Thanks! I love a good SS HG fanfic... and this was amazing :D

"I was thinking about conjuring some crisps and a lawn chair." Hahahahaa. That is bloody hilarious!! I love the way you put the characters in this. Harry makes me laugh so much, and I love Hermione and Snape. Dobby rocks! There's not one bad thing I can say!! *squee* Can't wait to read on... xx

LOL, poor Draco just about got his head blown off!

Whoopsie! What's got Severus going?  Did he mistake her referring to the dress as horrid as referring to their marriage?  As always, I add my raucous voice to the clamor for another chapter!!

Oh my goodness. What happened. We were doing so well. Poor Severus and Hermione. They are both suffereing. Awe....

Hmm, was he upset because he thought she was saying that marriage is "horrid"?  Things were going so nicely until then - massage and physical contact (yay!), and Teddy becoming more accepted by Harry and Ginny.  Sigh.  BTW, where's Draco?  I know, I know... must wait for next chapter!!

Woo, things are not looking well for the couple right now. Update soon.

Again a very well written chapter!!  But, what crept up in Severus ass and bit him? His behaviour is rather odd and he is definiatly treating Hermione unfair. I guess he probably thinks he have heard or seen anything that makes his behaviour acceptable, but I must say it is rather offputting that a grown man can't make out what is rigth or wrong without making an idiot of himself. If he has a problem he should talk to her, just as he would have demanded she did if the situation had been reversed. (Maybe that Vector-woman has planted a lie or ten in his head? If he is willingly beliving her, he deserves the headache and then some....) Update again soon!!!

So what is his problem?!?  (This bit of art is mimicking my life, right now, so it was really hard to read the last part and not bawl like a baby.)  Good chapter, and I'm looking forward to more.  I have to go back and read the last chapter, see if there's some clue there about his behavior.  Right now I'd just like to smack him.

I'm so glad you're updating again! I read Marry a Choice and the completed part of this some time ago. I am really enjoying it!

I like Teddy in this story so I'm glad he's getting along with Harry. The Great Hall scenes were very effective, I was just as curious as Hermione on Severus' whereabouts.

Oh, she stepped on his toes, somehow - he got touchy when she mocked her wedding dress.  He must have thought she was talking about something other than the frills.  Poor man.  He needs a good shag to set him straight - but Hermione's a bit indisposed for such things just now.

I was intrigued by the dream, how it began as Ron and she called Severus' name.  Her feelings are evolving and she's confused and feels guilty about it.  Poor thing! 

She probably doesn't realise that by disparaging the dress, he feels like she disparages the marriage. My, those two will need to speak together soon.     

Good transitional chapter, you seem to be setting up for more action.

NO this is all too sad... poor poor severus. this is a very mean story to him, (i still like it but you have to admit it is  mean)

Anywho can not wait till Hermione gets over all that and falls in love and they live happily ever after and all that rot...lol

KarlaMarie 

This chapter looks familiar. Oh, I've read it before! Hahaha! (I'm such a great joke teller, eh?)Can't wait for the next one, dear. Good work, as always.

Can you tell I couldn't wait for the chapter to be up at SH? And all because you told me the next chapter was in the qeue... I'm too impatient.

They are interesting nightmares if you ask me. They tell a lot about Hermione's thoughts and feelings. I'm not sure I want to analyse them too close... but they are interesting anyway. And since I know that we use dreams as a mean to get our thoughts in order and to process what happens to us... of course it was a big step forward. Very big if it means Hermione is going to start dealing with it instead of blocking it.

Oops, forgot to tell you that I loved the chapter, creepy details and all.

Gee Whiz!  Poor Severus, Poor Hermione.  I'm glad Poppy's there to help.  I hope they let the Dementors use tongue when they kiss Malfoy.  Rotten Bastard!!!!!                    Well done on this chapter, and, as usual, I can't wait for the next one!  GG                

I feel terribly sorry for the both of them. I know what it feels like to have nightmares like those, as I am battling with them myself now. The assurance that something good will come of this is comforting. I look forward to the next chapter with high hopes. ~The Mistress

This little web of intrigue is developing at a fantastic rate of knots.  The complicated & tentative relationship is teetering on a fine edged sword and it's bloody brilliant!  I'm eager for more and so offer lemon sherbets, droobles best blowing gum and a dozen sugar quills to your muse as incentive!Blessings! xx 

Awesome chapter. I felt very sorry for Snape. Can't wait for more!!

More soon please.

I've been enjoying this story greatly. I did not realize that there was a first one. I've gone to read that and wanted to tell you here that it was nicely done. I wonder why Hermione just didn't tell him that she wanted to stay? There seems to be so much miscommunication here. Never fear. Believe it or not, this is a big step forward for both of them. I am happy to hear it and am looking  forward to some lighter chapters and the actual development of their relationship. I know she's young, but I do hope she tends to think more like a wife soon.

it's  good  so  far.  i  like  it. hope  to  catch  the  next  and  see  it  completed.kepp  up  the  good  work.

I am so happy that Severus and Hermione have embarked on courtship.  I think it is a lovely way to get to know each other, and to do their courting away from the castle can only be a good thing!!!You are a very talented writer, and I hope that one day you will be able to grace us with the next chapters you had planned before going on hiatus.  I have noticed that the last reveiw before this one was posted in Sept., 2006.  Should I assume that you have abandoned the rest of the work on this story?  I do understand about muses taking flight, so I am not castigating you, I just wanted to know if I should keep my hopes up, or just say thank you for a beautifully told story and not look for more.Thank you!!!Beth