Slytherin Politics
Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P)
Chapter 8 of 25
grangerousWhen Professor Snape heals Hermione's injuries after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, they are both surprised by what they learn. The two must work together to help Harry defeat Lord Voldemort.
ReviewedPhoenix Song, Chapter Eight : Slytherin Politics
DISCLAIMER : The characters and many of the situations described in this story are the property of the incomparable J.K. Rowling. I make no money from this story, which exists as a work of tribute.
As always, I'd like to thank my betas, LAxo and WriterMerrin, without whom my grammar would be appalling and my punctuation nonsensical. Any errors that remain are entirely my own.
While the blood status of new Hufflepuffs might be considered irrelevant, Severus deemed it crucial information with regard to his Slytherins and made it his business to look them up as soon as possible. Five purebloods, one half-blood, and a Muggle-born. It didn't really surprise him to discover that the malnourished young girl and the Muggle-born witch were one and the same person. As was his wont, Severus took the time to meet with each of the new students within the first week. Morris Bletchley and Terrence Harper were having no problems. They both had brothers already at Hogwarts to show them the ropes. Raquel Garside and Milton Hammerbright both came from such well-established pureblood families that they could claim familial relationships with half the common room and had probably holidayed on the Riviera with a number of others. Pubert Cavendish, on the other hand, was probably related to just as many individuals but came from a family where money was a problem. His clothes were obviously second hand, and he looked a little lost. In the past, Severus would have assigned him to the capable hands of Draco Malfoy...typically ready to share the sweets and other largess sent to him by Narcissa at regular intervals...but Draco hadn't bothered to show up to talk with his Head of House. Instead, Severus had a word with Blaise Zabini. Chelsea Gladstone, half-blood, had come well-prepped by her mother and had no trouble gliding over the elements of her family background that her housemates might look down on. Severus overheard her glibly inform one of the third-years that her father had immigrated from Canada many years earlier...conveniently explaining away her Mugglish surname. He made a mental note to tell Tracey Davis to keep an eye out for her. Jocelyn Smith, however, was cause for concern.
She arrived for her appointment precisely on time and took her seat in front of Snape's desk without a word. Her legs stuck out awkwardly, too short to reach the ground. The size of the chair made her appear younger than she actually was. As she waited for Snape to speak, she held her body tightly wound, her hands clenched in her lap.
Snape regarded her intently for a moment before he spoke: Miss Smith was not an attractive child. She was too thin and small for her age. Everything about her was slightly colourless. Her hair was a lank, dirty blonde that hung down to just below her shoulders. The ends were ragged and desperately needed a trim. Her eyes were a washed-out pale blue that looked too large in her pinched face. A shadow of a bruise bloomed across one cheek.
"Miss Smith," he began. There was something slightly unnerving about the way the child stared, unblinking. "You may have heard that only pureblood wizards and witches are sorted into Slytherin house." The girl made no reply, so he continued. "Obviously, such statements are untrue, as are the vast majority of statements about the magically-inclined offspring of Muggle parents. There are, for example, no measurable differences in magical ability. The circumstance remains, however, that certain political factions within Slytherin house continue to spout such rhetoric. It would be expedient for you to abstain from discussing your genealogy. Fortunately, the surname 'Smith' is as common in the wizarding world as it is in Muggle England."
Still the girl said nothing. Has she even blinked? Severus wondered.
"Do you have any questions?" he asked.
"No, sir," she replied promptly in a clear, high voice. After a short pause, she added, "And I have absolutely nothing to say about my family to anyone." Her voice was simultaneously childish and disturbingly serious.
For a moment, her response took Severus aback. With a jolt, he realised that the neutrality of her voice extended to her thoughts: he couldn't sense her at all. The girl is Occluding, and heavily so. The realisation perturbed him. It was surprising enough to discover that Hermione Granger...an obnoxiously precocious fifth-year student...had developed a talent as an Occlumens. But a first-year with no previous exposure to magic? Something wasn't right. He kept her with him for another few minutes. She gave noncommittal answers to a few questions regarding her first day of classes, and he decided to let her go. As she reached the door, he called her back.
"Miss Smith?"...she turned at once..."Who was it that came to visit your family and deliver your Hogwarts letter?"
