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Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
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When Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
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age : 34
sex : female
hometown : melbourne, australia
lives : brooklyn, usa
likes : HGSS, the holes in canon that make fanfiction fun, long walks on the beach
note regarding the phoenix trilogy : I am working on it! RL events are slowing me down, but I hope to be back posting sometime over summer (2010). Wish me luck . . .
Reviews for Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
Hi! I am loving this fic! Good work!! (And YAY for Melbourne girls! Haha!) I can't wait to read more!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! And hooray for Melbourne!!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
wow - this just keeps getting better! Thanks for getting a resolution between the two - it was heart breaking to read - keep up the great work!! And what the heck is Tracey Davis' project about????
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm glad they're back speaking again, too. It's much more fun for me ;)If I remember rightly, Hermione found out about Tracey's project waaaaay back in chapter 11 . . .Thanks again for the review.
McClaggen got what was coming to him, thank heavens!I loved Hermione's attitude towards Severus. He really did need to apologize, and she told him that in no uncertain terms. His decision to do an oath was interesting. I liked his show of sincerity that came with it.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Oh, I'm glad you liked it! I really like the character of SS as left to us by JKR; he's such an intriguing mixture of contrasts--one of which being that he's both tightly controlled enough to fool the Dark Lord and perform as the consumate spy, yet impulsive enough to have sworn alliegance to both sides, to lose it over Potter over and over again, to call Lily names when he was humiliated in public, and then stay out all night opposite the Fat Lady's portrait in an attempt to apologise to her. I said in my response to beaweasley2 below, that I was thinking about the fact that though both HG and SS had terrible fights with their friends during school, only HG had any experience of forgiveness.Thanks for the review :)
what a thoroughly satisfying chapter. thanks so much
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Why, thank you! (What a thoroughly satisfying review):)
Very enjoyable, I liked Minerva spying as a cat
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! Minerva's spying capabilities are implied in the very first HP book; I'm surprised that JKR didn't make more of it.Thanks again for the review. :)
Was Hermione's knee to the torso another way to say she kneed him in the balls? I thought the formal appology of Severus' to be amazing. I am releived that Hermione knew the "counter" I adore it when you create magical stuff like that. Thanks for the fab chapter as always
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Well, I was going to have her knee him in the balls, but sinbad suggested that was a) a bit cliched and b) something that men prepare for/are aware of, so she suggested a knee to the torso itself. She even reenacted the scenario with her husband just to be sure it was physically possible.I'm glad that you liked Severus' apology; I thought Hermione deserved something a little more intense than a simple sorry, even though she thought he was being over-the-top in his response.Thanks, as always, for such a nice review :)
I'm so glad they're friends again. Great work!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Me, too! Ha ha. I'm glad you like it. :)Thanks for the review.
I am thoroughly enjoying your twist on canon. Really well done. Poor, poor Severus.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Why, thank you! :) I'm glad that you like it. Poor Severus indeed.
I am glas Severus has decided not to remain miserable! The appology scene was very good!Enjoyed the entire chapter!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it--I certainly enjoyed writing it. :)
Oh, my, gosh what a chapter! It was Mcleggan! Thank gods, Severus came along. What a jerk. It was nice of Severus to send Hermione the salve, but one hundred points - ok, yeah, that seems fairish.And trust Dumbledore to want to 'talk' with him. I liked how you wove the quotes and yet made them distinct. I was wondering, does Severus know how to read Vector's graphs and charts, if so why did't he see his line converging with Hermione's?I really applaud Hermione for facing him and forgiving him. LOL but Severus making such a grand appology - I was like WTF? Why? A simple 'sorry' was all she needed. BUt Hermione's responce was perfect. I also like the statements he made about the directions in the books - and loved how her responce cut right through him. Good chapter.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, I imagine him as having a basic competence with the graphs and calculations, but not the kind of immediate comprehension and fine detail comprehension that Vector (and eventually Hermione) would have.Before I wrote the apology scene I was thinking about what we know about both of them and their experience with friendship and arguments. I realised that though they'd both had terrible arguments with their best friends, Hermione was really the only one who had forgiven and been forgiven. I kind of thought that Severus might need to know he was forgiven in order to properly apologise, but that the idea of forgiveness would blow him away.Okay, I'm writing a dissertation, I'd better stop. I'm glad you liked the chapter! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
I really like how you put that.
