The Long Wait
ancientgirl254 Reviews | 254 Ratings, 0 Likes, 298 Favorites )
Hermione gets a letter of invitation to return to Hogwarts. Will she say yes?
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
Reviews for The Long Wait
This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Hi! Thank you for the lovely review. I have a few sequals to this story. I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)
Draco, a typical man!
Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I've always seen him as such a shy person. Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.
love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you! It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring.
had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.
I love the way his thoughts drift!
Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore.
Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)
Naughty Dumbledore!!
i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you for reading it!!!
Brava! This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it. And now I have to go find the three sequels. *iz addicted*
Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings. Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin. Well done!
Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
They're going to be married!!! *grinning* This poem is perfect for this story. Well done, you!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Woo hoo! Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised.
I can't stop smiling.
Beth
The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end. I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again. Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
This is gut wrenching. I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Good going, guys! Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Good God, man! Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!
Beth
I could kiss Draco! Finally something might change. I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.
Beth
Hooray! With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus. I hope it doesn't take too long. And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too. These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco. At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.
Beth
Now the plot thickens! Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Ouch- that hurt. I feel bad for both of them. Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted! 
Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Good Lord! This couldn't have turned out worse. Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself. *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
A glorious night! She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.