"Professor McGonagall, sir."
"Very good, you may go."
Once the door closed behind the girl, Snape checked his watch. There was still a little time before dinner. If he hurried, he might catch Minerva in her office.
He chose to walk, rather than Floo, relishing the chance to stretch his legs. McGonagall's door was closed, but when he knocked, she called out for him to come in.
At the sight of Snape in her doorway, Minerva gave him a wry look, their argument from two evenings ago clearly fresh in her mind.
"My, my," she teased. "Look what the cat dragged in."
Snape gave her a revolted look. "You are the only cat around here, Minerva, and I have no desire to contemplate the objects you may or may not drag around."
Minerva chuckled. "Sit down and have a biscuit," she offered, pushing a tin of shortbread towards the visitor's side of her desk.
Snape sat and crossed his arms, ignoring the biscuits. "I'm here to discuss a student...one of mine."
At his last statement, Minerva shot him an interested glance. "I thought for a moment you'd come to complain about one of my Gryffindors."
"No. It's Jocelyn Smith."
"Ah." Minerva's lips pursed disapprovingly and she shook her head. "I was very surprised to see her, of all people, sorted into Slytherin. She needs looking after...don't glare at me like that, Severus! It's perfectly clear that you're here for exactly that reason, I wasn't implying that you..."
"And why would you think Slytherin a bad place for her?" Severus' voice was low and dangerous.
"Tchk, Severus! She's Muggle-born! She'd be better off in a place where she needn't hide her family history."
"The Sorting Hat didn't think so."
"Calm down, Severus, I have no intention of having this argument with you again." Minerva reached out and rattled the shortbread tin where it lay on the desk. "Go on, have a biscuit."
Severus sighed heavily. With a great display of reluctance, he reached for a shortbread and took a bite.
"That's better. I suppose you want to know what her family was like when I visited?"
"Yes," said Severus thickly through a mouthful of biscuit.
"Not good, I'm afraid. The mother was barely older than a child herself and the father was long gone. From what I gathered, there was a constant stream of men through the flat and her mother's bed, few of whom were caring towards the child. The place was owned by the council...and filthy, from top to bottom. The entire visit was terribly depressing. Jocelyn's here on scholarship, of course." Minerva paused for a moment before continuing. "I took the girl to Diagon Alley to buy her school things, too. She didn't say much. Didn't seem to believe that it was all really happening, either. After I bought her books, she asked, 'Can I keep them?'...as if she was expecting to have to give them back. It was heartbreaking."
Severus felt a stab of sympathy for his littlest charge. For a long moment he looked at Minerva, speechless, a second biscuit forgotten in his hand.
"Severus," she said gently, "I'm really relieved that she has you to look after her. Now, let's go down to dinner...before you eat too much more of my shortbread."
Later that evening found Severus sitting in his office, nominally working on his lesson plans for the third- and fourth-year students. In reality, he was lost in thought. His mind kept returning to the issue of Jocelyn Smith and Hermione Granger...two Muggle-born witches, both natural Occlumens. Occlumency skills rarely developed without instruction, and for children the necessary mental control was incredibly difficult to master. Was it merely co-incidence? The circumstances seemed so different, yet the result was the same. Severus sighed with frustration.
For one thing, he had wasted more than enough time already thinking about Miss Granger. Since their few conversations at the end of last year, she seemed to be continually on his mind. Now, with school back in session, he found that her presence repeatedly leapt out at him from among the crowds of students, catching at his attention. If the dratted girl would just stop looking at him and trying to speak to him, they could get on with her lessons, but until then it wasn't safe...for her or for him. Severus had just started to ruminate on the question of how much time he would have to teach her before the more drastic elements of Dumbledore's plan were put into action when his Dark Mark burned. Sucking in a sudden breath at the ferocity of the pain, he pushed aside his lesson plan and moved through to his living quarters. Severus summoned his mask and cloak, sent a Patronus to inform Dumbledore of his departure, and slipped out into the grounds.
The evening was lovely. The sky was clear and the stars shone out above him. Had his arm not ached infuriatingly, he would have enjoyed the stroll to the Apparation point. As he walked, he disciplined his mind, pushing away the niggling anxiety engendered by the summons. He was rarely called during term time: something important must have happened. By the time he stepped beyond the wards, his mind was clear. He touched his wand to the Dark Mark and Disapparated.
