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Flight of the Prince
Southern_Witch_69554 Reviews | 7.15/10 (554 Ratings, 0 Likes, 370 Favorites )
Although on different sides of the war, Severus and Hermione work together, each for their own reasons. This is my take on the events following HBP and will lead up to the Dark Lord's demise.
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I adore the world of HP.
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Reviews for Flight of the Prince
Oh, is it wrong of me that I hope Ron bit it? And poor Severus, will she admit her feelings for him? Will he be saved from persecution? What about Rabastan?I'm on the pins and needles of anticipation...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
You just don't know how very tempting it is to off Ron right now. :) We'll see what happens to Rabastan and Snape right away. No drawn out bs here. ~wicked grin~
Very exciting! I was on the edge of my seat the entire chapter! You did an excellent job of depicting the confusion and panic. Fabulous! Oh, but I'm so worried for Severus and Hermione! Things should get very interesting now!
I hope you have a wonderful holiday!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you so much. That's what I was aiming for! Things are about to get pretty interesting (so I hope!). ~grin~Happy holiday to you too!
I think you did a great job describing the final battle scene! (I think it would be difficult to write). Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you so much! :) Battle Scenes are always fun for me, but sometimes, you can only do so many before they start looking the same! LOL
Dear Southern_Witch_69! Recently I have read your fanfic «Flight of the Prince», and I want to say that it is really great! Thank you very much for writing it! With great pleasure I shall wait for continuation!Sorry but...Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language and publish it on website http://severushermione.clan.su/ ? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Thank you once again for your wonderful work! Please, answer me... my mail: ledy_demonika@bk.ru
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks for reading. I'm so happy that you are liking it. I'll email you privately. :)
Response from Demonika (Reviewer)
Excuse me, but, unfortunately, I have not received your letter. It is very sad, in fact your fic is really fine, and I with the great pleasure would translate it. But I don't know, whether I can make it?
Oh, dear. How long will Ron's and Hermione's relationship last?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Snerk. Trelawney would say forever, but we all know she's shite as a Seer. :)
This is a great story! This is the second one that I have read from you, and I really love your style!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoy them! :)
And they accuse me of evil cliffhangers. Gah!!!!
Great tension, now tell us what happens next, please?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Okay, here's what happens next:1. The Ministry is ...Just kidding! Hahhaa! Sorry about the cliffies. :)
Oooops, I left you a review last night to let you know how much I was enjoying your story...but guess what!? I posted it with the Chapter 1 reviews! Sorry about that...Anyway, I loved reading this yesterday!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Not a problem! Im happy you liked it so far! Hope you like the next part. :)
AHHHHHHH!!! you cant tell but i am screaming at you to keep writing!!! omg this is so good!!! but of course you already knew that lol. hun this is amazing. i honestly think that you will go far if you decide to write for a living.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
LOL You're so sweet all the time. Hope you like the next part.
I was supposed to go X-Mas shopping after supper and somehow stumbled unto your story....Now, (six hours later, no shopping done, and 19 chapters read) do I really need to tell you I much I enjoyed your fiction!?....No, I didn't think so!Won't be checking for an update until I get some gifts though! (who am I kidding?!)Thanks for sharing!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
:) LOL Hiya! Did you get your gifts yet? Teehee I'm happ you found the story, but sorry it's taking up your time.~grin~
Holy crap all hell's broken loose! Oh the clean up is going to be messy....
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Yep! That's one way to describe it! Teehee
You know, I really prefer the narrative when Hermione is unconscious. It picks up steam then. Much less arguing and dithering, more plot development, etc. I finally started going through DH for the second time. Hermione does a lot of screaming in it, being tortured by Belatrix, which really bogs down the whole thing. This is even worse than the arguing.And think how calm things were when she was hospitalized as a cat, or paralyzed by the basilisk. Yes, there's a lot of good that comes out of a quiet Hermione. Just a suggestion. Maybe permanent laryngitis?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Say what?LOL~grin~She did loads of crying in DH, too, huh?
OH MY GODS THIS IS GOOD! You must update soon - I'm completely hooked! Great Story!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Glad you like it! I really enjoy this story when I have the time to write it. Teehee
So it begins................
Brilliant chapter, can't believe that Hermione is even considering life with Ron eventually, hey he may not even make it out of the battle alive.
