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The Long Wait Chapter 14: Chapter 14
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The Long Wait

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4: Chapter 4

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11: Chapter 11

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Chapter 14

The Long Wait

Chapter 14 of 29

ancientgirl

*LEMON ALERT* At last Severus and Hermione shwo each other how they really feel.

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Thank you to June for doing the beta work.

Chapter 14

In her bedroom, he gently set her on her feet, then took her face in his hands and kissed her with the passion that had been building for days. Hermione wrapped her arms around his neck, as she raised her left leg and lightly rubbed it against his thigh. Severus began to trail his hands down her body. He first caressed her neck lightly with his fingertips, earning a shiver from her. He then continued down her shoulders and lightly down the sides of her breasts, then stopped at the base of her spine. He lifted his head and kissed her jaw line, making his way to her ear.

“I don’t know quite how to ask this, but this isn’t your first time, is it?” He hoped she wasn’t a virgin. He would need to be gentle with her if she was, and he wasn’t sure how long he could hold himself back once she was beneath him.

“No, it isn’t. It’s actually my second time.”

His hands had been trailing slowly down to her buttocks, then stopped. He lifted his head and looked at her.

“Second? If you don’t mind my asking, who was your first?” ‘Please don’t let her say Weasley,’ he thought.

She noticed the worried look on his face and instantly knew why.

“It was no one you know,” she said as she smiled and began to walk backwards toward the bed, “and who he is doesn’t matter right now.” She held his hands, and he followed willingly.

As they stood at the side of the bed, Severus began to undress her. He spoke softly to her as he took hold of her blouse and began to unfasten the buttons.

“All thoughts, all passions, all delights,” he said as he kissed the valley between her breasts and slipped the blouse down from her shoulders. “Whatever stirs this mortal frame, all are but ministers of love, and feed his sacred flame.” He took hold of her waist with both hands and guided her gently to the edge of the bed, and kissed her again.

The next thing she knew, she was laying on the bed, with Severus at her side, stoking her belly lightly with his fingertips. There was a hypnotic quality to his voice now; it was like a sweet melody drifting over her, like the thick fog that covered the forest floor on cold evenings. The combination of his gentle hands and the caress of his mesmerizing voice was spiraling her to a place she had never known.

“Oft in my waking dreams do I,” he continued his recitation as he moved down her body. He unfastened her skirt and pulled it down, leaving only her blue silk panties. “Live o'er again that happy hour, when midway on the mount I lay, beside the ruined tower.” As he discarded the skirt, he took off her shoes, and threw them onto the pile of clothes. He stood and looked at her as she opened her eyes.

She looked up at him, silently pleading for him to continue his ministrations.

“The moonshine, stealing o'er the scene,” he said as he unbuttoned his own shirt, then tossed it atop the pile on the floor and began to undo his trousers. “Had blended with the lights of eve; and she was there.” He dropped his trousers, leaving only his black boxers, then crawled back onto the bed, and to her side. “My hope, my joy, my own dear,” as he kissed her hard, and brought his hands up to her breasts, “Hermione.”

She giggled as she arched her back, wanting to get as close to him as possible. “It’s Genevieve, you know that,” she whispered.

“I know,” he said softly, as another kiss kept her from speaking again. “But I am not making love to Genevieve.” His hand dropped down, and his fingers began to stroke her soft and now wet folds. Hermione sighed heavily and parted her legs slightly, allowing him better access. He slid his finger inside, knowing he would soon feel her envelop his now hard cock. As he bent his head down to kiss her taut nipple, Hermione moved her hands to his shoulders and pushed him back.

“Stop,” she begged. Severus looked up at her, worried that he had done something wrong. “I need to feel you inside of me. Severus, I’ve wanted you for so long,” she said as she reached down and began to push down his boxers. He kissed her again, and then positioned himself between her legs. Hermione wrapped her legs around his waist, then ran her hands up his muscled back as she felt his cock slowly sliding inside.

“You have me now, Hermione,” he kissed her lightly, nibbling at her bottom lip, as he rocked himself against her. He increased his rhythm as he felt Hermione tighten her legs around his waist. “You’re so warm, love, so warm.” He increased his thrusts more, and he could feel her inner walls begin to twitch slightly.