Once again, he found himself in the Apparation foyer of Malfoy Manor, although this time, both Narcissa and Bellatrix were on hand to meet him. Narcissa ran forward as soon as he arrived and took hold of his forearm with both hands.
"Severus," she gasped. "I'm so sorry."
His eyes glanced from her distressed face to look at Bellatrix, who hadn't moved from where she leant against the wall. Even she wore a slightly apologetic look.
"What have you done?" he asked. His voice echoed harshly against the tiled surfaces of the room.
"He found out about the Unspeakable Vow, and...Oh Severus, he's not happy . . ."
The corners of Snape's mouth drew downwards in anger, emphasising the harsh lines of his face. He shook his arm from Narcissa's grasp and moved quickly towards the door. As he passed Bellatrix, he turned towards her without slowing his pace. "Trouble-making again, Bellatrix?" he inquired, not bothering to wait for a response.
Severus prostrated himself immediately on entering the drawing room.
"Ah, Severusss . . . how lovely of you to make the time to come and see me. I know you are terribly busy at this time of year."
Not for the first time Severus caught himself pondering the similarities between Dumbledore and the Dark Lord. Somehow, with his face pressed to the floor and the certainty of punishment in his future, he felt less worried than he had earlier, when he was contemplating the possibility of physical pain.
Seconds later he was jerked airborne.
"My dear boy, allow me to help you closer." Voldemort had his wand out and was levitating Snape towards him. When his floating body was close enough that Voldemort could have touched him, it was dropped unceremoniously to the floor.
"My Lord," he managed, though the wind was knocked from his body.
"It seems you neglected to tell me something, Severus."
"Indeed, my Lord. I apologise."
"Not good enough, Severus. You see, if you go around recklessly making vows to people, how can I know that your loyalty to me remains?" There was a long pause. "Severus? Look at me!"
Snape looked up into the red eyes and pointed wand of the Dark Lord. Voldemort leaned forwards and smiled at him in a sickening parody of friendliness. "Legilimens," he whispered.
Lord Voldemort's excursions into the minds of others inevitably involved a certain amount of pain: he took great delight at pushing against the seams and causing harm. Severus, however, knew what to expect. He concentrated hard on the memory of the Unbreakable Vow, throwing up a smokescreen of other, more recent memories, so that Voldemort wouldn't realise the control Severus had maintained. He thought about walking up to the castle with Potter and about the welcoming speech in the Slytherin common room. Both caught briefly at Voldemort's attention, but he pushed onwards to the scene at Spinner's End. Only once he'd viewed Narcissa and Bellatrix's departure did he retreat from Severus' mind. As the energy of the spell dissipated, Severus' head thudded back down onto the carpet. The part of his brain that wasn't throbbing with pain blessed Lucius for having decided against floorboards.
Severus wasn't sure how long he lay there, perhaps no more than a few minutes. At that point Voldemort inserted the toe of his boot under his shoulder and rolled him face up. Looking upward, Severus found Voldemort leaning over him and noticed, for the first time, the presence of Nagini.
"Well, Severus, I confess that you proved yourself more loyal than I had imagined."
Was this a reprieve? Voldemort seemed impressed by the memory he'd viewed, but Snape wasn't yet convinced that the immediate danger had passed. He thought it safer to say nothing. Voldemort was absentmindedly tapping his wand against his thigh. With the other hand, he was stroking the back of Nagini's head.
It was to the snake that Voldemort eventually spoke, crooning gently as if to a small child, "I'm sorry, my sweet one, but I'm going to let him live this time." Looking back down at Severus, the Dark Lord prodded him once again with his boot. "Get up," he ordered.
Severus pulled himself onto his hands and knees and pressed his forehead to the ground near Voldemort's feet. "Thank you, my Lord," he said.
When he lifted his face, Voldemort had leaned forwards once again, narrowing the distance between them. "Why didn't you tell me?"
"I was angry with Bellatrix, my Lord; I was furious that she had questioned my loyalty to you. I thought myself above carrying tales of petty jealousies back to bore you."
