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The Long Wait Chapter 17: Chapter 17
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The Long Wait

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2: Chapter 2

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4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

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7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

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18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

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21: Chapter 21

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27: Chapter 27

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29: Chapter 29

Chapter 17

The Long Wait

Chapter 17 of 29

ancientgirl

Hermione goes back to the castle after her lunch with Harry and Ron. Severus gives her the cold shoulder.

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Chapter 17

Hermione was fuming. She couldn’t believe Ron could still be so immature. He was almost twenty-three years old, yet acted like he was thirteen. She felt bad having to leave Harry the way she did. After all, he seemed to be just as angry as she was at Ron’s behavior, but she just could not stand to be in the same room with Ron.

She looked at the clock and noticed it was not quite one o’clock. Deciding to take some time to calm herself down, she shrugged off her clothes and walked into the bathroom. An afternoon soak in a warm tub would relax her. Afterwards, she would go and see if Severus wanted to take her to dinner.

After spending some time getting herself together, she walked to Severus’ quarters. She knocked on his door, but there was no answer. She then tried to open it, but found he had changed his wards. After several minutes of trying to get them down, she tried knocking again. ‘Why did he change his wards?’ she wondered. She walked away, not knowing he had been standing on the other side of the door waiting for her to leave.

Severus walked back to his desk, wondering how long she would have carried on. When had she planned on telling him the truth? As he sat, staring into the bottle of ink sitting at the corner of his desk, he hit upon an idea. ‘Perhaps,’ he thought, ‘I will give her a taste of her own medicine.’ He would let her see how it felt to be played with in such a malicious way. Deciding it best to stay in the rest of the evening to finish grading essays, he would deal with her in the morning.

It angered him that he felt cold and empty. He looked around his rooms and found he missed her presence desperately. He missed looking up from his parchments and seeing her sitting in the corner of the couch. He missed sitting next to her as they read books. Most of all he missed the feel of her body. Severus had barely been away from her for an entire afternoon and he missed her already. He needed to get her out of his mind. He kept telling himself it had all been joke. She never felt anything for him. She had played him brilliantly. She knew just how to get to him. God, he had been such a fool to have fallen so easily for her deceit.

He looked behind him to the window. Osiris had not moved from his spot for several hours. Severus kept trying to talk to him, but his cousin refused to answer. He was taking it as badly as Severus. Osiris had grown very attached to Hermione. Severus would often find him in the potions classroom helping Hermione with odd tasks.

“Come away from the window. It’s getting cold, and you’ll catch a draft,” said Severus.

Osiris turned and flew onto the desk. “I guess it’s just you and me again, then.”

“So it would seem, cousin, so it would seem,” Severus said as he pushed his sifter of brandy towards Osiris. “You still have Albus to talk with as well.”

Osiris dipped his beak into the brandy, then looked at Severus. “Oh, the joy of being me.” Then he hiccupped and sat on the edge of the desk.

They both sat there for the rest of the evening, every so often taking a drink. By the time Severus had finished with the essays, it was time for bed. He got up and felt the room was beginning to swirl around him. He looked down at Osiris, who had passed out. Gently, he picked up his cousin and placed him on one of the pillows on the couch. Before he went to his room, he measured out a small amount of Hangover Potion and left it on the coffee table with a note, telling Osiris to drink the potion the second he got up. Then he went to bed, wishing he had never met Hermione Granger.

* * * * * *

In the morning Hermione knocked on Severus’ door again. Once again there was no answer. After several minutes, she walked to the Great Hall by herself. As she entered, she noticed immediately Severus was at the High Table. His head was down, but she noticed he was scowling. She had not seen him the entire previous day. She approached her seat smiling.

“Why didn’t you wait for me?” she asked.

“I was not aware that I needed your permission to come to breakfast, Miss Granger,” he said tersely.

She had been reaching for a scone, but drew her arm back quickly when she heard him address her formally. She turned to him, and wondered if he was playing with her.

“Of course you don’t need my permission,” she said. “It’s just that I didn’t see you all day yesterday, and I thought we could walk together this morning.”

“I was busy yesterday,” he said. She noted his voice sounded irritated, like it often did when he did not want to be bothered.

“Severus, are you all right?” She put her hand on his forearm, only to have him move it away from her.

“Professor Snape, to you, Miss Granger. And I can assure you I am quite fine.” He refused to look at her, deciding instead to keep his eyes on his plate.

Hermione felt like a piece of lead had settled in the pit of her stomach. She swallowed hard. Something was wrong. He was acting like a complete bastard.

“What’s wrong? Why are you acting like this?” Her voice was shaky.

“Nothing is wrong. I am merely tired of playing this game. You know about games, don’t you, Miss Granger?” He now looked at her with a disgusted look on his face, and noticed her face pale at his sudden use of the word “games.” ‘I’ve caught you, and you know it,’ he thought.

“What game?” she asked, now even more confused.

“You did not honestly think there was really anything between us, did you?” Her eyes grew wide. “Oh, I suppose you did.” He turned back to his plate, and began stabbing the potatoes and filling his fork. “Perhaps it was more than just sex for you, Miss Granger, but I am afraid that is all it has been for me.”

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Okay, Severus is going to be pretty hateful for the next several chapters, but that's because he things he's been played.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Long Wait

254 Reviews  |  8.24/10 Average

10/10

AmyPond159

This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Hi!  Thank you for the lovely review.  I have a few sequals to this story.  I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Draco, a typical man!

10/10

deedeebug95

Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I've always seen him as such a shy person.  Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.  

9/10

deedeebug95

love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you!  It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring. 

10/10

deedeebug95

had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.

10/10

deedeebug95

I love the way his thoughts drift!

10/10

deedeebug95

Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore. 

10/10

deedeebug95

Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Naughty Dumbledore!!

10/10

deedeebug95

i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you for reading it!!! 

10/10

braye27

Brava!  This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it.  And now I have to go find the three sequels.  *iz addicted*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

10/10

braye27

A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings.  Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin.  Well done!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

braye27

They're going to be married!!!  *grinning*  This poem is perfect for this story.  Well done, you!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

10/10

braye27

Woo hoo!  Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised. 
I can't stop smiling. 

Beth

10/10

braye27

The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end.  I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again.  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

10/10

braye27

This is gut wrenching.  I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

10/10

braye27

Good going, guys!  Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

10/10

braye27

Good God, man!  Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!

Beth

10/10

braye27

I could kiss Draco!  Finally something might change.  I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Hooray!  With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus.  I hope it doesn't take too long.  And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too.  These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

10/10

braye27

At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco.  At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Now the plot thickens!  Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

10/10

braye27

Ouch- that hurt.  I feel bad for both of them.  Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted!  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

10/10

braye27

Good Lord!  This couldn't have turned out worse.  Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself.  *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

10/10

braye27

A glorious night!  She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

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