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The Long Wait
ancientgirl254 Reviews | 8.24/10 (254 Ratings, 0 Likes, 298 Favorites )
Hermione gets a letter of invitation to return to Hogwarts. Will she say yes?
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ancientgirl
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
Reviews for The Long Wait
Yes a man who can quote poems while making love, now thats a man I could get busy with. Oh yeah, what a way to wake up in the morning. If only that was every day. Lucky, lucky girl. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
LOL, yeah you can tell this is a fiction, because I've never met anyone like that.
I can't believe someone complained about Hermione learning anything fast. She is the smartest witch of her time. Finally maybe some smutty lemons next chapter. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I've never been great at smutty stuff so I hope you don't get too disappointed.
I love Osiris but he better be careful or Severus will put him in a cage. Yes, it's very nice that they will have dinner and now lunch but it would have been lovely if it was dinner, sex and then breakfast but beggars can't be choosey. lol Tamara
All men are suckers and the more intelligent ones are bigger suckers because they never see it coming. Completely clueless. lol Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, I agree with you there!I noticed all the reviews you left for some of my other stories. I'm sorry I never answered them, but I've been having so many issues with my yahoo mail I never received notices for them. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and thank you for leaving such wonderful reviews!
I love it, you have made a Draco I could eat up. Too funny. Tamara
So this is Severus' way of asking for a date. Whatever works. lol Tamara
You know I think you are the best so all I have to say is bravo as usual. Tamara
So he has been keeping tabs on her, huh. Well now Sevie tell yourself whatever you want but the rest of us know better. lol Tamara
Suck it up Severus she is here to stay. So start learning how to deal. lol. AG, you will have to overlook me, I sometimes like to talk to the characters in the story. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
LOL, talk away. I'm happy you are enjoying it so far.
OH My This chapter is bloody brilliant. I don't know if I want to laugh, cry or jump up and down. Tamara
Can someone say "Denial", Severus. It is more than a river in Eygpt. LOL. Tamara
Interesting first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens in this fic. Tamara
So old Severus is loosen up some telling about his family a little. It's a start. They should take it slow at first. Very well done. Tamara
So it felt like this was some where around the hundredth time I've read this fic. And then I was like, 'where's the reviews i've left?!?' Then I realized It was probably on a different site that I read this before. Regardless, It was still an enchanting story. I love your versions of Osiris and Crooks. :D I also think your snape is my favorite, of all the fics I've read (which is probably somewhere close to a thousand by now!). :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you for the compliment. I've always tried to make my version of Snape a little different than those of other fanfics out there. I've always felt something sad about him, and I've never wanted to make him as spiteful as some authors.
I go back and read this now and then too, LOL, I love Osiris and Crooks. I think their pairing was the best thing I ever did.
I really loved your fic!!... especially Osiris and Crooks! XD
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you for taking time out of your day to read it. I'm especially happy with Osiris and Crooks. They are quite a pair.
I knew Crookshanks wasn't just an average cat!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He's quite special.
Draco is delightful!!... jajaja
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thanks you. When I wrote this I'd been reading stories where Draco was just a jerk. I thought I'd give him a different personality.
this story is wonderful. you did fantastically :]
this story is wonderful. you did fantastically :]
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you! This was my first real HP fanfic and I really enjoyed writing it. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
*sigh* I LOOOVE tender first kisses written like that. It brings out the warm and fuzzies :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
“Great, just great. We’ll never get anything out of him. He’s got his mind blocked. No wonder I can’t get inside. His mind is as tight as a sparrow’s asshole.” Crookshanks tilted his head as his tail shot up. “Excuse me?” he exclaimed.“A moment of weakness. Please, just don’t ask.” Osiris began to pace Harry’s desk, as Harry watched the scene in amazement.Oh my goodness, I´ve been rereading this story and that part made me laugh so hard that I just had to comment. I didn´t even remember how absolutely delightful this story is. And I love Osiris´ sarcasm. *runs off to read more*
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Osiris is my proudest achievement in all of my writing. I love him. I'm happy to hear you liked this so much you are rereading it.
Thank you.
Oh this is my favorite chapter yet. A little yumminess and laughter too. Brilliant. Tamara
Sneaky, Albus as usual. Now she can work on and with Severus. LOL. Loving it so far. Tamara
ahhh!!!!... I love this!!!... =)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
I love how Snape orders her and not asks her. Why risk it. right?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Exactly!