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The Long Wait Chapter 12: Chapter 12
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The Long Wait

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Chapter 12

The Long Wait

Chapter 12 of 29

ancientgirl

Severus and Hermione have lunch and share a very eye-opening kiss.

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Thanks to June for the beta work.

Chapter 12

Hermione left Severus in her living room, sending out to the kitchens for pumpkin juice, while she readied their lunch. She had learned to cook the Muggle way. However, while at school, she had adapted to cooking using magic as well. Today she prepared her quiche in the Muggle way, by hand, then used a quick wave of her wand to cook it to perfection. By the time she made her way to the small dining room, Severus had already set up the table for them.

"Thank you for setting the table," she said cheerily.

"It's the least I can do. That smells quite good," he said. He bent over slightly and took in the aroma of the dish.

"I hope you like spinach," she added.

"I like most vegetables." He held her chair out for her, pushed it in when she sat, and then seated himself opposite her. Severus served them both, and they ate for several minutes in comfortable silence.

"I wanted to thank you for being so kind to Osiris. He does not have many friends, as you can imagine. As he pointed out to me this morning, he gets quite bored having only Albus and me to talk to. I truly hope he was no bother to you."

"No bother at all. I liked having him come by this morning. I'm glad he felt comfortable enough to visit me."

They finished their meal with no other words spoken between them. It was clear they were so accustomed to each other's presence that no unnecessary conversation needed to take place. Severus was beginning to feel an odd sense of belonging whenever he was near her. It was as though she were some part of him he had lost so long ago, or even something he never knew he was missing until it had been found. He realized now, as he sat there in front of her, just how lonely he had been. He had never wanted anyone else's company, especially all the time. He was happy just sitting in his rooms alone, reading or doing research. But ever since she had come back to Hogwarts, Severus could barely remember the loneliness. Just knowing he would see her at some point in the day made him feel good.

As for Hermione, she had grown quite pleased with the fact he had accepted her company. At first she had been afraid he would push her away, yet now he seemed to welcome any time they spent together. She wondered if things would change once the school year began. Would Severus turn into the insufferable bastard he had been during her years as a student, or would they grow closer? She knew her only course of action was to be patient, but it was getting harder and harder.

After they finished their meal they retreated to the couch in front of the fireplace, where Hermione noticed the elves had already set up some small plates with chocolate mousse.

"The quiche was wonderful, Hermione. I hope you don't mind, but I asked the house elves to bring some dessert. You do like chocolate mousse, do you not?" he asked.

"Who doesn't? It looks wonderful." They began eating, but she felt so flustered at sitting this close to him, that she dropped her spoon. As she bent over to pick it up, Severus was doing the same thing. Their heads bumped into each other, and they both looked up and laughed.

"I'm sorry. I didn't hurt you, did I?" he asked.

"I'm fine.... It's just..." Her words cut off when his hand came to her forehead.

He brushed away some hair that was falling into her face, and looked into her eyes.

"No, let me.... see if ..." he murmured as his face drew closer to hers. "...you have..." His hand now ran down her cheek as he placed his other hand behind her head and pulled her closer to him. "...a bump." Then he kissed her.

'This kiss is not like the first,' thought Hermione. While still gentle, it was far from innocent. His lips were warm, and tasted deliciously of chocolate. After he slid his tongue slightly against her lips, she opened them and allowed him entry. She placed her hands on his shoulders, and pulled herself closer to him, until she was practically sitting on his lap. Just as she was about to slide her hand down his chest, he stopped and pushed her away slightly.

"Hermione, I'm sorry. I'm being too forward."

"No more apologies, Severus. Kiss me, or I'll die from wanting you to." She pushed him back against the couch and sat on his lap.

He ran one hand up her back, and wrapped the other around her waist to draw her closer to him. There they sat, kissing each other for what seemed like ages. Severus stopped and rested his head against her chest as he held her close. He could feel the softness of her breasts, and could hear her heart beating furiously ... or perhaps it was his own, as he didn't really know at that point.

"We seem to be getting into this habit quite a bit lately," he said.

"Yes, but you haven't heard me complain, have you?" she said as she stroked his silky hair. Funny how everyone had always thought it was greasy. They stayed on the couch holding each other for almost an hour, and only released each other when there was a knock on Hermione's door. She looked at herself in the mirror to make sure she didn't look too disheveled, then looked at the door and back at Severus.

"It's Albus," she said.

Severus rolled his eyes, as she opened the door. 'Of course it is Albus,' he thought, 'I''m on a couch, with a beautiful woman in my arms, so why wouldn't Albus be knocking on the door.'

"Good afternoon, Hermione," said the old wizard as she opened the door.

"Good afternoon, Albus. Won't you come in?" Hermione stepped back and ushered him inside.

The Headmaster walked in, then noticed Severus standing next to the fireplace. "Ah, Severus, you're here." Albus walked towards Severus.

"Albus," Severus nodded in acknowledgment. "Was there something you needed from me?" he asked, hoping Albus didn't have some crazy assignment up his sleeve.

"No, nothing, really. I just wanted to see how you two were progressing with the planning of the classes for the upcoming year. After all, there is but one week left before we begin."

"Yes, everything has been planned out," said Severus, now sitting back on the couch.

Hermione had decided to bring in some tea, and set it down on the coffee table. "Albus, would you like some tea?" she offered.

"No, thank you. I am meeting Minerva shortly. I was merely making the rounds with everyone. Do either of you have anything planned for your last free week?" Albus said, much to Severus' dismay, with that ever present twinkle.