Evil cliffie yet again.
More chapters soon, pleeeeeease.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Too right. :) More up soon (within the week) Thank you for reading and commenting.
Wow, that was something. I really am hoping this all works out. Draco is really only out for himself, isn't he?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Draco's pissed his pants methinks. :) LOL More up soon!
Great chapter, Southern! Very exciting, and the cliff-hanger is just suspenseful enough to make me enthusiatic for the next chapter without making me feel so anxious that I'm miserable.
But I have two minor, itty-bitty quibbles:
I think it should be "trying to defuse the situation," as in render it safe or tranquil - not explosive. "Diffuse" means to disperse, like letting fresh air diffuse smoke....trying to diffuse the situation...
The word "have" is one too many in that sentence. If she had done that, or had not (hadn't) done it (in the past), then she will have or won't have done it, in the future. Yes?
...if she hadn’t have done that.
Quibbles aside, I LOVE this chapter! Great job!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Well, how very embarassing. I know what diffuser is (use that on my hair dryer sometimes when I wanna get some wild hair. ~grin~). Ruddy typo.I'm glad you liked the chapter.Adn yeah, i'm gonna nix that have.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
And thank you.
Response from Guinnevere (Reviewer)
Sorry about the embarrassment!
But as for the praise: you're welcome; you deserve it. I love your stories!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
You're so sweet. Thank you! :)
I'm really enjoying this story! I look forward to the next update.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thank you very much. :)
wow.here we go...pleeeeeeeeeeease update.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Wooohooo! More up soon! :)
I'm really wondering what Snape's motivations are now - it sounds as though he's just going to do whatever it takes for him and Hermione to survive, regardless of whether the Order or Voldemort win. Hurry up and update, don't leave us with this cliffhanger!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
It definitely should seem that his motivations have changed some. ~Grin~ Good catch.:)
And so it begins... argh! :-)
I'm really feeling sorry for Hermione, caught as she is between friendships, the big picture, and her feelings for Severus. It seems that no matter what she does, she'd hurt someone she cares for.
Then again, she'll get Severus in the end, so I can't feel too sorry for her either. ;-)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Teehee! Things will defintelly work out. And she's definitely in a bind at the moment! :)
I don't think enough good things can be said about this fic!
I loved that Molly used the twins' Ears to spy on Lupin, and how most of the Order ended up being present when Harry finally filled them in on (part of) what had been going on. Am a bit worried about whatever Lucius plans on showing Harry though, and how it'll effect the way Severus is treated in the coming battle.
At least Severus and Hermione aren't in danger from Voldemort, too bad he suspects Rabastan... He actually is kind of nice, and possibly considers both Severus and Hermione as friends and approves of their relationship (or what he thinks it is anyway).
Hopefully Ron and Draco weren't injured so badly that they can't at least try to get out of the way of hexes. And poor Hermione is defenseless as well, with a major battle brewing around her.
Sounds like there'll be 2 horcruxes present, plus Voldie... Wish I could remember how many they've destroyed at this point... Should be an interesting battle!
Looking forward to your next update! Yes, I know I'm greedy.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Hehe I thought it about time that Molly snagged one of their inventions and turned the tables. :) Lucius really beleives that Snape is a "bad" guy, so he will try to convince Harry and McGonagall of it, thinking he's doing right. There will be more from Rabastan. :) You've calculated it right. 2 Horcruxes, plus Voldie. It seems Harry's the one who's miscalculated. No worries. That will be handled. More up soon!
Maybe what Ron did will turn out to be for the best in the end. It seems that we're in for a rough ride in the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I'm thinking so (the Ron part)! :)
What an incredible chapter. What an incredibly evil cliff hanger. AUGH!! Update soonest!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
Thanks, doll. It went too quickly, didn't it? When I proofed it, I was like "WTF? That's it?" :( So I'll have more up soon.
Oh Yes! lovely chapter, but such a cliffhanger!!! i really hope you update soon cause this is one of my favorite WIPs! i hope severus is ok and maybe ron to so later he can see some sshg (bad of me, but i always love a ron scorned...) i really hope you update soon so we find out where this huge mess goes and get to some more enjoyable climaxs...
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Flight of the Prince)
I will have more up within the week. ~grin~I think Ron will be around for a while. ~smiles~ :)