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The Long Wait
ancientgirl254 Reviews | 8.24/10 (254 Ratings, 0 Likes, 298 Favorites )
Hermione gets a letter of invitation to return to Hogwarts. Will she say yes?
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
Reviews for The Long Wait
Great chapter and the raven is a cursed wizard - what a great original concept. I cannot wait to see more interaction with him. What a great meal too - it is a good thing for them to spend time together.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Osiris is one of my favorite creations. I loved writing him as much as I loved writing Lord Shagswell :)
I loved this playful side of Draco's that you wrote - it was deliciously funny and very sexy. I cannot wait to see what Hermione looks like and what Severus does.
Loved the Raven - even though it was short - it matches him well. He still is not seeing it as a date but time will tell and wear on both of them.
Well - he is going to ask her to dinner (he probably would not classify it as a date yet) but it will be more quality time between the two. He has noticed her curves and that she is a woman - what a great way to ease both of them down the path of romance.
Great chapter - as I said she is having a difficult time hiding her feelings and well he is thinking thoughts that he does not want to. What a great set-up especially letting the readers know that yes he refused to write the letter of recommendation but instead talked to the person over it without her knowledge - good set-up.
LOL- this chapter was delightfully funny from Hermione wondering what the old coot (Albus) was up to - to Albus saying "he forgot" and it "was a mistake" to whom she would be a teaching assistant. The gold part of the chapter was Mineriva mentioning that Voldemort would return from the grave in a pink tutu - I nearly fell out of my chair. Fantastic.
Oh man - I loved the twist in this chapter - she is to be Severus's assistant well she is going to have a hard time hiding her feelings now.
Great first chapter - interesting way to start - her coming back to Hogwarts already knowing that she has feelings for Severus - I cannot wait to see what you brew up between them.
Oh man - the kiss and the poetry. Severus knowing he is accepted and cared for - so important for a man so emotionally scarred. This was a great chapter.
Oh dear what a misunderstanding. Poor Hermione, Severus and even the bird - things are going to get hurtful and ugly and I see tears.
Her rooms at Hogwarts sounded wonderful - great writing by the way and the bathroom - she could spend hours in there. Severus looking all mean and sexy - drools. LOL
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thanks! I described my dream bathroom.
The part about him being the biggest bastard reminds me of one of my favorite sayings. I might be a bitch but I'm not your bitch. You don't have to answer any of my reviews. I will always leave one for each chapter that I read. I know that it takes alot of time to write and read all the reviews that authors have so I just thought to should know that.You already know I think you're awesome and brilliant so enough said. Until next time.Tamara
Oh I hope the balls stay there for longer than a few weeks. I wish they would dry up and fall off. Yeah that would definitely make me happy. lol OMG please don't let Raven play with O and C, it would be like having the damn Weasley twins all over again. Hermione and Severus are going to have their hands full. Well done, AG. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
You got through it. LOL, well, Raven eventually winds up getting into some trouble with Osiris and Crooks. But that's in Caught in the Act. Thanks for reading the entire thing. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Oh I feel so bad for the creatures and children of Hogwarts with Crooks and Osiris tag teaming. lolHe is such a romantic hottie. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Be afraid, be very afraid.
Oh no that damn cat isn't going to be fit to live with now. lol TamaraI'm glad all is well.
It's heartwenching first how down Hermione is, so close to death from giving up and then Osiris willing to give up so much to save Hermione and the baby. That is what makes you such an awesome author. The ablity to evoke such emotion from you reader. Bravo. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment.This was a hard chapter to write. I knew I didn't want Osiris to die, but I wanted him to do something to show how much he loved Severus and how much he wanted to help out his child. I cry whenever I read it.
Unravel, hell I thought they had already. lol Tamara
I hope Hermione doesn't get to down and allows Severus' attempt at something. Tamara
I was beginning to wonder when Draco was going to stick his nose into it. Tamara
Finally Draco is showing he has some brains between his ears instead of between his legs. OMG that is just brilliant. You would leave it to a bird and cat to fix things. You'll killing me. lol Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I had so much fun writing Osiris and Crooks.LOL, I'm loving your comments btw.
I'm torn between forgiving him and hexing his balls off for believing anything Ronald Weasley has to say. I mean Harry wasn't laughing or anything. Tamara
Nice wrench there with the pregnancy. Tamara
Why is it we always hurt the ones we love when we think they have hurt us first? Why can't we all just get along and shag some more? lol Tamara sorry had to go there.
Please tell me Ron dies in this fic and that Hermione or Severus kills him. A slow painful death, please. Tamara
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No, he doesn't die, but he does suffer a fate worse than death.
You know what, I don't think it's him not trusting her, it's him not trusting other men. Which is the right way to think. I mean what if there had been more than one man out there and attacked her from behind? She would be up shits creek. Not that he can be aby her side all the time but this is new for him. IMHO. Tamara