The Agreement
Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
Chapter 4 of 25
grangerousWhen Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
ReviewedPhoenix Song, Chapter four : The Agreement
DISCLAIMER : The characters and many of the situations described in this story are the property of the incomparable J.K. Rowling. I make no money from this story, which exists as a work of tribute. Where dialogue from the original Harry Potter books is quoted by me, the relevant text is marked with an asterisk.
I'd like to thank my betas: LAxo, for her time, her mad skills and her love of verb-subject agreements, and WriterMerrin, who is quick at the draw and straight to the point.
Finally, Severus straightened, surveying the neat shelves of carefully placed potions ingredients with a sense of achievement. His back protested against the sudden movement, and he stretched languorously, loosening his tight muscles. In the thirty-six hours since the Hogwarts Express had departed for the summer, emptying the school of students, he had tidied his office, packed up his clothes and a selection of books, reorganised his filing system and meticulously inventoried the supply cupboards. He'd missed dinner and even sent Hooch away when she'd dropped by with the intention of luring him out to Hogsmeade for an end of semester drink. His stomach rumbled, and for a moment he paused indecisively: dinner and bed, or should he move back to Spinner's End tonight? Indubitably, breakfast courtesy of the house-elves was going to be better than anything Wormtail might cook up, and that thought alone decided him.
Stalking back into his office, he seized a handful of Floo powder and threw it into the fireplace, intending to Floo to the kitchens. As he did so, not only did the flames turn green, but a loud bang echoed through the space accompanied by a blinding flash of light. Instinctively, Severus drew his wand; although, when his eyes readjusted only seconds later, he realised that there was no need: Fawkes hovered before him. Assailed by a different form of panic, Severus paused only long enough to summon a nondescript black leather satchel that hung from the back of his office door, then he took a firm hold of the phoenix's proffered tail feathers. Before Fawkes transported him elsewhere with another loud bang, Severus had time for only one thought: Let Albus be alright.
Severus absorbed the scene in Dumbledore's office within seconds: the sword, the ring, Dumbledore slumped in his chair, green flames licking at his wand hand, the wand itself discarded on the floor. Green flames first. Severus cast several elaborate diagnostic charms with one hand, rummaging in his black satchel with the other. Pulling out a small bottle of viscous gold liquid, he uncorked it one-handed and placed it open on the desk.
"Fawkes," he ordered, pointing at the bottle. "Tears." Obediently, the phoenix fluttered down to the surface of the table and lowered his head so that he could weep directly into the mouth of the small phial.
Stepping around the table, Severus began to chant a modified freezing charm, translating the Latinate sounds of the traditional spells into their Parseltounge equivalents. Relief flooded his system as the flames flickered briefly, then died. He closed his eyes for a long second, then turned towards Fawkes.
"Thank you," he whispered, his throat dry. Taking the bottle, Severus placed his thumb over the opening and shook it thoroughly, transferring it to an empty goblet that stood on the desk. With his wand hand, he took hold of the front of Dumbledore's robes, pulling him upright. Severus poured the potion slowly into Dumbledore's mouth as he began to sing incantations over his injured hand. With a little luck (and the potion should provide that much) he could contain the curse, but with such powerful dark magic, there was little chance that he could cure it entirely.
"Severusss . . ." the slurred syllables of Dumbledore's return to consciousness reminded Snape sickeningly of Voldemort and the all-too-real possibility of Dumbledore's death. For another long moment, Dumbledore was silent, then his eyelids fluttered open and his eyes focussed.
"Why, why did you put on that ring?"* All of Snape's concern coagulated into anger. "It carries a curse, surely you realized that. Why even touch it?"*
"I . . . was a fool. Sorely tempted . . ."*
The weakness of Dumbledore's voice did nothing to cool Snape's temper. "Tempted by what?"* His peremptory question got no response. "It is a miracle that you managed to return here!"* he continued. "That ring carried a curse of extraordinary power, to contain it is all we can hope for; I have trapped the curse in one hand for the time being..."*
"You have done very well, Severus. How long do you think I have?"* Dumbledore sounded stronger. A tone of mild curiosity coloured his voice, and he looked at his damaged hand with an interested expression.