"Actually, yes. Hermione has asked that I teach her Legilimency. It seems that Osiris has found a new ear to bend."

Albus laughed and turned to Hermione. "Ah, so you have met Osiris?" said Albus with amusement.

"Yes, he's quite charming." Hermione took her tea and sat down. She heard Severus mumble something, and then turned to him. "What did you say, Severus?"

"I said, he's charming now, give it time," Severus answered.

During the couple's exchange, Albus noticed how relaxed they both seemed, and that they had called each other by their first names, something that until most recently had not been done in his presence. He would have to inform Minerva of the latest findings. Minerva had scolded him when she had found out he had tricked poor Hermione into thinking she would be her assistant. However, she had refrained from hexing him, after he told her his reason for it. Not to mention she made him promise to tell her anything he saw out of the ordinary, thus he would be reporting to her this very afternoon. He only hoped Severus would never find out he had been meddling. He decided to leave them alone, and excused himself.

Once they were alone again, the pair looked at each other and laughed.

"He's meddling, isn't he?" asked Hermione.

"Did you expect anything less?" Severus sighed and leaned back. "I find it amusing how he seems to think he is being clandestine about it." He stood up and walked to where she was standing. "I'd best get back to my quarters. I need to finish up some notes for my research project."

"What is it you're working on?" she asked.

"I'm working on a Wolfsbane Potion that needs to only be taken once a year instead of on a monthly basis. Unfortunately, it will most probably take longer to brew than the original potion, and cost more due to the ingredients. However, it may be more useful to those who are not able to acquire the potion on a monthly basis." He smiled, knowing what her next question would be.

"Oh yes, that would be very useful for someone like Remus. Tonks and he are often away for months at a time, looking for the few remaining Death Eaters."

"I came up with the idea for that very reason. The last time Remus left, I was only able to give him a two-month supply. Wolfsbane Potion does not hold up well over time. It loses its potency," he said

"Would you be needing any help?" She turned to the table, and then started toying with the flowers in the vase.

He approached her from behind and placed his hands on her shoulders, then kissed her neck.

"I would not mind an extra hand from you," he replied, "especially on such a complicated potion. I will let you look over the notes. If you have any suggestions, we can try those as well. I will let you know when I am ready to begin the brewing process."

She turned around and wrapped her arms around his neck, then kissed him. "Thank you," she whispered in his ear.

He squeezed her tightly, then let her go. "I shall see you at dinner?"

She nodded, and then walked him to the door. As Severus closed the door behind him, the floo came alive.

"Hermione! Hermione, are you there?" Ginny's head popped through the flames.

"Ginny! Oh, no, I completely forgot to call you this morning," said Hermione as she fell to her knees in front of the fireplace.

"You most certainly did. Now spill, you horrible friend. Draco and I were starting to think Severus had kidnapped you."

"That would have been interesting," said Hermione as she pondered such a delightful predicament.

"So, tell me. How was it?"

"Ginny, it was the most wonderful, fabulous, marvelous night of my life. I'm going to get myself a Pensieve, and put the memory in there so that I can look at it over and over again."

"Oh, Hermione, I'm so happy you had such a good time! How was Severus?" asked Ginny, as she moved a bit closer.

"He was a perfect gentleman, even when he kissed me." Hermione giggled and Ginny screamed.

"NO! Hermione, he did not kiss you!"

"He most certainly did, and it was better than I had ever imagined." Just then Hermione heard a muffled voice behind Ginny.

"Draco, for Merlin's sake get back. They did not sleep together, he just kissed her. Honestly, do you think Severus is so ill-mannered?"

"What's that all about?" asked Hermione as she tried to make out what Ginny and Draco were both saying.

"Ignore him, Hermione. He's thinking with his penis! He wants to know if you and Severus slept together."

"No! I think Severus is too proper to do that, at least not on the first date."

"AHA!" yelled Draco, as he shoved Ginny away, and his face came into view. "I knew it was a date!"

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I hope you liked this chapter. I'll have more tomorrow.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Long Wait

254 Reviews  |  8.24/10 Average

10/10

AmyPond159

This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Hi!  Thank you for the lovely review.  I have a few sequals to this story.  I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Draco, a typical man!

10/10

deedeebug95

Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I've always seen him as such a shy person.  Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.  

9/10

deedeebug95

love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you!  It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring. 

10/10

deedeebug95

had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.

10/10

deedeebug95

I love the way his thoughts drift!

10/10

deedeebug95

Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore. 

10/10

deedeebug95

Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Naughty Dumbledore!!

10/10

deedeebug95

i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you for reading it!!! 

10/10

braye27

Brava!  This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it.  And now I have to go find the three sequels.  *iz addicted*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

10/10

braye27

A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings.  Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin.  Well done!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

braye27

They're going to be married!!!  *grinning*  This poem is perfect for this story.  Well done, you!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

10/10

braye27

Woo hoo!  Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised. 
I can't stop smiling. 

Beth

10/10

braye27

The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end.  I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again.  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

10/10

braye27

This is gut wrenching.  I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

10/10

braye27

Good going, guys!  Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

10/10

braye27

Good God, man!  Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!

Beth

10/10

braye27

I could kiss Draco!  Finally something might change.  I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Hooray!  With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus.  I hope it doesn't take too long.  And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too.  These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

10/10

braye27

At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco.  At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Now the plot thickens!  Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

10/10

braye27

Ouch- that hurt.  I feel bad for both of them.  Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted!  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

10/10

braye27

Good Lord!  This couldn't have turned out worse.  Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself.  *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

10/10

braye27

A glorious night!  She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

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