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The Long Wait Chapter 8: Chapter 8
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Chapter 8

The Long Wait

Chapter 8 of 29

ancientgirl

Hermione makes a little visit to the Malfoy's. No, not those Malfoys.

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Thank you to June for doing the beta work for this.

Chapter 8

Hermione was beside herself. She was going to spend the afternoon and most of the evening with Severus. She had to look her best, but she also had to look like she wasn't trying to look her best. After all, this was just an afternoon of buying potions supplies, followed by dinner with a colleague. Well, a colleague for now, that is.

She went to the bathroom and took a quick shower, then came back to the bedroom to begin her planning. As she looked through her wardrobe, she realized she really had nothing appropriate to wear. Everything she owned that wasn't Muggle clothing made her look frumpy. Hermione quickly took some floo powder and tossed it into the fireplace. There was only one person who could help her, and it happened to be the only person who would ever understand her situation. She called out for Ginny, hoping it wasn't too early for her.

After a few moments, Ginny's head popped in through the flames. "Hermione, how are you?"

"Ginny, I'm fabulous! I need your help, though."

Ginny was surprised. She had never before seen Hermione this giddy or frantic, and wondered if working with Professor Severus Snape had finally gotten to her. "Well, come on over, then." She took a step back and waited for her friend to come through the fireplace.

When Hermione stepped through, she and Ginny gave each other a tight hug, and then sat down on the couch in front of the fireplace.

"So spill. I'm dying to know what has you so excited," said Ginny, smiling and waving her hands about in a flurry of movement.

Hermione looked around the room to make sure they were alone. "Is Draco here?"

"No, he went to go visit his mother. Hermione, what on earth is going on? Look at you, you look like that cat that ate the canary!"

"Okay." Hermione took a deep breath. "Do you remember my telling you once, that I had a crush on a Slytherin during my seventh year?"

"Yes," Ginny said as she crossed her arms and scowled at her. "And don't think I've forgiven you for not telling me who it was."

"Well, you can forgive me now, because it happens that the Slytherin was none other than Professor Snape." Now Hermione crossed her arms and gave Ginny a satisfied grin.

"No! Hermione, are you serious? I can't believe it!" They both started giggling. "Does he know?"

"Good heavens, I hope not!" yelled Hermione.

"I suppose you still have a crush on him, then?" Ginny got closer to her now.

"Yes, a wicked crush, Gin. I can't tell you how difficult it is sometimes, being in the same room with the man. Just trying to keep my hands to myself is becoming quite a bothersome chore."

"Wow, you have got it bad. How has he been then? I mean...has he been nice to you? Draco and I went to see Professor Snape just before you went back to Hogwarts. I have to admit, he's quite a different person when you get to know him, especially outside of the teacher/student relationship."

"You're right. Don't get me wrong, he's still the same Snape we knew in school, but, I don't know, he seems much more.... approachable. Well, approachable for him, that is. For the most part, he has been quite friendly, too."

"Well, I have to say, there is just something about those nasty Slytherin men that makes them irresistible to us poor innocent Gryffindor women."

"Ginny, you have never been innocent, which is why I need your help. I'm going to Hogsmeade with Severus this afternoon for some potions supplies. After that, we will be having dinner out. Now, it's not a date, but I want to at least show him I'm not just a colleague ... I'm someone he should see as a woman."

"Severus now, is it?" Ginny smiled.

"Well, not quite. We still address each other formally, but I can call him anything I want when he's not around, can't I?" Hermione leaned back against the couch and tucked her leg underneath her, to get more comfortable.

"True. So, let's see, we need to find you something casual enough to go shopping for supplies, yet sexy enough to have dinner with a man you are trying to get to notice you, while looking like you aren't trying to get him to notice you." Ginny stood and paced in front of Hermione several times until she smiled. "I have just the outfit, come and see." She took Hermione by the hand and ran up the stairs to her room.

Ginny and Draco had been married for less than three months, but they had been living together at the Malfoy estate for almost a year. Lucius had run off with Rosmerta after the war, and they were living in his estate in France. He gave Draco half the family fortune, and completely cut Narcissa out. She, after all, had been having an affair with an equally wealthy wizard from Spain, so he felt she had plenty of money to keep her happy.

Ginny and Hermione stood inside a large closet filled with dozens upon dozens of dresses, robes, skirts, and everything else you could imagine that was worn. After pushing aside several garments Ginny finally found what she had been looking for.

"Here it is," she pulled out a sage-colored silk robe along with a matching skirt and off-the-shoulder top. "Now the skirt and the top will fit you perfectly. And the robe is made to look like flowing liquid when it moves, see." Ginny waved the robe in front of Hermione. The fabric truly looked like liquid; it was gorgeous.

"Oh, Ginny, it's beautiful, but way too dressy. Remember, I'm not supposed to look like I'm trying to look good for him."

"Oh right, you're right. Okay, that's no problem, as we have plenty of choices here. Something simple, let's see." Ginny and Hermione spent the next hour looking for something simple and casual, yet sexy enough to get the Potions Master's attention. They finally found several outfits that would be perfect for Hermione's expedition with Severus, and were walking out of the closet when they came face to face with Draco.

"I smell trouble. You two have been in there forever, giggling and whispering. What are you up to, and whom should I warn?" he raised a suspicious eyebrow as he crossed his arms and tapped his foot impatiently on the floor.

"Draco, how long have you been here?" Ginny came and gave him a peck on the cheek.

He grabbed his wife by the waist and nipped at her neck playfully, then turned to look at Hermione.