"I cannot tell."* Snape let out a sigh of defeat. "Maybe a year. There is no halting such a spell forever. It will spread eventually, it is the sort of curse that strengthens over time."*
"I am fortunate, extremely fortunate, that I have you, Severus."*
Goddamn the man. Must he always sound so noble? "If you had only summoned me a little earlier, I might have been able to do more, buy you more time! Did you think that breaking the ring would break the curse?"*
"Something like that . . . I was delirious, no doubt . . . Well, really, this makes matters much more straightforward."* Dumbledore settled himself upright in his chair and straightened his cuff around his blackened wrist. "I refer to the plan Lord Voldemort is revolving around me. His plan to have the poor Malfoy boy murder me."*
The "poor Malfoy boy" has a name, you could use it. Snape scowled at Dumbledore and took a seat on the opposite side of the desk. "The Dark Lord does not expect Draco to succeed. This is merely punishment for Lucius's recent failures. Slow torture for Draco's parents, while they watch him fail and pay the price."* And slow torture for me as I watch him suffer and contemplate my own eventual death.
"In short, the boy has had a death sentence pronounced upon him as surely as I have."* No, as surely as I have. "Now, I should have thought the natural successor to the job, once Draco fails, is yourself?"*
"That, I think, is the Dark Lord's plan."* At which point, I will die, too...unless, of course, it becomes apparent earlier that I have betrayed him: in that case I'll die first.
"Lord Voldemort foresees a moment in the near future when he will not need a spy at Hogwarts?"*
"He believes the school will soon be in his grasp, yes."*
"And if it does fall into his grasp, I have your word that you will do all in your power to protect the students of Hogwarts?"*
Does he honestly believe that I might be alive to see it? The other night's post-Pensieve discussion had been shorter than was typical. Perhaps Dumbledore hadn't grasped the full consequences of the trap into which Snape had been led. Snape stared blankly at the older man, who, for his part, was looking back at Snape enquiringly. Belatedly, Snape realised that his answer was required and nodded mechanically.
"Good."* Dumbledore beamed at him. "Now then. Your first priority will be to discover what Draco is up to. A frightened teenage boy is a danger to others as well as to himself. Offer him help and guidance, he ought to accept, he likes you..."*
"...much less since his father has lost favour. Draco blames me, he thinks I have usurped Lucius's position."*
"All the same, try. I am concerned less for myself than for accidental victims of whatever schemes might occur to the boy. Ultimately, of course, there is only one thing to be done if we are to save him from Lord Voldemort's wrath."*
Snape had every intention of trying. The only productive conclusions he'd come to over the last few days regarded the fierce necessity to save Draco and to teach Granger as much as possible. The second task would be fairly straightforward, but he'd spent hours already attempting to solve the first, and Dumbledore's casual commentary needled him sharply.
"Are you intending to let him kill you?"* he bit out.
"Certainly not. You must kill me."*
For a long moment, Severus couldn't reply. His blood pounded so loudly in his ears that he wondered whether he would ever hear anything ever again. Several beats later, he regained his composure, even his heavy sense of irony, "Would you like me to do it now? Or would you like a few moments to compose an epitaph?"*
"Oh, not quite yet,"* Dumbledore affected a tone of breezy unconcern. "I daresay the moment will present itself in due course. Given what has happened tonight, we can be sure that it will happen within a year."*
"If you don't mind dying, why not let Draco do it?"* Though he tried hard, Severus couldn't keep the bitterness out of his voice. He glared at the desk in front of him, furious at the hot prickle of tears that threatened to spill over.
"That boy's soul is not yet so damaged. I would not have it ripped apart on my account."*
"And my soul, Dumbledore? Mine?"* It was barely a whisper, and it hung in the air between them as Snape continued to stare down at the table top.