"You regard an Unbreakable Vow as a trivial matter? How many others have you made?"
"None, my Lord. I swear it. I didn't promise anything that I wouldn't have willingly done already." After a beat, he added, "I am fond of the boy."
"You know, Severus, you could be my greatest servant." Voldemort was looking at him with a curiously appraising expression.
"My Lord, you honour me."
"Next time you do something so stupid, Severus, make sure to tell me yourself, that way I won't have to punish you." At that, Voldemort raised his left hand and placed it momentarily on Severus' head, as if in benediction. Then, waving his wand lazily, he laughed, "Crucio."
An hour or so later, Severus made it back to Hogwarts, his eyes searching for the cat the instant he Apparated into the clearing. He stumbled slightly on landing, and the cat leapt forward with concern, wrapping briefly around his legs once he righted himself.
She meowed querulously.
"I've been worse," he replied, setting off on the long walk up to the castle, the cat pacing beside him.
Re-living the night's experience in the Pensieve was singularly unpleasant. Prostrating yourself before a homicidal maniac is one thing, watching yourself do so is another. Luckily Dumbledore was content to spend only a short period dissecting the conversation and excused Severus not long after midnight.
Severus left the office via the stairwell and let the walk back down to the dungeons clear his mind. His body ached with the after effects of a prolonged bout of Crucio. Walking hurt, but he knew from experience that everything would hurt worse tomorrow if he didn't stretch out his limbs before curling up in bed.
He ran into the cat just outside his chambers. "What do you want?" he asked, with customary rudeness. The cat merely stretched and, when he lowered the wards, followed him in. Severus shrugged off his robes and hung them on the back of his door. Crossing the room, he lowered himself into a comfy armchair and pulled off his boots. Once his socked feet were perched on the coffee table, he summoned a bottle of Firewhiskey and a glass from the mantle and poured himself a generous measure. With a small mewl of disapproval, the cat leapt onto the arm of his chair and arched her back. "Ridiculous," muttered Severus, scowling down his nose at her. She meowed again, and with a sigh, he summoned a saucer that he balanced in the air beside her. Shaking his head, he poured her a dose of the amber liquid. "You do realise that you look preposterous?" he asked as she lapped happily. Severus stowed the bottle on the floor, closed his eyes and leant back in his chair, cradling his whiskey against his chest.
The cat finished her drink, licking first the plate and then her whiskers clean. Stepping daintily, she moved from the arm of the chair into the lap of the man beside her. As she began to knead his thighs, he grimaced. "Must you make such a nuisance of yourself?" he grumbled. His complaining continued at intermittent intervals even once she was settled, but an astute observer would have noticed that one hand had crept to rest on the back of her head, and one long finger stroked gently behind an ear.
A/N : The upcoming chapter is *entirely* HG SS interaction . . . stay tuned!
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I am absolutely LOVING this story, and am only mildly miffed that I had begun writing something similar, because your creation is miles better than mine would have been. However I cannot BELIEVE you wrote this but weren't sure about writing a follow-up - are you crazy?! Of course we want a sequel!!! I can't wait to continue to the final chapter and also to read Phoenix Tears... and then to rethink the story I've been working on! Damn you for being so bloody good, well done!
I loved the story, and am going to go see what i can find in regards to a sequel now. Curious to how you will continue the canon events in your almost non-canon way. :)
This was a truly wonderful, emotion filled story. I loved hearing the book from Hermione and Snape's perspectives. You answered a lot of questions that JK's book left me asking, and made it a more believable. I am so glad to discover that you wrote the sequel as well. I can't wait to go read it.
A great fic!! Congratulations for it! It's cool the way you are following the original story and, in the same moment, telling a diferent one. Kisses
this is awesome. awesome awesome awesome. everything holds together so well; it's all so tightly knit! you've incorporated everything perfectly! I don't know how you do it. this is right up there with Diana Wynne Jones novels, where everything fits and I'm left going "how did she do that." I am so impressed! Thanks for a great story :)
so hermione got snape's help with planning for being on the run. annoyingly convincing...I like to think she did it all herself. but really, it makes a lot of sense.
your explanations of arithmantic thought are fascinating. the details you give are logical and convincing. it's awesome.
