It's a cliffhanger!  Are you SURE you didn't read Harlequin romances when you were a bubblegummer?  Although, come to think of it, Jane Eyre was quite a love-hate story too. 

really good to see a feisty Hermione for a change.  Glad to see she is determined to keep her independence and her own name.  As I remember from the original story, she was greiving for Ron when she was forced to marry.  She has every right to be pissed off and angry - i sure as hell would be in her position.  I think they have a long road ahead of them but i'm sure they will resolve their differences in the end.  Keep up the good work

Eeps!  That sure was a nice after-dinner treat....  Ahem, the next day will be better for the newlyweds?  BTW, I loved the Severus, Sugar, or Rabid Bunny of Love names; I think Sugar is probably safer than Bunny, though I like Rabid Bunny the most.  Thanks for updating!

This is a good chapter. I wish that they could get on the same page and also that Hermione could read into his words. He seemed to admit to more than what he said near the end. I also hate that she won't take his last name. Good grief. She sort of bugs me a bit by the way she hopes he loves her while not even wanting to think of the possibility of loving him. What's the big deal, I say! LOL... That's the Snape!Head in me. I'm glad he told those little losers where to get off. :)

it begins with fun but ends with fury. What a very bad day, and what a very bad argument. It's really difficult to come down after such an earth quake, I wonder how you'll manage it. Please update soon !

Love it!!!! Keep it coming!!!

OOOOOHHHH MMMMYYYY GGGOOOODDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think i felt that as much as hermione did.... you captured the ups and downs and translated them exquisitely!!!!

please !!!!!!!!!!!!! hurry up with the next chapter

Wonderfully written!! I am enjoying both Snape and Hermione, you have characterized them well! Snape... uncertain... vulnerable... tender... romantic.... passionate.... UMMM! Hermione... understandably all over the map, from being uncertain of her feelings to bravely trying to entice him, to being overwhelmed by the intensity of Severus's feelings, to being overwhelmed with the realization, once again, that Ron is gone! Not to mention displaying her quick anger at Snape's playfully ignoring the openings she left for him, to allowing herself to be goaded by Snape's apparent chauvinism, before allowing herself to be blown away with the passion!!Although, I am wondering where you are going with the chickenpox scenario; or, if it is simply a very mortifying event to happen to Snape on his wedding night!What did Draco want? Is there an outbreak of chickenpox in Slytherin House? Or, did Madam Pomprey send him to tell Severus to stay away from Hermione as she has just realized that it is an unusual strain of chickenpox?Oh yeah, that was an excellent summary of the first story!! Well done!!Congratulations on absolutely beautiful, sexy romance as well!Thanks!P.S. I don’t usually overdue exclamation marks, but I really am enjoying this story!

Bravo, bravo.    Anyone who writes their first Lemon scene that well deserves a standing ovation.  So consider yourself applaused.  I am glad you are doing a follow up to 'Marry a Choice', that was enjoyable and I have the feeling this will be even more so.  --  B

Very good. I liked the lemons. Although, I must say, that was very cruel of you to make the poor chap get chicken pox!  LOL!

Very well written!  I am excited to read the next chapter, and I really like how you write Snape.  

That was the most interesting consumation I have ever read.  Cute and romantic.  Fluffy in all the right places.  Hot in all the right places.  Well done!  Live long and prosper, Titania

“What’s that?” she asked, pointing.His lips twitched up in amusement, but he answered seriously. “That is a penis, my dear.”Snort!  LOL.  You're killin me!  Titania

Thank you for the sequel...

It is wonderful..  I'm glad she didn't tell him she was crying because of Ron.  That would have been a kick to his stomach.

Waiting for more. Patty 

absolutely thrilled at your sequel of a most entertaining hg/ss story.  this is novel--never before have I read a marriage fic where poor Sev comes down w/a virus!  (at least they got a bit busy beforehand.  . . . .)  anxiously waiting for updates! 

Quite a way with smut, and very funny.  What will the morning after hold?

Chicken pox!  Does this mean he was contagious and gave it to folks at the wedding reception?  What a honeymoon!  Poor guy.  I like the realistic first night together - would've been way too easy to just have them shag, but with everything they've been through , this is much better.  I'm glad she's catching on to his wicked sense of humor.  BTW, I had to laugh at icy feet of Death and heating rod.  Bad author, bad author! 

Oh this is sweet with insecurities but ultimately romantic.

I just really adored this. And of all the luck... hahaha! Chicken Pox! ~snicker~ I can't wait for more. Whenever you are ready, your pesky readers shall be waiting. (First in line)

I was very excited to see that you had posted the start of the sequel and what an excellent start.  I loved the teasing and the playfulness.  Severus having the chicken pox is a wonderful touch.  Have a Merry Christmas!

I love it. Please update soon.

ahhh!!!.... snif!... this is lovely!

But what's the problem with Vector??... I can't wait to know!! 

Poor Teddy, but it has to happen.  Severus seems to be waiting for something...Wine and cheese! Love it.  Tampered wine, even better.

Sparse as these chapters are (doesn't it always feel like that for stories one is eager to read on and on?), it's such a delight to see them all progress. I just wish for Teddy to find a lovely witch that is not taken yet. Otherwise, I can just envision Severus's over-the-top reaction as he walks into Teddy's proclamations of love... 

Oh! So sweet! I'm so glad that the lovers are making inroads. I'm so curious about Teddy. I feel like he has some sort of feelings for either Hermione or Severus that are pretty mysterious. I'm dying to know what happens next! (And cheering Hermione on! Say it! Say it! He really needs to know!)