think of her. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Too right :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Too right :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Ok if Hermione has to spend any time in bed with Severus at some time she is going to want to have sex with him.  She won't be able to stop it.   Harry needs to move past his anger.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Uhhuh. :) lol

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Uhhuh. :) lol

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Ron is a git.  He needs a female who is wild or should I say one that get wild being with him.   I never thought they were good with each other.  Lavender is better for him or even Luna.  Just my point of view.   Narcissa sure don't know how to feel any more, does she? 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Narcissa is confused a little. :) lol about Ron!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Narcissa is confused a little. :) lol about Ron!!!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love the way you spin a tale.  I would say alot more but I really want to move on.  And I think this is my 240th review for the month. lol

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Whoot! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Whoot! :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

What an intense chapter.  I can't wait to read more.  So I will cont.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thanks

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thanks

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

It's the very least Narcissa could give up to Severus because she sure does owe him big time.  As for Hermione and Ron,  I'm glad you put in an A/N bit about them.  As always brilliant.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah. Cissy did want Snape. I think she imagined it being a different way. LOL

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah. Cissy did want Snape. I think she imagined it being a different way. LOL

10/10

draegon_fire

I just started reading this fic, and couldn't stop until I caught up. I'm so glad things are beginning to work out. It appears that Hermione is deciding on a relationship with Severus. I think she knew for a while now, but was still confused because of her assumed feelings for Ron.  I noticed this especially because she invited Severus to visit her, but told Ron that she would get back to him on that. I hope Severus takes her up on that. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you! Glad you found it. :) And, yep, Snape's the man in her heart.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you! Glad you found it. :) And, yep, Snape's the man in her heart.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Harry eventually wanted Hermione to be happy rather than just wanting her and Ron to be together. At first it seemed as if he thought that Hermione shouldn't want Severus, but should only want Ron. It was a good thing that McGonagall showed Harry those memories of Severus and Lily. Harry was then more able to think of Severus as a human being.It seems here that Hermione chose Severus over Ron. I hope I am correct in that assumption. :) I wonder whether Severus will meet Hermione at her parents house. That might be somewhat awkward.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah, I think Harry would be reluctantly supported of her no matter what she chose. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :) I appreciate it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Yeah, I think Harry would be reluctantly supported of her no matter what she chose. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :) I appreciate it.

10/10

aura

It's just like Ron to spout off at Severus to make him feel unwanted, and like the Malfoys to spin the little bit of truth they have to make them almost seem like heroes themselves. 

I liked the bit about Fawkes going first to Severus after the battle, that would've probably convinced more people than just Harry and Hermione's word alone. Seems like Hermione knows who she wants, but still feels the guilty pull in Ron's direction.  Almost hope Ron does something to really upset her (basically, to be the straw that breaks the camel's back), because even if she's only away from Severus for a while to give her time to think, he's going to think she's with Ron the whole time until she is actually with him again. Also sort of expect Severus to go back to the 'Professor mode' around her, being ultra-cold to push her away, and protect his own heart (since he thinks she's either already chosen Ron, or would be 'better off with someone else'). 

I'm glad that Harry and Minerva both seem to (tentatively at least) approve of her relationship with Severus.  That'll help ease her mind (and his possibly) to some extent about whatever difficulties they may face.

Hope things work out quickly with Rabastan as well, since she was unconscious for so long, he probably thinks she was lying or had forgotten about him (or something similar). Yes he's done some bad things, but even Voldemort knew he wasn't completely loyal, and he and Hermione really did consider eachother friends by the time of the battle.

Really like this fic! And pretty much everything else you've written. Can't wait to see where it goes from here! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you so very much! :) :) I really enjoy your comments. They rock!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thank you so very much! :) :) I really enjoy your comments. They rock!

0/10

Shiverrus

Hooray!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

~smile~

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

~smile~

8/10

Kat7

Damn Ron! How dare he speak for her!  I want to strangle him!!!!  

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

yeah, what a berk!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

yeah, what a berk!

10/10

blue artemis

Ron needs to go. Really.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

I agree. LOL

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

I agree. LOL

10/10

Darque Hart

Hmm -- I'd think from Hermione's letters that she knows exactly what she wants. Letter to Ron, 'I'm going home to mummy, talk soon, time to adjust, need rest, stay away, I'll let you know. Love from...' Letter to Sev, 'odd being without you, going home but you're welcome anytime to visit, need to talk, or can I come to you, easier that way [parents not butting in...], looking forward to, Love always.' Oh, and Bird, deliver Sev's first so he has his before Ron is even aware.

Yep, seems obvious to me. [Aside from the fact that it's a SS/HG story.]

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

You got it! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

You got it! :)

0/10

nightshift

She needs to listen to her heart instead of other people's expectations. Trying to please others is no way to live, especially when you consider that this isn't a mere "what are we having for dinner" sort of decision. Looking forward to the next chapter. Why do I think either Ron or Severus is going to break in on something and either completely misconstrue the circumstances (in the case of Severus) or get the picture and have a blowup (in the case of Ron)?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

She will definitely talk to Snape in the next chapter about her feelings. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

She will definitely talk to Snape in the next chapter about her feelings. :)

0/10

septentrion

Ron can't help but be a git and make assumptions. Well, I can only hope that Severus will go to her.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

~grin~ I have fun plans for next chapter. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

~grin~ I have fun plans for next chapter. :)

0/10

Mint Stick

Oh, poor Severus. Ron just had to go and be an idiot. I really am glad that Harry has some sense - at least Hermione wouldn't need to worry about losing all her friends when she does choose Severus over Ron.

And the poor Grangers - no one ever tells them anything, either in canon or in fanon, do they? *grins* I was amazed JKR even remembered at all that something had to be done about them in DH.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

yeah, Ron seems to have the nack for mucking things up. :) Hahaha. I put that line in there from Harry on purpose. It's true. They're totally forgotten about. :) LOL

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

yeah, Ron seems to have the nack for mucking things up. :) Hahaha. I put that line in there from Harry on purpose. It's true. They're totally forgotten about. :) LOL

10/10

cocoachristy

Oh I feel so bad for Hermione and Severus. I bet he thinks she doesn't want him, just like she thinks he doesn't want her! I hope the owl goes to Severus first!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thanks. :) He does think that indeed.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)

Thanks. :) He does think that indeed.

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