"You alone know whether it will harm your soul to help an old man avoid pain and humiliation."* Dumbledore leant forward and reached out to take a gentle hold of Severus' elbow. "I ask this one great favour of you, Severus, because death is coming for me as surely as the Chudley Cannons will finish bottom of this year's league. I confess I should prefer a quick, painless exit to the protracted and messy affair it will be if, for instance, Greyback is involved...I hear Voldemort has recruited him? Or dear Bellatrix, who likes to play with her food before she eats it."*
Snape's head was spinning. One great favour. As if I haven't given him everything...everything...for the last seventeen years. And as if I can refuse him now, even if it meant the end of my own life . . . certainly it will mean the end of every part of my life that makes it worth living. He might have put off his response a little longer if he hadn't looked up and met Dumbledore's intensely blue eyes. Hating himself, hating Dumbledore for asking such a thing of him, he nodded.
"Thank you, Severus . . ."*
Dumbledore wanted to hash out the details of several possible post-homicide scenarios, but Severus couldn't bear the idea. Instead he threatened to Floo-call Poppy Pomfrey until Dumbledore capitulated and retired to bed, first having swallowed various different healing potions pressed on him from Severus' satchel and then promising to visit the nurse first thing in the morning.
For a couple of seconds after Dumbledore left, Snape considered the Floo, but decided that the walk to the dungeons might do him good. At the base of the stairs leading from Dumbledore's office, Snape paused and glanced at his watch. It was only ten thirty. And to think, a mere hour and a half ago I was avoiding the thought of my impending death through the time-honoured practice of physical-labour-cum-procrastination . . . and now, the continuation of my miserable existence is all-but-guaranteed by a promise to murder the one man who sees me, and likes me, for who I truly am. Severus looked at his watch a second time: only ten thirty. As surely as the Chudley Cannons would finish bottom of this year's league, this early hour of the night would find Hooch down the pub...if not Poppy and Minerva as well. If ever Severus Snape had need of a drink, this was the moment. Without bothering to fetch his cloak, he strode off to Hogsmeade and the promise of company.
A/N : I know, I know! This chapter is a) short and b) mostly written by J.K. Rowling. I want to take this opportunity to reassure you, dear reader, that while this story parallels the events of HP6, the year was experienced very differently by Hermione and Severus than it was by Mr Potter. In general, I only repeat scenes where absolutely necessary (though I will try to make mention of enough of the original plot that my story makes sense)...thus, this story will probably seem like complete nonsense unless you've read HP6 (and HP7, given that this scene only appears there in Snape's memories). I thought it crucial to present this scene in its correct place and to have Severus' POV.
On a more cheerful note, Ch5 is already written, and you can read it here as soon as it makes it through the queue . . .
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Latest 25 Reviews for Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
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I am absolutely LOVING this story, and am only mildly miffed that I had begun writing something similar, because your creation is miles better than mine would have been. However I cannot BELIEVE you wrote this but weren't sure about writing a follow-up - are you crazy?! Of course we want a sequel!!! I can't wait to continue to the final chapter and also to read Phoenix Tears... and then to rethink the story I've been working on! Damn you for being so bloody good, well done!
I loved the story, and am going to go see what i can find in regards to a sequel now. Curious to how you will continue the canon events in your almost non-canon way. :)
This was a truly wonderful, emotion filled story. I loved hearing the book from Hermione and Snape's perspectives. You answered a lot of questions that JK's book left me asking, and made it a more believable. I am so glad to discover that you wrote the sequel as well. I can't wait to go read it.
A great fic!! Congratulations for it! It's cool the way you are following the original story and, in the same moment, telling a diferent one. Kisses
this is awesome. awesome awesome awesome. everything holds together so well; it's all so tightly knit! you've incorporated everything perfectly! I don't know how you do it. this is right up there with Diana Wynne Jones novels, where everything fits and I'm left going "how did she do that." I am so impressed! Thanks for a great story :)
so hermione got snape's help with planning for being on the run. annoyingly convincing...I like to think she did it all herself. but really, it makes a lot of sense.
your explanations of arithmantic thought are fascinating. the details you give are logical and convincing. it's awesome.
I love love love it when authors go into the intricacies of magical theory. I love the explanations of the differences between charms and warding. This is so cool!
