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Potions Under Duress The Long Wait
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The Long Wait

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

The Long Wait

ancientgirl

254 Reviews   |   254 Ratings, 0 Likes, 298 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 49,973 Words 29 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione gets a letter of invitation to return to Hogwarts. Will she say yes?

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Chapters (29)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29


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ancientgirl

Member Since 2005  |  28 Stories  |  Favorited by 403  |  269 Reviews Written  |  1,741 Review Responses

Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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Reviews for The Long Wait

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10/10

ladyluv

Great chapter and the raven is a cursed wizard - what a great original concept. I cannot wait to see more interaction with him. What a great meal too - it is a good thing for them to spend time together.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Osiris is one of my favorite creations.  I loved writing him as much as I loved writing Lord Shagswell :)

10/10

ladyluv

I loved this playful side of Draco's that you wrote - it was deliciously funny and very sexy. I cannot wait to see what Hermione looks like and what Severus does.

10/10

ladyluv

Loved the Raven - even though it was short - it matches him well. He still is not seeing it as a date but time will tell and wear on both of them.

10/10

ladyluv

Well - he is going to ask her to dinner (he probably would not classify it as a date yet) but it will be more quality time between the two. He has noticed her curves and that she is a woman - what a great way to ease both of them down the path of romance.

10/10

ladyluv

Great chapter - as I said she is having a difficult time hiding her feelings and well he is thinking thoughts that he does not want to. What a great set-up especially letting the readers know that yes he refused to write the letter of recommendation but instead talked to the person over it without her knowledge - good set-up.

10/10

ladyluv

LOL- this chapter was delightfully funny from Hermione wondering what the old coot (Albus) was up to - to Albus saying "he forgot" and it "was a mistake" to whom she would be a teaching assistant. The gold part of the chapter was Mineriva mentioning that Voldemort would return from the grave in a pink tutu - I nearly fell out of my chair. Fantastic.

10/10

ladyluv

Oh man - I loved the twist in this chapter - she is to be Severus's assistant well she is going to have a hard time hiding her feelings now.

10/10

ladyluv

Great first chapter - interesting way to start - her coming back to Hogwarts already knowing that she has feelings for Severus - I cannot wait to see what you brew up between them.

10/10

ladyluv

Oh man - the kiss and the poetry. Severus knowing he is accepted and cared for - so important for a man so emotionally scarred. This was a great chapter.

10/10

ladyluv

Oh dear what a misunderstanding. Poor Hermione, Severus and even the bird - things are going to get hurtful and ugly and I see tears.

10/10

ladyluv

Her rooms at Hogwarts sounded wonderful - great writing by the way and the bathroom - she could spend hours in there. Severus looking all mean and sexy - drools. LOL

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thanks!  I described my dream bathroom.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

The part about him being the biggest bastard reminds me of one of my favorite sayings.  I might be a bitch but I'm not your bitch.  You don't have to answer any of my reviews.  I will always leave one for each chapter that I read.  I know that it takes alot of time to write and read all the reviews that authors have so I just thought to should know that.You already know I think you're awesome and brilliant so enough said.  Until next time.Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh I hope the balls stay there for longer than a few weeks.  I wish they would dry up and fall off.  Yeah that would definitely make me happy.  lol  OMG  please don't let Raven play with O and C, it would be like having the damn Weasley twins all over again.  Hermione and Severus are going to have their hands full.  Well done, AG. Tamara

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

You got through it.  LOL, well, Raven eventually winds up getting into some trouble with Osiris and Crooks.  But that's in Caught in the Act.  Thanks for reading the entire thing.  I'm very happy you enjoyed it. 

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh I feel so bad for the creatures and children of Hogwarts with Crooks and Osiris tag teaming.  lolHe is such a romantic hottie.  Tamara

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Be afraid, be very afraid.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh no that damn cat isn't going to be fit  to live with now.  lol  TamaraI'm glad all is well.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

It's heartwenching first how down Hermione is, so close to death from giving up and then Osiris willing to give up so much to save Hermione and the baby.   That is what makes you such an awesome author.  The ablity to evoke such emotion from you reader.  Bravo.   Tamara 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment.This was a hard chapter to write.  I knew I didn't want Osiris to die, but I wanted him to do something to show how much he loved Severus and how much he wanted to help out his child.  I cry whenever I read it.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Unravel, hell I thought they had already.  lol  Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I hope Hermione doesn't get to down and allows Severus' attempt at something.  Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I was beginning to wonder when Draco was going to stick his nose into it.  Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Finally Draco is showing he has some brains between his ears instead of between his legs.  OMG that is just brilliant.  You would leave it to a bird and cat to fix things.  You'll killing me.  lol  Tamara

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

I had so much fun writing Osiris and Crooks.LOL, I'm loving your comments btw.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I'm torn between forgiving him and hexing his balls off for believing anything Ronald Weasley has to say.  I mean Harry wasn't laughing or anything.   Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Nice wrench there with the pregnancy.  Tamara

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Why is it we always hurt the ones we love when we think they have hurt us first?  Why can't we all just get along and shag some more?  lol   Tamara  sorry had to go there.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Please tell me Ron dies in this fic and that Hermione or Severus kills him.  A slow painful death, please.  Tamara

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)

No, he doesn't die, but he does suffer a fate worse than death.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You know what, I don't think it's him not trusting her, it's him not trusting other men.  Which is the right way to think.  I mean  what if there had been more than one man out there and attacked her from behind?  She would be up shits creek.  Not that he can be aby her side all the time but this is new for him.  IMHO.   Tamara

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