I loved this chapter!  The drunken snogging where Severus allowed himself to be so vulnerable, but did not take advantage of Hermione was just Guh!  I also thought the sleeping cuddle was very sweet.

Oh, this was sweet! I'm really loving the way their relationship is developing.

And About Time Too!  I love this fic  so much but I have to keep re-reading it to refresh my memory when I get a new chapter.  I know we all have RL to contend with but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CAN I HAVE AN UPDATE BEFORE DECEMBER?I love how we see a delicate side to Severus' character in this chapter without the need for mood enhancing substances.  The relationship is developing nicely so now I'm waiting for someone to bugger it up!  Isn't that the usual case?Chocolate cookies for your muse,Blessings

And About Time Too!  I love this fic  so much but I have to keep re-reading it to refresh my memory when I get a new chapter.  I know we all have RL to contend with but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CAN I HAVE AN UPDATE BEFORE DECEMBER?I love how we see a delicate side to Severus' character in this chapter without the need for mood enhancing substances.  The relationship is developing nicely so now I'm waiting for someone to bugger it up!  Isn't that the usual case?Chocolate cookies for your muse,Blessings

Always loved this story and was happy to see an update to it.  Thanks!

So happy to see an update to your story! It was a very well written (as usual) and nice chapter, I love that our couple are finally starting to know eachother and to fell in love with each other.

I'm so happy when you update!  There are so few WIPs that I follow, any more, and this one is always such a joy.  I'm glad you pointed out that only 3 weeks have passed in the Marry a Choice universe since the beginning of the story.  It makes me feel far more patient with Hermione!I enjoyed the lovely time they spent together, including the drunken snogging and the sleepy cuddling.  Teddy confuses me, but I imagine I will understand about him in time.  Thank you, Avery!

Shall I squee again? I can if you'd like. :D

I adored the chapter through and through. Absolutely lovely. So many emotions for Hermione to sort through, I feel terrible for her, but she understanding her husband more, which is a very good thing. They do need to talk more and get to know each other better. And I think that poor Teddy is jealous. Perhaps Hermione can find him a wonderful girlfriend. 

I am a very greedy reader and I want more, though I know that you're terribly busy, so I won't harrass you for... oh... a week or so. That's enough time, right? ;) 

I really liked this chapter, there is a lot of insight into Hermione's thoughts, some public opinian and a bit of Severus's thoughts.  This chapter made the story seem more 'real'.

Lovely chapter.  I am so glad Hermione's feelings are turning more tender and she is learning to think before she speaks.  You've managed the transition very well.  And I love your description of Snape as "terribly, terribly fragile."

Poor Teddy.  Hope he finds another love interest before he does permanent damage. 

An update!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *does a Very Happy Dance*

 *ahem*

 Yay for Relationship Progression!

 Teddy is getting curiouser and curiouser. Hmmm....

And yay for Snuggly!SSHG. 

ahh, cozy....  Very nice!  That Theo is still a mystery, which is is perhaps a Slytherin male trait.  Not sure Theo is/was in love with Hermione,but perhaps he entertained thoughts of the possibility?  But why would he do that with the wife of his Head of House?  Eh, I'll have to wait for a future chapter for that answer.  Meanwhile, I am happy to leave this chapter with S&H in bed snuggled together.  Thanks for posting!

Yay, an update! 

This was a nice chapter.  I really like how things are developing between Severus and Hermione. 

I feel bad for poor Teddy, though.  It just seems like he's setting himself up for alllll kinds of heartbreak.

It's pleasant to read how their relationship goes in the right direction.

made me laugh, made me cry, made me feel
wonderful work

Her turn tomorrow?

Good choice!

Oh, that was sweet!

Someone should tell them that they could actually work in the same room!

Brilliant letter!

Oops, what a misunderstanding

Well. Lucius seemed to get off lightly.  But then again, he may regard Hermione in a different light now.

This is my favourite portrayal of Severus, romantic and playful in private yet still snarky in public!

Enjoyed the playful flirting in this and the kiss in the restricted section. :D

I couldn't stop reading this story.  I love it.  The characterization is flawless, and the prose is very good.