"I suggest running, perhaps supplemented with yoga." possibly one of the most bizarre things I have heard Professor Snape say. Ha!
terribly sad, and fascinating. You've really managed to convince me that muggleborns are more likely to be good Occlumens than their counterparts.
What a brilliant fic!!! This is definitely one of my favorites now, and I especially love how Sev shared the Felix Felicis!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm really delighted that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for leaving such a nice review. The sequel to this story is now completed, and I do hope that you enjoy that, too. :)
I am utterly astonished at your revelation that this is your first piece of fiction! You have a masterful command not just of narative but of character, motivation, plot, and drama. I am really impressed!And I'm delighted to see that I'm not the only one clamoring for more. I await what is to come with baited breath, and thank you profusely for a darn good read!I don't know if you've read Lariope's "Second Life," but I am delighted that you both chose the same method for sharing those last drops of Felix Felicis. I can't think of a better moment to prepare them both for all that is to come....Brava--excellent work! Looking forward to the sequel.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I have written non-fiction stuff (dissertation, etc.), but yes, this is the first piece of fiction I've written. Trust me to decide to start with something small and easily managed. :)I have read "Second Life," and very much enjoyed it. Thanks again, I do hope that you enjoy the sequel as much as you have this. :) Your reviews were a pleasure to receive.
She is the one person clever enough to puzzle it out. I can believe that she would have guessed it and known it to be true because it is indeed the simplest--the most elegant--solution. Can he at least find some comfort in her knowing?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
The way I've constructed the story, she did have enough information to work it out--in fact, I didn't need to make sure she knew very much beyond what she already should have known from canon. I think she'd be capable of seeing the lie of the land.Thanks for the review!
Wow! So much here! And all of it to do with Severus, quite delicious.It makes sense that he would have killed his father--that's the most interesting explanation I've heard for his choice to become a Death Eater: they were the only ones who would have him after such a tragedy.And it was nice to see him touched by Davis' project. He needs to remember how much esteem his Slytherins have for him, especially in these dark days.You keep driving home so effectively the damnable place he's in and the bleak future ahead. It makes sense that he would have known about the Elder Wand, and that he would have understood so well how alone he would be after killing Albus.Now to find out what he needs to tell Hermione....
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very, very much! The question of why or how Severus joined the Death Eaters is one that everyone has to hurdle sooner or later. Given his place and his treatment from others at the time, I just can't see how he would have done anything else, really--he would have been so happy for the acceptance. Hogwarts, well, Dumbledore at least, really failed the Slytherin students.Thanks again for the review.
Utterly fascinating!I must commend you throughout all of this for making the magical, theoretical, and academic components ring so true. I know nothing of mathematics (I can barely add without a calculator and a lot of scrap paper!), but your Arithmancy sounds so plausible that I buy it completely. And all the details you've supplied of the lessons that have been going on all make it sound quite realtistic (magically, of course!). What else, I wonder, does Albus need to tell Severus, and what does Severus need to tell Hermione (besides "You have to let Harry die in order to allow him to live, and, oh, by the way, I rather fancy you" that is)?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I was a big maths geek when I was in high school--with a particular love for calculus and imaginary numbers. Given how well imaginary numbers work in Muggle mathmatics, the possibilities for magical mathematics seem boundless!! :)Thanks again for the review.
Oh, dear lord, bless her for the extreme act of courage it took to come down to his office, and bless him for the equal leap it took to offer one of the best apologies I've ever had the pleasure of reading.And I'm terribly glad it was only McLaggen--she could've handled him eventually, but it was good that Severus was there to lend a hand and deduct points from the great bully. I think it might've also helped him decide later to allow her to stay long enough in his office to have it out with him.This chapter makes me very hopeful!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad that you liked the apology! :)Hermione's got the courage she needs, when she needs it. That's her special Gryffindor flair.She would have handled McLaggen eventually--and I couldn't bear to write her as a complete damsel in distress.Yay for hope! Thanks for the review.