She held him close to her and nipped his earlobe, as she began to gyrate her hips against his pubic bone. This had an instant effect on him as he felt himself reaching his peak. He held back until he felt her body stiffen, as her walls took hold of his cock, milking him as he spilled his seed inside of her. He could feel her relaxing beneath him, as he slowed his movements. Their breathing finally slowing, as he rolled onto his back, bringing her small body to lie partly on top of him. He kissed her forehead, and stroked her hair. Hermione laid her head down against his chest, and stroked his stomach lightly.

“Did you mean it?” she asked, a bit unsure.

“Mean what?” He looked down at her, then lifted her up slightly.

“You called me ‘love.’ Am I your ‘love’?” she asked hesitantly.

He smiled as he remembered his words, and then stroked her now flushed cheek. “Yes.”

With nothing more needing to be said, they fell asleep in each other’s arms.

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In the morning, Hermione woke up with the feeling of something warm and hard behind her. She breathed in deeply and smelled the scent of sandalwood mingled with sex. She tried to stretch, and then felt a strong arm tightening around her waist, pulling her back.

“Good morning,” said a voice behind her.

“Yes, it is,” she replied as she smiled and turned around to find Severus smiling at her. She kissed him, as he rolled her onto her back, and quickly entered her. “Oh….it’s….Gods….a very good morning.” She gasped.

“Are you ready for school, little girl?” he asked before he began nipping at her neck. They had spent most of the night in a pattern of sleep and sex. Now, they did not have the luxury of falling asleep in each other’s arms. There was no time for explorations, or sweet words to be spoken. This morning it was hard and fast. He needed to feel her warmth surrounding him; he needed to feel the tightness of her passage gripping him even tighter.

“Yes…Professor…harder, oh…please, faster!” She felt him deep inside of her as he took hold of her legs and placed them on his shoulders. She came within seconds, leading him into his own climax. “I’ve never had such a wonderful wake-up call,” she said as she tried to catch her breath. Severus threw off their covers and slapped her hard on the ass. “Ouch!”

“Time to get ready. Shower, breakfast; then, my dear, your entrance into the wonderful world of teaching or hell, depending on how your day goes.”

They missed breakfast and of course lunch, but at the risk of having Albus send a search party for them they decided they should get out of bed. After they managed to finally getting out of the shower, they barely made it in time to see the first years being led into the Great Hall. The two of them sat in their usual seats. For the first time in his entire teaching career, Severus was actually looking forward to the start of the new school year. It was not because he would have new students to torment, but because he would have someone to share his day with at the end of it.

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The poem Severus read to Hermione is called "Love" and it is by Samuel Taylor Coleridge, one of my favorite poets. If you have an oppotunity to read it please do so. And just so you know, you will bear a bit more of it before this story is over.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Long Wait

254 Reviews  |  8.24/10 Average

10/10

AmyPond159

This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Hi!  Thank you for the lovely review.  I have a few sequals to this story.  I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Draco, a typical man!

10/10

deedeebug95

Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I've always seen him as such a shy person.  Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.  

9/10

deedeebug95

love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you!  It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring. 

10/10

deedeebug95

had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.

10/10

deedeebug95

I love the way his thoughts drift!

10/10

deedeebug95

Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore. 

10/10

deedeebug95

Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Naughty Dumbledore!!

10/10

deedeebug95

i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you for reading it!!! 

10/10

braye27

Brava!  This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it.  And now I have to go find the three sequels.  *iz addicted*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

10/10

braye27

A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings.  Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin.  Well done!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

braye27

They're going to be married!!!  *grinning*  This poem is perfect for this story.  Well done, you!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

10/10

braye27

Woo hoo!  Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised. 
I can't stop smiling. 

Beth

10/10

braye27

The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end.  I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again.  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

10/10

braye27

This is gut wrenching.  I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

10/10

braye27

Good going, guys!  Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

10/10

braye27

Good God, man!  Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!

Beth

10/10

braye27

I could kiss Draco!  Finally something might change.  I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Hooray!  With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus.  I hope it doesn't take too long.  And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too.  These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

10/10

braye27

At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco.  At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Now the plot thickens!  Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

10/10

braye27

Ouch- that hurt.  I feel bad for both of them.  Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted!  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

10/10

braye27

Good Lord!  This couldn't have turned out worse.  Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself.  *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

10/10

braye27

A glorious night!  She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

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