I love love love it when authors go into the intricacies of magical theory. I love the explanations of the differences between charms and warding. This is so cool!
"I suggest running, perhaps supplemented with yoga." possibly one of the most bizarre things I have heard Professor Snape say. Ha!
terribly sad, and fascinating. You've really managed to convince me that muggleborns are more likely to be good Occlumens than their counterparts.
What a brilliant fic!!! This is definitely one of my favorites now, and I especially love how Sev shared the Felix Felicis!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I'm really delighted that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for leaving such a nice review. The sequel to this story is now completed, and I do hope that you enjoy that, too. :)
I am utterly astonished at your revelation that this is your first piece of fiction! You have a masterful command not just of narative but of character, motivation, plot, and drama. I am really impressed!And I'm delighted to see that I'm not the only one clamoring for more. I await what is to come with baited breath, and thank you profusely for a darn good read!I don't know if you've read Lariope's "Second Life," but I am delighted that you both chose the same method for sharing those last drops of Felix Felicis. I can't think of a better moment to prepare them both for all that is to come....Brava--excellent work! Looking forward to the sequel.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very much! I have written non-fiction stuff (dissertation, etc.), but yes, this is the first piece of fiction I've written. Trust me to decide to start with something small and easily managed. :)I have read "Second Life," and very much enjoyed it. Thanks again, I do hope that you enjoy the sequel as much as you have this. :) Your reviews were a pleasure to receive.
She is the one person clever enough to puzzle it out. I can believe that she would have guessed it and known it to be true because it is indeed the simplest--the most elegant--solution. Can he at least find some comfort in her knowing?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
The way I've constructed the story, she did have enough information to work it out--in fact, I didn't need to make sure she knew very much beyond what she already should have known from canon. I think she'd be capable of seeing the lie of the land.Thanks for the review!
Wow! So much here! And all of it to do with Severus, quite delicious.It makes sense that he would have killed his father--that's the most interesting explanation I've heard for his choice to become a Death Eater: they were the only ones who would have him after such a tragedy.And it was nice to see him touched by Davis' project. He needs to remember how much esteem his Slytherins have for him, especially in these dark days.You keep driving home so effectively the damnable place he's in and the bleak future ahead. It makes sense that he would have known about the Elder Wand, and that he would have understood so well how alone he would be after killing Albus.Now to find out what he needs to tell Hermione....
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you very, very much! The question of why or how Severus joined the Death Eaters is one that everyone has to hurdle sooner or later. Given his place and his treatment from others at the time, I just can't see how he would have done anything else, really--he would have been so happy for the acceptance. Hogwarts, well, Dumbledore at least, really failed the Slytherin students.Thanks again for the review.
Utterly fascinating!I must commend you throughout all of this for making the magical, theoretical, and academic components ring so true. I know nothing of mathematics (I can barely add without a calculator and a lot of scrap paper!), but your Arithmancy sounds so plausible that I buy it completely. And all the details you've supplied of the lessons that have been going on all make it sound quite realtistic (magically, of course!). What else, I wonder, does Albus need to tell Severus, and what does Severus need to tell Hermione (besides "You have to let Harry die in order to allow him to live, and, oh, by the way, I rather fancy you" that is)?
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you! I was a big maths geek when I was in high school--with a particular love for calculus and imaginary numbers. Given how well imaginary numbers work in Muggle mathmatics, the possibilities for magical mathematics seem boundless!! :)Thanks again for the review.
Oh, dear lord, bless her for the extreme act of courage it took to come down to his office, and bless him for the equal leap it took to offer one of the best apologies I've ever had the pleasure of reading.And I'm terribly glad it was only McLaggen--she could've handled him eventually, but it was good that Severus was there to lend a hand and deduct points from the great bully. I think it might've also helped him decide later to allow her to stay long enough in his office to have it out with him.This chapter makes me very hopeful!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm glad that you liked the apology! :)Hermione's got the courage she needs, when she needs it. That's her special Gryffindor flair.She would have handled McLaggen eventually--and I couldn't bear to write her as a complete damsel in distress.Yay for hope! Thanks for the review.