ARE WE INTERESTED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!?! IT CAN'T BE ABOUT TO END?!?!! I was desperately afraid that this was a WIP, but YES, PLEASE, YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST CONTINUE IT!!! (Okay, I'll stop yelling now. I think I've made my point.) Will now go on and read the FINAL CHAPTER. Arghh!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
LOL. Your point is coming accross loud and clear, I promise! :) Thank you for the enthusiasm!The final chapter is pretty satisfying, I think--even if I do say so myself!! :)Thanks for all of your reviews.
Oh, hell, who's got her?! Evil cliffie! No time to review, must rush off and see what's next!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ha ha ha. Oh, yes. My first cliffhanger! What sweet memories . . .
Hermione, please use that very big brain of yours and actually listen--perhaps you can figure out why he's behaving like a jealous, self-pitying prat. (One of you needs to be thinking clearly in all of this.)Love the fact that Dumbledore's horrifying revelation to Severus about Harry's fate is delivered while he's rather drunk. Gives me just a tiny bit more pity for Albus. And I also love the idea of Severus hearing it while he's more focused on his own jumbled emotions.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, perhaps he's acting like a jealous, self-pitying prat because he's a . . . um . . . jealous, self-pitying prat?? *smirksCan Hermione's year get any worse??Dumbledore's a manipulative old man. He must have know Severus would see through him were he sober.Thanks for the review!
I think we all wish we had mothers who understood the concept of a fuckbuddy--if not the frankness to insist on having a discussion about such things!Hermione is discovering the complications of the delicate dance of her position.I'm curious to see how her reunion with Severus goes, though I expect they are both convinced they have their feelings well in hand. (At least Hermione has had some nice distractions for her holiday treat!)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I thought Hermione deserved a nice Christmas present after Ron had been such an arsehole all semester. :)And yes, the embarassing forthrightness of liberal mothers!! :) I'm sure she'll be more appreciative once she gets a bit older!Thanks, again.
He took a vindictive pleasure in secretly being a better man than the so-called nice, friendly people around him.That's an amazing insigh and obviously one of the reasons your portrayal of Severus is so spot-on.Poor Severus, seeing the echoes of the tragedy of his past, feeling he can't even want Hermione, and watching her with Krum, who isn't a bad guy (especially in this portrait--kind of thick in social situations, but fundamentally decent), but who isn't him.(Nice touch with the Italian portrait speaking Italian, by the way.)This continues to be fascinating!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ma certo che i ritratti italiani parlono italiano!! :)I'm thrilled that you're enjoying my characterisation of Severus. I think he's so fascinating! Thanks for the lovely review.
And I just added it, too. This is really an accomplished, fascinating piece.The scene in the Room of Requirement was especially terrific.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, and thank you! She's noticing an awful lot about him. :)
I completely buy this picture of the staff at play.I love Severus' interrogation of Hermione about Krum; found out more than he bargained for, I think, but she at least got some information in return.You are doing an amazing job of drawing a truly believable portrait of everyone, but most especially of Severus. This is a competent, complex, interesting, intelligent man who knows very clearly what he's doing. I love it.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I really like Severus--he's so nice and complicated. :) And he needs some downtime with his gay friends, too!!Thanks for the thoughtful review, it--indeed all of them--mean a lot to me.
And they continue to learn a little about one another. Such a shame that Ron can be such an idiot. This was in an earlier chapter, but it still applies all too well:"I always assumed that was because they were, well . . .” “Imbeciles?” he suggested smoothly, one eyebrow raised.Made me laugh. And now I'd sad for Hermione. Because he's right.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ron gave her a really hard time that year, silly sod. But at least Snape is providing some comfort at this point! :) Plus, as you now know, I'm sending her a Christmas present!!
Complexities and fascinations! Dumbeldore's reaction is quite intriguing, considering his own history (does Severus know about Arianna? probably not). You continue to weave an entirely new, interesting tale into the cloth of canon, and I continue to find it a wonderful read.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm assuming that Severus didn't yet know about Ariana; though eventually he will learn.I'm glad that there's enough new stuff that the story isn't boring! Thanks for the review!