"Well now, Hermione, who are you going out with tonight?" Draco knew enough about women to know that two women holed up in a closet full of clothes laughing and whispering meant one of them had a date. Since Ginny was his wife, of course the guilty party was Hermione.

"Honestly, Draco, must you always be so suspicious? I just haven't had time to buy any new clothes, so I thought I'd borrow some from Ginny until I could go shopping; that's all." Hermione smiled and placed the clothes she held on her arm across the bed.

Draco narrowed his eyes and walked to her. "I'm a Slytherin; we are always suspicious, and nine times out of ten with good reason. Now spill: who is he?" He now threw himself on the bed and smiled.

Ginny slapped him on the arm. "Draco, stop it. If Hermione doesn't want to tell you, then she doesn't have to."

"What's the big deal?" He shrugged his shoulders. "I mean, what's so secret about her going out on a date with someone?"

"Well, you see, it isn't really a date." said Hermione as she sat down on the bed.

"Not a date. Right, that's why you've got enough clothes here to open up your own boutique. If it's not a date, then what is it, exactly?"

"I'm just going to get some supplies for the new school year with a colleague. Since we'll be finished too late to get back to the Great Hall for dinner, we'll be having dinner in London," she mumbled the last few words. Hermione then stood and began to shrink the clothes on the bed, placing them in a small case Ginny had given her. "It's nothing, really, Draco."

"Wait a minute." Draco sat up. "Colleague, school supplies. Aren't you covering some of Severus' classes this year?" Draco now noticed a blush creeping up Hermione's neck and settling onto her cheeks. "It's Severus! You're going on a date with Severus! I knew it, I knew it! You've had a crush on him since we were in school, haven't you?" Draco fell back onto the bed and began laughing.

Ginny immediately began punching him on his arm. "Draco Malfoy, don't you make fun of her!"

"I'm sorry, Hermione, I swear, I'm not laughing at you," Draco shook his head and began to wipe the tears that had fallen from his eyes from laughing so hard. "I think it's fabulous!"

Ginny and Hermione both looked at him as though he had an extra eye growing in the middle of his forehead.

"You aren't going to tell me I'm crazy or disgusting, or try to talk me out of wanting to pursue something with him?" Hermione warily sat down on the bed again.

"Look, I love Severus," explained Draco. "He was more a father to me while I was at Hogwarts than Lucius ever was, and I can't think of anything better than for him to find someone who might make him happy. He made a mistake when he was young, and it cost him the happiness we sometimes take for granted. He has spent over twenty years making amends for that mistake. No, Hermione, I'm not going to reproach you. If you like him, then go for it. Just don't play games with him, that's the one thing that will drive him away."

It touched Hermione that Draco would speak of Severus in such a way. He was very much the Slytherin and rarely spoke with such emotion, but there was such conviction in every word he had spoken, that she could not help but grab him and hug him so hard he could barely breathe.

"Thank you, Draco. Thank you for being so supportive."

"Hey now, Hermione, that's my husband you're rubbing your body against," protested Ginny.

"Ladies, please, there's plenty of Draco to go around." Draco grabbed Ginny and then all three fell onto the bed. After several more playful punches from Ginny, this time because he asked Hermione to join them in a ménage a trois, he excused himself and left the room.

"Ginny, you really are lucky. He turned out to be quite the catch, didn't he?" said Hermione.

"Yes, he did. Remember when he was such an ass to us in school? He says now that it was his way of flirting." Ginny helped Hermione finish putting the clothes in the case and walked her back to the fireplace. "Now you have to floo me tomorrow to tell me everything that happened, you hear?"

"Loud and clear, Mrs. Malfoy." Hermione hugged and thanked Ginny, then stepped into the fireplace. "Hogwarts – Hermione Granger's rooms."

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I hope you liked this chapter. Tomorrow I'll be posting part one of the date.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Long Wait

254 Reviews  |  8.24/10 Average

10/10

AmyPond159

This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Hi!  Thank you for the lovely review.  I have a few sequals to this story.  I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Draco, a typical man!

10/10

deedeebug95

Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I've always seen him as such a shy person.  Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.  

9/10

deedeebug95

love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you!  It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring. 

10/10

deedeebug95

had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.

10/10

deedeebug95

I love the way his thoughts drift!

10/10

deedeebug95

Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore. 

10/10

deedeebug95

Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)

10/10

deedeebug95

Naughty Dumbledore!!

10/10

deedeebug95

i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you for reading it!!! 

10/10

braye27

Brava!  This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it.  And now I have to go find the three sequels.  *iz addicted*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.

10/10

braye27

A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings.  Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin.  Well done!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story!  I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

10/10

braye27

They're going to be married!!!  *grinning*  This poem is perfect for this story.  Well done, you!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thankfully, it all came together.

10/10

braye27

Woo hoo!  Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised. 
I can't stop smiling. 

Beth

10/10

braye27

The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end.  I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again.  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst.  I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione.  It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff.  I just wanted to do something different.

10/10

braye27

This is gut wrenching.  I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I cried while I wrote this chapter.  I still cry when I read it.  There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.

10/10

braye27

Good going, guys!  Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, things will start to get going from here.

10/10

braye27

Good God, man!  Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!

Beth

10/10

braye27

I could kiss Draco!  Finally something might change.  I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Hooray!  With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus.  I hope it doesn't take too long.  And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too.  These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.

10/10

braye27

At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco.  At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Now the plot thickens!  Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No worries.  Ron will get his.

10/10

braye27

Ouch- that hurt.  I feel bad for both of them.  Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted!  Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

OH, he'll get his.

10/10

braye27

Good Lord!  This couldn't have turned out worse.  Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself.  *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

He should have just trusted her.

10/10

braye27

A glorious night!  She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.

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