ARE WE INTERESTED?!?! ARE YOU KIDDING?!?!?! IT CAN'T BE ABOUT TO END?!?!! I was desperately afraid that this was a WIP, but YES, PLEASE, YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST CONTINUE IT!!! (Okay, I'll stop yelling now. I think I've made my point.) Will now go on and read the FINAL CHAPTER. Arghh!!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
LOL. Your point is coming accross loud and clear, I promise! :) Thank you for the enthusiasm!The final chapter is pretty satisfying, I think--even if I do say so myself!! :)Thanks for all of your reviews.
Oh, hell, who's got her?! Evil cliffie! No time to review, must rush off and see what's next!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ha ha ha. Oh, yes. My first cliffhanger! What sweet memories . . .
Hermione, please use that very big brain of yours and actually listen--perhaps you can figure out why he's behaving like a jealous, self-pitying prat. (One of you needs to be thinking clearly in all of this.)Love the fact that Dumbledore's horrifying revelation to Severus about Harry's fate is delivered while he's rather drunk. Gives me just a tiny bit more pity for Albus. And I also love the idea of Severus hearing it while he's more focused on his own jumbled emotions.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Hmm, perhaps he's acting like a jealous, self-pitying prat because he's a . . . um . . . jealous, self-pitying prat?? *smirksCan Hermione's year get any worse??Dumbledore's a manipulative old man. He must have know Severus would see through him were he sober.Thanks for the review!
I think we all wish we had mothers who understood the concept of a fuckbuddy--if not the frankness to insist on having a discussion about such things!Hermione is discovering the complications of the delicate dance of her position.I'm curious to see how her reunion with Severus goes, though I expect they are both convinced they have their feelings well in hand. (At least Hermione has had some nice distractions for her holiday treat!)
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I thought Hermione deserved a nice Christmas present after Ron had been such an arsehole all semester. :)And yes, the embarassing forthrightness of liberal mothers!! :) I'm sure she'll be more appreciative once she gets a bit older!Thanks, again.
He took a vindictive pleasure in secretly being a better man than the so-called nice, friendly people around him.That's an amazing insigh and obviously one of the reasons your portrayal of Severus is so spot-on.Poor Severus, seeing the echoes of the tragedy of his past, feeling he can't even want Hermione, and watching her with Krum, who isn't a bad guy (especially in this portrait--kind of thick in social situations, but fundamentally decent), but who isn't him.(Nice touch with the Italian portrait speaking Italian, by the way.)This continues to be fascinating!
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ma certo che i ritratti italiani parlono italiano!! :)I'm thrilled that you're enjoying my characterisation of Severus. I think he's so fascinating! Thanks for the lovely review.
And I just added it, too. This is really an accomplished, fascinating piece.The scene in the Room of Requirement was especially terrific.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Thank you, and thank you! She's noticing an awful lot about him. :)
I completely buy this picture of the staff at play.I love Severus' interrogation of Hermione about Krum; found out more than he bargained for, I think, but she at least got some information in return.You are doing an amazing job of drawing a truly believable portrait of everyone, but most especially of Severus. This is a competent, complex, interesting, intelligent man who knows very clearly what he's doing. I love it.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I really like Severus--he's so nice and complicated. :) And he needs some downtime with his gay friends, too!!Thanks for the thoughtful review, it--indeed all of them--mean a lot to me.
And they continue to learn a little about one another. Such a shame that Ron can be such an idiot. This was in an earlier chapter, but it still applies all too well:"I always assumed that was because they were, well . . .” “Imbeciles?” he suggested smoothly, one eyebrow raised.Made me laugh. And now I'd sad for Hermione. Because he's right.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
Ron gave her a really hard time that year, silly sod. But at least Snape is providing some comfort at this point! :) Plus, as you now know, I'm sending her a Christmas present!!
Complexities and fascinations! Dumbeldore's reaction is quite intriguing, considering his own history (does Severus know about Arianna? probably not). You continue to weave an entirely new, interesting tale into the cloth of canon, and I continue to find it a wonderful read.
Response from grangerous (Author of Phoenix Song (or, Hermione Granger and the H-B P))
I'm assuming that Severus didn't yet know about Ariana; though eventually he will learn.I'm glad that there's enough new stuff that the story isn't boring! Thanks for the review!