Very well written, I love strong women!I also loved the scene where Severus gives his 'apology'. I suspect he may think Hermione may be a bit of a schmuck forgiving him that easily.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, thank you! I love strong women, too. Even writing a damsel-in-distress scene, I needed to have Hermione do pretty much most of it for herself.Hermione deserved a decent apology, too. I don't think Severus necessarily thinks her a schmuck, but I do think he was astounded that she would even consider it.Thanks again for the review! :)
I'm so gald that hermione has Vector to turn to. I am really curious at how much Vector knows about Severus and Hermione's relationship and how far she's calcualted it?It seemed like Dumbledore was asking her to appologize to Severus over the 'argumant' - but really it's him that should appologize to her! Not the other way around. Geeze, yeah, he's prickly! Prat!So, am I guessign right, it's Snape in the corridor that just grabbed her? But them why, in Merlin's name, was he so rough with her?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Vector is almost, but not entirely, omniscient. Plus, she's emotionally smart enough to see some things that are not in her calculations. I think of her as a kind of anti-Dumbledore . . . and, I guess, an anti-Snape (in a good way to both of them).I see that you've already reviewed the next chapter, so I need not string you along re the guess of who grabbed her . . .Thanks for the review! :)
What a delightful sentence!---"It was to re-experience each memory in the oddly distended yet simultaneous temporality of recollection, a supersaturated rush of telescoped intensity; exquisitely agonising, unbearably real."And what a delightful chapter. I absolutely LOVED the last scene between Severus and Hermione; I had my misgivings, upon beginning the chapter, from the title, fearing we had _more_ misery in store for us! Instead, we get joy! So perfect!Beginning to feel very hopeful for a very happy end to a tale that otherwise ended sorrowfully---I love your 'improvements' to the original!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you for such a lovely review! :) I'm beaming with delight . . . I knew the title of the chapter was a little oblique, but I think it makes a kind of sense of its own by the end, even if it's the opposite of what the phrase is usually intended to mean.I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story. :) Thanks again for the review.
I was right! Huzzah!On a less nerdy note, I love how Snape overcompensated in everyone's opinion but his own. His reaction was perfect!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hurray! :) I'm glad you liked Snape's slightly overwraught responses to life! :)Thanks for the review.
i'm glad hermione got a boost from viktor, she deserved it after ron, the prat. wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad you're glad! She definitely needed it.Thanks for the review, the next chapter should appear very very soon.
I LOVE your take on the Grangers as ex-hippies! Excellent! Viktor = yummy! Great chapter. As ever, I'm in awe of your skill at weaving in and out of the canon plot!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, thank you, thank you! *bows deeply*I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Hmm, I wonder what the new calculations will bring, and how she'll permanently hide them from Vector. Won't Vector notice them?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
You'll have to wait to see what the calculations bring . . . ;)I'm sure Vector would notice them if she showed them to her, but if she does it in her free time? Again, only time will tell . . . Thanks for the review.
It will be interesting to see how Snape handles Hermione's 'friends with/benefits' approach to Krum, if the liason comes to his attention.I am surprised that Hermione didn't figure out why Dumbledore had not reversed the hex. It was important that she came to the conclusion that it needed to be done for her own personal moral growth. That was one of the things that I wish JKR had addressed in the series.'Abstinence' - how appropo. Looking forward to the next update.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, yes. I wonder what Snape will do. Well, actually, I know what he'll do . . . and you will find out as soon as the next chapter makes it through the queue! :)And I totally agree with your comments regarding Hermione & Marietta. Word.Thanks for such a thoughtful review.
really nice development chapter - love the time you are spending fleshing out HG and her motivations - keep up the great work!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, yet again! :) It was fun to imagine something more exciting than dentist=staid for Hermione's family. I'm loving writing this story almost as much as I love reading my reviews ;)
really great job - love Viktor inventing things, HG couldn't stay around a total jock for long - thanks for your hard work
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! He couldn't have been the Triwizard champion if he didn't have something between his ears. :) Thanks for the review.
I don't usually go for the whole Hermione and Victor thing, but it worked, knowing that maybe it Severus she's thinking of when they are....
I look for to her lesson with Snape, I do hope it will reveal more of their feelings.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Yeah, I think that lesson is going to reveal quite a bit . . . ;)I'm glad that the HG/VK interlude was palatable! Thanks for the review. :)
Great chapter. I could even stand the whole Hermione-Victor-thing. I'm looking forward to more!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! More is on the way :)
I didn't get this part? "Still, while Liza was out to Hermione, Hermione wasn’t out to Liza." But what the heck. The whole Krum thing was well wet up in the previous chapter and I agree with Writermerin, it works here. She had that little Snape-Krum comparisoon and ahd sex. LOL Krum playing socker with is limp was interesting - he must have used magic to paly that well, considering his foot. Hermione's parents were a hoot - especially her mum - 60's cool and all. LOLgood update.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Regarding the Hermione not being out to Liza, I just meant to draw a parallel between homosexuality--as something about oneself that you may or may not tell friends and relatives, and which some people would make judgements on--and magical ability. That is, that Hermione hadn't told Liza she was a witch, thus when Liza asked Krum what he did for a living, Hermione was worried that his lie would backfire.I'm glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the review.
Wow. Ex-hippe parents. Wish I'd had them. My mother is a real prude! :)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad you approve! After all, they seemed quite happy for Hermione to head off to boarding school in a magical world that they themselves could never be part of; they have to be permissive to some extent.
As a general rule, I don't tend to care for Hermione/Krum pairings, but you did it so well! I can't wait to see what you do next ^_^
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
High praise, indeed! Thank you! I thought Hermione deserved a special Christmas gift to make up for how much of an arse Ron was to her for most of the term ;)
Response from LadyTuesday (Reviewer)
HA. SO true. I'm just absolutely bouncing with glee every time I see one of your updates! I am SO glad you said the next one is coming soon!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
As of this writing, the next chapter is sitting in position no. 10--which isn't very far from the front of the queue :) Now you're the one who's left me bouncing with glee :)